MG SS Unlawful Desire/Part 8/Pg 61 on 1st May 2020 - Page 20

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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice teaser...
is Maan wife is already pregnant????
Curious to know...
update soon...
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice teaser...
Eager to know about it...
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

thanks for the pm!


get well soon!

intriguing teaser! shall wait!



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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: metromasti

awesome & interesting teaser...

waiting for update
get well soon dear


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Originally posted by: karamjeet

Nice teaser...
is Maan wife is already pregnant????
Curious to know...
update soon...



Hehe let's see her reason 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago






Thank you for your support 😃😃😃











Part 4



"It is scary what a smile can hide"





Geet returned home to see her husband waiting for her. "Daksh.., She whispered shocked. "Hey darl, I had been missing you so I thought to come back to meet you, He smiled hugging her. "So how has my beautiful wife been, He asked.







"I am doing fine but you didn't inform me ...I would have cooked some of your favorites, She said. "Oh, Geet you are not my maid but my wife and we have an array of servants to do that right, He said. Geet knew he didn't liked her in the kitchen but she liked doing small chores for him it made her happy but after a while on his insistence she stopped that. "Alright, if you say so, She said. "Woah, I didn't notice you looked so hot tonight, where are you coming from, He asked. "Umm...just visiting some restaurants ...was bored sitting alone so.., She lied. "Alright, let us go to our room...I have got many things to show you, He said dragging her excitedly. In all this she almost forgot about the trip suggested by Maan.



Daksh showed her all the expensive gifts he bought for her. "These are beautiful, She smiled. "I always want you happy, He said. "I..don't need money Daksh, I need you, the love of my husband, She said. "Oh come on dear, I'm doing all this for us...you know that right, He said. "Are you again leaving for one of your trips, She asked. "I'm sorry Geet, but I am in three days, He said. "Daksh...I want us to be together...I feel lonely, She said.
He hugged his wife, "Geet...our business has grown you know that right...I asked you to join too but you seem happy in your little business...and for me your happiness matters, He tried to make her understand.









"I understand...it is fine, She said. "So how did the outing with your friend go, He asked. She recalled Maan and his offer but remembering the conversation she had with Daksh previously, she didn't know how he would react once he would know that she was cheating on him. "It was good ...ah, I..I wanted to take your permission for something, She contemplated before asking. "Hmm, what is it dear, He smiled. "Actually...I was going on a trip to Rome...so if you could..I mean ...if you don't mind can I go, She asked. "Geet, why do you need permission for anything ...you can go, He smiled. "You sure don't mind, She asked. "I am dear...or do you want me to change my mind. Some refreshing outing will be good for you too, He said. She hated herself for lying but she couldn't help meeting Maan.




Maan on the other hand got home to find his wife waiting. "Where had you been, She asked. "Clients, He responded. "I was waiting for you.., She said. "Anything you want..., He said.







"Maan, I'm your wife...not a client that I will only come to you if I wanted something, She clarified. "I thought you were on one of your trips, He said. "I was...but I thought we should spend sometime too, She said. Maan was apprehensive of his wife for some past few months even before he met Geet. He felt she was hiding something and her demand for a kid was increasing day by day, he wanted a kid at the start of their marriage but she outrightly denied him despite knowing how much he loved kids and now suddenly she wants a baby wasn't going right with him.



"Hmm...alright, He said. "Maan I think we should plan for our baby...I mean you always loved kids and I.. I was a little insecure sharing you with anyone so ..., She said. "Shaina, that will be your kid too and if you have such thoughts then I don't think we should have a baby now, He said. "But I..I want a kid for you...for your happiness...I can see how you look at our friend's children ...you yearn for them and I ...I was being selfish, She sobbed.








Maan made her sit on the couch and gave her some water, "Listen Shaina...it is not only about me and your thoughts about a child are a little uncertain...a child needs a healthy home to grow in a loving family ...I know all that as my parents died when I was only two ...My little sis and Granny were all I had ...until I lost them too...I want my child getting everything that I couldn't ...I think you should think sincerely on this then we will think on what to do. Shaina listened attentively but was in no way going to back down from her demand. "Maan, can't we just sit and have a drink together...as you already had your diner and I cooked all this for you, She said. Maan felt bad but he is just not able to find her sudden love for him ...trustworthy. Nevertheless, he sat down to have a little of whatever she cooked for them. He didn't know all of that was a trap and he fell in that. After a few bites he started feeling dizzy and everything went black...

Geet on the other hand was in a dilemma when she slept. Daksh watched his wife sleep. "I really love your innocent face Geet ...and if you are hiding something then I don't want to ruin everything ...you are my possession and I won't let you go that easy ...so be careful darl, if I can love you to madness ...I can destroy you in that madness too...You are not with a girl ...I will know more about that person before I make my move, He smirked. Both the souls were unaware of the storm awaiting them after the trip.





So here is the next update will be probably giving the next one in this week or the start of next week, please do give your honest reviews😃😃😃



Precap - ??


Note - I will be shifting my stories on blog from the coming updates it is not because of response or anything but the failure to keep my threads active as I'm too much held up these days due to shifting to a new place ...You can like and comment on IF but the updates will be on blog
Edited by pixelflower620 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Buddy
One thing I am sure of shaina...she is already preggers just want to trap maan for that
Say I am right
And this dhaksh what is he buddy
He gave chills to me,he knew Geet isn't with a girl yet gave permission to Rome trip and promised to make a move
Buddy maaneet ko alag karo in Dono se and milav
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Posted: 7 years ago
Shicking part. So daksh is having doubt on geet and that is why he is suddenly here to meet geet where as maan's wife is cooking up something. She made him eat something which made him unconscious. What is she about to do. Though maaneet are cheating their respective partners but they also don't seem inocent to me. This daksh is also seems very dangetous. He claims that he loves and and at the same time he just atay in his trips. Waiting for next dear.
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Posted: 7 years ago
superb update lovely waiting for next
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Posted: 7 years ago
Fabulous Part

Daksh already knows that Geet was not out with a girl and he wants to find out more
while Maan realizes his wife Shaina is showing love and demands a baby something that
seems off with her so he tries to make her understand but instead she planned and it seems
like if she is already pregnant that she will put that on Maan
while Geet tries to explain to Daksh that she wants him by her side and not his money and gifts
seems like there will lots of troubles coming to both Maan and Geet
I'm so eagerly waiting to see what problems come their way and what they are going to do

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