#3Song Osthon #3 Thank you note on pg 96 May 22 - Page 24

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Posted: 7 years ago
Amazing.
That kidnapper scene Hahaha awesome
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Posted: 7 years ago
what a sweet unique concept.Raman as a tv star and ishita as his fan.their first meeting was cute.Raman was so helpful.their second meeting was hilarious.they fell in love and got married without any unnecessary melodrama. sweet that ruhi was born for them.beautiful song
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Posted: 7 years ago
Superb os
Loved it ..
Raman actor ishu his fan..
Raman helped ishu ..
Omg kidnapper scene was hilarious..
Ishra got married n blessed with baby girl..
Beautifully written ..

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Posted: 7 years ago
AMAZING UPDATE
thanks for pm
Edited by Dhiyashah - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
superb os
ishu was Ramans fan
they met each other and eventually started dating and got married with their parents permission
they even had a baby girl ruhi
loved it
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome os di.
Totally loved it so much.
Raman is a actor. Ishu is a big fan of yhm. Raman proposed ishu after 6 moths of dating. Ishu accepted it. Finally they got married and blessed with a baby girl.
Thanx for the pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hey guys, I am back with another Song OS Thon. I am really very sorry that I couldn't update last time because of some reasons. But today I am back with my another OS and this OS is suggested by Cutieruhi aka Raksha Di. Enjoy reading.


Tere Bin Jee Na Paunga

Raman Kumar Bhalla one of the top businessman and most handsome, charming and the most eligible bachelor and also love singing. Ishita Khanna a successful dentist, she is the epitome of beauty and love dancing. Both Ishra were living in orphanage till the age of 7. They both met in orphanage and become best of friends. When both turn 7 both were adopted by two rich families Bhallas and Khannas. Bhalla's adopted raman while Khanna's adopted ishita. Bhalla's and Khanna's were best friends so Ishra were always together. As the time passes both fell in love and confessed. Their parents also didn't have any problem with their relationship rather they were very happy. Both are now engaged to each other and leading a happy life together when an incident changed their life but not their love for each other.


Raman entered ishita's room silently not to disturb her. He start decorating the room without making noise. After getting satisfied with the decoration he moved to the bed where ishita is sleeping peacefully. Raman settle beside her and held her hand and said kissing her forehead closing his eyes.


Raman- Happy Birthday Jaan


Ishita open her eyes and said kissing his forehead


Ishita- Thank you happy


Raman- Aise karta hai koye hai apne happy ko thank you


Ishita- Ha toh apni jaan ko birthday bhi aise kon wish karta hai


Raman- Acha ji toh kaise karte hai


Ishita- Aise


Saying so she pulled him from his collars and kissed him, both kissed passionately. Both parted after sometime feeling loos of oxygen, both were panting while raman join their forehead.


Ishita- Aise karte hai samjhe mere buddhu ram.


Raman- Samajh gaya meri jaan


Ishita(keeping her hand on his cheek)- Always keep smiling raman


Raman intertwined his fingers with her and kept their intertwined hand on his heart and said


Raman- If you are with me then I am always smiling


Ishita- I am always with you raman


Saying so she kissed on his forehead while raman close his eyes smiling. He was sitting there closing his eyes when he felt a hand on his shoulder. He open his eyes and saw Mrs. Khanna standing there with moist eyes.


Raman- Are mama aap ro kuy rahe ho, aaj toh khushi ka din hai, aaj hamari ishu ka birthday hai.


Mr. Khanna- Par beta...


Raman- Don't tell me mama ki aap bhool gaye.


Raman(turning towards ishita)- Dekh ishu mama tumhara birt...


He couldn't complete when he saw ishita laying on bed in a very deep sleep with some wires attach to her body. Tears start flowing from his eyes and he started crying holding their intertwined hand on his heart. Mrs. Khanna hold raman's shoulder while raman hug Mrs. Khanna by her waist crying.


Mrs. Khanna- Sambhal lo apne aap ko beta


Raman- Aur kitna sambhalu mama, nahi jee paa raha hu abh ishu ke bina. Har rooz is umeed se uthta hu ki aaj vo utegi.


Mrs. Khanna- Aur kitne intezar karoge raman


Listening this raman broke the hug and look towards her. Mrs Khanna settle near him and said


Mr. Khanna- Raman 7 saal ho gaye hai ishita ko coma me gaye hue, I think tumhe ishita ko bhool kar ek naye zindagi shuru karni chiya. Aur kitne intezar karoge raman


Raman- Apni aakhri saans tak. Mai aage nahi badh sakta mama, mai toh abhi bhi wahi kadha hu jaha ishu mujhe 7 saal phele chodkar gaye thi. Kaise bhool jao ishu ko mama mera toh hona usse hi hai.


Mrs. Khanna- Jeete raho beta aur mai prathna karungi ki tumhara payar hamare ishu ko jaldi wapas le aye.


Raman- Mama mai ishu ke saath todhi der akele rehana chata hu.


Mrs. Khanna- Zaroor beta agar kisi cheez ki zaroorat ho toh bata dena.


Raman nodded while Mrs. Khanna left the room. Raman then turn towards ishita and said holding her hand


Raman- Jaldi uth jao ishu warna aise na ho bhaut der ho jaye aur tumhare intezar mai meri saanse tham jaye, Kuyki Tere Bin Jee Na Paunga. Tumhe mera gaana bhaut pasand hai na. Toh aaj mai tumhare janam din par tumhare liye ek gaana gaunga shayad meri takleef sunkar tum wapas aa jao.


Tere bin jee na paunga
Sach much mar hi jaunga
Yeh tay hai, yeh tay hai...

Hasna rona tujhse hi
Mera hona tujhse hi
Yeh tay hai, yeh tay hai


He bend down and and kissed her forehead loving and kept his head on her heart


Maujood hai har saans mein
Tu har dafa, yeh tay hai
Tu hai dawa, ya dard hai
Par hai mera, yeh tay hai

Maujood hai har saans mein
Tu har dafa, yeh tay hai
Tu hai dawa, ya dard hai
Par hai mera, yeh tay hai

Tere bin jee na paunga
Sach much mar hi jaunga
Yeh tay hai, yeh tay hai


He then hold her hand put her hand on his hand and hold tightly


Tu naseebon sa mere hathon pe
Shuru se likha hai
Mera haq hai tu aasmano se
Mujhe jo ataa hai


He then get up and took rose petals and rain it on her soles and then kissed her soles


Tere kadmon pe jahan rakh doon main
Kabhi jo kahe tu
Koi shaq ho toh aazma lena
Kisi din mujhe


He settle near her and again settle his head on her hear listening to her heartbeat while tears were flowing from his eyes


Maujood hai har saans mein
Tu har dafa, yeh tay hai
Tu hai dawa ya dard hai
Par hai mera, yeh tay hai

Maujood hai har saans mein
Tu har dafa, yeh tay hai
Tu hai dawa ya dard hai
Par hai mera, yeh tay hai

Tere bin jee na paunga
Sach much mar hi jaunga
Yeh tay hai, yeh tay hai...


He was crying when he felt some moment, he look up and saw her looking at him while him while her hands caressing his hair. He immediately got up and said holding her face


Raman- is...ish...ishu tum theek...


Ishita nodded her head stating that she finally got up from her deep sleep and his wait is finally over.


Ishita- Ra..ram...raman


Raman- ha jaan thank god tum uth gaye warna shayad aaj meri saanse zaroor tham jaate.


Saying this he took her in a bone crushing hug trying to hide her in himself to protect her from all the evilness. After some time he broke the hug and look at her and said


Raman- I Love You jaan


Ishita- I Love You too happy


Raman(caressing her face)- Taras gaya tha tumhare muh se happy sune ke liya. Abh tum wapas aa gaye hona abh tumhe kahi nahi jane dunga, tumhe Khudmai chupa lunga ki taki koye burayi tumhe chu bhi na paye. Plz abh mujhe chodkar kabhi kahi mat jana, nahi jaogina.


Ishita- Nahi kabhi nahi, kabhi nahi jaungi aapko chodkar abh.


Saying this both kiss each other pouring their feeling and emptiness in that kiss which they felt in these years. After 6 months both get married and after a year they were blessed with two angels which they name Ruhi and Ruhaan.


That's all, I hope you all lke it. Do hit like and give your wonderful comments.


Love
Sarthi
Edited by sharda_123 - 7 years ago
Ishradiv thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome os dear
Loved it
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
Beautiful and emotional os di
Loved it
Ty 4 d pm too
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Posted: 7 years ago
Lovely os dii
Ishra met in orphanage
They were adopted by bhallas and
Ishra were in relationship
Ishu was in coma
Finally Raman's wait is over
Thnx for the pm dii

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