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Posted: 5 years ago

Part 9

 

Next day office

 

Maan pohonch chuka tha

 

Geet aayi limp karte karte

 

He gives her limp a look

 

M-Tumhara pair theek nai hua?

 

Gett looks over at him and shakes her head

 

G-Kahan gayab ho gaye the kal? Ye bhi koi tareeka hai? Aur phone uthane ki bhi frsaat nahi

 

M- I was tired, not hungry so I went home and fell asleep

 

G-Pata hai kitna pareshaan ho gai thi main

 

M-Mere liye?

 

G-To aur kya Amitabh Bachchan ke lie! Pta hai kitna pareshaan ho gait hi ki achanak pata nahi kyun chale gaye...phir phone tak nahi uthaya

 

M-So sweet of you worrying about me like that ...

 

He says gently pulling her cheek

 

She gasps

 

G-Pagal ho kya!

 

He leaves her cheeks alone and steps back

 

M-Tumse argue karne ki himmat nahi thi isiliye bhag gaya

 

Maan says to her retreating back and the goes back to his work

 

Subah uthke Antara ne Maan ko Good Morning' text kiya

Maan calls her back in a while

 

Antara-Hii..[Dreamily]

 

M- Good morning. How are you now?

 

Geet aai Maan ke seat ke paas limp karte hue..kuch puchne

 

Dekha Maan phone pe hai

 

Dekhke chali gai

 

Maan sees Geet going away while on the call with Antara

 

Antara-Never better...I am sure it would be a wonderful day today

 

He shrugs and talks some more to Antara then usko tarka diya ki

 

M-I am due for a meeting, see you later bye

 

Antara reluctantly ph rakti hai

 

Antara-Bye Raj

 

Maan ne Geet ko call kiya intercom par ki

 

M-Kya hua? Do you need me for anything?

 

G-No, solved it on my own

 

M- Hua kya tha?

 

G-Bass...

 

M-Bass? Kaunsi bus?

 

She starts laughing

 

G-Arre ullu! Bus nahi basss

 

M-As in enough?

 

G-Haaan. Ufff

 

Geet mutters chashmish ko sunai bhi kamm deta hai'

 

M-Toh gossip karne aayi thi hmmm? Boss se free ho gai?

 

She gasps

 

G-I never gossip, ok naa! Jao yahan se

 

M-Main to aaya hi nahi...

 

G-I mean...phone rakho...sab gadhbadh kar dete ho

 

M-Maine kya gadhbad ki?

 

G-Chup raho

 

She hangs up the phone

 

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Maan kaam kar raha tha mann lagake..achanak se shoulder pe kisi ne tab kiya

 

Geet peeche khadi thi

 

He turns around and gives her a smile

 

M-Hi!

 

G-Pata hai valentines day aa raha hai

 

Geet says  sitittibg on the desk

 

M-So?

 

G-To ye ki gift lena hai naa

 

M-Kiske liye?

 

G-Shhh!!! Tum idhar aao deewaron ke bhi kaan hote hain

 

Maan nahi hilta

 

Geet wrist pakadke Maan ko drag karke [sab ke saamne] neeche cafeteria le gai

 

Maan cafeteria pohoch ke bola k ko

 

M- Aise haath pakad kar ghumongi to logon ko lagega ki Akhil se hat kar mei tumhara naya crush ban gaya hoon

 

G-Chup raho!

 

She hits his arm

 

G- Ulti poolti baatein mat karo

 

M-Tumhe sach se hamesha problem rahi hai,  not my fault

 

He shrugs

 

M- Kya khaogi? My treat

 

G- Tumhara sarr! Pehle mera idea suno

 

M- Bolo

 

G- As I said valentines day aa raha hai; toh agar humne pehle se Akhil ki gf ke lie gift le liye to, Akhil kitne khush ho jayenge naa! Bolo idea acha hai naa?

 

M-Bakwaas hai

 

G-Kyuuunnn? Acha nahi hai?

 

M-Coz he doesnt need you to please him. You will not please him agar uski gf nahi maani to; fir chahe tum uski gf ke liye Taj Mahal kyun na banwa do

 

Geet head down karke baith jaati hai sad hoke

 

 

M-Hum dono chalte hain ghumne valentines par...ye kaisa idea hai?

 

Geet makes a face jaise kuch bada hi strange jaise "I am an alien types sunn liya ho

 

1st aisa usne expect nahi kiya

 

2nd usse kisi ne aaj tak poocha nahi

 

3rd she doesn't think she is worth asking

 

4th She thinks Maan is joking; ki phir mazaak banayega uska

 

M- Chalo agar tum kahogi to hum gift bhi kharid lenge wahan se but then valentine mere saath spend karogi?

 

She asks slowly breaking out of her thoughts

 

G-Mujhe laga nahi tha tumhe dekhke ki tum aise flirt ho...chalo kaam nahi karna?

 

M-Flirt-wert chodo! Chalogi to batao, warna akeli chali jana gift lene. Kabhi kabhi lagta hai ki wo boss ki kamm tumhari gf zyada hai; usse khush karne ki tension tumhe zyada rehti hai

 

G- Tumne hi to kaha gift bakwaas option hai...

 

She asks like a little gal jisse kisi bata ka confusion ho

 

M-Whatever...do what you want...main jaa raha hoon boht kaam hai!

 

Maan keh kar chala jata hai

 

It was stupid and impulsive asking her out on the valentine


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Edited by NilzStorywriter - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
Geet is to innocent to understand Maan's proposal. she just think about akhil who is good for nothing. Maan is getting success in his plan. Waiting for next dear 
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Posted: 5 years ago
Superb update
Maan asked geet for v day but geet think he is making fun of her 
And video is lovely
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Posted: 5 years ago
Nice update..
Thank you for pm..
Continue soon..
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geet kuch nehi hosakta teri...

nice update...

loved it...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 5 years ago
interesting update
Maan's focus may be on antara but Geet distracting him well
now valentines day coming hope maaneet will go together
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Posted: 5 years ago
the link i got inpm wasnt working
so late hua cmnt mei
nice part
maan asked geet out
lovely
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Posted: 5 years ago
nice update
maan ask geet to come with for valentine making her every much confused

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Posted: 5 years ago
thanks for the pm, terrific update! nice video! 

Maan asks Geet out for Valentine's Day! Geet is confused! 

update soon! 
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Posted: 5 years ago
Aww I really wish Geet goes out with him, I'm already going dreamy with the thought lol =P