ArShi OS ~ His Drug (16+)

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reshmanair356

@reshmanair356

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

I am such a huge fan of yours!

For the way you write, for the way you make your characters emote and for the subtlety that you manage to bring even in the most intense of emotions. They are never overboard, never over the top and never forced.

A right amount of just about everything!

Loved This OS and everything elsevthat you have written 👏

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Labitha

@labi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Very beautiful OS with wild, passionate lovemaking and an emotional touch.Loved their bond and understanding.😳

You are an amazing writer Ms.Lizzie👏.Your writing gives the story a unique touch.👍🏼

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Aaniya

@EVIL_ANGEL

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

amazing Os !
the start was very hot..
the whole of it is nice..
thanks fr pm..

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Just-do-it

@Just-do-it

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

What a passionate piece of writing. In addition to their explosive chemistry, these two are also each other's support system and you wrote it so well in such a short OS!

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Real_steel

@Real_steel

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#15

nice

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Brishti

@brishti84

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#16

I was hoping to see this side of Arnav or rather a battle of ASR vs Arnav post marriage when it came to his and Khushi's intimate life. Of course not in such detail 😆 but he changed so fast to a mellow guy that I felt disconnected with him. Like not wanting to enjoy their wedding night totally threw me off. My expectation was that he would just pick Khushi up and head to his farm house or hotel. This OS makes perfect sense to me from both Arnav's and Khushi's POV. Him needing release from the demons that haunt him which only Khushi can provide with of course not just sex but that is a big part of it, especially for guys. They communicate differently and I love the way you show this here. Great job!

Edited by brishti84 - 7 years ago