This Sun Shines even at Night. Suraj

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This Sun Shines even at Night... Suraj

Neend na aarahi... yes but this did not stand out for me yesterday... What stood out, the Sun shine even at middle of the night.

And the line which hit me hard..Make her into Saanvi Rajvanshi (the pride he had in pronouncing RAJVANSHI) but not with his quality though she is his blood but make her brave and fearless (he did not say bold and beautiful)... my eyes were moist...

She could not sleep... I knew, nothing new...

He could not sleep either... I knew, nothing new

But... Saanvi too could not sleep ... This is indeed new... Yes she is also missing her dadda's special lullaby...

My adories were shattered over the happenings.

Law did not threaten him when he was wrong (when he slit the inspector's tongue)

Will law threaten now when his right? ...

Neend naaarahi????? Yes even I could not sleep but felt happy that I didn't for I would have missed to see my Sun shine even at the middle of the night...

The man who seldom speaks before his Chakor, spoke, spoke and every line he spoke was like a streak of gold..

The Lord judges on innocence but the Law judges on evidence... ( I stood up... dude but you are so pure so pure that even a Swan (the one which could separate water and milk )can judge you effortlessly.

The sun never sets, it is just that the world spins and it goes to the other side of the planet... The Lion never sublime even when it is caged...

The chirpy bird was devastated... For she could not gather herself... her wings are wet with her inconsolable tears...as we know she is that eagle for others but in her Suraj's world she is that little chirpy bird...who wants that warmth, incubation and just want to infuse in the Lion's hug, that aggressive hug ... but my dude is also the tortoise who incubates with his thoughts too...

She flew down ... even in that middle of the night... she just wanted to be with him...What a telepathy they knew they could not close their eyes... She was looking like an innocent child (Meera was tooo awesome throughout yesterday) she was no less than Saanvi... He was just chewing what was happening not able to handle, trying to understand but the moment he heard her, he just forgot everything... For his world is in front of him, for he is seeing her completely disintegrated. The way she sobbed saying I could not sleep without you,,,I cannot live without you, the Haveli is empty without you... he knew for he did not say what he always say... even during the bandhuva and even during the memory loss days he used to say Chakor Kuch tho Karo! Please... But he saw his bird baffled with eyes full of tears, he took charge complete charge.

The sun indeed started to shine ...incubate her, just that simple hold of her hands, so softly, she felt solace, what he said made me numb, yes I know even I was wondering... he did not say how will you sleep but spoke those beautiful words... Wondering how you will handle this difficult phase without me.. Saanvi, mummy and household... but you will have to... and you will..

I saw the MAN that MAN who stood by his words even she was jailed that he will work hard for their happy livelihood has indeed done enough... He knows he is innocent but if proven otherwise... (No dude you will never be penalized as you have gone through hell and she had indeed gone through since her birth and only this 1.5 years she had been happy happy with you). What a change he did not even complain about Karan... (God please his books has only lot of positives... ) He wants his world and his life to have the safest living... Quickly gives her the instructions, SR is not listening to his heart but listening to his brain... Change Haveli to your name (Security of living) the Lucknow account has enough money (Financial stability) so educate Saanvi and don't tell anything about him as he had promised to her in Chakor's womb that he will provide all the happiness to his little one and wants no shade of darkness on her ... for he is still the victim of his past his father's past deeds and he never wanted his child to be brought up like how his father brought him...The Sun shined ...

She just sobbed inconsolable, why are you saying this, you will not be punished...you are innocent... The otherwise Police personnel would have driven her but I felt they too were lost in my adories as the inspector was just looking at them...

He was happy when she cupped him... she is his strength, just her feel makes him happy but she is completely shaken, that slight kiss on her hands affirming, thanks for being there always, just your feel on my cheeks infuses you into me, albeit the bars...he would have thwarted those iron bars to hold her take her into him...but he is not that old Suraj... He is now the law abiding citizen...

The lion did bring her close to him for he knows she will need to infuse into him to gather herself... the Sun gave her that warmth... He wanted her to see her smile always... He smiled so beautifully just cannot get over that DIP eyes... So she had to smile back... she had to get back... he nodded her to go but held her as he wanted to feel her till the tips of their fingers part... they both imbibed and infused each other...

No big emotions... No high voice... no glares, no fire but indeed the Sun did shine even at the middle of the night...

(MeeJay were so so so beautiful that I am not getting any more words to describe them... as suraj rightly said if he has to talk about his love for her all the words will not be sufficient... I am also in the same state as I am left with no words from the dictionary)

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sumsukor thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shreeti.sukor

This is so emotional. 😭


Thanks shreeti indeed it was
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow sumi!!!! Amazing amazing is only what I can say...A big bold like only...No words ...You have said it all...It's just to be read and felt and immerse oneself in...😳😳😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanks a lot nikki for those BIG words
Means a lot 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Oh! Sumi..u made me cry dear.😭...so emotional.😭 ..d episode plus ur writing is just so heartwrenching..can"t see my adories devastated...oh god why??? .why dey have to pay d price always...d way he tried to b d lionheart giving instructions to secure his wife and child was heartbreaking..and dat small kiss on her hand...and how he tugged her close giving all d warmth of his love to b strong.. and as u said meera (chakor) how innocently she was listening to him with tears...and SURAJ he knows she may b stronger for d outer world but in real she is just a naive girl who wants to b in d shadows and warmth of her hubby..d scene was really painful dear...I was just thinking how our little bird and her baby is going to survive dis harsh world without our ROARINGLION...but i believe "truth always triumphs" and our sukor will emerge victorious come wat may. Their love is too strong for any opponents...as u said no words to appreciate our adories MEEJAY "for taking scenes to such higher notches ..and we r left stunned .....proud to be a Meejayian ...proud to be a sukorian...
And one more thing dear...i know she is not worth to be mentioned in dis postdear...but I want to lighten up ur mood...so here goes d joke of dyear...d it dialogue of deviji..."DAT she has never cared for money..." wen karan was bargaining🤣... LOL.🤣... I think she is suffering frm amnesia...she has done even trafficking in d name of money last track...i was in splits...how d cvs like to whitewash her everytrack..and gift her new partners in crime...lucky her... so here goes my jhaadu ki jhappi to my sumi.. 🤗🤗 AS U SAID OUR SUN SHINES EVEN AT NIGHT AND I"M WAITING EAGERLY FOR IT TO COME OUT OF ITS ECLIPSE AND EMBRACE HIS LOVE.. HIS LIFE...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Absolutely he is the sun light and he is the moon light also...wishing god will help him to sustain his shine always like this...fabulous way of writing...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Viji, that's a lovely one
Thanks for the hugs...means a lot.

Seriously devi... And the way she said i am keeping all my lives earning buried. My f***... What she worked and saved . She murdered and stole . But one thing leave apart she still fears about chakor.. I like that and she unknowingly is bringing the tigress into the project... Waiting for the Eagle to unearth everything ..


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