Ajeeb Ho Tum P1 PG2

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A soulmate- a connection so deep rooted and pure, that the souls, hearts and bodies entwine and become one.
Zoya Siddiqui lives with her Grandmother and studies in the nearest college, two years ago she met a man who looked at her in a way she'd never forget yet she struggles to remember his face, he will always be the ajeeb man who looked right through her. Plagued with nightmares she isn't sure if she'll ever find salvation, that is until she meets her ajeeb stranger again.

Aditya Hooda is a famous rockstar, finding inspiration from a woman he met two years ago, he just cannot get her out of his head, she has saved him in ways she will never know, but now his salvation needs saving too.

With everything against them, will they ever be able to unite and figure out if soulmates really exist or will their love come to a bittersweet ending when new enemies and old come to light?

It's suggested that you read His Salvation before reading this story but you don't have to. https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/bepannaah/5019605/his-salvation-p25-pg29-complete

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Prolouge~

"No" long curls hit her face as she shook her head, this wasn't happening, it couldn't be happening. "No" was now a whisper of disbelief as a man led in her arms covered in blood. "No, you cannot leave me like this, you said you loved me, you don't leave people you love, please, come back to me, please" her body was shaking now "I can't live without you, it's all my fault, you would have survived if I wouldn't have made you promise, i'm so sorry, my beautiful good man, i'm so sorry I failed you"
A woman gasped loudly and sat up, her fingers were clenched into fists that ached when she unclenched and ran her trembling hands across her face. Mostly everynight she had the same recurring dream where she saw two people, though never could she see their faces, it distressed her, for those moments it was as if she was living it herself.

Her grandmother's voice rung in her head "It's a sign, it's your soul calling out to you" she shook her head and giggled, it was stupid really that her grandmother believed in something as superficial as soulmates, they didn't exist. There was no such thing as a person that was made specifically for you, but her grandmother was all she had so she wouldn't refute her beliefs

"Aree Zoya, aren't you up yet, you're going to be late for college" Nandini shouted from downstairs

Zoya turned over with a huff "Coming" she hated college, it was full off too many people who didn't care for their studies and too many people who cared too much, there was no balance whatsoever. Only one day had ever been interesting for her and the man that interested her never really showed up again anyway and that was two years ago

XXX

A tall man stepped onto a dimly lit stage, the lights flickered before shining brightly and the audience screamed. "Aditya, Aditya" the crowd began to chant

The corner of his pink lips rose and a dimple formed in his cheek, this was what he lived for, the thrill of hearing the crowd chant his name. He lived to sing, this was the life for him. "Apne karam ki kar adaayein, yaara, yaaraa, yaara"

Aditya allowed his eyes to close, it was as if she was stood with him now, her long curly locks brushing across his face "Mujhko iraade de, kasamein de, waade de, meri duaaon ke ishaaron ko sahaare de, dil ko thikaane de, naye bahaane de, khaabon ki baarishon ko, mausam ke paimane de, qpne karam ki kar adaayein, kar de idhar bhi tu nigaahein"

He wasn't sure why he couldn't get her out of her head, he had only seen her once but had been taken by her beauty ever since, so much that she had become his inspiration for all of his music since. The crowd continued to chant but there was truly only one person he wanted to enjoy his music

Aditya gripped the microphone infront of him, his eyes finally opening "Sun raha hai naa tu ro raha hun main, sun raha hai naa tu kyun ro raha hun main, manzilein ruswa hain, khoya hai raasta, aye le jaayi itni si iltejaa, ye meri zamanat hai tu meri amaanat hai haan" when he looked up again she was stood opposite him, her hands resting beneath her chin, her head tipped to the side as she smiled

He couldn't help but smile back "Apne karam ki kar adayein, kar de idhar bhi tu nigaahein, suun raha hai naa tu ro raha hoon main, sun raha hai naa tu kyun ro raha hun main" he watched as she walked forward, her hand lifted, fingers brushing against his lips, then he blinked and she was gone as if she had never been there in the first place.

XXX

Zoya stopped in her steps, why did this voice sound so familiar? Every word was like a stab to her heart, filling her with grief and emptiness. Her eyes fluttered shut as she sang along " Waqt bhi thehara hai, kaise kyun ye huaa kaash tu aise aaye, jaise koi duaa, tu rooh ki raahat hai, tu meri ibaadat hai"

Her mind drifted to that moment two years ago, she had been standing with her earphones in when a new student had stopped to look at her with eyes that pierced through her, the moment had been so intense it was as if he could see right through her. Her mind was in pieces "Ajeeb ho tum, do you stare at everyone like that" she pulled her scarf over herself moreso like it could hide her from his view though she knew it was pointless. He never responded, instead just walked away and she had never seen him again, it seemed no matter how hard she tried she couldn't picture his face properly

Zoya opened her eyes and looked up at the poster on the massive board, the singer was coming to her town, and she had to go. She reached her hand up running her fingers across his face "You seem so familiar, like I know you"

XXX

Aditya stumbled back, his hand on his cheek, it was almost as if he had been hit by a current "Apne karam ki kar adaayein kar de idhar bhi tu nigaahein, sun raha hai naa tu ro raha hoon main, sun raha hai naa tu kyun ro raha hun main yaara"


Welcome to Ajeeb Ho Tum! I hope you like Chapter number 1, do let me know what you think and what you think will happen.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Yayyy, so happy to read it. I'm excited that Adi and Zoya are going to meet again.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanks for pm as always
Wow part two. They it's like a reincarnation they are both remembering the past.
It's seems fabulous.plz.continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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So so so excited for this ..am waiting to see what will happen next. Girl u r awesome .. How beautifully u have come up with a second season is amazing 👏
I literally have no words😳

Thanks for the pm
Loveee⭐️
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sunshine_kk

Yayyy, so happy to read it. I'm excited that Adi and Zoya are going to meet again.

Thank you my love!
Me too:)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: sezo

Thanks for pm as always

Wow part two. They it's like a reincarnation they are both remembering the past.
It's seems fabulous.plz.continue soon

No problem!
Yes, exactly like that! Thank you love:)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Adi_Ki_Zoya

So so so excited for this ..am waiting to see what will happen next. Girl u r awesome .. How beautifully u have come up with a second season is amazing 👏

I literally have no words😳

Thanks for the pm
Loveee⭐️

Aw yay! Thanks so much Anu!
Ahhh so are you!
Thanks so much love, im so so happy you like it:)
No problem!
Much love
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part One~

"Zoya, I need you to get some things from the shop please" Nandini looked up from the table, her grey hair sat in a messy bun at the top of her hair

"Of course" Zoya smiled about to take the list when Nandini held onto it tighter

"Maybe you might meet a nice man, your soulma-"

"Soulmates don't exist Nani, but if I happen to bump into a nice man, you'll be the first to know" Zoya replied smartly before bending down and pressing a soft kiss to her hair

XXX

Aditya cursed under his breath "Pooja, I need to go and get some things from that shop, but if people see me they'll go wild, can you do something"

Pooja looked up, awestruck "Yes, of course, anything for you Sir" she smiled sweetly before making her way to the fusebox outside the shop doors

Aditya moved quickly towards the shop, rushing inside as soon as the lights turned off, he didn't expect it to be too busy but he wanted to be safe. He listened to the light music in the background from someone's phone then halted when a hand wrapped around his sending jolts of electric up his arm

"S-s-sorry, i'm scared of the dark, can I please just" there was silence "Hold your hand, I hate being alone in the darkness" Zoya gripped the hand tighter and placed the basket down just as she was tugged forward

Aditya wasn't sure what had come over him when he lifted his hand and cupped her cheek, the sudden surge of comfort that sent chills through his body was like no feeling he had ever felt before

Zoya gasped at the intimate position she now stood in, one hand gripped this man's hand, her chest was pressed against his and his other hand was cupping her cheek and in an involuntary action she had nuzzled his hand, craving this foreign feeling the stranger gave her, suddenly the dark didn't seem so bad anymore.

A small smile remained on his lips when he felt her hand move up to grip his hand that rested on her cheek, what should have been a strange moment was the moment he had felt most relaxed. "Do I know you" he asked

The baritone of his voice made her stomach jump, but in a good way, she moved back slightly but closed her eyes in hopes to savour the sound of his voice "No, I" she shook her head making her hair hit his hand "I have to go, im sorry" she moved around him quickly, fumbling around to find the exit when a soft voice could be heard singing from someone's earphones, the words resounded within her and she couldn't help but feel guilty for walking away

"Shaayad phir is janam mein mulaaqat ho na ho"

XXX

Zoya tossed and turned in bed, who was that man and why had she felt so comfortable in his embrace? The nightmares of a loss that wasn't even hers plagued her thoughts on a daily basis, the emotion along with it was always so strong it made her feel phsyically sick at times, today had been similar but not in the way that she felt sick, she had felt bliss, safety and security but with a stranger? None of it made sense, especially not her strange fear of being alone in darkness, but taking support from a man she couldn't even see, well that was something else.

Could her Nani be right? That there was one person out there made just for you? Could it be that today she had met him? No, she shook her head, that was a stupid thought, it had just been an emotional moment with a kind stranger and nothing more. Atleast, that's what she would tell herself

XXX

Aditya switched on the radio and sighed, his fingers ran across the strings of the guitar as he sang along to the voice on the radio, a certain brown haired beauty infiltrated his thoughts " Lag jaa gale ke phir yeh haseen raath ho na ho, shaayad phir is janam mein mulaaqat ho na ho, hum ko mile hai aaj yeh ghadiyaan naseeb se, jee bhar ke dekh leejiye hum ko kareeb se, phir aap ke naseeb mein yeh baat ho na ho"

The words of the song made his heart ache with the thought of not seeing the woman from the shop again, could it be that maybe she had been the same woman he had seen at college two years back? Fate usually never played in his favour, but tonight he would allow himself to hope that the gods would be kind enough to allow him to have his angel to himself for a while.

He hung his head back and placed his guitar on the floor, if all he had was distant memories and visions of her then that would be enough, for she had saved his life in a way he could never repay and for her, though she would never know, he would never touch a drop of alcohol again. Tonight maybe he would sleep without a nightmare, tonight he would be safe.

XXX

Zoya rushed down the stairs "Noor, are you coming or not, or we'll be late"

Noor jumped up from the sofa "I'm already ready Aapi, now come on, i've heard RJ AJ will be at the concert too, and I can't wait" she squealed, her curly hair bobbing around her face

"He's just a radio jockey, why are you so obsessed with him, you know he isn't going to notice you"

"Yes he is" Noor stamped her foot "Mark my words Aapi, i'm going to marry him one day, and then" she stopped, hissing as her ear was tugged "Naniii" she groaned

"I've already told you, you will only marry your soulmate, not some RD AD" Nandini admonished

"RJ AJ" Zoya and Noor spoke in unison

"How do you know he isn't my soulmate, he could be" Noor nodded, rubbing her ear and sighing greatfully when she let go "Would you really stand in the way of true love"

Nandini rolled her eyes "Go on, off with you both, be safe" she kissed them both on the cheek and shooed them away, sure they were gone she closed her eyes "Allah, guide them on the right path, ensure they find the love they both deserve, do not let another love story end so bitterly" she dabbed her eyes and turned away from the door

Im actually so nervousss, what do ya think?
Good? Or no? And if not good what do I need to change?

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Posted: 7 years ago
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It's a very nice and interesting story. Pls continue.

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