Sequel FF: Sameer 'sang' Naina (Section V Part 2 updated- Pg 107) - Page 17

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: -Aniisha-

Wonderful update as always Surbhi
Nanu-Sameer part was so emotional
Brilliantly penned 👏
Eagerly waiting for the next part
Thanks for the PM


Hey Aniisha!! Thank you so much dear! Glad you enjoyed the update, especially Nanu- Sameer part...it was emotional for me to write about it too! 😳😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
To say that I absolutely loved the part would be an understatement. Sameer's remnicising about nanu and playing that scene where he confides about his proposal to Naina brought tears literally to my eyes. The entire scene spoke of sensitivity and the emotions raged high with every word that was spun out by you. Sameer remembering the last day with his grandfather and weighing the what ifs felt so real and vivid that I could see how a parallel scene played out in his mind along with what had actually transpired. That was beautifully done really.
The update had it's moments, especially the part where sameer munna pundit are discussing about the cataclysmic reaction of naina's librarian father when he finds out that right under his very nose his dear daughter and not so dear sameer were having their love affair. Am sure that would leave him aghast and he would be all the more stunned with a funny expression pasted on his face. Am really looking forward to that.

Their telephonic conversations of tv were the ones we always enjoyed as audiences and same was the case here. Naina the charming cute innocent Angel that she is actually beloved that all that is to happen after marriage had already transpired. Wonder what her reaction would be when post marriage our teacher professor sameer decides to take her under his wings and decide to teach her about the real tricks that comes with the trade. That would be something to read off. Especially the blushing cute naina is adorable and the reading demon that sameer is it would be fun to read about.


Please I beg your apology for coming in so late since Saturday was my birthday and the whole week I had a truck load of people dropping in to see me so I couldn't comment though I had read the part. But next time I'll try and be prompt. Sorry for the delay.

Loved the part, absolutely smashing in every regard.
Update soon
Will be waiting for more.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: doublecross

To say that I absolutely loved the part would be an understatement. Sameer's remnicising about nanu and playing that scene where he confides about his proposal to Naina brought tears literally to my eyes. The entire scene spoke of sensitivity and the emotions raged high with every word that was spun out by you. Sameer remembering the last day with his grandfather and weighing the what ifs felt so real and vivid that I could see how a parallel scene played out in his mind along with what had actually transpired. That was beautifully done really.

The update had it's moments, especially the part where sameer munna pundit are discussing about the cataclysmic reaction of naina's librarian father when he finds out that right under his very nose his dear daughter and not so dear sameer were having their love affair. Am sure that would leave him aghast and he would be all the more stunned with a funny expression pasted on his face. Am really looking forward to that.

Their telephonic conversations of tv were the ones we always enjoyed as audiences and same was the case here. Naina the charming cute innocent Angel that she is actually beloved that all that is to happen after marriage had already transpired. Wonder what her reaction would be when post marriage our teacher professor sameer decides to take her under his wings and decide to teach her about the real tricks that comes with the trade. That would be something to read off. Especially the blushing cute naina is adorable and the reading demon that sameer is it would be fun to read about.


Please I beg your apology for coming in so late since Saturday was my birthday and the whole week I had a truck load of people dropping in to see me so I couldn't comment though I had read the part. But next time I'll try and be prompt. Sorry for the delay.

Loved the part, absolutely smashing in every regard.
Update soon
Will be waiting for more.

Hey Pooja...first of all...don't worry about being late in replying here dear...I myself have become pretty notorious in this regard 😆 And yes, I wished you a very Happy Birthday on a thread on IF...I guess Mou's come back thread, but here's wishing you again...hope you enjoyed the day to the core! I know dancing n jumping isn't included in the enjoyment haha!
But seriously! Thank you so much dear for taking the time out to reply to the story. I'm really happy that you connected with the range of emotions I wanted to portray here- be it Sameer desperate to share the best moments of his life with his grandfather...we often wish some special people were there with us at times when we are extremely happy. But life is beautiful, yet it is cruel. I wanted to show a flashback of Nanu's death too here as it wavered from what we saw on the show. I initially had no plans to let go of Nanu here, but then I realized it was important to show Sameer becoming responsible n crossing any hurdles in his path on his own.
Safari suit with a funny expression pasted on his face haha...I could imagine that n I'm hoping we would get this situation on the show someday too! That was Sam's achievement n his true love that despite the presence of the cantankerous librarian, he managed to express his love for his daughter. I must say, the actor portraying Rakesh is doing a great job here. We all loathe him n wish he would go away to some Himalayan Mountain n not disturb Samaina n others again. Till then, can only hope we see how the librarian takes the shock of his life lol!
I put in the telephonic conversations as a build-up for the next part. Sam would surely miss his Nanu on the special day n who else can cheer him up but Naina...n Sam would flirt a bit more openly now that's agreed to marry him. Yeah, I guess it would be a massive revelation for Naina to know what exactly happens in a marriage, but I'm sure she come out bold soon n surprise her man!
Thank you once again for the wonderful comment dear! I read it in the morning n it made my day bright!
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hey guys...after a long wait, I'm back with the last part of Section 1. It isn't long- just gives a brief background about things till now...please let me know what you think of it!

Part 4: Sameer's Memories

Sameer was lying on his bed, thinking about all the beautiful times he'd spent with Naina. And today he had finally asked her to marry him. Sameer remembered how each and every time he'd kissed her had been so special for him. He hadn't forgotten a single one of them. He giggled to himself on how Naina used to say, "ye sab sirf shaadi ke baad! Poor Naina, she didn't know the intensity of her own emotions, and Sameer- well Sameer hadn't even expressed half of what he was capable of. Naina, in her innocence, hadn't realized at the time that when two people were in love, it was hard to control the way they expressed it towards each other. All these years, Sameer and Naina had taken care to adhere to their boundaries and the norms of the society, as much as they could. Yet sometimes, they had cheated on the rules and listened to what their hearts told them. They'd come a long way- from hesitant handholds, to side embraces, to hugs, to bone crushing hugs, to pecks on cheeks and finally lip to lip kisses, and soon Sameer dreamt smilingly, beyond. Sameer and Naina knew that deep down, they already considered themselves betrothed to the other. It was just a formal acceptance of this relation that was pending in front of the world.

Four years with Naina had whipped by so fast, Sameer thought. And they had made sure each and every moment they'd spent together was romantic for them- if you excuse the fights they had. There was a certain thrill in trying to keep their love affair under wraps- especially from the prying eyes of her family. Taiji had been very reluctant to allow Naina to go to college. But it was chachaji who had taken a stand for her. "If she wants to pursue her higher education, she would, he had firmly declared, putting a stop to all the discussions in the house.

Sameer and Naina had consciously decided to stay in Ahemdabad and pursue college from there only. While Naina easily got admission in city's best college due to her excellent academic performance, Sameer too secured a place there- aided partly by Naina's help in studies and partly by his excellence in sports. He had not wanted to misuse his Nanu's reputation and wealth to secure an admission. Nor did he want Naina to compromise with her education and choose a college, which was sub-standard for her. And he was pretty sure that Naina was wholly capable of doing something like this, if that meant she would be able to study with Sameer in the same college. All this had made Sameer work pretty hard for his Std. 12th exams- to the extent that he'd enforced strict discipline upon himself just a month before the boards. Naina was surprised, and then irritated and then proud- the boy who could hardly take his eyes off her any other time, rarely turned to look up at her from his books, except when they were studying. Naina happily assumed that he wanted to show his mettle, like he'd wanted to during the headboy competition in 11th, but what she did not know that the real reason behind Sameer's motivation. And then the board results were a pleasant surprise to all. While Naina had as usual topped her school, with a stunning 91% aggregate, Sameer had managed a decent 76% as well. And then with his excellent record in Cricket, he too had gotten admission in Patel Maha Vidyalaya, the best college in Ahemdabad, along with Naina.

Preeti had instead decided to pursue a course in beauty and styling. Because of the insistence of her father though, she had also enrolled for a distance BA programme as well. Munna and Pandit had opted for correspondence courses from the same college as Sameer and Naina, as they had to help their respective fathers manage their family run shops.

Swati had been trying her luck in acting. She had auditioned for a few Gujarati serials. Her acting interviews had often been the place where she got Sameer's company. Sameer had developed a penchant for acting ever since the Romeo-Juliet play happened in school. Now that he had his real-life Juliet by his side, he often tried his hand in college dramas. He was already handsome, was blessed with a nice personality and could emote exceptionally well- as he was told. And when there were times he had to "act in love with someone, Naina would fidget through till the drama was over, her eyes somehow bearing Sameer's lovelorn eyes on some other girl, even though he was only acting; and heave a sigh of relief when her Sameer was back with her. Sameer knew Naina's insecurities too well. So after every such role, he would come back and pull her into a warm, crushing hug, and since last year, also shower her with a few long, ardent kisses. Sameer was aware how much his proximity to another girl, even in a drama, bothered her. But he also knew that Naina trusted him and loved seeing him on stage, living his new-found passion. He'd often tried to cajole Naina to try out for theatre too and she would say, "Are you mad? Classes miss karun? Finally, after a year of convincing, Naina had tried out for a supporting role, wherein she'd ended up bagging the role of the female lead- that too, opposite Sameer. Sameer's joy knew no bounds as he shouted out to the director, "arey ache romantic scenes likhna...gale vale bhi lagwa dena 10-12 baar...kiss-viss bhi chalega..., only to receive a smack on his shoulders by a red-faced Naina.

Naina's father had blasted her for auditioning for the role, once he learnt that Sameer was playing the male lead. "Wo bigdail...wahan bhi hero banne aa gaya! Kaise jhelegi tu use? he had barked out loud, while Preeti had silently snickered as her eyes had met Naina's. "Arey jaane dijiye na bhaisahab...to kya hua...sirf acting hi to karni hai...kaunsi sach mein Naina Sameer se pyaar kar rahi hai..., assuaged chachaji. Luckily, chachaji hadn't seen the colour in Naina's cheeks at these lines, nor did he notice the pangs of guilt reflecting in her eyes. Rakesh had finally acquiesced; as chachaji went on to explain about how extra-curricular activities were important to shape the personalities of young students.

Naina and Sameer's first play together had actually been a superhit in college. Their chemistry had set fire to the stage. Very few people knew about their relationship status officially, though many did suspect and tease them. But the rest of the audience was oblivious to the fact that Sameer and Naina were not just acting in love. Instead, they were expressing their true feelings towards each other in public, under the garb of acting. On seeing the talent in Naina, the theatre group tried to rope her for a few more dramas, and Sameer made sure she had to miss as less classes as possible. That meant rehearsal after class, and an official excuse that Naina could cite at home, to spend time with her lover.

Sometime during their second year, history repeated. It had been Sameer and Naina's unfulfilled dream to play Romeo and Juliet together- the chance they'd missed out upon in school due to their misunderstandings. How Naina wished she hadn't backed out from the play at that time, and Sameer wished that he hadn't acted like a complete jerk- trying to kiss her hand for a bet.

It was nearing the end of their first performance of Romeo and Juliet that Sameer had improvised at the last minute. Similar to the time, he'd fainted just before he had to kiss Swati's hand in school. How Naina used to laugh now, thinking that if Sameer had indeed kissed Swati's hand as a part of the play, he would have been sworn to her. Here too, Romeo was to kiss his Juliet's hand, before he decides to pierce himself with his sword. Sameer had held the palm of his apparently lifeless Juliet, in his hands, and kissed it longingly, as Romeo howled in the pain of separation from his beloved. And then sobbing, he'd stood on his knees, and caressed her cheeks, looking at her with all the love he harboured for her. It was as if Romeo was trying to catch a last glimpse of his love. He flicked a strand of hair away from her face, and then like Romeo sealing his bond with his Juliet, Sameer kissed Naina on her cheeks. He'd wanted to kiss her lips, but controlled himself vehemently. He did not want them to become the talk of the town nor mar Naina's image in anyway. Naina had found it hard to maintain her composure and act unconscious, as Sameer's lips touched her cheeks. And then Sameer shrieked out loudly in pain, as Romeo punched his dagger in his stomach and fell down to the ground in a heap. The audience gobbled down the expression of romance with a tumultuous applause. Such was the magic of Sameer's lovelorn eyes and his romantic kiss. Once the curtain had fallen, Naina mumbled to him, "wo kya tha? "School ke play me tumhe kiss karna reh gaya tha na...yahan mauka kaise chodta? he winked at her as he grinned naughtily.

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Soon, Sameer's mind drifted to the literature festival in Darjeeling. In their second year of B.A., Naina had been chosen to give a speech on fictional writing. Apart from Naina's innocence, this was one thing that hadn't changed in her- she was still the teacher's pet, Sameer giggled to himself. He'd been really proud that Naina had been chosen to represent their college. But then he'd felt a bit sad, thinking that he wouldn't be able to see her for a few days when she would be in Darjeeling. And then as if God understood his dilemma, Prof. Goswami had asked Sameer to accompany Naina to Darjeeling and recite his best poems in the festival, as well as talk on how poetry helped him express his emotions. Prof. Goswami was a big fan of Sameer's poetry and he wanted the world to know his talent. It had been Naina's persuasion and encouragement, as well as the thought of being with Naina in Darjeeling, all alone, which made Sameer accept this proposal.

The entire trip had been extremely special for the couple. This was their second trip after Mt. Abu, and this time- both of them were madly in love, there were no secrets between them and also no family members to disrupt their romance. Sameer recalled the evening of the end of the trip. That evening had been tremendously magical. Yes, magical not for one, but for two reasons- one was that both Sameer and Naina had delivered excellent speeches and received standing ovations from the crowd. Sameer had been apprehensive initially, but having Naina by his side had made him overcome his fears. He had just stood on the stage and looked over at her, beaming at him. And then he'd forgotten the speech he'd prepared and spoke from his heart. The rhyming words which had rolled out of his mouth were nothing but pure love, love he'd harboured for Naina since long; love that grew deeper with each passing day. The second reason which had made that evening of the trip magical was that it was then, there in Darjeeling, that Naina and Sameer had shared their first intimate moment together- their first kiss! Sameer closed his eyes as he remembered that night- one of the most special nights of their lives, and dreaming about it, fell into a deep slumber.

Edited by Samaina_1990 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

First of all so sorry dear.. I know, I am super late in commenting

And I want to tell you something that, I don't know how to analyze the stories and review them.. I can only analyze and review the company's financial performance.. which I have learned in my course..

I know, you might think that I'm crazy, but yes actually I am.. actually I can't do this.. mujhe bohot sochana padata hai ki kya likhu main.. pehle hi maafi maang leti hu, koi bhi galti hui to

Ok this update was really nice.. I really liked it!!

But ittusa update.. Koi nahi section ka last part tha esliye

I am happy both respect each other's boundaries.. but sometimes cheating is good na because we can't control our emotions 😉

You have fulfilled my wish dear.. I really wanted to see Sameer and Naina are playing Romeo and Juliet.. par kisine OS bhi nahi likha uspe main to sirf wait karti gayi ki kab koi likhega par tumne iss part mein likh diya.. thank you so much dear.. 😳

I loved the last part.. their first intimate moment, the first kiss.. ☺️

Aur kya likhu sabne sab kuch likh hi diya hoga..

Aur sorry dear.. us din maine first congo thread banaya tha to achhe se nahi bana payi, jab tum Rockerz banogi tab bohot achha wala thread banaugi agar IF use kar rahi hongi to 😊

Thanks for the PM dear..

Edited by msdfan - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hey didi! First of all, khaan pakde maafi for being super late to read and review..there is a sudden increase in stories, there are still a lot left to review..thought to read at night but I was too tempted to do that..so here I am...will review expectedly unexpected today itself...

After such a heart rending update, you have kept this light hearted..You have balanced it out well..
Without Naina being present, you gave their lot of moments through Sameer's memories..I completely loved this update...

Sameer respected Naina's boundaries and Naina has respected the norms of the society yet sometimes they had succumbed to their heart desires...
The heart wants what it wants...
Liked how you showed their slow transition in physical intimacy..it actually felt so real reading it considering you have kept Naina and Sameer in their character as per the show..Kudos to you!

Haha, of course, the thrill of loving somebody without anyone knowing is something else...That chup chupke phone calls, almost getting caught etc...
Sometimes it's fun to break all those unsaid rules...

Chachaji, as always stood by Naina and her decisions..
It was nice to read how Naina was guilty when Chachaji said she wasn't really in love with Sameer..
Would love to see a scene between Chachaji and Naina after the revelation of her marrying Sameer...

Wow! What a beautiful thought you had here...Instead of naina joining VJN that would be lowered than her capabilities, you made Sameer work here, challenging himself and trying to provide the best of himself...that was amazing and the result of his hardwork was 76% but in love, he had got himself a 100%...
Liked how you mentioned the other four's thoughts on career after 12th..

So Sameer had got a passion for acting and he developed it in Naina's mind too...
How much ever you trust them, you can't help be a little jealous when what's yours is being shared..haha...Loved Sameer's act of reassurance! He's giving some tough competition to other boys, hehe.

So much like Sameer to say to put a lot of romantic scenes in the script after Naina being confirmed as the female lead. I so want a 'passionate in love' Sameer during this college track, its the right time to explore all these angles.

Of course, the drama would be superhit after who wouldn't burn in their blazing chemistry!?
Haaye, I could literally imagine Sameer as Romeo, expressing his anguish but little did the audience know how he was enjoying expressing his love for 'Juliet' Naina under the pretence of acting..

What's with your love for hill stations!? First Manali, now Darjeeling..hehe, doesn't matter at all as hill stations are romantic and soothing to be in..
Destiny has their own plans, allowing the lovebirds to share some moments away from the prying eyes..
Didi!? Aapne hume unka kiss kaisa hua nahi bataya...next update mein haina woh?
Excited for the next section of the story!





Edited by Mayashika - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Perfecttt!!!! I'm in love with this❤️
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Originally posted by: 9211

Perfecttt!!!! I'm in love with this❤️


Thank you dear! 😳
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Amazing as always i have no words to describe this beautiful update their love is unconditional and they are made for each other 😳 waiting for the next update please update soon 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
This time I will take too much time.. because 7 stories are still pending 😒

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