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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

<font color="#009999">stupendous update! fabulouslywritten! thanks 4 updating Sabina!</font>

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<font color="#009999">while Deep and Tara's anger was justified, I agree with Geet that they have no right tojudge them based on the personal lives!</font>
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<font color="#009999">Geet was right and her reaction was reasonable!</font>
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<font color="#009999">but now Maan not at the library and she is furious!</font>
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<font color="#009999">where is Maan?</font>
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<font color="#009999">update soon</font>



thnx for reading chetna
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Posted: 6 years ago

Part 10

" Urgh I will kill you " Geet shouted in frustration , for one minute forgetting that she is in library . All eyes went to her looking oddly . Just then she realised what she done , " so..rry , sorry please carry on "

she sat and picked a random book to hide herself . " idiot duffer what's wrong with you ? yeh library hai teri bed room nehi " she muttered under breath but next moment jump on her sit hearing someone too close...

" so miss goody did have big mouth " ...

she narrowed her eyes at Maan . First because of him she did something out of her character now his teasing.." it's all because of you "...

" shhh slowly warna aas pass ke dragons jag jayega " Maan said ever so seriously that first Geet couldn't get his words .

" Dragon what ! " then realise he was talking about other people in library .

" YOU , sab tumhare bajese , where were you ? " she looked at him sharply , dare him to lie .

" I was here only see " he pointed pillar of books on table as proof " I was reading .."

just then she realise it was her fault , he was not late but she didn't notice him because of those books . She was in such bad mood that didn't look surroundings clearly " oh ..i didn't see " ...

" that's hurt , someone didn't see me the Maan Sing..."

She didn't let him complete just told him to sit down .. " sit let's start .." Maan nodded his head and sit down with sore face ..

" um I'm sorry "

" what ! " as if he heard some aline words .

" I thought you didn't come and shouted .."

" oh that's no big deal " he shrugged his shoulder . He didn't get the need of sorry in such small thing . He did bigger blunder but hardly use those words . " it's not big deal , hota hai ...its not that miss goody can't do mistake "

" no still wrong is wrong . And saying small sorry not such big thing . Galti manese insan chota nehi hota "

she gave him small smile , may be first time she actually smiled at him . He couldn't take his eyes of her . That's what he feared, her bring different from all , that's what he didn't wanted .

" so let's start " she pulled out yesterday's books and opened before them but seeing Maan not paying attention she called him loudly with irritating pout " Maannn dyaan kaha hai tumhara "

" you look more beautiful when ..."

" What? " she frowned not hearing him properly just then he came out of his thoughts ...

" umm I was saying I read few notes which you gave me yesterday .."

" few ! " she raised her eyebrow questioning " as in how FEW? ...i gave only 5 notes ..."

" umm 2 I mean ...almost 2 , just few page left from second one " he looked uncomfortable feeling like littel student waiting for teacher to scold for his mischief . But to his relief Geet didn't get angry ..

" one and half not bad , fine read today aur waise bhi if your keep pending that thing you will suffer not me . Beside I'm going to give you more notes so at the end you have to read all within three days , which will be difficult for you only ."

His good feeling gone and irritation took over , " you can't be serious Geet more notes ..those are not some song lyrics which can read thoroughly..i can't "

he stopped as Geet not paying attention rather busy writing something . After 30 minutes he couldn't bear more silent. He looked around all engrossed in books . " Damn it's jail "

" yes for you " Geet muttered giving him some papers . " did you write down what I told yesterday ? "

Maan gave a small paper " hmm only 6 , we need more "

he raised her eye as if she cracked some jokes but Geet ignored all . One thing she understood the less she will talk, the less they will fight and more work will be done...

" we have to explain all facts with valid points "

" now you must be joking "

" no , look we can't just write some important fact without giving detailed information ..."

" Geet why doing so much for this simple project ! .. just write down from book na " he hopefully gave her suggestion to go in easy route but Geet is tough nut not going by his way ...

" it's not some school project ki bas kasie bhi likhke dedo ok .. be good spot do every thing " he glared which ignored as usual ..

" do one thing write summary of .."

" I can't do anything tonight . I have to complete Mr Rastogi's assignment tonight . "

Geet gaped with open mouth " I was given last month.. you still didn't complete it ! "

" ha so what " Maan doesn't get her surprised self , for him it's not big deal . He always does this . It doesn't matter how much time professor give, he will do things only previous night or two days before submit date .. its normal for him .

" just forget it , now here we have to add pics and "

" that's it I'm going " seeing her demanding level going up his patience broke , he stood up to go but Geet hold his hand...

" you promised me , you will cooperate " Maan looked at the door his easy escape then her hold " please Maan, just 10 days left, let do this without eating each other head please "

" umm I ca " He so wanted to say no but eventually sat down again and curse himself ... " you are so so mmm ha annoying "

" and you are lazy " Geet throw back

" you are mean "

Geet stopped didn't like where their words war going but Maan not apologitical at all ...

" What its true , brilliant students are crazy , mean . They just care about themselves "

" I can say the same for you too ... "

Both looked at each other, no one ready to back down . Then Maan came closer to her , she saw their position and was about to lean back but Maan hold her hand to stop her movement ...

" but I can prove that brilliant people do mean, selfish ...let's bet . I will prove it within 3 days what say "

He forward his hand to seal the deal but Geet throw his hand away " I don't do silly bet "

" you scared to lose "

" fine ..uff you are mad "

" that's I'm...so what's the prize "

" prize for what "

" of course bet ka .. hmm if I win you have to do what I say and if you win I will do whatever you say "

Geet shook her head at his childish bet , if only she would knew how serious he is about it . " ok ok deal , now let's concentrate on this "

Maan smirk feeling excited because he can't wait to win after that he can demand his prize . ' you are doomed '

Edited by Keepdreaming - 6 years ago
Keepdreaming thumbnail
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Posted: 6 years ago
So the war start good vs bad lol
between I was in bad lazy side
enjoy
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Posted: 6 years ago
Maan smirk feeling excited because he can't wait to win after that he can demand his prize . ' you are doomed '


why i feel warning bells in this line
kuch dangerpus feel aarahi hai


i hoping my instution is wrong
my lazy sabi wont do dangerous
hai na
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Posted: 6 years ago
coming to update
i felt pity for maan
koi kitne dher tak books mein gussa rahega
geet didnt even acknowledge he is reading mana he read only 2 but he did which he ver dont
kya 2 months project ding today he he he
i love this maan
nahi mein apni project first day se start karthi hoon
lets not go there
but sabi iss maan mein muje tum zyada dhikayi dheythi ho
lazy=maan=sabi=first love
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Posted: 6 years ago




What happened dear ?
Why are you upset ?
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Posted: 6 years ago
awesome update dear...
until either of them win the bet I guess they will fall for each other...
will be waiting for the next part dear please update soon and thank you for the pm...
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: SANJANA9167

coming to update

i felt pity for maan
koi kitne dher tak books mein gussa rahega
geet didnt even acknowledge he is reading mana he read only 2 but he did which he ver dont
kya 2 months project ding today he he he
i love this maan
nahi mein apni project first day se start karthi hoon
lets not go there
but sabi iss maan mein muje tum zyada dhikayi dheythi ho
lazy=maan=sabi=first love


lol bilkul sahi ... Maan and me same as per laziness ..but only laziness nothing more ...
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: SANJANA9167

Maan smirk feeling excited because he can't wait to win after that he can demand his prize . ' you are doomed '



why i feel warning bells in this line
kuch dangerpus feel aarahi hai


i hoping my instution is wrong
my lazy sabi wont do dangerous
hai na


hmm warning he hai 😉
let's see
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming


lol bilkul sahi ... Maan and me same as per laziness ..but only laziness nothing more ...

itna kya darrahi hai
maan aur tujh mein aur bhi ek cheese same hai😆

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