Shivika |T & T Tales|-Shaadi Mein Zaroor Aana-Completed - Page 12

Originally posted by: jaansahiba

Woah this one was hilarious🤣!! God, khannaji made me fall for him today!! Everything was a fab!! The sardar-pandit, wow man, that was awesome! And Shivaay's decision to keep Rudy n Om apart, well was great. And the urdu-shayri mantra's, god, I'm gonna do it next time when we are group reciting during Sanskrit classes (*don't tell my Sanskrit teacher ;)*). And the kiss in the end, was like icing on the cake!! God, everything was so fantastic! I loved it.

Abhi

Originally posted by: --Risha--

So sweet! Lol at Om's pagdhee and the way Shivaay realizes he's in love was sooo sweet <3 Great ending to this beautiful tale!

Originally posted by: Teju...

This is hilarious poorvi...🤣

Oms entry in Pagdi...shayaris in urdu as mantras...

Shivaays love realisation

Best part is khannas entry as ajays wife🤣🤣

SSO back with tadi and making deals...yeh bandha kabhi nahi sudrega😆

Cheapda shivaay is always treat to eyes...and that kiss☺️

I have been laughing till the end...you r saying comedy is not ur forte...

you rocked dear...I love it ❤️

Originally posted by: elysianights

Reserved!
I'm just too excited to read this Poorvika !!!!

Unreserved.

I know I will be getting chameli for being this late but trust me I'm really sorry for this! :P

Now, first of all, poorvika, I hope is was you who wrote this right?? I just can't believe that you are this good in Comedy, It just blown me off and I was cracking up without caring about my surroundings! 🤣 I'm just wondering why were this nervous? This was just too entertaining. You really kept the pace with the remaining story.

Om's Pagdi's obsession was Hilarious, A Pandit with a pagdi!!? My reaction was same as allt he people out there --- What the F**k!!? 🤣 🤣 I think Shivaay is right, Rudra should stop staying with Omkara Often! 😆 And what was the cherry on top of the cake was Omkara reciting Urdu Shaayri durig the feras 🤣 hat's off to you Omkara!! I wanna give you a standing Ovation 👏

Being bored Anni and ru chabby slept 😆 I can totally imagine this scene and how omkara wanted to Kill khanna for being this late. But then the epic moment, 'We present you SSO's right hand man in a lehenga Choli" 🤣 🤣 I was laughing for quite a moment over here 😆 Khanna ji Der aaye but durust aaye ;) 😃 Just loved it to the core 👏👏

Lastly shivaay's arrogance, - Main train main travel nahi karoonga! 🥱 grow up Shivaay, can't you see there is a herd of rhino's chasing you and instead of saving your self you are showing this nakhre?? 🥱 But then the bet came and then the Dilwaale Dulhaniya Le Jayenge 😳

Poorvika this was Amazing, I repeat, I loved it just too much.

One of the most hilarious story of this T T tales which I won't be able to forgot ever 😃

Much Love,

-Anya.

Originally posted by: Blink_Cat

t whole story is so🤣 read in a go,, its waha waha waha!!!
start with first part, shivaay dnt know bride name, face anything n he was there to save her, so helping awww🤣 n anika plan failed coz of drunk shivaay bt reaturn me kuch tho mila, ek par ek kiss free, n also nxt day a lip lock, kismat hai, of SSO n khidkitod anika ki🤣
2nd part was amazing to, all were there to help them,, n all they want is a train n disaproving father, ddlj, this is what i remember first🤣
3rd part, its just🤣 om with turbun n pandit, n he lie, I was ROFL!! , n khanna 🤣 i love his so much now, boss ke liye jaan haazir, ladki banna tho choti baat hai🤣 n t last scen with train i remember is chennai express, dnt know y,, n that kiss, so amazing n shivaay is pucca bussiness, kiya deal ki hai,
paisa wasul story.!!

Originally posted by: Srivalli.t

Awesome story!!

Loved it.

Enjoyed reading this..

Originally posted by: RingsOfSaturn

Ola people !!!!

So, I had read part 1 a while ago, but now I read the entire story in one go.

😆 😆 😆

Hilarious to the core, well done all three writers, this was typical 'masala magic' writing and the three parts flowed like one hand.

That's because it is clear that all three of you got into the veins of the characters, you all kept it so true to the original characterizations !!!!

I really really enjoyed reading it.

Thank you so much for the appreciation, ROS. I am glad you liked this story .😳😳

Part 3 @ Rainy Season

So, I found myself sailing on the waves of your comic writing as well.
New characters introduced - Omkara as sardarji pandit - always conscious - true to character, his on the spot answers even more hilarious.

I tried putting original characterisation as the previous writers have written tje story with the original flavour only. And, I am glad you found some bits hilarious. 😃😃

And last but not least, main character Khannaji!!! as Ajay's ex - ROFL. Hehehehe. 😆😆

Another master-stroke - Anika ' hawai jahaj mangaoo aapke like'. Thank you. 😛😛

ha ha ha

But Shivaay always gets what he wants in the end, so here they are the marriage party with the dulhaniya!!!!. This line was the exact thing in my mind when I was writing the last part. 😳😳

Well done!

Originally posted by: silver_dustXX

Iss Om ka bhi kya karen😆 his obsession with pagdi, no wonder every single person who knew this wanted to face palm😆

Urdu shayri words with an am, interesting😆. LOL. It feels amazing to find so many people agreeing to this Turban fact. I was quite sceptical about this. 😆😆

Ajay is hands down the dumbest person alive!!!. Hehehe. True that. I intentionally made him a Pappu. 😉😉

But yeah, hero tho humare Khanna hai🤣. Agreed.😃😃

Loved every bits of this update and I dont know why you think comedy is not your forte, this was indeed very funny!. I said so because Comedy is honestly not my forte. I usually write emotional updates only.😳😳

All in all, loved this TS❤️