MehRya FF: Discovering the Magic #2: Chapter #45 Teaser pg62 11/29 - Page 32

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Thanks for the reply Kelly . We are waiting patiently here😉😛
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My feedback for chapters 34 - 38 ... 😃
I'm so glad that Shaurya took care of Uday in his own style ..
Making sure he leaves no proof for the producer to act against
Him in the future ...not just that he also made sure he gathered all the proof's which he committed in past ...that was one Shaurya khanna style 👏...

Hmm so he was not careless that his show might be producer less since he already had plans up to sleeves ...😉
Loved the mother and son duo convo ...how she rushed whenever her child needs sumthing ...yet he dint let her know that he arrived India ...and it was not bad idea that Shaurya wanted to impress sharma's clan starting with young generation ...but the emotional young lads hit him in return ?
It was good and wise that PD decided to talk to Shaurya ..hope his talk atleast made a difference ...

And Mel is ready to go on another date without solving her issues with Malik ? That's silly move ..I think she might have agreed to it in a haste ...but she confessed that she was thinking about Malik even after being with other guy in her date and how constantly she wanted to know whether Malik has been asking about her or not ..Mehak gave her a perfect advice as a friend...

Here Mehak and Malik come to know yet another conspiracy / surprise of Shaurya for them ...😆 they both were equally pissed after hearing Thier next ventures described by Thier boss James ...and here text message to Shaurya after that 😆 Was totally cute ..later she had to here the bickering of Malik too..but he dint 😆 Since Malik gave up on bad mouthing about Shaurya to Mehak ..thinking it might not make sense anymore ..

Mehak's reaction on after hearing what Thier cousins did to Shaurya ...and confessed her love for him ..making sure they never hurt Shaurya again ...the determined lady went on to give a piece of advice to the man she loved too...the compliment at the end of Thier conversation was just 😳..

Good thing that Mel decided to respond to Malik and sort out her date with Dev...and was gearing up for her new beginnings , to start her work with Shaurya ...looks like even Rajiv was impressed with young chef ...let's see when she reaches Delhi ?

Finally it's Mehak turn to visit her home country ...but while leaving the English country too she acted as catalyst to her friends love story ...so Mel was working on sumthing Shaurya asked her to , for Mehak when she returns ...Mel and shaurya are a good team 😃...and when Mehak reached India she got the most adorable welcome gift by seeing the man she loves in person ...the bracelet part was romantic ...and how he was dying to take her arms immediately ...

I might be little late in discovering the magic this story held ... thou I was late ...I'm glad I did ..it was beautiful to read all the chapters together felt like reading novel ...with amazing synchronization ...⭐️ you are an amazing writer you know that 👏 please keep writing buddy ..I might be late but I will make sure I read it at the end for sure ...keep up the good work 👍🏼
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Chapter #39


Despite being aware that she was bringing undue attention to herself, and she supposed, increasing Kanta Chachi's suspicions, Mehek's eyes betrayed her when they trailed down again to the gleaming gold bangle encircling her wrist. Barely, she managed to hold in her sigh, but had no defense against the smile that would not leave her face. She just could not keep her eyes off her gift. It was absolutely beautiful, she thought as she admired the piece that already held a special place in her heart. Biting her bottom lip, she felt her cheeks warm as she recalled its giving. He had taken such a chance coming to meet her, but in hindsight she could find no complaint in the impetuous nature of the man who would dare so much. She was surely one of the luckiest of women to be loved as much as Shaurya did her. Silently, she shook her head. Was there anything he was incapable of, she wondered as she reached out unwittingly to fiddle with the bracelet.

"I've never seen you so fascinated by a piece of jewelry beta. In fact, it's a wonder that you ever misplaced it in the first place."

Her tone of voice reaching her told Mehek that her aunt was more than a little skeptical; something that was plainly expressed on her face, when the comment drew her attention back to the older woman riding along with her in the car.

"How tragic it would have been to have lost it as attached as you are to it. Where did you get it... or perhaps the better question would be who purchased it for you?" She watched her niece's hesitation, and her eyes narrowed further in suspicion. "Mehek..."

Automatically reacting to the increasing sternness in her Aunt's voice, Mehek opened her mouth to respond.

"Nahi Bhabhi... you promised bhai...everyone...we agreed that you wouldn't..."

Her mouth ajar, Mehek's head whipped in the direction of her uncle, driving the car, when he harshly interrupted his sister-in-law, before her attention switched back to the now sullen visage of her aunt.

"As her mother, I have every right to question her," Kanta countered sharply to her husband's younger brother.

"Haan you absolutely do, but you are not the only one concerned for her wellbeing and after the last time..." he tapered off in a clear attempt to spare Mehak the remainder of his thoughts. His accusation most likely, Mehek presumed. She froze. She was ashamed to admit, that in these past weeks that she hadn't really considered the possible fallout her aunt would have faced by aiding her. "Chacha...Chachi, please...please do not fight on my accord. I have no issue with telling..."

Ravi looked back at her via the rear-view mirror and plastered a smile on his face. "It's good to have you home again, Mehek. There will be time enough to speak when we arrive home, beta... just rest for now thik hai?"

After a moment's hesitation, Mehek nodded, stealing another look at her aunt. Her countenance showed her impatience for the familial discord that clearly still existed weeks later. Obviously, supporting Mehek when she chose to take off without informing anyone had not sit well with the family, and now the turn of events that had led to her return had only added to the issue. While Mehek completely understood Kanta's Chachi's stance in the situation, her uncle's reaction was far more difficult to comprehend. Was the ire he had expressed solely indicative of the family's discontent with Kanta over the absolute decision she had encouraged her niece to take some weeks back, or were her elders in complete agreement with Kanta, and sought to express such as a unified group? Meekly, Mehek turned her focus to the scenery outside the window, all thoughts now on the forthcoming meeting with the rest of her family. In that moment, her confidence waned just a bit and she suddenly found it necessary to take a few deep breaths to calm herself as she thought what was to come. It was never going to be an easy task, but because her mind, very much like her heart, was set, there was only one course that she could take. She could do this, she thought to herself. Even without Shaurya physically at her side for this initial conversation with her family, she knew that in spirit it would be as if he was right there with her. His thoughts, she knew would be on her, and if that wasn't enough to buoy her, proof of his love where literally within arm's reach. Again, she reached for the bangle, a move that did not go unnoticed.

In fact, to Kanta it appeared that the now sobered Mehek, as opposed to her almost giddy response to it, had found comfort in the bracelet, almost as if it was her own, personal talisman.

Twenty minutes later, when the car pulled up to their lane, Mehek followed her aunt out and stood back when her Uncle Jeevan appeared out of nowhere, ready to retrieve his niece's luggage from the boot. Before he could, she quickly genuflected to him, and beamed when she received his blessings. "Welcome back, Mehek. How were your flights, beta?"

"Long; and a bit tiring, but none of that seems to matter now that I am here. I am so happy to be home Chacha."

Jeevan studied the young woman whose upbringing he had seen as one of his highest of priorities and gtinned at her. "Not as happy as we all are, beti. Everyone is anxiously awaiting you inside; PD especially." Jeevan recognized his niece's remorse at the mere mention of her grandmother, and moved to reassure Mehek, when out of the corner of his eye he spied his wife, who rather than reaching home, was instead engaged in an animated conversation with their neighbor. When Kanta turned suddenly and motioned in their general direction, the genial expression reserved for his niece froze giving way to one that instantly put Mehek on her guard. "You are being hailed, beti. Chalo, Mehek; let's get this over as quickly as possible" Jeevan muttered tersely.

"Ji Uncle," Mehek replied, uncertain as to his sudden change in demeanor.

"Aacha there she is, our resident star-in-the-making! Welcome home, Mehek beta, welcome home!"

Warily, Mehek approached the spot where her aunt and Pammi, their long-time neighbor stood together. Assuming her aunt to be simply appeasing the neighborhood busybody, Mehek followed suit and politely folded her hands to the boisterous woman, whose aim in life was forever to be the center of attention. "Namaste Aunty- ji, how are you?"

"Clearly not as well as you, beta. Oh, Kanta she has practically blossomed these last few months. I cannot believe that this beautiful angel before us is our sweet little Laddoo."

Next to her, handling her luggage, Jevan coughed; vocalizing the reaction, that only the good manners instilled by her family prevented Mehek from mimicking. She had never been Pammi Aunty's little laddoo or anything else sweet for that matter. If anything, over the years, the woman had made no secret of her aversion to both her and her siblings: those Sharma urchins, she had referred to them, often within earshot of one, if not all of them. It, along with numerous other hateful things, had been a bone of contention between the braggart and the over-protective Kanta, who refused to bow down to the woman who believed herself a leading member of their locality. However today, it looked as that may have changed, when Kanta wholeheartedly concurred with her. "Indeed, you are right Pammi. The time abroad has been wonderful for Mehek in so many ways, and she has a very bright future ahead of her."

The woman, who was now giving Mehek a thorough inspection, nodded. "I am not at all surprised Kanta ji, even from young, I could see the potential she had inside her."

Jevan, who had had enough of the woman's preposterous exaggerations, suddenly cleared his throat, "Kanta it is getting later by the minute, and Mehek has been on the go for almost a full twenty-four hours..."

Their neighbor evidently was not finished extolling the qualities of the young lady in front of her, interrupted Jeevan. "You would never know that to be a fact, as fresh and beautiful as you look this afternoon, beta. But I expect that you should go in and get some rest," she added with what she probably thought was maternal concern. "In a day or so, once you have rested, and have sorted your schedule, you must come over for a visit, Mehek. You will bring her won't you Kanta ji?" Her beady eyes flashed with glee when Kanta readily agreed. "Of course, we shall, but Jeevan is correct, we should go in."

"Until a few days then," Pammi continued, her intense gaze having returned to Mehek. "Goodbye Beta."

Completely mystified by the singular attention being paid to her, Mehek quietly bade the woman farewell, and turned in the hopes of getting away from her and her extremely odd behavior. Evidently Mehek wasn't the only one to find the encounter bizarre. Just as soon as they were out of ear-shot, Jeevan asked his wife to explain why she felt the need to engage the nosy woman in conversation at all, let alone encourage further interaction by agreeing to socialize with her. A fleeting sense of dread creeped up Mehek's spine as she listened to her aunt's hushed defense of her action. The fact that the older woman signaled her husband to halt, did nothing to ease her alarm, however, before she could come to some sort of conclusion as to what was going on, her attention was drawn by the piercing shriek reaching her from the direction of her house. The shrill noise was her only warning before Nehal and Sonal reached her, and excitedly began pulling her along towards the Sharma home. Disregarding her complaints that she should await their relatives, Nehal finally hushed her when she informed to come with them as PD wished to speak to her immediately, and preferably before the others: before Kanta Chachi especially, came. Mehek stared at her cousin-sister first and then at her best friend. Sonal nodded, confirming the truth of what had been disclosed. With both her worry and her curiosity piqued, Mehek quickened her pace.

She found her great-grandmother perched comfortably in her favorite chair, waiting anxiously for her. Even from the distance across the room, Mehek immediately saw and felt the love that she always associated with PD, and she left her two companions, dashing the final steps that would bring her in proximity to her beloved PD. Arms that had comforted her since childhood enveloped her and, within them as they always did, every single one of Mehek's qualms faded into the background.

"Laddoo; my sweet Laddoo."

Mehek's own hold on the elderly woman tightened along with her effort to keep control of her emotions. "I'm sorry PD, forgive me for not ... for leaving without telling you...for worrying...you...I..." She choked on her words, and felt tears she hadn't expected, begin to form when the slight hand began gently stroking her back.

"Look at me Laddoo."

Obeying her grandmother, Mehek leaned back and blinked back the moisture pooling in her eyes. PD took care of the couple of tears that escaped with one hand, and then studied her grandchild. "Everyone has their own journey to take in life, Beta. Yours, it seems, is destined to be one of the more interesting ones." She watched as Mehek's eyes shied away and her color rose. This understanding, while welcomed, was thoroughly unexpected. And then it struck her that somehow PD knew...if not everything, then enough. Straight away, her attention came back to her grandmother. The elderly woman's next words basically confirmed it. "Do not mistake my words for approval...not yet. I am, however, willing to let matters proceed as naturally as possible, and give him at least the chance to prove his worth. Others, I'm afraid, in their haste... and because of their fears, may not be so inclined, right now." She clasped Mehek's hands when alarm entered her granddaughter's eyes. "Nahi, beta do not worry. Go and freshen up, beta, and then go directly to your room and rest for a while, I will handle matters at home for now."

"PD, I came home to tell everyone, I had no intention of hiding anything..."

"Like I said, beta: yours is one of the more interesting stories," PD said with a smile. "I do hope that everything pans out for the best, but only the coming days will tell." Behind them, they heard the voices of the approaching couple who had finally reached home. The fact that they were bickering did not bode well to Mehek's ears, but as she always managed, PD managed to allay some of her fears. "My beautiful Laddoo...love looks good on you, beti... now go and do what I have asked."

Chapter 40


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Awww finally the much awaited chapter is here kelly ...thank you so much for updating this story kelly 🤗
It is yet anither beautifully wriiten chapter with more focus on mehek feeling and rractions of sharmas . Mehek already in to her dreamworld with shaurya which didnt go unoticed with eagle eyes of kanta chachi ..
Mehek was not sureabout how to give answer to her shooting questions ...glad that she saved by chachu ...but for how long ...KC willdig out the truth soon .
Now why this pammi is acting so sugar coated sweet with mehek ...do she have some plans upto her sleeve.
Mehek homecoming was truly beautiful and all become happy specually sonal nehal and PD . PD knows that something is their in mehek which is clearly seeen on her face and she too inquick to judge. 👍🏼
I am waiting for mehek's confession now ...how she will disclose her love to her family . Shaurya will also play major role as he will be next target of sharmas after mehek .
Eagerly waiting for the next update kelly ...will bewaiting to see some mehrya moments too as sk will dying of seeing and meeting mehek after their short encounter at airport
Please continue soon kelly 🤗
Thanks again for this beautiful update 👍🏼
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As usual Kelly this is a superb update from you, its worth the wait.
Mehak was in her own dream world recollecting how Shaurya tactfully called her in to present her with the bangle and she is so into her new jewelry gifted by him which was noticed by Kanta chachi. As for chachi she notice the glow in Mehak's face and she wanted to question Mehak in the journey itself but it was interrupted by chachu to not to question her now . That rings an alarm in my mind, is it SK already meet them and they are aware of their love affair? Is it because of that PD wants to have a word with her first? Well with the way Kanta Chachi behaves weirdly and Pammi's over sweetness and PD's word I believe the cat is out of the bag...
Do continue soon dear , lovely chapter cant wait for your update again thank you so much and have a blessed day ahead
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Finally most awaited update is came 😛
Thanks Kelly dear😊
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After meeting with shourya she is in her dreamsland 😛😳

But this kantha Chachi noticed her actions n most important that gold Bangles n she asked her that she never inclined towards gold n all other things
Now the only thing bothered mehek that how can she reply kanthas encounter if sk is with her so matter is different but she has to face all alone now
Oh god this pammi aunty how sweetly talks with mehek earlier she never letle a chance to taunts her n what happens this kantha why she is so sweet with pammi
That's good when jeevan saves mehek forther convo
All are eagerly waiting for mehek especially PD
She somehow noticed in meheks words n told she will handle others
Oh our lover boy may be impatiently waiting for his mehek
Pls give us some mehrya moments in next chapter😳
Thanks for the beautiful update Kelly
Pls continue soon
How is your trip 😛
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Mehek is lost in her own dream land and is unable to take her eyes of her new possession,
Shaurya ??? na, but his gift. Kanta's eagle eye catches Mehek's mesmerised looks and the
affinity towards the gleaming bangle and looks like she's suspicious. Looks like KC has definite
plans for Mehek as she is back home now, marriage with the bandar who is not a penny worth
and very unworthy of Mehek. Ravi Chachu cuts KC's inquiries and after reaching home, Mehek is
ambushed and taken to PD. PD has one look at her laddoo and knows her heart. Gives her
blessings but throws a challenge that the guy in question has to prove his worth and win their
hearts to possess Sharma's diamond girl. The guftagoo between Pammi and Kanta Chachi and
Pammi being sweet and all to Mehek is for sure looking suspicious. Waiting for some sparks to
fly in Sharma house for and against Mehrya when their relationship is revealed and not to forget
how Shaurya handles the situation and proves his mettle to win the girl he loves and has become
his very reason for living.

Thanks for the update Kelly and the PM too.⭐️🤗
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Thank you so much for the long awaited update...🤗
As always Its beautifully written 👏👏👍🏼

Kanta chachi is getting suspicious about those bangles and being desperate to make mehek answer why she is so much attached to it...
Mehek getting tensed thinking how there family must have taken her sudden departure earlier...and if there any rift between kc and other family members going on..
And then those nosy neighbours ...glad how pd advised mehek not to be tensed and don't do anything in haste

Loved the chapter ...thanks for the pm...plzz continue soon
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Wonderful Kelly. Waiting for this the longest time.
It's refreshing to see the detailing you have put in the chapter. Generally at this stage, it's all about presenting a rosy picture, happy ending or twustsband turns that boggle the mind.

It's mehek s journey and we are part if it.

Eagerly waiting for next part.

Thanks for the pm

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