Dosti Milti Naseeb Se-OS

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Dearies, this is my version of SwaNa patch up. Hope you all like it. A big thanks to my dearest friend sharvyo for giving the title to this OS.

"Sameer kahan le ja raho?"

"Tum sawal bahut karti ho, thoda sa bharosa karo aur sawal mat karo buss chalo".

He tugged her along in the activity makeup room and shut the door and bolted it. Though Usually Naina didn't mind, in fact loved to spend alone time with him, this was not the best approach now.

"Sameer kya kar rahe ho? Darwaza kyon bandh kar diya? Tumhe pataa hai na naya kanoon. Ladka ladki ek saath akele mein nahi dikh sakte, aur agar main GS hote hue tumhare haath mein haath dalakar baat karti hui dikhi, toh Principal ma'am hum dono ko college se nikal degi".

"Sshh..." Sameer pressed a finger to his lips to quiet her anxiety and started taking steps towards her while she started walking backwards. His love filled intense gaze held her eyes captive and as much as she wanted to bolt, same as much she wanted to stay with him. Principal ma'am's new rule was a curse to all the love birds who could steal a few moments of togetherness only in college.

When her back hit the table behind her, she looked slightly about and stopped, while he chuckled softly as if stating "ab kaise durr jaogi". (Show ka beautiful scene use karna toh banta hai).

He leaned slowly towards her and with utmost slowness raised and placed both his hands on her shoulders and slowly straightened her, pulled her slightly towards him and turned her half around towards the long mirror standing in the other corner of the room. She clearly saw herself and him standing behind her, his half body partially covered with her petite frame and his face titled to one side gazing at her with pure love. She blushed a dark shade of scarlet as this one was her favourite romantic pose from the movies. She used to dream of looking at his reflection in the mirror, especially now when she saw it any movie.

Slowly his hands left her shoulders and she was bereft of his hold, while he pulled out something from his pocket and brought it in front of her. With one hand he slowly pushed her hair to one side and started putting it around her neck and clasping it over the high collar of her pink floral top. Not much of her neck was visible but he still had a strong urge to place his lips near her earlobe and taste her skin. Since he still wasn't sure how comfortable Naina would be with such intimacy, he controlled his hormonal desires and smiled looking at her admiring the pendant animatedly.

"Sameer yeh toh bahut sundar hai". It was S and N entwined together in gold studded with some tiny diamonds. She kept touching it and admiring it in the mirror as if it was sacred for her.

Then as if realising something "par Sameer, yeh toh mehenga bhi hoga na...main kaise le sakti hoon?", worry-lines etched on her forehead.

"Hamare pyar se zyaada mehenga nahi hai...hamara rishta anmol hai Naina...yeh toh buss pyar ka tohfa hai...jab se tum GS bani ho, main soch raha tha ki tumhe kya special gift doon. Bahut sochne ke baad tumne khud mujhe yeh idea diya jab tumne yeh kahan ki tumhari saari himmat mujhse aati hai aur main kaha ki hamesha har dukh-sukh mein tumhare saath rahoonga! Preeti ne Pooja didi ki mehndi ke time tumhare haath pe mera naam likh diya aur tumne uss din Kammo bankar mere haath pe hum dono ka. Toh aaj maine hamare pyar ko iss pendant mein seal kar diya. Plz ise kabhi mat utarna".

She smiled at him and he smiled in return and they were adoring each other in the mirror unaware that Carthick was snapping their pictures from the grills of the side window in such angles that appeared as if his head was on her shoulder and he was leaning towards her and she was back leaning on him. He might have snapped 10-15 pics from various angles. However, even he was unaware that he was being watched by someone who might be physically in their gang but the heart still belonged to her bestie, her Naina.

Finally, Carthick came to his gang with a bounce in his step and an arrogant smirk on his face.

"Kya hua Carthick, itne khush kyon ho?", shoe asked.

"Buss Sunaina, ab tum dekhti jao... aaj aise photos haath lage hai jise dekhne ke baad principal madam Naina ko GS ki post se hi nahi, college se bhi nikal degi".

"Main samjhi nahi...aisi kaun si photos mil gayi tumhe?"

"Thodi der mein pataa lag jaayega, main photographs develop karane ke liye deke aaya hoon, zyaada paise dekar 2 ghante mein develop karne ko di hai...tum buss GS banne ki taiyari karo! Aaj shaam ko toh party karenge!" Carthick smirked with his overconfidence and Shoe was elated assuming that by evening she would be the GS and Naina out of college.

An evil thought also cruised her mind that if somehow she managed to save Sameer from being ousted, she could try & get him back to be her BF, after all he was the most handsome guy in college and it would add to her status of GS having the most handsome boy as BF wagging behind her. She too smirked on her plan.

Swati too tagged along with the gang and when Carthick was about to leave for the studio to fetch the pics, she intervened "Carthick tum studio ja rahe ho? Ek kaam karo, wo raseed mujhe de do, main le aati hoon, waise bhi mujhe stationary shop ke kuch saamna lena tha".

Carthick was a bit skeptical as it was a very important piece of proof but Shoe prodded him "de do na Carthick, Swati bhi hamaari dost hai aur use bhi Naina ko sabak sikhana hai".

Though unwilling, he still gave her the receipt and cautioned "dhyaan se Swati, Sameer ya kisiko pataa nahi chalna chahiye, yeh photos hum seedha principal madam ko dikhayenge".

"Tum fikr mat karo, main studio se photos lekar aise ke aise tumhe de dungi", Swati assured him.

Later in the afternoon, Naina was in principal madam's office with a couple of other teachers finalising the decisions on the Navratri function preps and convince her to allow joint dandiya when Carthick burst into her office with a white envelope in hand.

The gang had noticed Carthick hurrying towards the corridor with shoe and priyank in tow and Swati lingering behind. So, sensing trouble again for his Naina, Sameer too prodded everyone to loiter in the corridor outside the principal office.

"Carthick! Yeh kya badtameezi hai! Tumhare papa trustee hai iska matlab yeh nahi ki pura college tumhare papa ka ho gaya aur kabhi bhi kahi bhi kuch bhi kar sakte ho! Andarr aane se pehle permission lena bhi zaroori nahi samajhte! How can you just barge into my office? Koi manners hai ya nahi?", principal was furious over him, while he eyed Naina maliciously.

"Aise andarr aane ke liye sorry madam. Par jo aapko dikhana hai wo urgent hai. Isse pehle ki aap iss Naina pe bharosa karke ispe college ki reputation ki zimmedari daale, main aapko dikhana chahta hoon ki iski khudki kya reputation hai".

"Kya bakwas kar rahe ho Carthick?", JBR asked.

"Bakwas nahi...sahi bol raha hoon...proof hai mere paas...kaise yeh GS jisse zimmedari di gayi hai ladke ladkiyon ko alag rakhne ki, khud apne boyfriend ke saath college ke bandh kamre mein kya kya gul khila rahi hai".

Since the office door was open, several students had gathered hearing the commotion. Sameer was on forefront and almost barged in onto Carthick "teri himmat kaise hui Naina ke barein mein ulti seedhi baat karne ki", Sameer yelled in his face with fists clenched ready to punch him.

Naina was tensed coz Sameer's control was threadbare and MP were trying to control him.

"Enough! Sameer, control yourself!", principal boomed.

"Aur tum Carthick, agar proof hai toh dikhao warna sab log yahan se dafaa ho jao! Aur else I will have to take strict action", she warned.

Carthick came forward and placed the envelope in front of her. Madam was confused but nevertheless opened the envelope and started scanning the photos.

She scrunched her face and brows furrowed. After scanning all "what nonsense is this Carthick? Kahan hai isme Naina ki photos! Yeh toh library ke inauguration ki pictures hai!", she banged the pictures on her desk and JBR and Carthick both craned their necks to see them.

"Haan... yeh to maine peon se kahi thi develop karvane, college records ke liye", exclaimed JBR.

Carthick too was surprised that none of it was the picture he jad clicked this morning. He turned around and saw Swati and stormed towards her furiously "yeh kaun si photos hai? Woh kahan hai ho maine develop karvane di thi".

"Mujhe kya pataa tumne kaun si develop karvane di thi. Studio wale ne mujhe jo envelope diya main wahi lekar aa gayi aur bina khole tumhe de diya. Mujhe kaise pataa hoga ki wo photos kahan gayi!", Naina and gang were silently observing the exchange & Naina was almost sure that Swati had indeed saved her again.

"Enough Carthick, main bahut der se tumhari harkatein bardasht kar rahi hoon, but this is my last warning...aayenda agar tumne ek bhi galat harkat ki toh bina kisi warning ke I will rusticate you!"

"Par madam..." Carthick stammered.

"Enough!...get out! Everyone leave my cabin right now. Baaki discussions hum baad mein karenge", she decreed.

Carthick was furious at having being insulted in front of the students. He held Swati firmly by the elbow and dragged her along with Shoe and Priyank in tow.

"Carthick mera haath chodo!" Swati almost requested but he was angry as hell and didn't let go and continued to pull her with him.

"Carthick, kya kar rahe ho! Chodo uska haath!", even Shoe tried to stop him but paying no heed he dragged her and led her unceremoniously inside an empty classroom.

"Carthick! Dimaag kharab ho gaya hai kya tumhara? Kya kar rahe ho tum? Dost hai wo hamari", Shoe tried to make him see sense.

"Dimaag mera nahi iska kharab hai. Aur dost? Kaisi dost? Agar dost hoti toh Naina ki photographs nahi badalti. Kitni mushkil se saboot ikattha kiya tha Naina ke khilaaf taaki tum GS ban sako par isne...sab pe paani fer diya. Yeh hamaari dost nahi hai. Arre hamaari toh kya, yeh kisiki dost nahi ho sakti. Jo apni bachpan ki friend ke saath gaddari kar sakti hai woh hamare saath kya wafadari karegi!" Saying so, he walked dangerously towards Swati "par yeh bhool gayi ki na tum Naina ho aur na main Sameer jo gaddar dost ko bhi asani se jane de. Main Carthick hoon Carthick. Aur aaj isse pataa chal jayega ki Carthick se dhoka karne ka kya anjaam hota hai".

Saying so, he jerked her bag away from her shoulders, turned her bag upside down and emptied it on the floor. The contents were a couple of books, pens, her id card, lipstick, comb, and hankie. He also picked up the books and flipped the pages but didn't find a single picture he was looking for.

This angered him further and again coming in her face, he yelled at top volume "kahan hai woh tasveerein?"

Swati cowered and he yelled one more time his fisted hand raised in air as if ready to puch her when someone pulled him back by the shirt collar and slapped him hard, stumping him by the sudden reaction.

"Himmat kaise hui teri badtameezi karne ki? Munna was ready to shower punches on him when Pandit held on to him. "Shant ho ja Chenu...principal madam ne abhi sabko warning di hai", Pandit tried to make him see reason.

But Munna was super angry and couldn't see anything beyond the fog of red "chod de pandit, aaj isko nahi chodunga, isne Swati par haath uthane ki koshish ki". Munna was yelling while now even Sameer tried to calm him while Naina Preeti looked on.

"Mujhe maarke kya hoga? Usse yeh nahi badal jayega ki yeh ladki gaddar hai", countered Carthick.

Swati who till now didn't defend herself, finally spoke up "haan hoon mein gaddar! Ki maine gaddari. Par tumhare saath gaddari karne ka mujhe koi afasos nahi hai kyonki tum log khud cheaters ho! Aur chor ke ghar chori karna koi galat baat nahi. Haan badli maine photographs aur ab woh tumhare haath kabhi nahi lagegi".

(Flashback: Swati had gone to the photo studio and received the pictures Carthick had clicked. She too was there on the other side of the window and had known that Sameer was only gifting Naina with the pendant and they were admiring each other with love but the angles of the pictures were such that they appeared to be hugging in a passionate embrace from back and Sameer kissing her near the neck. She knew Carthick would use these pictures to put Naina in bad light and she was thinking of ways to save her friend when her eyes fell on the other photos of college library inauguration. She requested to pick those up as well as she was from the same college and would deliver it safely and then very cleverly hid Naina pics under her loose shirt in the waistband of her jeans coz she was sure her bag would be checked and handed over the library pictures to Carthick, who in his haste to put Naina down didn't even open and check them).

Carthick took a dangerous step towards her but even Sameer and Munna took a step towards him. "Jaane do Carthick, tum sahi the, Swati kisiki dosti ke layak nahi hai...ab akeli hi rahegi yeh", Shoe spewed her venom and tugged him with her followed by their gang.

When they were out of sight, Swati and Naina looked at each other with lots to say but none could utter a word. So Swati being the bolder among both, took a step towards Naina and with guilt-ridden voice and tearing eyes tried to conjure an apology "Naina...maine jo kiya uske baad maafi maangne ka haq toh nahi hai, par.." since the boys were also present, she turned around sightly and pulled out the envelope from under her shirt and handed it to Naina "shayad aaj yeh karne se mera thoda sa paap kam ho jaaye". When Naina just stared at the envelope, she continued "yeh teri aur Sameer ki kuch tasveerein hai jab woh tujhe activity room mein le gaya tha. Maine janti thi ki tum log kuch galat nahi kar sakte par Carthick isse galat tareeke se pesh karta aur tujhe neecha dikhata aur tujhe GS ki post se hatva deta".

When Naina took the envelope from her, Swati started to leave and Naina grabbed her hand. "Tu toh mujhe haarte hue dekhna chahti thi na, fir aaj toh accha mauka tha, fir tune kyon bachaya mujhe? Aaj tune fir wahi kiya jo bachpan se karti aayi hai...jab koi mera tiffin chura leta toh wapas le aati. Tu chahe din mein dus baar mujhe behenji ya jhalli bulati par koi aur mujhe kuch bhi kehta toh usse lad padti. Main kabhi second aa jati toh mujhse jyaada mere paper ke marks tu baar baar total karti. Jab se Sameer meri zindagi mein aaya hai, tu ne har baar mera saath diya hai, kabhi jhooth bolakar, kabhi mujhe bachakar, mere liye Taiji ki daant bhi khayi hai tune. Uss din mujhe pataa hai tu ne hume haath pakda dekh JBR se bachaya tha". Swati was filled with even more remorse as they both collected all the wonderful moments of their age-long friendship.

Naina continued demanding answers and finally confronting her dearest friend "fir uss din aisa kya hua Swati ki tune mere saath aisa kiya? Aisi kaun si badi galati ho gayi mujhse ki tu ne ek pal mein bachpan ki dosti bhula di?"

"Galati hui Naina", Swati almost screamed venting out all her pent up frustration! "Jab tu ne Sameer se rishta toda, main tere saath khadi thi, tera mann nahi tha toh bhi tu ne achanak apni jagah mujhe election khada kar diya. Aur bina kuch soche teri baat maan li. Fir dheere dheere maine mann bana liya ki main bhi shayad kuch kar sakti hoon, election mein khadi ho sakti hoon, jeet bhi sakti hoon...lekin fir tere aur Sameer ke beech sab theek ho gaya aur bina mujhse puche bina mujhse baat kiye, mera naam hatva diya. Jis tarah sab tera prachar karne mein jut gaye the, mere liye kisi ne nahi kiya. Yahan tak ki Munna, usne mujhse kitni buri tarah se baat ki...use toh yaad bhi nahi tha ki main uski girl friend hoon. Jis tarah Sameer ko hamesha tera khayal hota hai, Munna ne ek baar bhi mera khayal nahi kiya. Main teri dost thi Naina, sirf teri parchayi nahi jo hamesha tere peeche chalti. Mera bhi apna wajood hai".

"Jab tere mann mein itna kuch tha toh mujhse kaha kyon nahi?", Naina was flabbergasted at what she was hearing.

Swati continued now in a calm tone, "Kehne ki koshish ki thi Naina, tujhe phone kiya tha...par tu pyaar mein itni khoyi thi ki meri baat sunne ka time bhi nahi tha. Aur main tujhse bahut naraz ho gayi, shayad thodi jalan hui ki Sameer ka pyar hamari dosti ke beech aa gaya. Munna ki tere liye parvah hamare pyar ke beech aa gayi. Bahut gussa aaya tujhapar, aur jab dil jalta hai toh dimaag kaam karna bandh kar deta hai. Sunaina ki zehrili baatein mujhpar asar kar gayi. Mujhe laga tu haaregi toh tujhe sabak milega aur mujhe sukoon, issliye maine khud tere votes chupa diye. Mujhe laga ki hamesha jeetanewali Naina jab haaregi toh use samajh aayega ki haarna kise kehte hai. Par main galat thi Naina, tujhe haarta dekh mujhe koi khushi nahi hui, mujhe bahut bura laga, dil mein itna zor ka dard hua. Main yeh bhool gayi thi ki meri Naina ko jeetne ki aadat toh hai par aaj tak har jeet usne sachchayi, imanadari aur apni mehanat se haasil ki hai. Na kabhi koi beimani ki na koi short cut liya. Mujhe ehsaas hua ki main gusse mein kitna kuch galat kar gayi, buss tab se main mauke dhoondhti rehti thi par apne guilt ki wajah se tere paas wapas nahi aa paayi. Tujhse galati hui Naina ki tu ne bina mere kahe mere dil ki baat nahi samjhi par usse bhi badi galati mujhse hui ki maine haq se tujhe apne dil ki baat nahi batayi aur bachpan ki dosti pe daag laga diya. I am sorry Naina, I m sorry", swati sobbed hard.

Tears were flowing down Nians's cheeks too and she took a step forward and then overcome with emotions she tight hugged her best friend and both cried inconsolably for a few minutes on each other's shoulders. Naina broke the hug "Tu bhi mujhe maaf kar de ki maine bhi tere dil ki baat nahi samjhi". Swati shook her head and wiped Naina's tears and Naina did the same.

Swati then turned to face Sameer "Sorry Sameer, maine tumhare baarein mein bhi galat socha, ek pal ke liye yeh khayal bhi aa gaya ki Naina ki wajah se tum mere nahi hue...aur hamari dosti ke bhi beech aa gaye. I am really sorry", Sameer too just shook his head, he had already forgiven her coz of Naina and Munna.

"Pagal ladki...tujhe pataa hai dost toh hum bachpan se hai...par dosti ke sahi maayne mujhe Sameer ne hi sikhaya. Usi ne kaha tha ki chahe Swati mujhse naaraaz ho, mujhe use samajhna hoga, waqt dena hoga, kyonki dosti se keemti duniya mein aur kuch nahi hota, jaise sachcha pyar kismet se milta hai, sacche aur achche dost bhi nasseb se miltr hai...aur fir tu, main aur Preeti toh bachpan se saath hai...kabhi aisa sochna bhi mat aur yaad rakhna, chahe jo ho jaaye, hum teenon ki dosti ke beech koi nahi aa sakta, Sameer bhi nahi..." and she opened her arms to embrace both her besties and SwaPreeNa hugged in their trio.

Sameer and pandit smiled through their tears, they couldn't see the girls separated and were happiest when they got back together. Munna's eyes teared too but it wasn't easy for him, he just left and Swati noticed that he hadn't said a word nor expressed anything.

Breaking the embrace, Swati voiced her disappointment "Tu ne toh maaf kar diya Naina, par shayad koi hai jo mujhe kabhi maaf nahi karega. Usne toh sabke samne mujhse rishta tod liya tha".

"Tu fikr mat kar, hum mana lenge use", Naina exuded confidence.

"Haan Swati, tum chinta mat karo, hum baat karenge Munna se...woh naraz hai, par iska matlab yeh nahi ki uska pyar khatam ho gaya", Sameer too seconded.

"Haan... tu ne dekha na...jab Carthick badatameezi kar raha tha toh kaise roka use...maar bhi diya...ek baar tu usse baat karegi toh saari narazagi durr ho jayegi uski", Preeti contributed her opinion.

The gang went in search of Munna and found him in Red Rose, which was empty at the hour and the staff was off for kitchen meeting.

The gang entered, Swati standing last almost out of his sight. Sameer broke this thoughts "Munna...".

Munna got up with a start "Dekh Sameer, mujhe pata hai tu kya baat karne aaya hai...par mujhe nahi karni, akela chod de yaar".

"Aise kaise akela chod de? Munna, Swati maafi maang rahi hai, dost hai meri...doston se galati ho jaaye toh maafi maangkar, galati sudharakar dost ko gale lagate hai, khud se durr nahi karte. Aur fir thodi thodi galati hum sabki hai", Naina reasoned.

"Naina, Swati teri dost hai, tu ne maaf kar diya, teri marzi par mere liye aasan nahi hai gaddar ko maaf karna...", he started to leave and his words pierced Swati's heart.

Naina blocked his way "Munna...agar Swati ne galat kiya toh mere saath, agar tere hisaab se gaddari ki toh mere saath, hamari dosti mein kami thi...par pyar toh usne puri imanadari se nibhaya na, tere saath toh kabhi kuch galat nahi kiya...balki tu ne bhi uske dil ki baat nahi samjhi. Jaise Sameer hamesha mera saath deta hai, meri har kahi ankahi baat samajh leta hai, tujhe bhi toh Swati ka saath dena chahiye tha na...Munna, jaise dosti ke beech koi nahi aa sakta waise pyar ke beech bhi kisi ko aane ki ijazat nahi hoti".

Munna didn't respond and Naina was about to say something when when Swati finally spoke "Buss Naina, ab tu kuch nahi bolegi. Ab baat Munna aur mere beech ki hai...aaj main bolungi woh sunega, woh bolega aur main sunungi. Tum sab log please thodi der ke liye hume akela chod do", Swati requested (inspired by dialog from Raja Hindustani).

Everyone looked at each other and without words mutually agreed to give the couple some privacy to sort their differences. They filed out carefully closing the door and remained just outside so they could hear but not see, in case they were needed and stay to stay vigilant, lest the Car gang started any nuisance.

Swati took a step closer to Munna, "mujhe please maaf kar do...galati ho gayi mujhse".

Munna whirled around as he was facing opposite side. He yelled "galaati nahi, gunaah...dosti mein gaddari gunaah hota hai...paap hota hai. Arre log dosti ke liye toh apni jaan tak de dete hai toh tu ek election ki wajah se dosti bhool gayi...tu aur Naina tab se dost hai jab se main tujhe janta bhi nahi tha. Aur uss Sunaina aur Carthick ki baaton mein aakar apni dost ki peeth mein chura bhonk diya...aur jab galati ka ehsaas hua toh maafi bhi nahi maangi...unn nalayakon ki toli ke saath hi ghumti rahi...aur mujhse shikayat thi ki maine tera saath nahi diya...aare waise toh mujhe bandar, ullu, gadha bulati rehti hai...agar mujhse galati hui, tujhse buri tarah se baat ki toh kaan pakadakar daant nahi sakti thi...Sameer mera bhai hai aur Naina ko apni behen maanta hoon...toh hai mujhe unki fikr...tu bol nahi sakti thi ki Munna, meri bhi parvaah kar le...main toh bachpan se gadha hoon...tu hai na samajhdaar, fir kyon nahi dikhayi samajhadari..."

Swati was very contrite when he was almost yelling, but one look at him and she realised that he was mainly venting out his frustration of separation from her. On an impulse, she almost ran to him and wrapped her arms around his waist and hugged him tight and let tears flow freely to rid her of the guilt and craving that she felt without him in all these days and continuously kept chanting "I m sorry...I m sorry".

Munna was so taken aback that he shut up suddenly. He could hear her muffled sobs and sorry and after 2 seconds he too gave in and hugged her tight and cried his heart out.

After a couple of minutes, he broke the embrace, and wiped her tears and he too apologised for being an ass to her "tu bhi maaf kar de apne bandar ko...moti buddhi mein baat thodi der se samajh aati hai na", his words made Swati chuckle through the tears, which had now almost subsided.
As if remembering something "Aye Pandat, par tu ne Sameer wali baat kya boli? Kya tu abhi bhi usse pasand karti hai?, he asked in all seriousness.

Swati replied playfully "haan...ab Salman par toh har ladki marti hai...main koi alag thodi hi hoon".

"Kya yaar Pandat, tune toh dil hi tod diya..."

"Arre mere bandar, Salman pe har ladki fida hai, main bhi hoon...par pyar toh tujhse hi karti hoon...I love you...aur main Salman Khan ki baat kar rahi thi...aur Sameer agar Salman jaisa dikhta hai toh main kya karu...par mujhe toh Akshay zyaada pasand hai", she smirked holding both his hands.

"Kya yaar Pandat, tu ne toh dara diya...I love you too", Munna reciprocated and blushed & at the same moment,?the gang barged in screaming "we love you too" (had to lift it from the show...cute disturbance of the romance).

SwaMun blushed and the boys and girls hugged in a group for the first time.

"Waise Swati, maine socha tha ki tujhe hi Deputy GS banaungi", Swati recollected how she had half heard that Naina was going to select Sameer or Preeti. But now she was sensible and understood the gravity of the situation.

"Nahi Naina, tera deputy GS banne ke saare gunn Sameer mein hai. Maine dekha hai election se leke ab tak sab kuch kitne suljhe hue tareeke se sulajhaya hai". Naina Sameer smiled at each other as their solidarity was now known to almost everyone in college.

"Haan par main teri volleyball team ki captainship ke liye puri koshish karungi", Swati declared.

"Aur mujhe yakeen hai ki coach sir teri kabiliyat zaroor pehchanenge", Naina supported.

"Na bhi bani toh bhi hum team zaroor banayenge aur jeetengi bhi".

Naina and Swati joined hands and vowed "ab toh yeh sports team banakar aur jeetakar hi dum lenge", the rest of the gang too joined hands and they vowed to prove their united strength and gain win for the college defying the ShoeCar gang.Edited by Radkam - 5 years ago

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Posted: 5 years ago
Lovely OS.  How I wish at least some of the dialogues are there in the show and similar confrontation happens. Munna Swati Milan was very cute. Loved it.
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Posted: 5 years ago
Very Nice OS
Swati's redemption is very much needed and you have brought out Swati's conversation beautifully, be it Swana convo or Swamun...
Wish such confrontation happens in the show as well
And the much needed slap to Car...I want that to happen in the show as well by someone from our PVKM gang...
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Posted: 5 years ago
Top class 
I am sure we will get something like this too ..even if we don't reading this has given immense pleasure 

Awesome OS 
Loved it 

Thanks for the pm ❤️
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Posted: 5 years ago
Wow... wow... wow... superb Radhika.
I hope that it happens same in our show also. I am able to visualize each and every dialogue and scene. This is the best way for the redemption of Swathi. Most importantly all of them need to talk and know why and how all these issues happened.
Pls do write more.
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Posted: 5 years ago
Radhika it was superb...  Each dialogue was so apt and impactful...  You closed all the loops and showed how both sides were faulty ..  If Swati was wrong Munna and rest of the gang was wrong too...  Just loved your version 
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Posted: 5 years ago
Superb Radhika 👏👏
From the romantic moments to Kartik's wicked plan to Swati's realization to Kartik's humiliation to Swati's Redemption to the much awaited Reunion of both love and friendship, the plot, sequence and conversation was spot on⭐️

Naina and Swati were saved from the pain of losing each other and yet again proved that Friendship is that partnership where best friends will always find a way back and not lose each other.

I just don't want to underestimate the power and warmth of Munna's and Swati's love in the midst of Swati-Naina reunion. It was indeed so emotional but at the same time heartwarming to see the confrontation, pouring out their angst and pain and finally confessing their love.


Loved it lots.❤️
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Posted: 5 years ago
What an awesome piece of writing
Could actually imagine it happening in the show
great work

love
suhani
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Posted: 5 years ago
Superb os
But munna ko swati ki importance samjhni chahiye 
U write beautifully isme koi doraye nhi but swati munna ke bich conversation thori detail me hona chahiye I Mean pehle munna takta nhi tha pandat pandat karte or ab jab wo ladki uski ho gayi to uski koi value nhi relationship me sabke samne ek dusre ki kamiya dhaakte he ese bezzati nhi karte pyar ki dosti ki dono Apni alag jagah he munna ne ek ko itni value dedi ki dusra kahi dur chut gaya he takes swati for granted 
If possible can you plz write one more os on dem it's a request plz 

Swati Naina's Milan was superbly written everything was awesome bas munna swati convo detail me chahiye tha remorse pain hurt guilt realization 


Hope meri request mano aap
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Posted: 5 years ago
thanks dear!