AvNeil FF: 'A MILLIONAIRE'S First Love Thread #3 (Upto Chap 68) - Page 71

Originally posted by: Avneilll

0.01% issiliye unsure thi because I wanted that kiss to be real😃 Everybody wanted that, including me.! 😉

But I know it can't be real Hmm.!

Yeah millionaire can be naughty when alone with avni Ooo.! Somebody is too hopeful of Neil.! 😉

I can feel another hanikarak idea is cooking in your mind What me.! Nah.!! Ohkay i agree Yesss.!!!! 😉

Eagerly waiting for the next

Much love to you riya

Originally posted by: ZaraSajad18

Amazing update please update soon 😊 😊

Originally posted by: Ankita713

Sorry worry kuch nahi bolungi because that makes everything look too formal.😛 Ab yeh hui na kuch baat.! Honestly, i missed ur comment.! Coming to the updates, the best part of chapter 58 was AvNeil Reunion even though it was a continued one. That was perfect bliss. Aww, Thank u for mentioning that ! I just loved the gesture from Avni as to how she claimed Neil to be Her Neil. Haha she even deprived Ali of his fan moment too but didn't let loose on her hold onto Neil; bechara Ali.!😆 She was totally into that hug and wanted to be in his arms for as much as she can.! And then the dressing part in the children's ward, it appealed to me this way Neil was the poor victim of his to-be-wifey's rage but Neil wasn't at all bothered about her words coz he was too lost admiring Her eyes. Like dramatic things happening around and misic playing, hairs flying around Avni's face and all Neil was interested in was Her mesmerising eyes. Lovely.!!❤️ Omg.! Though i didnt mention all those dramatic effects in chapter but i did imagined that scene with all those things u mentioned.! 😆😆 And it was a visual treat for me, though i made it little decent while writing ! And yeah I know Its late but as far as I know you AvNeil's first kiss would never be meant to happen in a place full of public and that too in a children's ward!! Yes.!!!! Eggzhactly.!!!! It is going to be a milestone in theor relationship and in no way i am gonna ruin it like CV's ruined every imp AvNeil milestones for us.! Nah, i didnt bring this story till here to write a Public First kiss.! 😆Oh how can I forget to mention what a hearty laugh I had on reading the part of Neil's jealousy whose arch rival is meant to be just a kiddo.!😆 So glad to know that.! But the kiddo was super advanced.! He warned Neil's through his geatures.! 😆

Now chapter 59. My favourite part from that has to be the conversation of the buddies gang in the cafe. Though it was a type of serious conversation but still I loved the concerns each one them had for one another. Awww, Thank u so much.! It reflected their values in each other's life and thats why it appealed so much.! Friendship is not just about having fun and teasings, when time comes, u got to be there for each other.! That how our Buddies are.! And yes Aakash is perfectly right since our Mr. DD, the new lover boy, has a new priority she's bound to be a part of the Buddies Gang.!😉 Yes.! Like Neil was also an outsider for them, but He is a part of them now, through Avni so that should be applied to DD's gf too and Ali's Future Gf too.! No two ways there.! And did I mention that I have full faith on your Ideas.😊 oh yeah.! You did, just now.! 😊I don't remember any update of your that has failed to gain my satisfaction. Awww, That was so sweet of u to say that.! And it was so satisfying to know that.! So just keep going and I wish you all the very best.! Much Love!❤️

Originally posted by: docritu99

Hey Ankita,
Thank u so very much for ur awesome Review.!
It certainly was the one i was looking forward to.!

Much love.!