Devil's Bride Samina ff Chapter 60 on page 144

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acwriter

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Posted: 7 years ago

#561

Originally posted by: Geminismart
Behen jaldi update karo... Patience jawaab de raha hai

I'm working on it and I'm about to complete it so I might update tonight 😊

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acwriter

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Posted: 7 years ago

#562

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Asmita

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Posted: 7 years ago

#563

Part 35(B)...

I should say this was the update to unleash some past,present together. The way it started and ended was Ufff! ... Once again good one...

As far as pace of the story...I find it natural and in flow... You can't rush everything in just 4 or 5 chapters...They have lot to deal with and thus their relationship needed time.Time to Understand ,time to be friends, time to trust...And time to love...Their first kiss was so natural and so much anticipating ...

Keep writing...Update soon

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rahul399

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Posted: 7 years ago

#564

Awesome loved it please ur wonderful writer love ur story it's amazing and unique plzplzzzplzzz it's humble request plz update next part soon can't wait now waiting eagerly for the next part plzzz

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suhaaniladki

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Posted: 7 years ago

#565

Aashna update was simply fab.. . I loved it. .. I really liked how both sameer and poured their hearts out and shared all their secrets... All the misunderstandings getting cleared was something I had been waiting for long... . Naina sharing her childhood with him was so heart touching slowly trust is being built up and I liked how Naina promised herself that she would genuinely give their marriage a chance. .. Pace of the story is perfect now. . Earliar it was slow but now it's perfect. . Keep it this way... Kiss was just ☺️

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Yudkbh30

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Posted: 7 years ago

#566

Finally...

Both are having feelings for eachother now

So beautiful update

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Anjali33

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Posted: 7 years ago

#567

Oh, so this time it's Naina's special place😳

This update was really a soothing one!!

Both of them confessing their guilts, their feelings.. It was lovely

Oh, and the kiss.. Exhilarating❤️

About the pace, the impatient guttermind in me says you're very slow😆 But the sensible me says it's perfect, na slow na fast😊

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shelly_nair

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Posted: 7 years ago

#568

Loved this update. Loved the way both of them opened their heart out.

And kiss.. that was wonderful now can't wait for next update

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May

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Posted: 7 years ago

#569

Finally they are really communicating! And in more ways than one 😉

Sameer let go of the revenge against Pooja so easily only for her. And forgave her trying to sabotage the deal. But he had warned her against ever backstabbing him again. That will be very relevant in the future, right?

I like the current pace of the story... of course it was better when we got udates more often! But we understand that you are busy now.