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Posted: 7 years ago
Wow mind blowing story...
So maan propose geet but geet decline because of their uncertain future... Eager to know more...
Love reading this story...
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Posted: 7 years ago
awesome update dear, geet saved maan's life , waiting for next update
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Posted: 7 years ago
Eagerly waiting for the Last Part
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awsm update dear.loved it.eagerly waiting for last part.thnx fr d pm.😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update dear Geet saved Mann life and told what all happened to father Mann decided to purpose Geet and she rejected saying there are two different Mann control his tears not to make Geet sad but again some one attached them again Geet saved him
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Posted: 7 years ago
Created or illusion but maan did wel even in loss of memory n waiting for ur epi
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: T.Peru

Nice update

Geet was made by Maan
But she removed his memory
As she had to go
Maan want Geet to be with him
But she didn't know what to say
Maan is in danger
Thank for PM
Update soon




Thank u buddy😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Rashmi234

Nice update

Maaneet met 6yrs back but geet had to leave so she erased his memory
Geet's dad explaining maan how he created n wanted maan to help geet n change d future
Maan proposed geet n she denied
Geet again saved maan but geet is protecting maan frm whom...
Waiting fr nxt




It will b answered in this last part


Thank you 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago

Last Part+ Epilogue

Together with You

I can see you in my mind,
yearning I can feel you and now I know, waiting in the silence
I see you in my mind, yearning
I can feel you in love I won't forget
I'm with you

Past

"Save her Professor. "Who are you, The Prof asked. "I'm Maan Singh Khurana ...23 years from the future...Save her for me ...as she is the only one who can save the current me ...She will be back to us when she has done her work...A rival of mine has gone back to kill me and only she can save me ...Please save her, Was all he heard from the holgram the young woman in front of him showed through a watch on her wrist ... "I will do whatever I can...but why does that person wants to kill you, The Prof asked. "This girl she is a humanoid android ...but with our technology I have designed her just like a human. She can live her life like any other girl but during the time travel she had been attacked and please only you can save her...She is my past present and my future, please save her..., He pleaded. "Alright I will try my best, The Professor said. The Professor saved her by replacing her heart.

Present

Geet stood there wounded. Her arm was bleeding but with her reflexes and power this time she held a man in her other hand. "Leave me you monster, He yelled. "You ...are the Monster..., She said. "Geet..., I said going towards her. "I..I'm fine Sir...but now my work is over...This man is a rival of yours from the future . His name is Prof Kurt. In the world where I belong thousands of humans were killed because of his experiments. You came to know about him and tried to get him arrested for his crimes. You have developed a technology which could create humans like me to fill the missing void ...though we have our limitations and have some powers but we are still machines ...I really am happy that I met you Sir ...but its time to say goodbye now ..., She smiled with tears in her eyes. "You are not a machine Geet...The Professor your father gave you an automated heart as he found you to save you ...but you are just like other girls ...the same yet different ...my feelings for you will never change ..., I said. "...If I'm ever lost find me here...I will never forget you Sir ...goodbye, She smiled. Before I could do anything to stop her, a portal opened and on the other side ...I could see him...the older me...he smiled at me ...muttering something while I could only watch Geet leaving disappearing completely from my sight.
Geet was back to her future. "You did a great job officer, She heard her senior say when she returned. "I'm sorry that you had to lose the normal heart I gave you, Maan said. "It is alright ...can I ask you a favor, She said. "I know what you are thinking of Geet...but that can not be done now ...I'm sorry, He said. "It is fine Sir...I am happy with the new memories I made with the past you, She said. "Thank you Geet for saving me, He said. "It was my job to secure our future Sir to which you will guide us, She said. "And now I will grant you your wish, He said.
I can see you in my mind, yearning
I can feel you and now I know, waiting in the silence
I see you in my mind, yearning
I can feel you in love
I won't forget With you, in silence

Back to present...

I entered my Mansion to see my family awaiting us. "Maan where is Geet dear, Dadima asked. "Dadima ...Geet is.., Before I could complete Dev interrupted me, "I'm sorry Bro I forgot to inform you that Geet took a leave to go to her village for some familial issues to be solved I forgot to inform you that she took my permission for the same. I looked at Dev and he nodded not to say anything further. "Oh, that is bad though I want her as my daughter in law but Geet is a good employee and a well mannered child...it will be a loss for us to not have her...I hope her problems are taken care of, Dadima said worried. "She will be back Dadima, don't worry, I assured leaving to my room.
I believe, and now I need...
Wish you would smile I'm calling for you
I believe, and so I live...
I'll be by your side
I stared out of the window thinking about her and our time together, a few tears slipped my eyes before I could wipe them I felt a hand and looked up to see Dev. "I know bro that she went back to her time...her Dad informed me about the same, He said. "You...knew about her, I said and he nodded. "Geet is your creation bro, she was created by a highly advanced cellular technique that made her look like a real girl and she even had the same flesh and blood like us until that man damaged her heart when she was traveling to our world to save you...Geet loved you but before you two could meet that evil man destroyed the human race almost killing them entirely ...her father and I had been in contact with the future you. I was apprehensive when I got to know you loved Geet so I decided to run a background check on her ...I'm sorry bro but for your security I'm always a bit worried as we have many rivals that is how I came in contact with her father and through him to another you, He said. "Dev, I'm really happy and blessed to have such a caring family and a loving younger sibling like you. You don't need to be sorry about anything and I will wait for her ...waiting until she returns ...her memories are enough for me to help me through that time and I know you all are always there for me, I smiled caressing his head. "I will pray for that day to come soon bro...I pray for your happiness, He smiled.

7 months later...

I can see you in my mind, yearning
I can feel you in love I won't forget
I'm with you (Lyrics from an anime opening)
It has been a long time since she left I miss her every single day. Today once again I'm going to that place hoping ...that someday she will return. I reached the place the silence still attracted me soothed me but now I craved to hear her voice. "Will I ever see you again, I said to myself. "You are late, I heard the voice I had been craving to hear for a long time now. Thinking it to be another of my illusions I decided not to open my eyes to end this dream. "I waited for you and now you won't look at me, I heard her again and this time turned around to see her there standing there smiling at me.
"You are really here, I blinked my eyes not believing that she was finally here. "Yes, I'm back and now we will be together forever, She smiled.
"How...what took you so long, I asked. She showed me a hologram of a future me, and he smiled. "Geet was still unstable so I made some changes in her and now she can live like any other normal girl though her superhuman abilities are still there as she wanted to protect you always being by your side. I lost my Geet because of that experiment which killed the human race ...I hope you don't lose yours..Your time line will be different than mine as if one travels through time they not only change the history but also create a different time line...one that differs from the original...I hope the both of you will create a better future than what I suffered from...Be happy from now, He smiled.
"Thank you...I will definitely not lose her.., I smiled. I turned to Geet smiling, "Let's go home Geet, everyone is waiting for you.

Epilogue

2 years later

"Mr Khurana, congratulations, you have been blessed with a baby boy, The doctor informed me. I was really overjoyed and went inside to see my wife Geet holding our little angel. It seemed like only yesterday when we got married. My family and her dad blessed us and also there was another person who came to our wedding though disguised ...the other me . I'm still in contact with him and he was happy to see the future he desired for us really taking shape. Geet had always been by my side. My family got to know about her later but they accepted her like I did, she was a perfect daughter in law, wife and now a mother.
Geet looked up at me and gestured me to come and look at our little angel.
"He looks just like you, I smiled.
"Thank you, She said and I turned to look at her wondering why is she thanking me.
"Thank you for making me live a normal life...I'm so happy to have met you and now our child is here to brighten our lives, She smiled.
"Geet, you were always you and that is what makes you different. You should not thank me for anything ...I'm blessed to have you by my side and we will now see a new future with our little Arth ...

The End...







Thank you to all who read this story till the last part, I'm really thankful for your support😃😃😃

Edited by pixelflower620 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update & ending
Their love bring them together
Both are happy in their life
And Geet give birth to baby boy Maan was happy
Thanks for PM

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