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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: neel11

Oh god hope sab fine ho ye summi to or bhi smart hai waiting for next update

ty dear😊
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Intense update! wonderfully written!


glad Simran was caught and Maan's plan worked!

hope Manvi is fine!

update soon


lets hope.. thnx😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
Wow awesome update yaar

Finally maan's plan work and he get to know about maanvi's whereabouts but the goon throw Maanvi

OMG hope she is fine or else geet and Maan are going to torture simran to death
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: janu2006

gr8 part..

cont.soon

thanks for pm


Thnx 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: piya27

Wow awesome update yaar

Finally maan's plan work and he get to know about maanvi's whereabouts but the goon throw Maanvi

OMG hope she is fine or else geet and Maan are going to torture simran to death


Thanks dear 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
Oh no!!! Maanvi is in danger...PLs save her na dearie...Those monster goons & that evil chudail Simran! I really wish I can bash them and burn them alive for all their evil deeds! Such low down people who can do so much of cruelty...Really hate them. And that chudail! I hope that the police will come in time to safe Maan & Maanvi from these monsters!
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Nefret19

Oh no!!! Maanvi is in danger...PLs save her na dearie...Those monster goons & that evil chudail Simran! I really wish I can bash them and burn them alive for all their evil deeds! Such low down people who can do so much of cruelty...Really hate them. And that chudail! I hope that the police will come in time to safe Maan & Maanvi from these monsters!

thnxx😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
!!Part 136 !!!

Its been around 3 hours that they all are sitting in front of ICU waiting for doctors to come out so they know about Manvi. Standing on bench Maan once again stand close to door to see whats doctors doing but again he only see them standing around manvi and checking them. God them how much time they take more to come out Maan thought said maan combing his hair hairs only to see all worried faces. Vicky and annie sit with dadima giving her comfort while Heer try to pacify geet whose tears not stopping for one sec and all are worried for manvi and geet as already geet have loose her sense two times and Meera and doctors said her to rest but she just sitting her with them waiting for doctors to come so she can see her baby.. Pls God.. help us.. said maan closing his eyes and pray for Manvi and remember what happened few hours back.

Flashbacks

Pls.. plss Leave my daughter . I will give you what you want?but dnt harm her.pls mein hath jodhta hu .but that Man not listening to him throw manvi making maan gaping at her but when manvi crying voice reach to his ears he at once run to that direction and goons try to hold him bitting him with hockey stick and by throwing glass bottles on his head but his all attention was on baby and taking a long high jump he catch manvi before she fell down and immediately hug her catching his breath and kissing manvi all over manvi face. My princess. Said maan with in tears. Pakdo un sab ko.?said Inspector and they hold everyone jaldi dekho koi be bhagna nahi chahiye.

Mr khurana aap theek hai? ask Inspector seeing him still on floor taking manvi. Maan noded and help him to stand so he take manvi from him. but seeing Manvi not doing any movement he at once he pinch her. Inspector what are you doing ask maan as he saw that. I think we have to take her hospital soon. Listen this MAan quickly come to him and pat manvi cheeks. Manvi... Princesss... Princesss.. said maan calling her but seeing no movement he scared. Mr Khurana Come quick.. said Inspector and taking manvi they left

Doctor... Doctor... Maan just take all hospital on his toe as he enter in hospital running from parking area leaving inspector who left him as he get phone call from Comissioner . Where is doctor? Ask maan pulling a compounder ,, they. They.. compounder get scared seeing him. Doctor kaha hai Damm it.. said maan and listen this all come to area where maan shouting on him and that place was actually close to geet areas and listen his voice geet at once come runningly and seeing her prem mohinder rano and dadima to come worriedly and seeing the scene they get more worried. Bleeding maan holding manvi who seem like swinging in his arms.. Manvi.. seeing this geet enter in rush and reach to manvi, Baby.. geet call Manvi but seeing her not responding.. She pat her cheeks to notice manvi small hands fell down from her chest making her scared. Maan yeh bol kyun nahi rahi hai? Manvi... See Mumma... . mumma manvi.. till than doctors also come and with that meera. Omg.. mouthed one doctor and quick check Manvi pulse. She is sinking said doctor looking at meera. Nurse quickly take her to ICU. Said doctor making khuranas and handas stood in shocked. Rano and dadima about to fall down but Mohinder and prem hold them .

MR khurana Leave her we have to take her said doctor seeing geet and maan not leaving her. seeing this Prem come forward and help doctors and they runningly take her to ICU when doctor said nurse to everything is prepare na ? as while coming here maan phone meera and told her that something happen to manvi and she prepare everything and just waiting for him and manvi..

Meri bachi... said geet holding maan and she to about to fell down Maan at once hold her. Kuch nahi hoga geet. said maan seeing her but he himself very scared. Wiping his tears and they both walk to direction where doctor take Manvi. Come. Manvi may be need us. Come.. listen this geet looked at him and they left from there while gathering people see them in pity.

Hmm. so Maan singh khurana try to play with me, ha. Not see what I did said simran and dial his men no but now as they all in lock up so when their phone buzz Inspector said him to talk normally and he did accordingly.. Ji Madam.. Maan singh ki bachi ko maar do. Said Simran in pure anger or ha sare sabut mitt jane chahiye. (as simran still think manvi is with her men) Saying this she cut the call and laughingly come out from canteen which she make excuse to all that she have headache so she will have her tea and none stop her.

Le jao inne or itna marro ki aagay se yeh sab kuch karne se phele 10 baar soche. Said inspector and then he dial commisoner no and told him what happened . Arrest her. said Comissioner and cut call.

Here in hospital they all gather outside ICU where they saw Nurses coming and going but no one telling them anything. Pls kuch to batiye meri beti kaisi hai? said geet holding a nurse. Doctor are treating her madam. Pls wait. Saying this she left but geet loose her sense.

Precap :Maanvi is cricital A fiery Geet and Slap rains on Simran😃 (sanju i think now u really enjoy next part)😉😉😆

imp note : i need good response from u all...the lack of likes n comments every time in every update of any story makes me sad..if u want more n more updates from me. silent reader wake up dnt forget to like n comment..it takes a sec

Disclaimer: any scene or situation of this ff is an imagination. If any action match to any other thing that is merely a co-incident. I haven't copied any scene as far as my knowledge and I want to let u know beforehand. Still if anything matches it will be only a coincident.

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Posted: 6 years ago
Thanku all 😃😃😃
Note :
I really wanted to end story in these 2 parts seing response
but then i remember Half flashback (i.e how maaneet get married and they know about simran )is still pending so Now story will go on super fast mode and will end in next 4or 5 parts (n i m doing it only for Sanju who demand full flashback story)

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Posted: 6 years ago
wishing u all advance😊

Happy Independence Day 😃😃

Edited by tammana.m - 6 years ago

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