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He looked around the tattered,unloved room.It had all the emptiness it could bear.Having engraved the abolishment of their Relationship,it stood like a pillar,like a cemented room,avoiding the nutrients of emotions.

His vision became blur with the minutes going.Loosing the grip on himself,he took the help of the door.It also betrayed him like her mother.

Falling on the floor,he noticed everything again clear.He had a sarcastic smile upon himself.

"I AM OF NO NEED OF ANYONE" he laughed heavily bringing some breathtaking cough out.


"SHE WILL NEVER COME BACK.BHO KAVVI VAPAS NEHI AYEGI.NO.N for NEVER.N for NO,"this time he laughed like a infant.Holding his chest,he tried to suppress his cough again but failed.

Mouth oozed some blood.

"N for NAIRA ALSO.YAYYY!!!"he was clearly not in conscious but happy enough to be not in the sense.


"I HAVE FORGIVEN YOU LONG TIME AGO,KARTHIK.WHY DON'T YOU UNDERSTAND THAT I HAVE NO GRUDE AGAINST YOU.WE BOTH COULDN'T STAND ON OUR EXPECTATIONS AND SEE,OUR RELATIONSHIP BROKE. DON'T BLAME YOUR MOTHER,KARTHIK.SHE COULDN'T HAVE THE UPPER HAND IN OUR RELATIONSHIP IF WE TOOK CARE OF IT.WHATEVRR,LETS FORGET ALL THESE.I HAVE NO REAOSN TO BE WITH YOU NOW.ITS BETTER YOU ALSO MOVE ON BECAUSE I HAVE ALREADY DONE THIS.ALL THE BEST FOR YOUR FUTURE,KARTHIK.BYE!!"her words had no emotions.NOT AT ALL!!

Naira was the reason he left alcohol and again that day she became the reason of that.


His head spined badly.Clutching the floor,he wiped his blood filled face.The remaining blurred Vision transformed into black one.



KRING!!KRING!!


"Hello,Naira Singhnaiya speaking"

"He is dying,Naira.Can you have the mercy to come once at Greenland hospital?A request for the last time",Manish stated,barely hiding his broken voice.


The phone set fell down as well as she.Naksh came.She locked him in her arms.

"Bhaii,I shouldn't have done this bhaii.I shouldn't.I CAN'T LOOSE HIM..I..."she couldn't finish her lines,her mouth seemed to get numb,more numb,number.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Cvs are already there to put the end blame on Naira.Can we not have a fan fiction pointing towards that
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: beatsdongandy

Cvs are already there to put the end blame on Naira.Can we not have a fan fiction pointing towards that


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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: beatsdongandy

Cvs are already there to put the end blame on Naira.Can we not have a fan fiction pointing towards that


Actually its not something pointing towards Naira.I made it look like a mindgame for the readers.Though K changed himself totally and kind of redeemed,Naira forgave him but Couldn't uave any relationship.

Her last part showed she still loves him but she can't forget how he treated her(unlike the Tv where N seems to forget everything)

Its actually K's suffering.

Thanks for reading it!!😊
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I know I was joking 😆 but really hope atleast for once naira shows some self respect in the show

Originally posted by: tasnimrayian


Actually its not something pointing towards Naira.I made it look like a mindgame for the readers.Though K changed himself totally and kind of redeemed,Naira forgave him but Couldn't uave any relationship.

Her last part showed she still loves him but she can't forget how he treated her(unlike the Tv where N seems to forget everything)

Its actually K's suffering.

Thanks for reading it!! 😊

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