Ishra TS: Na Jaane Kab Pyaar Ho Gaya (Part 6 on pg 37 on 31/5/2020) - Page 5

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: akriti154

Interesting prologue nishu

Congratulations for ur new story
Continue soon

thank you di
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Divanru

Congratulations for new story .

Introduction is nice.
Waiting for iyers background too .
Do update ASAP.

thank you di
will updt soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thank you so much for the response. Glad you all liked the concept. I disclosed Ishita's profession in first part, hope you will like it...

Part-1
A lady wearing white shirt with black trouser, a strong and healthy lady, no zero figure conscious mind, entered in a bungalow of one of the successful businessman, Mr Om Prakash Bhalla. Guards asked her identity to which she answered, "Ishita. Guard recognized her as Mr Bhalla already informed him about her arrival and let her go inside after a quick checking by police officers as per the strict instructions given by their senior to check each and everyone as these days Bhallas are having many problems. She walked inside and greeted Mr and Mrs Bhalla who were waiting for her in hall. They discussed a little for which she came here when their elder son, Mr Raman Kumar Bhalla came there talking on phone. Mr Bhalla called him and he quickly ended call and came to them. He saw Ishita and asked who is she to which Mr and Mrs Bhalla introduced her as new teacher who will give home tuitions to Aditya, Raman's son. He asked for her details and all but Mr Bhalla said that he had verified everything and she is very good teacher as well as good person. Raman didn't say anything else and went for office while Mrs Bhalla tried to stop him for breakfast but he went out without paying attention. Mrs Bhalla took Ishita to Adi's room where the 10 years boy was getting ready for school by his Simmi bua and Rinki bua while his Romi chachu and Mihir mamu were helping them and the main motive of everyone was to pamper their little prince and jaan of the family. Ishita was watching all this with a smile when Toshiji told her that Adi is the apple of the everyone's eyes. All loves him so much and this is the daily routine, first they all four started the day by waking him up, getting him ready for school and feeding him with their own hands along with their little masti then Mr Bhalla dropped him to school and picked him from school, when he came back, its time for Mrs Bhalla to pamper him and in evening both Mr and Mrs Bhalla use to play with her in garden, then again night time with his bua, chachu and mamu who helps him in his homework if there is something remaining otherwise they use to play some games and all four tell him bed time story. Their day starts with Adi and ends with Adi only. Ishita noticed his father missing in his daily routine.

Mrs Bhalla introduced Ishita to Adi and all and after a little chit chat Ishita left from there informing them that she will come in evening while Bhallas got busy in their routine. In evening, Ishita came and first got friendly with Adi, then she started teaching him.

At 9 pm, Raman came back from office and was going to his room when he heard some unknown voice from Adi's room. He knew that it's time when Simmi, Rinki, Romi and Mihir use to play with him but went to check who is this unknown person. He entered inside only to see Ishita there happily playing carom with others. All were busy in their game and failed to notice him, so to gain their attention, he asked little loud which made all to stop playing while Adi hugged Simmi scared of his loud voice and not looking at Raman which Ishita noticed.

R(loudly)-What's going on here?

Ishita-Mr Bhalla, please aaram se. Bachcha dar rha hai itni tez aawaz se. Aap...

Raman got angry and interrupted her while all four looked at each other as Ishita dared to advise him and they knew Raman don't like if someone try to advise him like this.

R(loudly)-Excuse me. Who are you to advise me? This is my house and I will do whatever I want. And by the way, can anyone tell me what she is doing here at this time.

Mr Bhalla-She will stay here only from now onwards.

They saw Mr and Mrs Bhalla standing at the door.

R(rudely)-Why? She is Adi's teacher so why will she stay here.

Mr Bhalla-First of all, this is not a way to talk Raman. Behave yourself. Your rudeness is increasing day by day. Try to control on your anger before it will harm you. And lastly, Ishita will stay in our house only for few days. I had decided and it will not change. I hope you will respect my decision.

Saying so he was going but stopped and said,

Mr Bhalla-Ishita puttar, on behalf of Raman, I'm...

Ishita-Please uncle, don't say anything. It's just Adi was scared so I just said. Sorry.

All left one by one. From next day, Ishita started living in Bhalla house. She used to go out for her work in morning and always come back in evening and starts teaching Adi. She also became a part of the family as all were soft except Raman. Ishita noticed that he just comes late night, eats and sleeps and then again goes to office without having breakfast in the house and she never saw him interacting with his family, spending time with them. He has no time for his son even, forget about others, Ishita was teaching Adi from last 10 days but he never ever came to her to know about Adi's studies and she never saw him with Adi, even on Sundays. While Ishdi bond grew with time. At the other side, Raman tried a lot to know about Ishita and even tried to follow her or trace her but he ever succeeded as he was unknown to the fact that the person whom he is trying to trace is herself keeping an eye on him and his family. She always got to know him following her and it's not a big thing for her to save herself from these type of situations, after all she is professional in these works. Now Raman was hell tired of it but was more curious to know about her.

It was another day when Mr Bhalla along with Romi, Mihir, Simmi and Rinki (all works in their office only) came in evening little early and announced a successful completion of a big project by Raman along with Romi and Rinki. He announced a party after two days in Bhalla house only. All happily started preparations for the party and Mr Bhalla told Ishita to help in the preparations. Next two days passed with preparations. On the day of party, in evening, everything and everyone was ready for the party. Raman came from office and saw all arrangements were done. It was beautiful and definitely different from the previous parties they used to have, he was thinking reason behind it when he heard,

Simmi-Wow Ishita, it's so so so beautiful.

Rinki-And thankfully it's not boring too.

Mihir and Romi-And different from previous ones.

Simmi-Yes.

Rinki-And for that we should thank Ishita ji who did all this. Thank you so much Ishita ji.

I-Oh please Rinki, no need of thanks. I'm happy and satisfied that I could do something for you. You all deserve this, after all you did a lot of hard work.

Romi-In that case Ishita ji, Raman Bhai is more deserving, he...

I-Please Romi, don't spoil my mood by taking his name. I mean yes, I know he is your hero in business but zero in family values. Leave it. I don't want to spoil your mood.

After that they talked normally while Raman heard everything and firstly, he was impressed that she has courage to do new changes in his house but he was suspicious too and later he got angry that how could she say something about him like that but he also knew that she was right too. He was lost when he heard Simmi who gave complement to Ishita that today she is looking beautiful and different. Raman saw her, she was wearing a long kurti with legging, it was the first when she was wearing something different as she used to wear shirt and pant daily. He was looking at her thinking that maybe he had seen her earlier also like this but didn't remember. Mihir saw him and told him to get ready soon and he left from there. Soon Party started. After sometime Raman too arrived. After about half an hour, Khurana family arrived, Mr and Mrs Khurana along with Param Khurana, Simmi's would be fianc and their second son, Rajiv Khurana. Bhallas happily welcomed them. After sometime, one more family arrived, Iyer family (Mr and Mrs Iyer, their daughter Vandu with her husband Bala), another big family in business world. Mr Bhalla and Mr Iyer are good friends also as both did many successful joint projects together and their children are also become good friends now. Bhallas welcomed them too. Ishita came there to call Romi for something when she saw Iyers. Mrs Iyer saw her and came forward to her, she was about to hug her when Ishita folded her hands and greeted her which broke her trance and she composed herself. Raman saw her changed behaviour but soon all got busy in party while Ishita was taking care of Adi and the arrangements. When all guests came, Mr Bhalla called Raman, Romi and Rinki on stage and congratulated them and wished them all the best for their future. Trio cut the cake together and fed their parents first then each other. Simmi came to Param and was taking him on stage when there was power cut making it dark. All started shouting when Simmi screams and all panicked. After few seconds, power came. All saw Simmi lying on floor. Bhallas rushed to her and made her sit. Raman shouted for police inspector. Ishita came there after few seconds with Adi. Mr Bhalla asked where she was while she answered that she was with adi and they were coming when it happened. Ishita told Neelu to take Adi inside. They sprinkled water on Simmi's face and she gained her senses. In mean time, police inspector too came there. Ishita asked Simmi what happened with her to which she said that someone injected her in her hand and she fainted. Raman shouted on inspector while Mr Bhalla asked Raman to calm down. Inspector informed that they can continue the party as they had already caught real culprit to which Param asked to show who is behind Simmi but inspector said that he is with them and they can meet him later and he left. Param tried but Mr. Bhalla stopped him. They apologized to all guests and soon party started again. After sometime, they asked guests to have dinner and soon guests started leaving after dinner. Only Khannas were left in Bhalla house now on Mr Bhalla's insistence and all were waiting to know who is that person who is trying to trouble Simmi from last few weaks. Inspector came there and all asked who is that person to which he said that his senior will answer to their questions and Param and Raman were the first one to ask who is their senior and inspector pointed towards the stairs where Ishita was coming after leaving Adi with neelu. She came down and introduced herself as Acp Ishita Iyer making almost everyone shocked, only Mr and Mrs Bhalla and Iyers knew it.

Raman -Papa, what's going on here?

Mr Bhalla-This is right Raman. She is police officer. Ishita puttar who is that person.

Ishita-Wait uncle. Sab pta chalega. Vo person yahi hai, hum sabke sath.

Mr Bhalla-Par tune to kaha tha ki tumne usse pakad liya hai.

I-I thought that it's your personal matter so decision should be yours that you want to disclose it in front of whole business world or not because that person is none other than Param Khurana.

All got shocked while Param started his acting that this is not true and all but Ishita asked him to stay quiet and an officer brought a laptop. Ishita played a video on it and showed to everyone and then explained to all. After the incident when party again started, Param excused himself and went upstairs and looked where he should go. After thinking for few seconds, he went to Romi's room and then in balcony thinking there is no camera but Ishita had already fixed camera at each and every corner of the house. There he took out an injection from his blazer's pocket and after cleaning it to remove his fingerprints, he threw it out in garden and left from there smirking at his plan. As the video completed, Raman slapped Param hard and asked why he was doing all this. His parents too slapped him and asked reason. Finally, he told them that he wanted to take revenge from Raman because of whom he lost his sister, Shagun. His father slapped him again as he is still blaming Raman for that incident. Eight years passed but Param still thinks that Raman should be careful about Shagun's safety in Nainital as that area was accident prone area. That time also he blamed Raman and his parents somehow made him understand but that time he became silent seeing the situation. He always wanted to take revenge from Raman but was finding way and few months ago when his parents talked to him about his marriage with Simmi, he thought it's right way to trouble Raman through Simmi. Soon their marriage was arranged and Param became more friendly to Simmi to know her whereabouts of every second and started troubling Simmi at home, office and in different places. In one such party, when Simmi was found to be locked in a room, Mr Iyer talked to Mr Bhalla who was looking worried and he told him everything. Mr Iyer suggested him to take Ishita's help and Ishita made a secret plan and came to bhalla house as a teacher.

Param apologised to Simmi and also told he is not interested in marrying her. Ishita told that as Mr Bhalla complained and he is caught so they have to arrest him. Ishita and other officers too left with Param while Khuranas apologised and left. Mr Bhalla went to police station with Raman to take back the report and complete formalities and Param was released after formalities. Mr Bhalla thanked Ishita and both came back. While Mr and Mrs Khurana sent Param out of country to keep him stay away from Bhallas and warned him emotionally not to do anything now.

That's all for this part. Rest of the secrets will be disclosed in upcoming part. Waiting for reviews...

Precap-More about Ishita.
Edited by Kadianvi - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#44
Updated first part. Hope you will like it...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#45
Awesome update
Ramaan is such a angry young man
Adi is scare of him
Param is culprit who was troubling simmi coz he think shagun died due to raman carelessness
Ishu reveal her identity in front of all
Update soon
Thanks for PM
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Posted: 7 years ago
#46
Awesome start!!
Ishu is a police officer
Different one!!
Waiting for the story to unfold
Update soon
Thnx for the pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
#47
Its so amazing update.
Ishita she js not teacher
She is police officer.
Thanks for updating
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Posted: 7 years ago
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superb update
raman is so rude person ishita joined bhalla house as adis teacher raman was suspicious about her he tried to get information about her he many times followed her but she was so smart she knew he was following her ishita and adi bonded very well raman even doesn't care for adi poor boy felt bad for him everyone pamper adi except raman ishita notices raman never spend time with adi bhallas threw party on succession of big project ishita made the arrangements all were praising her raman was impressed with ishita but git angry when she said raman is so rude but understand she is right in party khuranas came iyers also came amma was going to hug ishita but she stepped back raman notices someone attacked simmi police tightened the security and said they have caught the real cultprit and will tell after party will get over after party got over everyone left except khuranas raman asked who is the culprit PI said their senior will tell ishita came there and introduces herself ACP ishita all were shocked except bhallas and iyers as mr,iyer had suggested ishitas name when mr.bhalla had told him about attacks on simmi ishita said culprit is param but he started acting innocent ishita shows proof params parents slapped him he told them why he did all this he blames raman for shaguns death ishita said they have arrest param she left arresting param waiting for more revelation about ishita
pls update soon
thanks for the PM
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Posted: 7 years ago
#49
Awesome update dear
So ishu is a police office
Raman is a angry man
Poor adi scare of him
So paran was the one Troubling simmi
Continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome update
Raman was so rude
Ishita had got so friendly with everyone
Ohhh so she was an acp😲
So param was behind all this to take revenge from raman
Lets see what happens next
Ty 4 d pm too

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