My First story : Love by chance #3 Part 27 on pg 112 May 26 - Page 9

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey harshu
Please do pm to me
I know I am very less active in the forum these days but will reply to all the pms
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Don't be disheartened...
Plz continue your updates...
Kindly send PMs of your updates too...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I also have the same problem.
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Do pm me for ur updts
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I love your work Harshita
Just a little busy on personal front so replies will be late
But as always I'll try my best to read and comment
Just bear a little with me...

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I love ur stories that u knew it
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hlw frnds here I'm with update on this story on occasion of it "First Anniversary" yes today this story has completed one year successfully with ur support & love ..
This story is special one for me as its my "First story" who made me a writer..

A big wala thanks & congratulations to all of you as you all are equal part of this successful journey..



Scroll down for update..

Edited by harshiidiv - 7 years ago
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Part - 19

Raman - bhai to aa gya bt Bhabhi..


Ishita - she is coming meri amma se baat hui hai ..


Mihir called his friends name but none was there he comes forwards & stops seeing his & mihika's different pics hanging everywhere..




He thought "so it's all mihku's plan to manofy me meanwhile mihika too comes there & found their (MiMi) pics of different moods & smiles seeing it she too thought that it's all mihir's plan both standing side by side having tears in her eyes both turns to each other & said sorry to each other then hugged each other



Mihir - I missed u a lot mihku


Mihika - me too buddhu ..


Ishra was smiling seeing them that finally their mu cleared



Mihika - thank you for this beautiful surprise agr tum ye pehla kadam nhi uthate to aaj hum sath nhi hote...


Mihir looks her with confused look "one min ye sab tune nhi kiya?


Mihika - nope u did it na..


Mihir - nope Maine nhi ..


Ishita - Mr lrll I think now we should go there ..he nodded & both went to them saying "it's done by us hearing this MiMi turned & shocked to see IshRa there


Mihir - so it's all planned by u ppl..


Raman - yeah bhai ...


Mihika - aww that's so sweet of u thanks a Lott both of u bcoz of u two we are again together.. Saying she holds mihir's hand


Ishita - bas han akka koi thanks ki jarurat nahi hai BT plz promise us ki aage se kabhi aisa nahi hoga..


Raman - ha jhalli is right ye ego hmesha achhe relationship ko kharab kr deta h so plz don't repeat it again..MiMi nodded happily both r so surprised seeing this version of their siblings


Suddenly something clicked in mihir's mind "one min guys is it dream or reality? Trio saw him with confusion while he continues "arey these both are not fighting with each other the two ppl who always ready to beat each other now both r supporting each other & planned all this together maazra kya hai mihika too smiles naughtily making ishita blush


Raman(st)- I think it's not right time to tell them about us may be jhalli is not ready now & I had promised her not to force her ..he was about to say MiMi that they are only frnds & came together only for them but before he told them anything ishita said "We love each other akka jiju making MiMi happy while Raman too became so happy he saw towards her & she blinks her eyes both shared a beautiful eye lock..



Mihir - wowww I'm so happyyy for both of u..


Mihika - me too..saying they hugged ishra while ishra starring staring each other



Mihir - let's dance together..


Ishita plays the song & mimi starts dancing


Raman was becoming lil nervous seeing him only standing looking here & there ishita comes forward & placed her hand on his shoulder & ask him to place his hand on her waist through eyes he did the same & both starts dancing looking into each other's eye



He twirls her & then hugged her from back both closed their eyes feeling this moment


Tujhe dekh dekh sona
Tujhe dekh dekh sona
Tujhe dekh kar hain jagna
Maine yeh zindagani
Sang tere bitaani
Tujhmein basi hain meri jaan haai

jiya dhadak dhadak
Jiya dhadak dhadak
Jiya dhadak dhadak
Jaayen
jiya dhadak dhadak
Jiya dhadak dhadak
Jiya dhadak dhadak
Jaayen

Tujhe dekh dekh sona
Tujhe dekh kar hain jagna
Maine yeh zindagani
Sang tere bitaani
Tujhmein basi hain meri jaan haai

Jiya dhadak dhadak
Jiya dhadak dhadak
Jiya dhadak dhadak
Jaayen

Kabse hai dil mein mere armaan kai ankahe
Kabse hai dil mein mere armaan kai ankahe
Inko tu sunle aaja chaahat ke rang chadha jaa
Inko tu sunle aaja chaahat ke rang chadha jaa
Kehna kabhi to mera maan haai

jiya dhadak dhadak
Jiya dhadak dhadak
Jiya dhadak dhadak
Jaayen
jiya dhadak dhadak
Jiya dhadak dhadak
Jiya dhadak dhadak
Jaayen

Lagta hain yeh kyu mujhe sadiyon se chaahu tujhe
Lagta hain yeh kyu mujhe sadiyon se chaahu tujhe
Mere sapno mein aake apna mujhko banake
Mere sapno mein aake apna mujhko banake
Mujhpe tu kar ehsaan haai

jiya dhadak dhadak
Jiya dhadak dhadak
Jiya dhadak dhadak
Jaayen
jiya dhadak dhadak
Jiya dhadak dhadak
Jiya dhadak dhadak
Jaayen


Soon song ended but ishra didn't realised it & slaying in their music of love


MiMi smiles seeing them


Mihir - mihku look at them they both r looking so cute naa..


Mihika - haan mihir made for each ..she said making aww face while mihir coughs breaking ishra moment both parted blushing hard while MiMi tease them


Soon they completes candle light dinner & now time to go back both couple don't want to go but halfheartedly headed toward their homes..


RaMi dropped IshMi on their home MiMi hugged each while ishra just standing their stealing glances when mihir saw this & said " guys u two can give hug each u won't mind both blushes hearing this & side hugged each other when Raman said in her ears "tomorrow get ready at 6pm I'll be come to pick you saying he pecked her temple lovingly she nodded

That's all for now hope you all liked it so plz hit like button do comments also..


Love

Harshita

Edited by harshiidiv - 7 years ago

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