Akdha ff Hate to Love Or Love to Hate Chapter 19 on page 53 - Page 30

Originally posted by: sana1819786

awesome updat dear

loved it

jalal kidnapped for asking forgiveness really who does like this

jalal has to face much now for kidnapping jodha

awe he even tied her

and here infront of prithvi and his parents he acting like a innocent\

when they come to know about truth surely jala parents would not forgive him

and abdul mirza will be gone the next second rukhaiya and salima come to know about their plan

cont soon

thanks for pm

bye take care

well yup no one kidnapped anyone
for seeking forgiveness but ja uff he
is different but he have his reason
for kidnapping her here more than seeking
forgiveness dear which you all will
come to know later.

yup he even tie her so that
she don't escape or in frustration
hurt herself. as he can't take risk on
both.

true dear as soon everyone cone to
know about his and his idiot friend they
are dead for sure. while ruk Salima
reaction will be like bomb blasting.

anyway thanks for lovely comment dear.
will try to update soon.

Chapter 14

(Prithvi reach his house furiously. and enter inside seeing him angry frustrated Gayatri goes near him).

Gayatri said : did you get to know about her.

(lithia Prithvi looked at Gayatri and shook his head dejectedly. making her cry for her daughter again. the thing Prithvi hate most in the world to see his wife love of life cry and his daughter getting hurt but what a irony he couldn't help himself from facing the same thing again and again. in childhood he saw his daughter getting hurt msny times by his sister and niece. than Jalal and now his daughter get kidnapped God knows by whom. while his wife is crying front of him and he could do nothing to comfort her. but than composing Himself).

Prithvi said : stop crying love it will help none of us. we should think ways to get our daughter back.

Gayatri said : what if the person who kidnapped her hurt her. Prithvi what we will do she is the only child we have. I will die without her.

Prithvi said : nothing will happen to her don't you dare to talk in negative way.

(spike Prithvi angrily making Gayatri shut up and Rukaiya Salima shiver in feat they never saw him this much angry it was first time. soon Prithvi call one of his men who pick his call in third ring. and without giving time to that person Prithvi spoke sternly).

Prithvi said : Asif I want you to keep an strict eye on Jalal Mohammed ...and his friend Abdul Mirza... and it will be better if you trace and tap there cell I know it's illegal... but I have no choice Asif my daughter is kidnapped...

(listening his words The men Name Asif sitting on his office cabin spinning paperweight again and again. his Face was having stern expression while his eyes were emotionless. after Prithvi finish speaking).

Asif said : alright Sir think your task is done.

Prithvi said : good but be careful he clever like wolf.

Asif said : I will.

(listening this Prithvi cut the call. other side In forest Jalal again enter the house and goes in the room where he kept Jodha and after entering inside he saw her lying on bed her eyes were closed, dried tears mark can easily be seen on her face. while her hand and leg were now red because of the struggle she did to get free from ropes. he felt very guilty but what he should do he was ready to play the revenge game of her in fair way. he had another plan but her friend didn't agree. and then the news of her engagement with Abhi make him lost his calmness. he can take her anger but not her this dangerous game he had no other choice but to kidnap her he think they just need to talk and everything will be fine but her way of ignoring him and doing as she please was not letting him talk with her. so he did what he thought will good. but he didn't thought about the consequence he will face or maybe he didn't wanted to thought about it. he take step near her and she woke up by hearing foot steps she look sit on bed tiredly and glare at Jalal Angrily and spoke).

Jodha said : what the hell Jalal... why the heck you brought me here... let me go My parents will be worried for me...and what the hell this place is...do you have any idea how terrifying voice was coming from outside...of bloody animals...let me go from here...

(listening this Jalal put the food packet on bed and spoke calmly).

Jalal said : if you promise to listen my words than I will let you talk with your parents than they will not be worried.

(listening this Jodha look at other side but said nothing. but her way of turning other side show her denial about his offer. so Jalal take a deep breath and again spoke in calm voice).

Jalal said : have food Jodha than I have to go as well.

(listening this Jodha look at Jalal and spoke restlessly. no way in hell she was in mood to stay alone a place as such from where she can heard voice of dangerous animals).

Jodha said : you have to go again...

(listening this Jalal smirk and goes close to her than wisher near her ear huskily).

Jalal said : why don't you want me go... do you miss me this much... that you can't stay away from me sweetheart...

(saying this he step back a little to look at Jodha reaction and found her fuming at him Angrily her eyes spitting fire at him if looks cab kill than Jalal must be ashes by now. but fortunately for him he was save).

Jodha said : miss you my foot ...I wish to kill you by bare hands... for hurting me and my family again and again... let me tell you Jalal I will not leave you... for making my family cry and suffer in pain...

(listening this Jalal sigh sadly and spoke again. with s hint of sadness and restlessness).

Jalal said : Jodha before knowing each other real identity we were in love if you forget... and in that time we promise each other many thing if you forget them as well... please Jodha for out love and those promise just give me chance to prove myself how sorry I am... and how much I still love you please Jodha please I... will do anything but don't think to leave me and marry someone else...it will kill me you don't have idea how I spend years away from you...you don't know how much hurt I myself felt when we were separated from each other.

(listening this Jodha didn't say anything while thinking her silence as rejection Jalal take step back. and again spoke in calm voice).

Jalal said : have food Jodha you need to eat something.

Jodha said : I prefer to starve myself and die instead ...of taking meal or any kind of help from you... get that I hate you...

(listening this Jalal get sngry and grabbing her Shoulder tightly he hissed at her while gritting his teeth he spoke sternly).

Jalal said : don't don't you dare to say that again... the death to have to take permission from Me to reach near you did you get that ... and dare to test my patience... I am calm and doing nothing doesn't mean ...you can do and say anything you wish...just eat food silently now...

(saying this he untie her hands from rope. while Jodha after getting her hands free rub her wrist softly. soon she saw Jalal serving her food on plate and kept near her on bed. she glare at him than throw the plate away all the food fell on floor and get dirty making Jalal angry.h e glare at her which make Jodha scared of him for fraction of second but she quickly compose herself. trying not to hurt her in anger he take few more steps sets from her and spoke angrily).


Jalal said : just stay hungry till tomorrow than.

(saying this he left from there not trusting himself to be around her when he is hell angry. in the middle of late night he again enter inside the room and saw her sleeping now and this time she look comfortable to him with open hands her hair were hiding her beautiful face from him. he goes near her and softly tucked her hair from her face to behind her ear. caressing her face lovingly in between as well. he gaze at Jodha for long time with so much love and intensity. soon his gaze fell on her wrist and legs as she was in short purple color sleeveless frock he can easily have a clear look of her legs. but he wish than to he controls his desire to have her and concentrate on her wound which she get by struggling so much to free from ropes. he goes near cupboard and take ointment and again goes near her and applied on her wrist but soon he felt wired of not getting any response from her. he look at her and try to wake her up).

Jalal said : Jodha wake up Jodha are you listening wake up...

(but she didn't and he get worried he run out of the room and comeback within few minutes with water bottle some and sprinkle a little on her face which make her woke up. she clutch her head tightly and moan in pain).

Jodha said : my head...aaah mom...dad...

(seeing her like that Jalal get very worried he again run out of the room. and comeback with some fruit. and spoke to her calmly).

Jalal said : here have some fruit or else you will get I'll please Jodha listen to me I promise I will take you back home soon.

Jodha said : didn't I said I don't wish to eat anything...

Jalal said : Jodha please have it or else you will get unconscious Again more ever you need to fight with me and for that you have to be strong while without having food it's not possible sweetheart.

(saying this he forward a fruit little towards her but she again push his hand away and fruit to fell on floor. and this make him lost his all patience he raise his hand to slap her whi h make her flinch back on bed and he Stop himself before hurting her by seeing fear I. her eyes he love to see the fierce attitude and love in her but not even in dreams he wish to see fear. pull his own hair frustratingly and spoke in irritation).

Jalal said : do you have any idea how difficult it is for me to bring food for you here... and you just throw it away... without second thought...

Jodha said : as if I am some beggar who is with you for food only... you are the one who brought me here by kidnapping me... you idiot I don't need your help just let me go...

(listening this Jalal look at Jodha and angrily spoke).

Jalal said : fine than continue your hunger strike I care less...saying this he lock the door and left from there.

(next day in morning Jalal goes to his mother room finding the room empty he sighed in relief and open her cupboard. and started searching for few dress. when Hamida comes there and caught him red handed. making him fumbled in nervousness he get very embarrassed).

Hamida said : what's wrong Jalal what are you doing here or should i say what are you searching in my Almirah.

Jalal said : woo woo mom... see how old your all these dress become I am thinking to throw them away what you say...

(listening this Hamida look at him amusingly but maybe fate was not in his side today that Humayu to cone there for his file. and heard his talk. so he spoke teasingly).

Humayu said : wow so today you get time to see how old your mother dress become hmm I am glad Hamida he is talking about dress to throw them away not us as we are becoming old as well.

(listening this Hamida started laughing. and Humayu to. making Jalal scratch his own head embarrassingly. he looked here and there. but didn't wanted to leave. as he wanted dress for Jodha. he can't go and shook for her. as he already get information that Prithvi order his men to keep strict eye on him and Mirza Abdul. wgile thinking she need to change and needed dress he come here but unfortunately get caught. but again looking at few dress he take them and spoke).

Jalal said : come on dad don't embarrass me like this just see these dress are so simple and worthless we should get mom for shopping what say dad.

Humayu said : hmm. true it's really long Hamida you didn't go for shopping. so shall we go today.

Hamida said : no I am tired today some other say more e er when Gayatri and Bhaijaan are worried for Jodha how can I enjoy my time.

(listening this Humayu to get little sad he wanted to help Prithvi that's why making excuse of going office for important meeting he plan to meet Prithvi).

Humayu said : hope Jodha will be fine and they get her soon.

(saying this he left from. there after taking one file. while Jalal taking a chance take Hamida red and light green color simple sarees and escape from her room. after two hours Humayu reach Prithvi house it was first time he enter in his house after long years. he goes inside. and saw Prithvi barking on his cell while talking with someone. while Gayatri was sitting gazing at Jodha pic sadly making Humayu sad and Prithvi while talking on cell with some officer spoke angrily).

Prithvi said : I don't care there it's going to be 57 hours and still you don't get any damn information about my daughter I want her soon in fit and fine Condition do you get it.

(his voice make Humayu come to his sense he goes near Prithvi who was pacing here and there while talking saw him. and cut the call).

Prithvi said : you what the hell are you doing here.

Humayu said : I am here to help you my friend...

(listening this Prithvi chuckle painfully and spoke in low voice).

Prithvi said : no don't pretend now...as friend never mistrust on there friend ...they never leave them to hurt them... you did and you aren't my friend get that...now you may leave from here...

(listening his words Humayu folded his hand and spike guiltily).

Humayu said : please Prithvi forgive me I know I did wrong... I should have trusted on you... but I didn't and I am ashamed at myself for that... but please forgive me I am really sorry for that...

(listening this Prithvi goes near table and take the glass vase and throw on floor making it break in to many pieces. than he look at Humayu and soike Calmly).

Prithvi said : say sorry to this broken vase...

(listening this Humayu look at him in shocked but than look down).

Humayu said : I am sorry...

Prithvi said : did your damn sorry mend this broken vase no right... than how the hell you think you will able to mend my heart which get hurt and bleed when you hurt me by not trusting on me... how the hell your so called moron son think he will able to earn the forgiveness from my daughter ...and get her love when he hurted her enough.

(listening this Humayu goes near Prithvi and spoke guiltily).

Humayu said : please Prithvi I know what is done is done ...and we can't fix that but just one chance... I am here to seek forgiveness from you ... and help you to find Jodha she is like a daughter to me...as well.

(listening this Prithvi glare at him and left for his room without saying anything making Humayu understand by his silence only that he don't need his help and he can't forgive him. getting defeat in his action Humayu left from there. other side Jalal again goes to Jodha and spoke by throwing dress near her on bed).

Jalal said : go change I am afraid that by the sinking smell of yours forest animal will die.

(listening this Jodha glare at him than look down in very embarrassed way no one ever embarrassed her like this. Isn't her fault that she couldn't change her dress it's his fault he kidnapped her and she had no cloths before).

Jodha said : bloody hell how much care for bloody animal and here I am crying to let me go that he can't listen I am not sinking this bad that his stupid animal will die. why he didn't die because of that.. oh how could forget he is not animal he is devil.

(she was lost in her thought while knowing what she is thinking Jalal spoke again)..

Jalal said : curse me later now go and change sweetheart...

(listening his words she come out of her thoughts and glare at him but than first time without arguing with him from the time he kidnapped her she goes in Washroom. have a bath and change in saree. as she can stay hungry for many days but she can't stay in same dress for more than four hours and here she made recorded by being in same dress from 57 hours. other side Jalal after seeing her going to freshen up goes out of the room. and arrange food on plate which he brought from his own house telling his mother that Abdul Mirza were missing handmade food from her).

Me first
Without pm
Thanks dear
Wow jo is so stubborn
Ja is losing his patience
Hum wants to have chance from Prithvi
Jo is embarrassed
Waiting for next step of ja towards jo
And what will jo do

😃

Super update

Originally posted by: Rashmisingh9151

woo bravo you put whole thing in
few words superb dear.
yup that my point aren't we saw
protest media political leader drama
of fighting for justice.

what result we ever got , just in today
news paper there was a new of 7 year old
girl. who face the same fate as the girl
in Kathua but now no one is talking
about her I am not saying everyone should
shout on every case come over my view
is when we will realize that it was crime only
there is no need of dragging religious
caste . mosque temple or other thing.

till when our law and judicial system
will make a mockery of justice and
victim of such a in human crime
my question is what importance
LC HC held when every bloody criminal
have power to challenge there verdict on
SC and even they can go to President
as well.

why our judicial system speed is so
low In serving justice to victim
for me delaying in serving justice is
it's elf is big injustice.

god while reding my subject book
I get hell frustrated seeing how many
right and way a culprit have to get away
from law. uff anyway so glad
to see many people view are similar as
mine here as after writing this I was
really get nervous so write apology
note as well anyway thanks for being
understanding dear.

Originally posted by: konica.arora.92

Me first
Without pm
Thanks dear
Wow jo is so stubborn
Ja is losing his patience
Hum wants to have chance from Prithvi
Jo is embarrassed
Waiting for next step of ja towards jo
And what will jo do

😃

well said dear Jodha is really
stubborn and testing Jalal patience
and because of that he is losing
his calmness.

and yup she get embarrassed
by Jalal words for sure but she
care less for that.
will try to update soon than
you will see both lead action.

glad to know you like it dear
and thanks for being the first
one to comment even without
getting PM dear.

thanks you so much
actually by mistake when I was
going to send pm the water fell
on my Laptop and it's get off.
so I couldn't send Pm to anyone.
once again thanks for comment.

Originally posted by: Sranjani

Super update

Ja going to regret for kidnapping jo

glad you like it dear
yup well said he is going
to regret for kidnapping Jodha
for sure anyway thanks for comment.

Originally posted by: sana1819786

true dear many of our views are similar but no one dare to put their point in public as they fear to express their views

but u did it as you are brave enough to put your point in public so their is no need to apologize to anyone when u put your point

🤗 well dear I don't think people are
afraid if they afraid to pint there view than
who are doing protest this dangerously
so no I don't think they afraid maybe they
don't find a way to put there view in
simple way. today we have many social
sites like Twitter FB WhatsApp
and there we can point there view without
getting afraid as well.
but to bad that we don't do that yet as
well anyway I am not brave if I was than
I didn't written the apology note because
I was afraid my view can hurt many people
anyway thanks for your kind words.
😊

Originally posted by: sana1819786

wow superb dear

jo is so stubborn

she dont want to have food but it was not her fault who cum eat the food from their kidnappers hands

awe jalal brought hamida dress for jodha

and prithvi is ryt no one can mend broken things by asking forgiveness

cont soon

and no thanks for pm (as dint pm)

bye take care

glad you like it dear.
yup she is stubborn and well said
who will eat food by there kidnapper
no matter if she know him or not
he is kidnapper for her now.

yup he take dress for Jodha from Hamida
as he can't do shop for her as her father men
are behind him.

agree again no one can mend broken
thing either it's broken relation or heart
that's why people should always think.
before taking any decision.

well thanks for lovely comment dear
and I know I didn't send pm to anyone
today.