OS : Meri Beti Manhoos nahi hain

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi

I am Aarthi and currently writing a story " Main Ishitha, Sirf Ishitha on the yhm forum. This is my first attempt at writing.

Watched todays episode and I felt that Raman/Ishitha are acting. Did not look like she was dead.. looked like they were aware of what was going to happen and played along to expose Param.

While I don't know what will happen I just thought of a short OS if this was a ploy by Raman/Ishitha to expose Param.

Meri Beti Manhoos Nahi Hain

The scene starts the following morning after Toshi gives the milk to Ishitha. Everybody is at the dining table and is surprised Ishitha is not up as yet. They are having a casual chat. Raman is wondering why Ishitha is not up. Ruhi and Pihu go up to wake their ishima and are surprised that she is not getting up. Ruhi screams'Ishima' and Raman gets worried.

He runs up the stairs and sees his 2 daughters frantically trying to wake up their mom.

Ruhi & Pihu : Papa, dekho na... ishima utt nahi rahihain.. muje darr lag raha hain. please uttao unhe.

Pihu also adds : Haan papa, ishima soo kyu rahi hain. uthao na unhe.

They both start crying andhowling and the entire family is up to wake her up. The entire family is crying and howling and Raman is just standing shocked.

When he sees everyone's face he comes down and takes Ishitha and runs towards thedoor saying " Bala, gaadi nikalo,, hume usse hospital le jana padega.

Everyone is trying to stop him but he is just walking telling bala to take the car out.

Toshiji screams : Raman wo mar gayi hai, maine usse maara hain.

Toshi could not hold her guilt for longer. She blurted out the truth that she gave her the poison as she was il fated for Adi.

Raman : kya kaha aapne..Ishitha buri saya hain. wo bhi adhi ke liye. Ye math buliye ki humne is bachche ko tab apnaya jab ye paida hone wala tha. Ishitha ne to uski dekh bal pehle se kar rahi hain.

Toshi : haan yahi ishitha ne adi ko goli maari thi. Issliye uska bachcha uske godh mein jaathe hi ro raha hain. ishitha ke rehthe adi ke sath kuch achcha nahi hoga.

Raman : kya bakwaas hain.. ye aapse kisne kaha.

Toshi : uss swathi shukla ne kaha.

Raman : ab ye kaun hai?

Toshi: wo ek bahut gyani aurat hain. usne kaha ki ishitha ke hathon adi ka khoon huwa hain isliye chota adi uske paas nahi ja raha hain. usne kaha ki ishitha ek buri saya hain aur jab tak yeh hain humara adi theek nahi rahega. Issliye maine usko zehar pilaya kal rath doodh ke saath. Maine ye sab adi ke liye kiya.

Raman burns in anger : Maa. Maine kabhi socha nahi tha ki aap aise sochegi ya karegi. Aapne meri zindagi barbaad kar di. Arey wo aurat jisne hum sab ke liye patha nahi kya kya kiya.. aap soch bhi kaise sakthe hain ki yeh bura saaya hain.

Madhu gets very angry and slaps Toshi : tumhari himmat kaise huyi meri beti ko maarne ki. Arre bura saaya thi to waapis mere paas bhej deti..

Mr. Bhalla : Raman, police ko bulao aur toshiji aur uss aurat ko pakadvao..

Toshi : bhalla ji, maine yeh adi ke liye kiya.

Mr. Bhalla : main bhi ye apne bache ke liye kar raha hoon. Jaise aapne bure saaye ko hataya muje bhi ek khooni aur ghatiya soch rakne wali ko hatana chahiye.

Ruhi rushes to her and says.: kyun kiya daadi aapne aisa.. kyun kiya.. main apne maa ko lekar kahin door chali jaati. Unhe maarne ki kya zarrorat thi.. aapne mere baare me nahi socha. Pihu ke baare main nahi soch.. kyun sochti aapp. Ghar ka chirag to hamesha sirf adi hain..

Ruhi and Pihu howl andhug Ishitha and start crying. By then the cops come with Swathi Shukla. Raman grabs her neck and says : Ab bach nahi sakthi tum.. saare sabooth hain hamare paas. Jaldi bolo kyun maara meri biwi ko

SS gets scared : maine kuch nahin kiya.

Toshi : ye kya keh rahi ho. Tum hi ne to kaha ki ghar mein ek bura saya hain aur hume use khatam karna hain. tumhi ne to ek dawai bhi dhi thi.. she goes down and brings the bottle.

Cop : dekho, humare paas tumare khilaaf sabooth hain. aur hum ye bhi jaante hain ki tumhara koi niji dushmani nahi hain. kiske kehne pe tumne ye kiya. Sach bologi to bachogi. Varna saboot ke hisab se phansi par tum chadogi.

SS gets scard and blurts out that it was Param and Simmi who told them.

Simmi : kya bakwas kar rahi ho. Kaun ho tum.. maine tume dekha bhi nahi hain.

SS : jhoot math bolo.tum bach nahi sakthi. Mere ghar ke andhar cc tv hain. footage nikalke de doongi.

Param and Simmi get scared and Simmi as usual in a hurry blurts out : arre tumhare ghar ke andar cctv kahan thi.. wo thi sirf corridor mein thi aur humne usse nikal diya tha..

Param slaps his forehead as he realizes that she made a goof up.

The inspector claps his hand and says: Thank you Simmi ji.. aap ne hamara kaam asaan kar diya hain.. Ab aap dono chaliye hamare saath. Swathi tum bhi chalo

Raman wipes his tears and looks at his mom: ab bolo maa. Bura saaya kaun hain? waapis laa sakthe ho meri ishitha ko.

Toshi is shocked and does not know how to react. Just then MR . Bhalla says : Inspector, inhe bhi lethe jayiye.. yeh asli khooni hain.

Just then Raman stops his dad and says : Nahin Papa, main sab kuch bataoonga. He looks at ishitha and says : utt jaa madrasan.. ab sab kuch theek hain.

Ishitha wakes up and everyone is shocked.

Raman looks at Simmi and says : tuje kya laga ki har baar tu hi jeetegi.. nahin, iss baar solid planning thi hamari.

Everyone looks at Raman. Mr. Bhalla : Raman , kya hain ye sab.

Raman : papa, hum sab soch hi rahe the ki param aur simmi ko kaise pakad sakthe hain. tabhi bala ne kaha ki achanak ek aurat aayi aur kisi swathi shukla ka naam liya.

Uske baad Bala ne usko param aur simmi se baath karthe huwe suna. Agle din humne dekha ki mummyji usse aurat se baat kar rahi thi. Humne unka peecha kiya aur patha chala ki yeh sab ek chaal hain. Maa ke nikalne ke baad humne uss aurat ko daraya, phir police ko bulaya aur usne sab sach batha di. Humne phir maa ke bag me se wo dawai nikali aur sada vitamin ki dawai mix ki.

Par Maa muje yakin nahi huwa ki aap sach mein ishitha ko dawai doge. Hume laga aap mein todi si pyaar hogi ishitha ke liye. Wahan maine dokha kaya. Phir subah se jo bhi huwa aap sab ko patha hi hain.

Mr. Bhalla :puttar, acha huwa ye log pakde gaye. Par toshiji aap ne mera barosa thod diya. Ek maa hokar aapne ek maa ki jaan li.. kaise kisi ko maar sakthe ho app. Aapne mera vishwas tod diya.. aage se mujhse kabhi baat mat kijiye.

Toshi : Bhallaji, menu maaf kar dijiye.. adi ke pyaar mein andhi ho gayi thi..

Bhallaji : aap andhi hi rahiye.. muje aap se koi baath nahi karni.. bas.. bahut ho gaya.

Raman : papa, ek baar,

Bhallaji : nahi Raman, koi beech mein nahi bolega.. Toshi aur mera rishta khatam. Wo aap sab ki maa ki tarah reh sakthi hain par meri biwi nahi.

Toshi cries and goes to Ishitha. She holds her hand says : Ishitha puttar, main tumhari gunehgaar hoon. Menu maaf kar de puttar. Main pagal ho gayi thi..

Ishitha was about to say something when Madhavi says

Madhu : ille ishu, kuch math bolo. Agar tum meri todi si bhi izzat karti ho to mere saath hamare ghar chalo.. aainda se iss ghar me aane ki koi zarrorat nahin.

Raman and Ishitha : Amma

Madhu : Ille ille kuch math bolo. Agar tum logon ko patha nahi hota to aaj sach mein meri ishu ki maut hoti.

Raman hangs his head and has nothing to say

MAdhu : hamesha tum log meri beti ko manhoos bolthe ho par sach mein tum log manhoos ho. Jabse meri beti ki shaadi huyi hain tab se wo kush nahin hain. hamesha aap logon ki thane sunthi, ghar se nikal dethe ho.. ab aur nahi.. manhoos to tumhari beti hain Santoshi.. meri beti nahin.

Madhu : Raman tum hamesha Ishu pe chillathe ho, uski izzat nahi karthe ho. Sabke saamne usse insult karthe ho.. isliye tumhare ghar me bhi koi uski izzat nahi kartha.. ek ladki ki izzat uski husband se hoti hain par yahan to tum humesha uska use karthe ho aur phir throw kar dethe ho..Ab aur nahin.. tumhare ghar me usse koi sukh nahi, no peace of mind, no respect.. haan tum pyaar karthe ho par uss pyaar ka kya faayda jab waqt aane par wo par tumhari nahin banegi to.

Ishitha :Amma aisa nahi hain.

Madhu : ille Ishu,, meri aakri warning.. agar tume tumhare appa aur mere liye todi si bhi respect hain to tumhe meri kasam, mere saath ghar chalo.. Tume meri kasam hain.

Ishitha : amma ennadhu idu.. kasam de rahi ho aap.

MAdhu : haan ishu, tume meri kasam, tum abhi isi waqt mere saath ghar chalo.

Isitha is dumbstuck and looks at Raman. Raman slightly nods his head as he knows amma is very emotional and is right. He wants to instill full confidence and then bring back his wife.

Ishitha slowly walks with amma followed by Pihu and Ruhi.

Toshi does not what to say.

Raman walks behind ishitha and Mr. Bhalla stomps off.

Mihika and Aliya are shocked with the turn of events. They cant believe that Toshiji can do this.

Mihika : kyun mummyji.. kya hum sirf bahu hain, beti nahi iss ghar ki.. khal ko aap muje aur aliya ko bhi maar sakthe hain kya..

Toshi realizes the extent of her blunder. She says : aisa nahi hain puttar, main pagal ho gayi thi aur patha nahi aisa kyu kiya.

Mihika : Adi ko main kabhi aapko nahi doongi. Jab thak ishu ghar mein waapis nahi aathi aadi aapke paas nahi aayega.

Aliya and Mihika walk away.

They see Ishitha going to Iyer house followed by Ruhi and Pihu. Raman understands the situation and quietly looks at Ishitha to assure her that he will handle the situation.

Ishitha is trying to apologize with her eyes and raman smiles and says to himself :Madrasan, ab aur nahin.. aage se koi bhi main khud bhi tume insult nahi karega. We will cherish you forever.. main amma ko manake tume waapis laaonga.

He goes inside his house to think the way forward and notices his dad storming to his room, mihika and aliya also walk away with Adi, while his mom is hesitantly walking towards him.

He now does not want to think of anybody else. His priority is now to get his wife back and cherish her forever.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice OS Aarthi. The words of Madhu that no body would respect a lady in her house if her husband itself ill treat her is good. She had realized it. But what about her calling Subbu's Amma for all her house function even if she ill treat Ishita. Don't she have some sympathy for her own daughter?
I thought to write something on this aspect. But as I lack imagination, I dropped the idea
Edited by anithams - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice os dii
Very well written
Thnx for the pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice work yar...
a lady is a lakshmi and should always be respected...but cannot handle these double faced Bhallas...
chalo finally Amma took stand for her daughter,,,,
Toshiji deserves this...

coming to think of it...I don't think it is right to just put the whole blame on Param and forgive what all SImmi did...(As per the new reports)
cannot just ignore that she tried to kill Ishita before too and ofcourse harmed her own brother...
how can they justify her guilt free...

nice OS

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Posted: 7 years ago
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fabulous one shot dear
I hope u continue it
I'm again saying wish what u have written happens in the show
finally Madhavi acted like a real mother would and spoke for ishita
toshiji truly deserves all the hate she is getting
loved it
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome OS
Loved it
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Superb os!
The all frustration of viewers goes on through amma
But when Ishu herself will fight for her respect, her position in Bhalla house and her children...
Continue writing...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Lovely OS .
Beautifully written , it's good that Amma stood for her daughter.
Toshiji has lost it .
Not interested in yhm drama anymore .
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome os!!
Very well written.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#10
mind blowing os
amazing yaar
love it
continue your other story also please

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