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Posted: 7 years ago
Gullam chapter 4

Maan was kneeling down beside her thinking what she's going to do now when he heard her

" maan Delhi Mai Teri koi girlfriend hai "...she asked while combing her hairs

Maan got shocked after hearing her question and look at her with popped eyes but with her one glare he again looked down and answered
" girlfriend Malik ki permission k bina "
She chuckled after hearing him
"toh Tu kya girlfriend bauji ki permission se banayega... toh matlab shaddi bhi Tu bauji ki marzi se hi karega "
"ha" he plainly answered "meri Puri life sirf Malik ki hi hai aur unki permission k bina Mai kuch nhi karta Na Kabhi karunga toh shaddi bhi Mai sirf Malik ki marzi se hi karunga "


She again chuckled and said
" ja waha mere sandals pare hai le aa"...he got up to take her glass Sandals and make her wear it...then geet got up to leave the room ...and he followed her

Geet reached the dining table where she found her father waiting for her while reading newspaper

"good morning bauji"...she greets her father and take her seat besides him and maan silently goes behind his owner's chair and stand with head down ...mohinder too wished her the same and they both start their breakfast


During the breakfast geet started the topic which any normal girl would hesitate to talk specially with their father


"bauji maine Apne liye ek perfect ladka dhoond liya hai" and take a next morsel in her mouth but her father's hand halts in mid after hearing her and he frowned


"kya ...Apne liye ladka dhoond liya ...aur aap Hume aise bta raho hai jaise koi new dress li ho...kon hai kya karta hai aise kaise dhoond liya Hume koi khabar nhi " " oh ho bauji ap itna hyper kyo ho rhe hai ladka hi toh hai " and she rolled her eyes
"ladka hai isliye hyper ho rhe hai koi dress nhi...wo ladka Jo humari Beti ne Apne liye pasand Kiya wo ladka jiske sath ap apni life bitana chahti hai toh offcourse hum hyper honge ...aur wo apki demands ...kya banega apki ye pasand 'joru Ka gulam' "
"isliye toh humne use choona hai bauji " she replied while looking at her father but her eyes are on someone else

" acha toh kon hai wo" he asked " MAAN " she answered

Her father got shocked after hearing the name of her choice...maan got shocked too but didn't reacted ...his eyes which are cast down popped out though his body stay still without any reaction
But her father doesn't have any restrictions on reactions...so he reacted in a very bad way... this is the first time he yelled at his princess but she was adamant that she's going to marry maan only
" ab hum ek gulam se apni Beti byahyenge " he glare at maan who still doesn't have any reaction on his face and looking down but only he knows what turmoil is going through his mind
" bauji ismai burai kya hai ...ap plus points dekhiye Na ...jaisa ladka hum chahte the Jo humari baat maane.. Apne parents se pehle apko rakhe toh waisa hi toh hai ye iske liye apse bad kar koi nhi hai... already ek gullam hai toh Hume kuch karne ki zaroorat bhi nhi hogi ye wahi karega aur waise hi rahega jaisa hum chayenge ...dusra daimaa I miss her so much ...maa k baad unhone ne hi toh Hume pala hai isse shaddi karne k baad Hume daimaa bhi mil jayegi ...aur pada likha business man toh hai hi...dikhne Mai bhi acha khasa hai toh bataiye burai kaha hai ... jaisa pati hume chaiye waisa hi hai ye maan ...bas apki ha chaiye ...aap time lekar ache se soch lijiye hum chalte hai humara breakfast ho gya "

And she got up to leave when her father stops her and said "aapki baat mai dum toh hai maan se acha ladka aapko nhi milega "
Then He stands and goes behind his chair where maan's standing
"ja apni dadi ko phone karke bula le ...ab tujhe Delhi shaddi karwa k hi bhejenge" he pat his back and continues "apni dadi ko bolna shagun ki sab tyari karke hi aye ...baaki tyari yaha sab milke kar lenge ...ja phone karke aa "

Maan left from there after saying 'ji malik' and reached his room which is located at the backside of the haveli ...his room chuckles his bathroom in his mansion was bigger than this room he have a bed which he shared it with his dadima when she was here a small folding chair table ,a small closet...and a fan which moves only for a name sake...there was nothing luxurious about that room ... nobody can imagine that business tycoon MSK lives in this room or spent most of his life in that room only
In maan's room
Maan was sitting on his bed and dialled his dadi's number...after a few ring she picked up the call and before he said anything she started


"maan aap theek toh hai...apko kuch hua toh nhi Shi se aap waha pohch gye the ...aapne Kabhi waha pohch kar Hume aise kabhi call nhi kiya batiye baat kya hai aap aise chup kyo hai kuch Bolte kyo nhi " "aap mujhe kuch bolne dengi tabhi Mai bolunga Na dadima ...Apne hello tak nhi bolne diya mujhe " maan replied

"acha sorry Apne waha pohche pehle Kabhi Hume call nhi kiya toh bus ghabra gye the "

After hearing her... he felt guilty that he never called her when ever he's here ...she must felt lonely...there's no one for her beside him but what can he do he's bound

"Mai theek hoon dadima bus ek news dene k liye phone kiya tha " " news?? Kaise news " she frowned
He was little hesitant to tell his dadima that his marriage got fixed
"wo dadi ma Malik ne choti malkin k sath meri shaddi fix kardi hai aapko yaha bulaya hai "he finally blurted

"what shaddi fix kardi wo bhi geet k sath ...thakur Sahab aisa kaise kar sakte hai wo hote kon hai humare pote ki shaddi fix karne wale " "mere Malik" he said nonchalantly which make dadima silent and she again drown in her guilt

After few seconds when got no reply from other side " dadi ma ????" "hum yahi hai...toh bataiye aur kya hukum hai apke Malik Ka "...she said with full sarcasm

He told her to do all the necessary preparations for shagun and bring all those things in bheravgarh

"bas dhyan dijiyega dadima choti maalkin k liye har cheez sirf best honi chaiye coz she deserves only best" "best deserve karti hai ya nhi' ye hum nhi Jante but unhe best mil zaroor rha hai "


And she just cut the call without even saying bye as she was not in a mood to talk to him at that moment

There maan was hurt and shocked that his dadi abruptly cut the call ...but he know what inner turmoil must be going inside his dadi


That's it...hope m able to do justice with this part...I tried to pen down all the emotions but some time words are not enough

Toodles
Until next time
Kriti

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Posted: 7 years ago
Ok guyz here's the update do tell me hows it
And now m clearly saying if I don't get maximum comment i'll shift this ff to blog

Now the choice is yours
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Posted: 7 years ago
geet k dress k saat wale jhumke mujhe bade ache lage❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

geet k dress k saat wale jhumke mujhe bade ache lage❤️


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Posted: 7 years ago
dress bhi achi thi😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
Sandals bhi the wo nhi dikhe :/
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Posted: 7 years ago
Btw that dress is on myntra ...if you want to buy it in case :p
Edited by _Greylicious_ - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: _Greylicious_

Btw that dress is on myntra ...if you want to buy it in case :p

link pm kar let me see
and jhumke meri obsession hai
nazar wahi atak jati hai by default kya karu😆


prologue se hi I've expected this shadi ka proposal
but this came real quick!😆 ( in a good way)

baki i'll comment tomorrow 🥱


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Posted: 7 years ago
Geet will surly put this question in front of her father was pretty obvious but ye pata nahi tha ki ye etni jaldi aayega
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Posted: 7 years ago
Daadi ko acha tu nahi lagga usse ke hote howe malik ne rishta pakka kar diye upr se chaar din jo Maan sakon k Delhi main rehta tha Geet ke anne se woh b usse ghulam ban kar guzarne hone ge
Ya phir teen din Geet ka ghulam or chaar din usse ka pati

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