Knock, Knock! Who's there? Pt 21/22 pg 80, 82 23/04 - Page 18

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: IMA9167


Itne din nahi padi kya rashmi
Soph pehle padna tha na

U can describe him more



yaan Yariyaan takes the credit lol
nahi ab baas, aur nahi description lol warna i find to google pics lol
that is the reason i don't describe Geet nor Maan to great lengths lol, mujhe googling bohut basand nahi especially for pics and then i CBA staring at just the one pic lol
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

Part 6

the Vakeel (lawyer) is more interesting personality with the two girls Sam and Maya having tug of curses for him, one overloaded with harmless flirt and other with possessiveness.

I liked how as a lawyer and a brother, Addel wanted to probe into Maan's decision to ensure himself about Geet's future by taking a judgment about Maan.

it was the cheating reason for Maan as well, so there is a hope for Maaneet..the kind of looks and feelings Sam is getting into is scary..hope she does not get another heart break.

Did I tell you before, I like the portrayal of other characters as well..they have some unique characteristics..like Sasha/Tasha from Feminist, Adeel from Cursed up and Sam/Maya/Adeel here..

No wonder Maan is amused to see all these different persona around him in such a short time.

are they getting into some drama in front of Rano?



Aww already caring for Sam, but not worried shes a harmless flirt who would hopefully back off soosn enough, like i said she's a little volatile around the opposite gender 😉😆 Maya is possessive to the T, poor Rana lol

Yep hopefully would show glimpses of Maan's past as well, which would show why he donated etc.

Aww thank you for the compliment, btw just a heads up Sasha would be here too😉 the rest you are smart enough to know why and as who😆

I think the speed of your brain 😆 yep they will put up a show for Rano

Thank you Flame
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thank you all for liking and commenting, i have replied to the commentators of the last chaper in this/previous page (4 to be precise which is rather sad). Guys i know i'm fast but when you LIKE, could you please put in a word, it doesn't need to be of appreciation, maybe even critique or a suggestion.

Anyway thank you, much appreciated.

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I thought to clarify the CCTV alarm system: basically when Geet and Sam entered the premises, Rano who has connected the CCTV footage to her mobile received an bleep asking for attention, so when she viewed the clip she realised it was Geet so that's how she knew her daughter has moved back to their family home. I have basically described our alarm system so please don't ask for more information lol. I am not at all tech savvy.


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Posted: 7 years ago


Chapter 7

'Erm Geet I...I kinda told Rano aunty about Maan and now she wants to visit' she finished as Geet fell back in shock and Maan rushed a hand for support. Geet's shallow breathing and Sam's quiet avatar spoke of the disaster that awaits. Maybe helping against the minds decision wasn't the right way of doing things?

'Sam' Geet called moving to lean against the radiators in the passageway, Maan had moved a little so now Sam stood close enough with a sorry face trying to form a speech which would be palatable for both Geet and Maan, however Sam was never really good at filtering hence she decided to stick with the utter truth.

'Rano aunty called when Heavy Nose was here, I wasn't thinking straight because of Mrs Possessive. Plus you forced me to go up, so I was kind of angry' Sam tried clearing the air, ultimately stating how her mind was a mess hence the mishap which Geet payed little attention to and rolled her index finger as if suggesting to continue. The baby all of sudden seemed to have drained her energy, so placing a hand over her growing belly she leaned further into the heat seeking some solace.

'Rano Aunty received a bleep in the alarm system from here and then realised it's us from the video footage, she called to know really and I kind of confirmed we moved here for the time being. Then she asked about Dev and I said you've finished with him, which I think she was happy about but she asked about the baby and how you are doing, she also wanted to know whether Dev would support you when required and I kind of said that he wasn't the father, and Maan is here to take care of you and the baby' Sameera explained placing a hand over Geet's belly on the other side while another hand went to tuck Geet's hair behind the ear, while Geet continued with her deep breaths growing in agitation and fear.

'You told mum *deep breathe* about *deep breathe* Maan?' she asked incredulously, though Rano knew of Geet's pregnancy however they still hadn't talked of its origin, Rano had predicted it to be Dev and Geet hadn't bothered to further divulge into details. The Handa parents though allowed her freedom however were still a little orthodox and cultural, hence they disliked the thought of Dev and Geet. Not only because he was older but because of the sects they belonged to. However bent in front a stubborn child, living in was a whole new matter. Only she knew of the pain she went through to live with Dev, difficult would be an understatement. Hence just to please her parents, Dev had suggested Civil partnership using her youth to his advantage not to bound to a marraige, at that time both she and her parents had agreed. However once they walked out the picture, he had schemed her into accepting a Cohabitation contract which of course she now regretted. Her parents after all were right about Dev being unworthy of her: of her trust, of her companionship.

'It just slipped out' Sam peeped scared to face her friend's wrath. Maan unsure of the turn on event remained silent until Geet's uncomfortable position caught his eye and he then asked both the woman to sit down in the living room where they can continue with the discussion to which they both followed still deep in thought.

'I think Rano aunty thinks he's your partner now?' Sam told looking plainly at her nail, totally bending her head in shame as Maan forwarded a glass of water to a now more comfortable Geet, her breathing seemed to have come under control also

'Oh lord' Geet cried not knowing what to do with her best friend however instead she focused on the matter in hand rather than her guilty friend who would burst into tears if she continued with her shell-shocked personality never mind breaking into a tirade of angry swears like how she so desperately wanted to. Sam's conscious attempt to avoid fun and games wasn't missed either, showing just how mortified she was with herself.

'Could you do me another favour?' she asked instead to Maan who looked on with a small smile as if agreeing to her request.

'Erm... Can we... maybe pretend to be a happy couple for my parents' she asked in a small voice hearing him sigh she quickly jumped into an explanation 'Maan I really don't want to upset my parents further, I'm their only child and I know how annoyed they would be with me, which I deserve but dad would also be angry on himself for not protecting me from hurt which he doesn't deserve. I mean I deserve the pain I go through for choosing a scumbag like Dev but not them, they're such lovely parents' she persuaded in one breathe tightly tugging one hand into another, as if trying to suppress her nervousness. Sam sat beside and tried her best to remain silent hoping Maan would agree with her friend.

'Yes... I mean it can't hurt to please your parents' he agreed once again with a firm nod and Geet broke into a small smile herself feeling tension elevate. Now Maan was not only her legal partner, but her fake real partner too or at least to her parents anyways. Geet had then looked at Sam and pressed her hand as if trying to say 'it's ok' to which Sam smiled again but before she could say something else Geet had connected to Rana.

'Rana if mum asks then please act as if you know Maan' she requested when he answered, what followed was a questioning conversation, several focused gazes at a ducking Sam and some appreciated smiles to Maan.

'So that's sorted' Geet finally breathed in relief relaxing beside Sam after the little marching session she had with Rana over the phone.

'I need to add something...' Sam stuttered as Maan again got up to leave and Geet stood beside wanting to see him off to the door however her words halted their movements and a look of horror crossed Geet's face seeing Sam's terrorised expression.

'Rano aunty and Mohinder uncle are on their way now, probably will be here soon' she finished and Geet fell against Maan's strong profile. Again a hand went over her shoulder in support and again her breaths quickened into shallow grasps.

'Oh no' all three thought just with the prospects of the future adventure.


Edited by Twenty1st - 6 years ago


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Posted: 7 years ago
One more?
I haven't read even previous one
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Ggorgeousqueen

One more?

I haven't read even previous one


no worries catch up when you can, i wont upload any more i don't think this week anyway
so no pressure lol
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Posted: 7 years ago
Rana Geet cousin and concern fr hr
Sam hate Maya bz she snatch rana from hr
Maan sign papers he not claim Geet property
Sam try to flirt to Maan
Geet understand Maan situation after knowing his gf cheated him
Sam told rano about Maan
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Posted: 7 years ago
thanks for another update!

Part 7

outstanding update!

Gosh Geet gets shock after shock!!! glad Maan was there to support her! thanks 2 Sam, now Rano wants to meet Maan!

Ha ha Sam blames everything on Mr Heavy Nose and Mrs Possessive!

can understand Geet's tension!

nice seeing Maan's care for Geet!! glad that Geet asked Maan to help!!

at least Maan said yes!

just when things are under control, Sam drops another bomb! Geet's parents are on the way!

hope they manage to convince her parents!

update soon
Edited by khwaishfan - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice
Sam told hr blunder and blamed rana and his gf fr this
Geet was so worried about hr parent's bz she already gone against them fr that jerk dev
Maan agreed to b fake partner of hr but sam throw another bomb that hr parent's on way to meet Maan so now he have to b there
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Posted: 7 years ago
Both updates are too good.smeera did big blunder.she tell everything to geet parents.waiting for next.

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