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Posted: 6 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: konica.arora.92

Interesting
Waiting eagerly for reading dear
Do pm
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glad to know you find it interesting😊
will be updating this soon😉
just wait and watch dear 😊
thanks for being the second one to comment 🤗
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Posted: 6 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: loveuakdha

Interesting...looking forward to read this one also😊


glad to know you are eager to look at this new
story plot as well 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: cute.manasi

looking forward to it !

waiting to know how dangerous our Ja jo will be here...😉😆


oh god 🤣dangerous like really dear 😲
did I ever make them dangerous 😆
anyway I am so glad to see how you
are interested in this story to 😊
will be updating this soon 😉
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Posted: 6 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: divyadaya13

JA main sirf verbal spat hota tha. Yahan par dono kushti na

karne lag jaye. Aur jallu bechara gane na lag jaye "kaisi dhakad hai
dhakad hai"🤣


oh god 🤣Divya this was hilarious though 🤣
anyway you will soon see if there will be any
Dangal going to happen between these two 🤣
thanks for lovely comment 🤗will be updating this
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: James12

🤗
Intriguing title
and Character Sketch
Must say😉
But I would been More glad
if you at least update a Prologue 😊
for this Story to so that we knew

what we are going to get here 😉
And it's going to be your
second try on historic fiction isn't it
good going keep it up👍🏼 will
be looking forward for your this
Plot of Story to😉


glad to know you find the title Intriguing 😳

Oops sorry to disappoint you a bit 😳

I didn't updated Prologue first time
to make reader think about the story in
there own way 😆

yup it's my second try on History 😳
I really hope you like it further as well 😊
thanks for lovely comment 🤗




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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Etaferahu.kassa

Interesting please update thank you


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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: cute.manasi

waiting for it to begin !


It will begin soon Manu di 🤗
Just wait a bit more 😆
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will update soon don't worry😊
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Chapter 1

"No one can stop me from getting what I desire to get"!" no one means no one than how that little Chit will stop me"? huh...

(Spoke the breathless warrior, swinging his sword to block the attack of another Warrior. With whom he was having his Sword practice. That to in the open area, which was surround by Soldier, Who were clad in black dress and Red Colour turban on head . In-fact They all were well-armed, standing in An Rock way listening and watching everything. But dare to react even a bit . As a soldier they come across many unpleasant sight . Many cruel punishment and deadly worse war to , but seeing their two Prince having weaponry practice is another unpleasant and equally Intriguing scene to watch. when one is Emperor itself and another the commander of Army is Quite Intriguing and unpleasant as well. No matter what both brothers can die for each other . But when it come Weaponry practice or other play they are just a competitor and give each other the taste of hell in there own way . Again same thing was happening while discussing about some political news they were giving each other tough time).

"Well even a fierce unbeaten warrior get to taste defeat once in his life"! ..."no matter what", you shouldn't underestimate your opponent little brother"!...

(Spoke the elder prince kicking tightly on the left leg of Younger prince and Pushing him away making him fell back on ground and about to attack on him with sword by front but get blocked by little prince sword again and kick him back boldly on his tummy by his leg making the elder prince fell retreat on his step unbalanced way , surprising the elder prince by his sword moves The younger Prince got up Panting and spoke Putting his sword on Elder Prince neck which was Blocked by Elder prince In Cross manner).

"Well said but neither I underestimate my opponent"!... nor I give importance to them"! about getting defeated then maybe I will be defeated one day"!... but I can bet I will never be defeated by a mere chit who is known as Princess... you have my word...

(Laughing a bit at his little brother over confidence The elder prince just smirk inwardly and spoke calmly in low tone walking back to the Few Attended who were waiting for both of them with Towel and water to get rid of their Sweaty bodies).

Trust me Little brother women are hell more stronger than Men ... if you ever got defeated by Girl then your heart will be blame for your Defeat...

(Giving his sword to his attended He get take a bit water in his hand and Splashed on his face to get rid of Sweats which were formed on his face because of Two hours Tough Practice. Relishing cold water touch on his face and getting more pleased when a slight breeze of air make it's contact with his wet face he spoke after a minute In attitude)

We will see Brother ...but for now tell me, what will be our plan for Rajput's...

(Wiping his face with towel and walking back towards Palace with younger Prince The elder Prince become bit thoughtful and spoke calmly after few minutes killing the Silence which engulfed between both Brothers).

We will discuss about our Strategy in Court little bro ...till then let's have a meeting with our Little Sister...

(Sighing in displeasure after listening there usual task , of meeting there one and only younger sister. The younger prince cursed inwardly to himself ,for not leaving the side of his elder brother Sooner after getting done with Sword Practice . But he dare said anything verbally which may voice out his Opinion. But whom he was fooling his elder brother was well aware of his younger brother inner thoughts but said nothing as well).

Brother it's so long you come to meet me is did you forget me after getting me married with one of your Spineless General do you really think I am going to let you be in peace after you snatch mine brutally...

(By getting overly Pampered By The elder prince The younger princess was hot headed and very much Stubborn With a Sharp tongue not to forget so as soon her eyes lay on Both Prince of Mughal empire who are her elder brother as well , she Spoke Without greeting them while on the other hand Instead of getting angry at his younger sister Blabber The elder prince sigh a bit but said nothing but how can the younger prince let the chance go to scold Her so he spoke sternly).

Be respectful Towards the Prince Nasir Ud-Din Mohammed the Emperor of Mughal Empire Princess... or you may end up getting thrown in Dungeon For foolish Audacity... of being Disrespectful towards him...

(Listening this without wasting a Second the Princess eyes got Moist and in no way tears were about to make there way out of her beautiful Almond shaped hazel eyes which. Making The calm persona of Elder prince got disappear he immediately hug His little sister and spoke sternly).

Abul Fath Jalal Ud-Din Mohammed If you love your life you better apologize for being Rude to Princess Bakshi Banu this very second...

(Listening this Jalal was about to argue about it he open his mouth to deny but one hard stern glare by Elder Prince Nasir and he Spoke Calmly glaring at Princess Bakshi who with attitude just stick her tongue out to him).

I Seek your forgiveness Princess Do forgive me for being rude to you...

(If it would be some other time she may had taken extra effort to rile Her Brother Jalal but not today as she want something Else so she spoke calmly).

I will forgive you if you let me accompany you for hunting...

(Her words make Prince Nasir to break the huge and retreat one step back from her He look at both his little brother and Sister then spoke calmly).

If It's Some Joke then I am not going to appreciate you Little Sis...

(knowing well Her both Brothers aren't fond of getting women on hunting or any play which are known to be men job She turn her head aside and spoke calmly not in mood to let them go at least not before making them agree for her wish).

No it's not a joke you always end up sending him for useless attacks ... and assignment now I want to do the same I just wish to go for hunting what's wrong in it...

(Sighing a bit Nasir Spoke while walking close to His little sister who is 20 at age but have strength to defeat even Kid in stubbornness but can't blame her as stubbornness is something which run in Royal blood of Mughals).

Look Bakshi you are married And you have to follow the custom of being Married Mughal women ...you aren't even allowed to step out of your room ...without hiding your face by veil and you want me to allow you to go for hunting ...let you ride the horse when men will be around you ...use weapon do you even know how Indecent you are being now...

(Knowing well no matter how much her brothers love her and how powerful they are they don't have strength to go against law and customs made for women by men itself Bakshi Wiped her eyes and look straight at Prince Nasir and play her last card on him).

But brother make me learn weapons and politics what's the use of those lesson... If I am not allow to do what I learned long back... do you know how ashamed I felt when few week back...I .. I visited Ajmer and heard the songs about the Bravery Of Rajput's Women's...

(Taking a bit step towards Her Room wooden Window which had good detail work on She looked out and spoke with soft Low tone all the way along a faint smirk played on her lips).

Specially about those two Brave Fierce warrior ...who are Princess of Amer State one of the most Rich and powerful state in Rajputana...Beauty to steal the heart of Stone Heart men... Bravery to even make Unbeaten Warrior bow their head down...Brain which can turn there defeat in to victory in no time...

(Both Nasir and Jalal Looked at each other with frown it's not like they don't get what there little Sister is trying to do it's just they are getting surprised by her way how she is praising there opponent in so Much admiring way which is no way hell acceptable for them Amer state of Rajputana was never a threat for Mughal because long back the late Emperor Humayu had Made peace with Late King of Amer. But after many Years Mughal's Seems bit off from there side as like back the Amer is not fond of sending there Troops for Aid Of Mughal Army if they need neither like back they are having any formal Relation with Mughal's in fact it will not be wrong to say that Amer is Ignoring Mughal Empire and coping up with their issue on their own. And the information that it's two Little Princess are the sole reason of this ignorance make Mughal's Mouth sour and build uncontrollable Rage in them).

Don't think so highly of those two chits Princess if you wish we can get them here in Agra for you as maid they are nothing front of Us...

(Spoke Jalal In arrogance filled voice making Nasir Sigh in disbelief he look at Jalal Sternly and spoke to give him a bit advise when and what to say and that to how).

Be aware little bro you are talking about hot blooded Rajput Royal Princess if by any chance those Rajput got their ear on your words Trust me my Little bro we will end up in Big trouble...

(Not liking the way how his elder brother always make him shut by his wise words Jalal spoke with same attitude with uncaring way not realizing it's how he is making wrong Impression on his elder brother of himself)..

I fear none of them Brother I really meant what I said... if she want I can get them here for her service ...But no way in hell I am going to let her accompany me for hunting...

(Listening this Mughal princess Bakshi Banu Glare at Her elder brother while Elder Prince just shook his head and spoke again but this time a bit calm voice knowing well loosing his cool will lead him into more argument which he no way in hell want now not at least when he have to attend Royal Special court for his next strategy against His enemies).

Little Brother It's good you fear none... and I know you can do what you said... but do you really think you can get success with those hot blooded royal's... Who can die to protect their Modesty and killed other to defend their motherlands and people... even if you can I don't want you to do... more ever give respect and earn them back... no need to invite trouble for yourself ...just to show how fearless you are ...And about you Little Sister... then it's clear no...for you as you aren't going for hunting no matter what you say or feel...

(Taking step towards the Entrance of His sister Room he spoke at the end again in calm voice he turn his head slightly towards them and spoke fixing his gaze on both of them).

I shall take your leave be there at court both of you with no tantrum and attitude...

(Saying this Prince Nasir walk out of There Leaving thoughtful Sibling behind. Who look at each other with glare and walked away as well. After one hour at Royal Special court (Diwan'e Khaas )of Agra Announcement of Mughal Emperor arrival got held).

Badab Ba Mulahiza hoshiyar Noor'e Takht Mughal Saltnat

Sehnshah'e Hind Abul Shah Nasir Ud-Din Tashreef Laa Rahe hai...

(All the Advisor Scholars Minister And Royal family member stand still in the honour of there Emperor And after minute of Silence which prevailed after announcer got done with his task The Emperor Make his entry in the Court).

He always has aura of authority and grace around him"!

(Thought Jalal Inwardly and frown when he look at his brother emotionless face yet slight coldness in eyes. He knew something is going to happen but what he don't know . The emperor had worn Blue Colour Silk Long Robe with Full Sleeved, Over Brown Colour( Jama) which had detail work on border by Gold Silvery thread his waist he had Dagger plume, Royal Turban on head which was heavily set with jewels and fixed firmly with Precious Gem set Aigrette even At the upright on front A feather was Plume on turban. Holding Sword At Right hand he made his way towards the throne. Accepting everyone Respectable Greeting with a Slight nod he sit on throne. And after him other to take there seat with Light nod One of the Informer Spoke calmly).

Your Majesty we will like to let you know we are getting threat by Rajputana...we got To noticed some Suspicious activities there in Amer...

(Looking at everyone for slight minute Emperor Turn towards his main Special advisor and minister Shams Ud-Din Adhga

Just got to noticed few Suspicious Activities aren't enough...to take strict action against them your majesty ...we need proper proof to do that after all we have peace treaty with them...

(Jalal who was listening everything having slight frown on head he was surprised by Adhga khan words so was others present in court but none of them react or said anything not even Emperor himself but no sooner a voice Cut Shams Ud-Din Adhga words in middle).

Well Said... Rajput are our enemy but Amer state is our ally and Rajput's are known for Keeping their Promise...but your majesty we had Peace treaty with late King of Amer not with their Kids... and now when we got to noticed some Suspicious activity ...which in a way sign of Revolt then we need to be alert shouldn't we... your majesty...

(Spoke Bairam Khan another Special Advisor and Minister of Emperor even his mentor a strong pillar of Mughal empire in simple words , Commander of Empire (Vazir e Saltnat) as well Looking at everyone he spoke without seeking permission to spoke but none dare to say anything while Emperor never care about royal protocol when it's concern Bairam Khan and spoke in as usual Stern cold voice he always held an dark aura of which make everyone fear him).

But with all your permission your Majesty I don't understand why will they revolt against us... what are they so prideful about... do they really think they can win against ...us when entire Rajputana is divided ....

(Bairam Khan smirked at his student words Jalal the unbeaten Warrior in Mughal empire fierce and merciless commander of Mughl Army in true words Strength of Mughal empire. Right hand of Mughal emperor people fear him allot and it work like wonder when he get on action. But only one problem is there Jalal is so stubborn and Arrogant his attitude is something which can pissed even most calm person Like Mughal emperor as well. Who is known to be always check on his emotion no matter what).

Enemy don't need a reason for war... same goes for Rajput's no matter how small and weak they are... they hate the very idea of being ally of Mughal Empire Jalal ...And now You should be ready to marched...

(Spoke Abul Shah Nasir Ud-Din Mohammed with his as usual calm tone with emotionless face looking straight at Jalal who look at him confused and asked calmly).

Marched but where...

Amer you heard about the news didn't you...

(Not in mood To waste much time Emperor answer back to Jalal Question making him confused more no sooner as soon he finished speaking he got another Question by Jalal).

Yes I heard... but didn't I was asked... to marched towards Bengal yesterday...

(Not knowing why sudden change of the task assign to him Jalal ask he was sure there will be no threat by Rajput he never admit but even he knew how fierce they are and he inwardly do admire there views and way of living for there motherland and passion for whatever they do. But as Egoistic guy he is he never praise them openly no matter what and not much time was passed when he get his answer of question by emperor himself ).

Yes but now Adham Khan will marched towards Bengal ...while you towards Rajputana state Amer ...I want you to see yourself why Rajput even being Divided don't wish to get under our rule ...and always ready to fought against us even ...when they hate their own neighboring states...

(Not having any option Jalal just nodded his head in yes and with that The Court got dismissed. and everyone starter walking out after emperor made his way out of court while Jalal Who was bit thoughtful about his new task started walking out of court to he was in corridor of palace when he heard few soldier talk).

yes I heard about them to they are very sharp minded ...yet beautiful it's such a pity that instead of Adorning themselves in palace they had to handle their state... they are so young to be in war or and so delicate to be the part of cruel politics...

(Spoke one Soldier looking straight at front but having attention on his friend both were unknown to the fact that Their Younger Prince of Mughal empire is listening their talk).

don't speak that way buddy I heard those two Princess are nothing like you say they maybe beautiful but and young but they are very much strong to handle everything on their own if on the basis of there gender you underestimate them then be ready to get defeated by them...

(Jalal who had enough of there talk got fed up so he made his way towards both of them suddenly and making both of them shirked in fear when Jalal Placed his sword on both of there neck).

You both are payed to guard us or do talk huh dare dare to get even careless for second and your throat will be sliced got it now out of my sight...

(Listening this both of them run away like deer run from Lion. Jalal chuckled darkly at there speed of running and walked towards his room to get ready for marching towards Amer).

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Great starting dear. The stubborn mughals. Oo bauxi has a sharp toung here. Waiting for the Amaris . Update ur other stories also plz.

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