Written in the stars: Adiya story Chapters updated

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Hello everyone,
This is just a light story ( since the episodes are so dark) about Adiya's encounter in Mussoorie years before the Poosh accident.
Aditya, Pooja and their college gang have come for a fun trip to Mussoorie where Adi meets Zoya. Enjoy.

'Adi your the best' Pooja his best friend kissed him on the cheek as Adi stood gloriously on top of his dirt bike with the black wayfarer covering his eyes and the brown leather jacket that made all the girls in the college swoon over him. Aditya Hooda had won the bike race as usual inaugurating their exciting stay in the beautiful hill station.

"Noor, please get ready fast otherwise we will be late for the preparation." Zoya Siddiqui frantically tried to wake her sister up.
"Ammi" she called out, "I cannot find my batch and Noor will be late for school and I will be late along with her."
'Aap log apne cheezein think see kyun nahin rakhte' Roshna their mother came to the rescue of her first born. Roshna saw the reflection of a young girl busy tucking her shirt inside her skirt. She continued looking at her daughter's slender figure feeling a slight tug in her heart knowing that Zoya was transforming into a beautiful young woman.
"Ammi Kya hua" Zoya was confused at her mother's tears but her mother quickly kissed her shoulder and inhaled her scent, a gesture unique to only Zoya and her ammi.
'Everyone says you will turn into a beautiful swan, I just don't want to let you go.'
"I have a pimple on my chin that refuses to go and you call me beautiful." Zoya feigned sadness to lighten her ammi's mood.
There was a light knock on the door it was her father,
"Kya hua meri shehzadi ko? Should we go to the doctor?"
Roshna chided her husband for his overprotective behaviour,
"Anyways I will drive you to school today so I am waiting for you two downstairs. By the way Mauli had called she said that the sleepover is 'on' and xoxo." Waseem teased being clueless about what that mean and Zoya and Noor burst out laughing whereas their parents smiled in confusion.
'Abbu please Appi ko samjhayi na woh school ki nahi ghar ki vi head girl ban gayi hai' Noor said annoyingly whole Zoya dragged her from the bed.

"Chiku why didn't you tell me before going? You could have atleast called before leaving."
Adi teared a little bit inside realising the pain in his mother's voice,
'Ma, Pooja had informed Sakshi aunty and Arjun also knew about our Mussoorie trip after the final exams.'
"Ek number ka nikamma hai tumhara beta, graduate toh ho jayega par uske baat Kya karega. He is not sensitive to anyone."
Adi could feel his jaws tightening when he heard Mr. Hooda's authorative voice.
"Ma, tell him that the word sensitive sounds hollow when Mr. Hooda utters it."
He clenched his fist tightly and closed his eyes shut when he heard his Ma crying, it always reminded him of those painful times when they were abandoned by Mr. Hooda for another woman.
'Bhai, I don't want to ruin your trip but you should have informed ma I am really disappointed'.
Adi heard his younger brother's cracked adolescent voice from the other line.
"Chotey take care of Ma, will talk to you later".
Adi felt a tight hold on his shoulder, he knew it was her his support, solace, his best friend. Turning around he quickly pulled her into a tight embrace snuggling his head into her beautiful long hair.
"Don't ever leave me Pooja you are the only light in this dark tunnel. I love you my best friend."
She held him tightly letting the tears fall freely, the daredevil Aditya Hooda, the most popular boy in college was deeply scarred inside and she wanted to love him like this for the rest of their life.

"Nandu, Zoya will we ever experience such a passionate love like them" Mauli was sitting on the bed hugging a pillow all starry eyed.
It was the sleepover at Mauli's place and Zoya, Nandini and Mauli had been best friends ever since kindergarten. The girls eagerly anticipated sleepover nights which were allowed only once a month.
'Which couple?' Nandini said without looking up as she was busy decorating snacks with different toppings.
"Oh...them? But I felt the girl was intense whereas the boy hugged her in a brotherly way." Nandini gave her analysis.
'Achha toh jab hum wahan bin mausam barsaat me Kal ke school function k liye shopping kar rahe the purey bheeg Kar humari best friends kisse unknown couple k pda dekh rahe the'. Both of them said ouch together for two pillows were flung at them.
"On top of that ek badtameez kamzarf ladke ne meri sare Dutch truffle cake kha liya".
Zoya was drenched so Mauli started drying her hair with a towel whereas Nandini handed her the snacks.
'Sorry yaar but you are the head girl of the school toh sare responsibility tere hue na'. Mauli teased Zoya giving a high five to Nandini.
"Aap ke jaise best friends Allah kisi ko na de. Kitna heavy tha woh bag patah vi hai aap logo ko".
Mauli and Nandini eye signalled each other making Zoya sense that they were up to something.
"Toh bulaya kyun nahin aapke unhe" they said unanimously with full on adayegi. Zoya closed her eyes with her hands tiringly for she knew what was followed by this.
They both stood for a performance and Nandini cleared her throat geared up to enact her role.
" Zoya...aapki aur humari kismat Judi huyi hai ab toh yeh baat pakki hai, hum Arshad Habib St. Matthew's School of Jesuits ke head boy aur aap Zoya Siddiqui St. Agnes Convent ki head girl". They could see Zoya controlling her laughter.
'Lekin aap jab paach saalo ke liye London chale jayenge doctor banne k liye tab humare dil ke zakhm kaun varenge.' Mauli continued but Zoya had already started throwing popcorns at her best friends this was followed by a huge pillow fight.
'Sorry yaar performance itna achha nahin hua tere jitne aasu kiss ke nahin nikalte'. Zoya attacked her with a pillow, giggling of three teenage girls echoed through the house. Mauli's mother wanted to tell the girls to tone down a bit but her father stopped her.
"Rahene do na achha lagta hai inke hasi main toh yehi prarthna karta hoon' ki meri betiyon ki yeh hasi hamesha unke saath rahe." They both smiled.
In another part of the town Aditya, Pooja and their best friends had set a bonfire. The night was starry, they were dancing and singing Pooja enveloped her arms around Adi and placed her head on his shoulders. He smiled back and asked her to dance with him, his eyes had trust, warmth and love for her but she always felt something was missing. She expected him to look at her in a certain way she did not know exactly which way but the absence of that look was always there in her best friends eyes.

Please send feedbacks.
Note : Zoya is around 17 and Aditya around 21 hence it revolves around light moments with friendship as a base.


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'I swear he stalks you' Nandini whispered while the three of them stood frozen in front of Arshad.
"Arshad what are you doing here?" Zoya asked a little annoyed from inside.
'I called your home and your ammi said you would had gone to the fair so thought of meeting you'.
Why can't you leave me alone. Zoya's inside screamed but since their family's were so close she had to act polite and smile at him.

"Pooja why have you brought me to this place yaar". Adi grumbled.
'Common Adi trip ka matlab sirf adventure sport nahin hota let's enjoy the fair ya Mumbai mein ye sab small town charm dekhne ko milta hai Kya?'
Adi smiled at her and they both walked hand in hand.
'Adi let's try the ferris wheel' she was so excited.
"Kya no way bacho ka khel hai". Adi wrinkled his nose.

"Nahin...no way humein bahut darr lagta hai". Zoya was literally squeezing the cotton candy in her hands.
'Chalo na Zoya please' Nandini and Mauli insisted for the ferris wheel ride.
'Zoya hum aap ko kuch nahin hone denge darr ne ki koi baat nahi hai' Arshad added. To which her besties giggled that stopped only after she gave them her murderous glare.

There was a long queue for the ride and each seat on the ferris wheel was meant for two people. Somehow Zoya ended up alone with neither her friends and Arshad along and Adi lost hold of Pooja's hand. Under the starry sky two strangers sat together for a thrilling adventure ride, both of them tried to get down but it was too crowded for last minute change. Adi frantically searched for Pooja whereas Zoya was on the verge of tears to find herself all alone. Their eyes met at the same and he felt a little knot on his throat while the big brown teary eyes stared back at him, as for her those dark pools held unfathomable emotions too strange too alien for her understanding. It was only the gush of cold wind that made her realise that they had reached the top of the height, with all her strength she clasped the strangers arms as if her life depended on him. The crowd below , the clear sky sprinkled with uncountable stars above and the chill wind blowing did something at the moment for Aditya's nostrils were filled with lavender and Jasmine fragrance emanating from her. Zoya could feel her own heart pulsating, somewhere at the back of her mind she knew it was wrong to hold a stranger like this the realization swelled her eyes with more tears.
Chamke gagan mein jaise taare...
Zoya distinctly heard the male voice whisper the nursery rhyme her ammi sang to her and her baby sister when they were children. She looked up at his face and he expected her to complete the song.
Lagte ho tum mujhko pyare...
Aditya closed his eyes for once for her feminine voice instantly brought back the memories of his mother singing this to him and his baby brother. Her voice seemed a little too raspy for her age he noted, he could sense her muscles relaxing.
Dur desh ka woh ek panchhi
He continued singing softly,
Gaaye din var yehi taraane...
She completed the lines and the two voices whispered the lines together each had their individual memories with the same song one smiled at the happy gone by days the other broke a little remembering what he had how it was lost. The calm that they felt amongst the noise was a secret shared only by the two of them.
The ferris wheel stopped she heard someone calling her name and as she ran away he felt a tug in his heart.
The girls tightly hugged each other while Arshad stood there gently patting her head. She raised her eyes and glanced at saviour, he was tightly hugging a beautiful girl cracking jokes at her. When their eyes met she could see the glint in his eyes vanishing replaced by a darkness that was unwelcoming. She meekly whispered a 'thank you' knowing he will receive it, he smile did not reach his eyes but he nodded a 'welcome' in return. When she shut her eyes tightly an unknown force overpowered him and in a few steps he was standing close to her.
"Paagal ho Kya ya bewakoof jab ride see itna darr lagta hai toh ayi kyun? Agar tumhe kuch hoja tah toh meri band baj jati kyun ki unfortunately main tumhare paas ke seat mein tha." The crown of her head was touching his chin while he was fuming with anger and she was stunned at this behaviour.
"Aur tum sab uske dost ho na usse is pagalpan se roka kyun nahin" he roared shaking Zoya from her very core. Nobody had yelled at her this way infact it was the first time in her life that she was hearing such a loud male voice.
'Aap ko Jo kehna hai mujhse kahi hai mere friends ko daatne ka aap ko koi haq nahin hai." Her voice was low and choking with tears but it was distinct and firm, she looked up at him with blood shot red eyes that somehow affected him in unknown ways.
'Adi Kya ho gaya tujhe?' Pooja came and held his hands soothing him. At that moment he heard the loud screech of the tyres, all of them turned around to see Wasim Siddiqui dash out of the car.
"Zoya beta aap thik toh hai na?" He pushed himself from the crowd and hugged his daughter tightly.
"Kuch nahin hoga beta don't worry Arshad called me and told me everything, idhar ayi yeh aap dono bhi" he called the girls and hugged all of them together.
They hurriedly left the place and Zoya gave a last glance to the stranger who was looking everywhere but not in her direction.
'Hua Kya tha Adi?' Everyone questioned while Pooja gently removed his locks from his forehead.
'Adi yeh scratches kaise your bleeding' she pointed at his forearm.
"Kuch nahi Pooja isi liye I did not want to come to this stupid fair it's so childish and not at all fun".
He dashed away from their kicking stones on the ground.


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow, it's amazing to imagine this. Your writing is so descriptive. Aditya and Zoya at the highest point of the ride - that moment stole my heart <3
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Originally posted by: ikhtiyar

Wow, it's amazing to imagine this. Your writing is so descriptive. Aditya and Zoya at the highest point of the ride - that moment stole my heart <3

Thank you so much dear. I am glad you liked that ride scene I wanted that endearment.❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
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It was so great. I could actually add see this as a small chapter To their past life which they forget conveniently later. So beautifully you wrote it and maintained the traits of the characters intact.

Brilliant!

So do you have more ideas?😉 Would love to read more.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Beautifully and Magically written ...waiting to read more.
AdiYa will always be special and you've maintained their character traits beautifully.

Keep writing more.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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This was lovely. Loved the ride bit best. You described every part beautifully.
Just one thing. It was hard to read the bits in yellow. If possible stick to black or blue. It's just easier to read.

But the story is fabulous.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: alizia_malik

It was so great. I could actually add see this as a small chapter To their past life which they forget conveniently later. So beautifully you wrote it and maintained the traits of the characters intact.

Brilliant!

So do you have more ideas? 😉 Would love to read more.

Thank you so much for liking it. This story is a short prequel of a sort to the real story. Just wanted to write about their formative years.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Hunnie1

Beautifully and Magically written ...waiting to read more.

AdiYa will always be special and you've maintained their character traits beautifully.

Keep writing more.

Thank you so much. Will definitely add more with your encouragement.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: sezo

This was lovely. Loved the ride bit best. You described every part beautifully.

Just one thing. It was hard to read the bits in yellow. If possible stick to black or blue. It's just easier to read.

But the story is fabulous.

Thank you so much dear. Will definitely stick to black and blue next time and inconvenience is regretted.😊

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