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Posted: 7 years ago
Apologies for been so late
its actually difficult with Ramadaan to
log onto IF
I can now only log on at the end May then again around the 20th June
then I'll be on vacation till the end of July
so please bare with me for this period
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Ryma22

Awesome Super lovely chap... I love the way there are teasing each other 😆and slowly become closer. 😳 The bhooot. Bhoot. Part make me remember The ghost scene in the being of the dangle track. Of rikara. So funny 😃...and my. Fav. Part. Is the last one. ..so sweet. "Akdu sweet singh oberio ". 😊 Tiny creature hhh. And. Ri😳 We are. Waiting for her pati. Her Onkara. to calling her Ri. ... Very. Nice ...thank you for pm


Aww Thank you for such a Lovely comment
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

good that balraj is taming om. he is penniless n he had to stand before gauri for money though he had insulted her in the name of money before.their nok jhok was so cute n funny.om calling her ri. .gauri saying that only her hus can call him like that n om asking if it's shivay n she replied no..again om calling her ri n gauri's reaction was funny


Thanks Dear
Ya OM had a taste of his own medicine 😆

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Originally posted by: AfrinHrid

Awesome update

Very beautifully written
Loved it so much
Waiting for the next chapter
Continue soon


Thanks Afrin 😳
Next will be up by tmrw
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: vj3072

So Mr. Omkara has been fascinated by Gauri...glad that through out the night Om was with her😃 she was not alone😭...


Thanks Dear
But Do not forget that our Cinderella is dabbang ?

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Awesome Chapter

Gauri is a strong woman and that is really fantastic
I liked the relief Om had once he knew Shivaay was not involved with Gauri


Originally posted by: taahir004

Apologies for been so late
its actually difficult with Ramadaan to
log onto IF
I can now only log on at the end May then again around the 20th June
then I'll be on vacation till the end of July
so please bare with me for this period


Bhaiya Thank you
Ya chirrayai is a strong character
No need of Apologies
We get caught up in work and with fasting i know how hectic is it
Take your time Bhaiya
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Chapter 5

Shivaay Reaches the Caf to meet his would be fiance as He sees her waiting for him ..Not bad Punctual Shivaay Muses ..."Hi" ..as The Heiress gives a smile ..."mmm Ragini right?" he asks with not so interested look as She raises her brow ..."So we are Marrying ..Just letting you know beforehand...Our marriage would be just a business deal after all ..Just A Profitable Business " Ragini emphasizes as Shivaay Frowns . Anika Enters the Caf with one of her friend ..Shivaay Spies on her as She nears him He pulls her by her arm as She crashes out to his chest ..Cupping her face in his palms Shivaay Looks remorseful for a minute but swoops her in for kiss... Anika Was shocked due to sudden act as She closes her eyes in pleasure..She had Dreamed To be close to him as Ragini scoffs at them leaving the place tempered..Pulling out from the Kiss Shivaay puts his hands up "Sorry" and leaves the place as Anika looked dazed ...Catching up with him out She shouts "Shivaay"...as Shivaay halts on his steps Regretting but wears his carefree mask soon as She comes face to face "What was that?" she yells at him furiously "A Kiss" He replies nonchalantly as She stares at him scandalized "Are you for real?" she asks him without blinking as she continues as tears made their way out "You used me "...as Shivaay Fumes "I did not use you..Get that ..it was a kiss...Just ..A...Kiss" he tells her word by word as he tried to calm his anger..How could she think that he will use her? As Anika tells with sarcastic laugh "You know I am Fool to still believe that I will get my Old Shivaay back...After that incident 15 years ago who went away from me ? Why Shivaay? ..Still I believe somewhere through that carefree nature I feel my Shivaay is hidden "pushing him away crying she leaves the place as Shivaay's mask starts falling as tear slid down ...He leaves the place ...


Through out the Day Om had a Smile on his face ..He did not know why he had been smiling so much like an idiot ? ..The way She Got pissed when he called her Ri..The way her petite frame matched with his like a long lost puzzle ...her anger her smile ..Everything was infectious ...He hits his head with his palm for thinking nonsense it is nothing he just wanted to piss her so he called her "Ri"..It is nothing he chants to himself.


Gauri enters her home after her work in the night as She finds her Family Settled for dinner including her Father ..Seems like my Papa is back...As Gauri tries to silently sneak into her room she hears her stepmom call her out as Gauri curses herself ...Coming before her Family She sees Roop gives her a fake smile lovingly as Gauri scoffs mentally ..."Why didn't you come for Maa's Pooja" Gauri asks meekly as Her Father snaps at her "Here is your mother "pointing to Roop ..."Why you didn't?" Gauri repeats this time a bit loudly ..."I do not have time to waste for people who are dead "he yells as Gauri answers back fuming "That Person You are Talking is The Women you spend your life with for almost Fifteen years " as Gauri's Father Sharma glares at her as Roop and Ridhimaa smirks ...Unable to take it Gauri leaves to her room to come back frowning "Where are my things?" ..."Oh Dear it is in your Room" Roop tells her lovingly "It is not" She snaps back at her ..."Oh Child it is in the room where you are Ridhimaa had been sharing for years now" She fakes a smile ..."How much do you act? Sharing?" She busts out as Mr.Sharma Slams his hand on the table "Just Shut up Gauri ..How could you even treat her like this? She is your mother who gave your love and care when your own mother wasn't here" as Gauri answers back seething "Care and Love?...Do you know how do they treat me ?" ..


.'Gauri what did I ever to do you my child?..Why do you want to make me bad In front of your father? " She fakes tears as she starts sobbing..."I am just stating facts" Gauri raises her voice as Mr.Sharma loses his temper ends up slapping Gauri as he spats venomously "This is What happens when you raise someone else's child as your own" as Gauri's eyes goes wide horrified as Roop and Ridhimaa gapes and Simultaneously asks "She is not your Child?" as Ridhimaa and Roop look at each smirking smiling inwards ...as Gauri look numbed The man who is in front of her ? Whom she had thought as her father?..How could he? Without a word Flabbergasted She leaves to her room taking out her mother's picture with her She moves out of the house as Roop Shouts from behind as Gauri hears Mr.Sharma Warn them "Don't you dare let her in " but Roop comes running as she faked her tears as She hugs Gauri murmuring loudly "She cannot leave the house like this"... but as She pulls Gauri close and Whispers "That's right when you leave everything will fall back in place "She smirks as Gauri did not respond instead she walks out of the place she had lived her life..She walks out of the place where she had been told she did not belong..


The Nature Witness the indifference Happen to Our Dabbang Cinderella as It starts thundering..raining heavily ...As Gauri soaks in tears as She fell on the Ground crying "I am not his blood.." she shouts loudly as she cocoons herself in the middle of the road hugging her mother's photo close to her chest as She remembers a Memory of her playing with her mother and family happily when she small .."Why mama?" She cries .."Why?"..."How could Paa think that you would Cheat on him?..."...as She stood up determined as She gives her call to Mr.Oberoi through her new brought cell for cheaper rate "Is the Offer valid?" she makes out from the sound that Mr.Oberoi is smiling "Always your welcome"...


Shivaay Falls on the bed as He thought about Anika's words that his true form is hidden within himself as He takes a frame close to his bed as He runs his hands through them as He smiles sadly ..The Picture was Two boys about 12 years hugging a 10 year old as they posed to the picture squealing.


Rudra was Shocked as He thought about the Girl who had kissed him ..He had Many Female fans ..This wasn't the first time someone had kissed him but it felt different He did not know why "Bhavya " he whispers as his lips curved up .


"Khanna Make arrangements "Mr.Oberoi Orders as Khanna nods and takes his leave.


"Everything is Gonna change Come and See for yourself at The Mansion" The Cousins receive a text which is enough for them to drop their works and to head to the mansion. Gauri stands In front of the Oberoi Mansion in the Rain as She closes her eyes asking her maa mentally "It it okay Maa for me to stay here?" ...Just then Khanna arrives with an umbrella asking her to lead the way ...Cinderella Officially enters the Palace With her Three Prince's as They Slow Walk from behind her one by one ..


Once Gauri is In Khanna Tells her "One Condition."NO DATING ANYONE IN THE MANSION".

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So Guys What do you think?

Cinderella has entered the palace with her Princes

How would they Cope up ?

Will She be able to tame?

No Dating ?

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Edited by sh_aarohi - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Amazinggg update 👏Eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 7 years ago
hello! thanks 4 da pm!

tremendous update! well written

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