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Posted: 6 years ago
thanks for the pm, terrific update! nice video!

Maan asks Geet out for Valentine's Day! Geet is confused!

update soon!
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Posted: 6 years ago
Aww I really wish Geet goes out with him, I'm already going dreamy with the thought lol =P
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Posted: 6 years ago
Lovely update
Hope they will go together
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Posted: 6 years ago
Geet don't think anyone ask hr fr v'day and when Maan asked she thought he joking
Hmm not bad Maan asking Geet fr v'day
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Posted: 6 years ago
Lovely Chapter

Geet is much more concern in making Antara happy for Ahkil
while Antara has phoned Maan and it seems like she will be
planning her Valentines with him
on the other hand Maan ask Geet to spend Valentines Day with him
but she probably did not truly realize his words but now he feels
it was a waste of time to ask her
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Hey read ur story ingo plss add me in ur pm list
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waiting for update dear
pls continue soon
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Posted: 6 years ago

Part 10

M-Whatever...do what you want...main jaa raha hoon boht kaam hai!

Maan keh kar chala jata hai

It was stupid and impulsive asking her out on the valentine

Geet peeche aati hai

G-Bolo naa bakwaas hai kya?

M-Kaha na bakwaas hai... but I am willing to go along if you spend the valentine with me...nahi to nahi

G-Tum chutti maar rahe ho usdin? huh? Planned leave hai?

Geet chuckles at her own joke

M-tum haan bolo to le lunga. Bolo

They reach the the cabins

Geet baith jaati hai apni seat pe

Maan ne poocha aas paas mandrate hue

M-So you are coming or what?

G-Fruit khaoge?

M-Tumhe nahi jaana to keh do naa...it's ok...it wasn't a date or anything anyways. I'll see you around

Maan keh kar chala jaata hai ignoring her fruit

Jaakar baith jata hai apne cabin mein working on balance sheets

Lunch time hota hai

Aaj Akhil nahi hai

Kal se uth nahi paaya he was resting

Geet gayi cafeteria lunch karne; pehli baar akele

She smiles at every one politely

But no one invites her to their table

Sab Geet ko ignore karte hain jaise rest of the day wo sabko ignore karti hai Akhil ke chakkar mein

As she is close to the boss sab ko darr hai chugalkhor hogi as Geet ko Akhil ke sivae baaki logon se baat karne ka time kahan tha

Geet kone mein jaake baith gai quietly having the lunch alone, looking around ...and realizing ki itne saalon mein uske to koi friend hi nahi bane

Thodi der mein Maan bhi aaya

Spme colleagues of him call him over ki aao baitho

Maan ne bhi Geet par dhayan nahi diya tha since wo kone mei baithe thi, dikhi nai

Maaz baith gaya un logon ke saath jahan roj baithta hai

Geet chup chap khaa rahi thi

Maan pe nazar gai, socha isko to 2 din hue hain aaye hue abhi se iske bhi dost hain, mere nahi hain

Lunch ke beech mein Maan utha kuch lene to GeeT par nazar padi

Dekha ki akele baithi hai

Apne friends ko kuch keh kar he comes and sits at her table

Geet looks at him

G-Hi

M-Hello. Kya kha rahi ho?

He says taking a peek at her lunch and then stealing a bite from it

M- ummm nice. Boss nahi aaye aaj? Hangover or broken heart?

G-Resting

M-Hmm...I am surprised to see u here then...boss ka khayal kaun rakhega? What if he needs water and can't reach the bedside?

Geet uthke chali jaati hai

She had enough of people making a joke on her behind her back and now Maan was making fun of her in front of her

Maan Geet ka lunch wapas pack karke uski table par rakh deta hai

Geet aayi ek ghante baad walk karke ice cream khaate huye, as aaj Akhil nahi hai to kaam kamm hai

Desk pe dekha lunch box pada hua hai uska, rakh liya

Maan ne bhi Geet se uch nai kaha uske baad aur

Geet ne bhi nahi kaha

Antara ne phir phone kiya par Maan ne phone receive nahi kiya

Apni seat par jakar Maan ne mail kar dia Antara ko about the party he had asked her out for

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Next day Akhil comes to office

Three of them were going for meeting

Maan was driving, Geet was briefing him about the meeting and Akhil was sitting royally

Meeting se aate hue Antara mil jaati hai

Maan was in his nerd avatar which was completely different from his sauve avatar so Antara couldn't recognize him

Akhil goes to Anatara and proposes ki chalo sab log lunch pe chalte hain

Antara is reluctant but Akhil ne zidd pakadli

Antara thinks sahi hai attest he is buying her lunch

Bade posh se Chinese restaurant mein le jaata hai

Maan aur Geet bhi saath mein hain

Akhil aur Antara baithte hain par Maan aur Geet ko kehte hain tum dusre table pe baitho. We need privacy

Akhil says to waiter ki jo hum order karein unn dono ke table pe bhi de dena (Pointing to Maan and Geet's table)

It's an authentic Chinese retraunt jahan pe chopsticks dete hain sirf khan eke liye

Cozy sa hai dim lit...chotti chotti tables

Geet says:

G-Yahan itni kam jagah kyun hai?

Khana aata hai

Geet is puzzled ki chop stick kaise use karte hain?

Udhar Akhil aur Antara argue kare jaaye non-stop

Dono ki nazar padi Maan aur Geet pe


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Hey all, lets all play a game from now on...lets make it more fun and interactive...ye part padho aur write in comments ki ye part padhke iss situation pe kaunsa gaana tumhe fit lag raha hai...chalo all start and lets have some fun😉😉

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
Geet should say yes to Maan. she really doesnt have friends I just noticed that as well. Sucks to be her in the office. maybe this is a wakeup call she long needed. Nice update :)
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Posted: 6 years ago
It's really sad that Geet couldn't make a single friend in all these years. She was having her lunch alone. I hope Geet thinks above that useless akhil. She needs to move on in her life. Waiting for next dear

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