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Posted: 7 years ago

Part 5

Maan aaya 5 min baad

Geet chup chap khadi h diamonds ke beech...lost in her dreams...looking around...saleswoman kuch bole jaaye...dreaming...if Akhil would ever get anything for her

Maan snaps his fingers in front of her

M-GEET!

She jumps

G-Huh? Haan?

M-Daydreaming?

G-Yeah..no...

She shakes her head and fumbles on some jewelry

M- Kuch aaya pasand ki kahin aur jaana hai?

G- Nahi...emm..dekhte hain..wo..

Geet dekhne lagti hai

Usse pehle usne kuch dekha hi nahi

She is finding it hard to concentrate

She has loved Akhil without any expectation for 20 years in return she was always hurt; never felt loved...wanted or accepted

Maan is growing restless ki jaldi karo

Tab tak Maan chooses a pendant and shows it to her

G-Nice. Do you think...they will like?

M- Kuch bhi lelo, expensive dikhna chahiye... maan jaygii... let it be ostentatious

She nods and asks the lady to gift wrap

Dono nikle dukaan se bahar

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Shaam ko Akhil jaata hai Antara ko gift dene

Maan was driving and Geet was holding on to the gift flowers and the cake

They stopped near Antara's house

Antara ko uska co-actor bhi date kar raha tha

Akhil, Maan aur Geet ne dono ko dekh liya Antara ke ghar jaate hue

Akhil car se utra

Akhil aur dusre ladke mein behas ho gai

Maan car mein baitha tha chup chap

Geet gai ki arre-arre

Haatha-paayi ho gai buri wali

Dusre ladke ka elbow laga and Geet badly injured herself

Wo dura ladka nikal gaya aur Akhil Antara ke saath jhagda karne lag gaya

Geet fell on the road

Kisi ne usko notice nahi kiya

Maan Geet ko gadi mein baithakar le aaya, leaving Akhil there only

Geet ke face pe lag gai thi; par phir bhi wo Akhil Akhil' kare jaaye

Maan ne chabta mar dena tha agar muh par nahi lagi hoti to

Muh par lagi hai, phir bhi Akhil- Akhil' koi bhi irritate ho jaye

Maan starts driving towards the hospital

Geet ne kuch der baad kaha-

G- Stop! Stop! Stop!

M-Kyun?

G-Akhil ko wahan kyun chod diya? How will he come? He mst be so depressed. Go back

M-He'll stay there. They'll make up

G-Tumhe kaha Akhil ne? Aisa nhi hua to? Let's ask him

M-Haan, usne kaha

G-Turn back

M-You want to disturb him? That what you want, isn't it?

G-Par ye Akhil ki car hai...wo kaise ayega? Car wahan chod dete hain

M-He can stay with her; spend the night and make up

G-Par how will he come in the morning?

M-I will pick him

G-Nahi...tum jhoote ho...May be he is disturbed...O Akhil! I am so stupid...so sorry...main aise aa gai

M-Yeah, you are stupid. Stupidly in love with him

She glares at him

Maan usse emergency room le gaya where he can get her wound properly cleaned and stitched

G-Huh? Love...

She gives an unconvincing smirk

G-You are dreaming

M-The whole office knows about it

G-What..? Stupid rumors

M-Like I can't see it. Khud ka sarr phat raha hai aur Akhil taxi kaise lega! Akhil baby hai bhook lagi khana khilao haath se! Akhil ko bathroom jaana hai...you should do tthat too for him... baaki sab to karti hi ho!

Geet chup...looks down...her lips are trembling

He couldn't take it anymore.

M-He needs you to even walk from the office to his car and you don't even know your worth... and let him walk all over you!

G-Shut up! Akhil ke baare mein kuch kaha to! You are just jealous of him

Her eyes are moist

M-Me? Why would I be jealous? That I don't need a girl to even eat my food? No thank you! And aaj hi keh raha hoon.. socha ki sarr pe lagi hai kuch ghus jayega agar; my bad! Agli baar nahi kahunga

G-Why am I even arguing with you...you...who doesn't even know Akhil...

Tears are rolling down as much she stops

M-Yeah why argue... coz you feel like what I am saying might be true... isiliye you argue to convince me and to convince your self...you don't argue about gravity... but you do about Akhil...

G-I don't wanna talk about it..I don't wanna talk to you..!..Akhil made a wrong decision trusting you

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Posted: 7 years ago
oh poor Geet
When will she come to her senses?

she knows Akhil is dating Antara?

Why she is blinded by his love ?
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update..
Thank you for pm..
Continue soon..
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Posted: 7 years ago
Superb update
How much feet is nave in love
She blinding following akil, who even don't spare a glance at her without any reason
And maan is right she should stop spoon feeding akhlil
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Posted: 7 years ago
wonderful update! well written! Geet does not seem to realise that Akhil does not love her but is using her!

hate Akhil!

update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
I wanna beat up Geet to smack some sense into her! Like seriously???? Give up on Akhil already! Maan is right!
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Posted: 7 years ago
Geet is really mad.. is she so dumb to no realize what Maan is telling...
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thanks for pm. Nice update.
May be maan is there for his revenge but he do care for geet n her innocence when no one is there to understand n support her. May be geet got hurt on head but need treatment for her innocent heart. Maan is doing it silently. Antara is a multitasker who is dating many same time.
Waiting for next.
Edited by Risingsun626 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Geet totally mad for akhil
Maan and anything can't make sense to her
she should start loving n respecting herself its too much
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Posted: 7 years ago
geet buddhu hai kya?...maan chhodo usse...jo samajh k bhi nehi samajhte usse koi samjha nwhi sakta...madne do usse...

lovely update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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