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Posted: 5 years ago
Lovely update 
Hope they will go together 
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Geet don't think anyone ask hr fr v'day and when Maan asked she thought he joking 
Hmm not bad Maan asking Geet fr v'day 
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Posted: 5 years ago
Lovely Chapter 

Geet is much more concern in making Antara happy for Ahkil 
while Antara has phoned Maan and it seems like she will be 
planning her Valentines with him 
on the other hand Maan ask Geet to spend Valentines Day with him 
but she probably did not truly realize his words but now he feels
it was a waste of time to ask her 
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Waiting for next chapter 
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waiting for update dear
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Part 10

 

M-Whatever...do what you want...main jaa raha hoon boht kaam hai!

 

Maan keh kar chala jata hai

 

It was stupid and impulsive asking her out on the valentine

 

Geet peeche aati hai

 

G-Bolo naa bakwaas hai kya?

 

M-Kaha na bakwaas hai... but I am willing to go along if you spend the valentine with me...nahi to nahi

 

G-Tum chutti maar rahe ho usdin? huh? Planned leave hai?

 

Geet chuckles at her own joke

 

M-tum haan bolo to le lunga. Bolo

 

They reach the the cabins

 

Geet baith jaati hai apni seat pe

 

Maan ne poocha aas paas mandrate hue

 

M-So you are coming or what?

 

G-Fruit khaoge?

 

M-Tumhe nahi jaana to keh do naa...it's ok...it wasn't a date or anything anyways. I'll see you around

 

Maan keh kar chala jaata hai ignoring her fruit

 

Jaakar baith jata hai apne cabin mein working on balance sheets

 

Lunch time hota hai

 

Aaj Akhil nahi hai

 

Kal se uth nahi paaya he was resting

 

Geet gayi cafeteria lunch karne; pehli baar akele

 

She smiles at every one politely

 

But no one invites her to their table

 

Sab Geet ko ignore karte hain jaise rest of the day wo sabko ignore karti hai Akhil ke chakkar mein

 

As she is close to the boss sab ko darr hai chugalkhor hogi as Geet ko Akhil ke sivae baaki logon se baat karne ka time kahan tha

 

Geet kone mein jaake baith gai quietly having the lunch alone, looking around ...and realizing ki itne saalon mein uske to koi friend hi nahi bane

 

Thodi der mein Maan bhi aaya

 

Spme colleagues of him call him over ki aao baitho

 

Maan ne bhi Geet par dhayan nahi diya tha since wo kone mei baithe thi, dikhi nai

 

Maaz baith gaya un logon ke saath jahan roj baithta hai

 

Geet chup chap khaa rahi thi

 

Maan pe nazar gai, socha isko to 2 din hue hain aaye hue abhi se iske bhi dost hain, mere nahi hain

 

Lunch ke beech mein Maan utha kuch lene to GeeT par nazar padi

 

Dekha ki akele baithi hai

 

Apne friends ko kuch keh kar he comes and sits at her table

 

Geet looks at him

 

G-Hi

 

M-Hello. Kya kha rahi ho?

 

He says taking a peek at her lunch and then stealing a bite from it

 

M- ummm nice. Boss nahi aaye aaj? Hangover or broken heart?

 

G-Resting

 

M-Hmm...I am surprised to see u here then...boss ka khayal kaun rakhega? What if he needs water and can't reach the bedside?

 

Geet uthke chali jaati hai

 

She had enough of people making a joke on her behind her back and now Maan was making fun of her in front of her

 

Maan Geet ka lunch wapas pack karke uski table par rakh deta hai

 

Geet aayi ek ghante baad walk karke ice cream khaate huye, as aaj Akhil nahi hai to kaam kamm hai

 

Desk pe dekha lunch box pada hua hai uska, rakh liya

 

Maan ne bhi Geet se uch nai kaha uske baad aur

 

Geet ne bhi nahi kaha

 

Antara ne phir phone kiya par Maan ne phone receive nahi kiya

 

Apni seat par jakar Maan ne mail kar dia Antara ko about the party he had asked her out for

 

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Next day Akhil comes to office

 

Three of them were going for meeting

 

Maan was driving, Geet was briefing him about the meeting and Akhil was sitting royally

 

Meeting se aate hue Antara mil jaati hai

 

Maan was in his nerd avatar which was completely different from his sauve avatar so Antara couldn't recognize him

 

Akhil goes to Anatara and proposes ki chalo sab log lunch pe chalte hain

 

Antara is reluctant but Akhil ne zidd pakadli

 

Antara thinks sahi hai attest he is buying her lunch

 

Bade posh se Chinese restaurant mein le jaata hai

 

Maan aur Geet bhi saath mein hain

 

Akhil aur Antara baithte hain par Maan aur Geet ko kehte hain tum dusre table pe baitho. We need privacy

 

Akhil says to waiter ki jo hum order karein unn dono ke table pe bhi de dena (Pointing to Maan and Geet's table)

 

It's an authentic Chinese retraunt jahan pe chopsticks dete hain sirf khan eke liye

 

Cozy sa hai dim lit...chotti chotti tables

 

Geet says:

 

G-Yahan itni kam jagah kyun hai?

 

Khana aata hai

 

Geet is puzzled ki chop stick kaise use karte hain?

 

Udhar Akhil aur Antara argue kare jaaye non-stop

 

Dono ki nazar padi Maan aur Geet pe


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Edited by NilzStorywriter - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
Geet should say yes to Maan. she really doesnt have friends I just noticed that as well. Sucks to be her in the office. maybe this is a wakeup call she long needed. Nice update :)
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It's  really sad that Geet couldn't make a single friend in all these years. She was having her lunch alone. I hope Geet thinks above that useless akhil. She needs to move on in her life. Waiting for next dear 
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Maan want to spend valentine day with her but she didn't said yes Maan let it go 
Geet went to have lunch but first time thought she don't have any friends in these years and Maan is mingled in colleagues now she have to think about hr self other than her boss