Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

REVENGE- Part 75 (Page 159) - Page 16

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Posted: 5 years ago

Part 7

 

He examines her sole

 

She is speechless seeing his gesture

 

G-Nahi main thik hoon...

 

Maan ignores her words, jo dikha wo nikaal diya

 

He brushes her feet oftly onc

 

M-Kuch aur to nahi chubh raha ?

 

Geet slowly shakes her head looking at him

 

G-Thanks...

 

She says slowly

 

M-Stay with him...

 

Maan says pointing at Akhil

 

Maan gaya upar bhag kar, takiya aur chaadar uthaya, neeche aaya

 

Geet chup chap Maan ko dekhe jaa rahi hai

 

Maan ne Akhil ke sarr ke neeche takiya lagaya , usse chadar udaya, uske joote utaare

 

M-See, he is fine. He'll survive. So raha hai

 

She smiles

 

Her small smile can even light up the whole room

 

M-Tum bhi jao, jaakar so jao

 

He says guiding her out of the house

 

She stops holding the wall

 

G-Khana

 

M-Jao kha lo, maine kab roka hai?

 

G-Tum?

 

She holds his wrist and leads him

 

Maan stops

 

M-Tum chappal nahi pehen sakti thi? Itni kya aag lag rai thi? Kapde change kar liye, chaapal bhi pehen leti

 

Geet smiles...

 

G-Bhool gai

 

M-Tumhara dimaag...

 

Maan shakes his head and picks her up

 

Her eyes widen, heart beat skips for a moment

 

Uthakar he starts walking

 

G-oh..nah...I will manage

 

He ignores her "I will manage

 

Fir beech sadak poocha ki jaana kahan hai?

 

G-Ghar ke andar hi

 

She wraps her arms around his neck securely

 

H e is also enjoying too and he is sure she can manage too

 

M-Akhil ka ghar?

G- Nahi, outhouse. Wo jo bridge hai chota sa pond ke upar wo cross karte hi outhouse hai

 

Maan crosses the bridge

 

G-Put me down

 

M-I'll put you down inside your house

 

Geet to red ho hi chuki thi blush kar karke

 

G- Nahi nahi...meri puri family hai

 

M-Tumahrai poori family hai koi chappal lakar nahi de sakta tha?

 

She facepalms

 

G-Bass thoda door hai...put me down...what would they think

 

M-Kyun? What would they think?

 

G-I don't know

 

M - To phir tension kyun le rahi ho... or do you want them to think something and then deny it?

 

He says with a wink

 

She is speechless for a moment aur wink se to bilkul beetroot red ho gai

 

G-I don't want my younger siblings eating my head

 

M-Well, I am sure if you can stop blushing then people will just think that you are hurt and nothing is going on... but if you keep looking so guilty...well, even I am begining to wonder if we did something...

 

Maan stops and looks down at her pulling her close

 

M-Did we?

 

 She looks away trying to hide her blush and whatever she is feeling that she can't explain to anyone

 

 

He looks up and away again

 

M- Well, maybe we did

 

G-Hawww

 

She without thinking hits his chest

 

He doesn't feel much

 

Jaakar he says ki knock karo

 

G-Utaaro

 

Maan grins and then puts her down

 

Sliding her down real close

 

She quickly turns around unable to look more

 

She opens the door with her keys

 

Maan gayab ho gaya peeche se


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Hey all, I have a news to share with you all; I am moving to NYC this weekend with my hubby

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Posted: 5 years ago
all the best for you new life
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Nice part. Maan is taking care of Geet. Geet was so shy when he picked her up in his arms. First time she was thinking about another man other than that akhil. Waiting for next dear 
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Nice part
Maan Geet came a bit close seems like
He carried Geet in his arms,siblings
He he he
Cute part
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wow NYC! all the best! ðŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 5 years ago
Part 7

awesome update, well written.

Nice seeing Maan's care for Geet! 
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Such a sweet and tender moment. Nice update.
New York? Wow it's my favorite city, all the best... 
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Awww Geet is getting the blushes just being in Maans arms and care. She is naive and hope maan doesnt hurt her though she might get hurt knowing Maan is taking revenge from AKhil.
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Aww what an update! Loved it!
N since I live in NY, I welcome u to NY!!!!
Good luck and please keep writing =P I love your writing =D
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Posted: 5 years ago
sweet update 
loved it