Poor Saanvi is confused .. Me too!!!

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Poor Saanvi is confused ... Me too!!!

Saanvi is totally confused... why (I am writing about the sukor and gauri scene only episode april 11, 2018)

What I thought would be romance as per precap ended in soulfull bliss

The scene in front of the pyaari bachi...

Just now mumma, dada and maami were happy but why suddenly mumma is sad, maami crying and dada angry???? Dada angry??? I have seen mumma and dada only happy loving and kissing (and did not know more as dada wanted me to sleep few days back to stay awake ?) but what is happening now.

Mere bachi, don't confuse... Just infuse what is happening in front of you!

Don't try to understand as I took two years to journey with them to understand and still I donot in full

your mumma and dada are

Mad(e) for each other

Imperfectly perfect

Insanely sane

Ohhh ok but... But dada looks so handsome with his gesture what is this what have you done?

Awwh mumma crying... No I feel to cry too... She is so cute like me when she is with dada...

And wait a minute what is this in front of me... I know hair pulling as I do that with mumma's hair (love her hair it is so soft) but this is finger pulling, mumma pulling dada's fingers awwh so cute but ...😊

And dada pulled mumma so fiercely, aggressively to him... awwwh will it not hurt mumma... no saanvi dear this is what she loves and we all too, for this is the real dada our SR (how much I am missing his aggressive pull with that attitude) ... But she is so cute with him...

The whole scene was superb, Suraj just kept the platter of the pros and cos beautifully before he gathered her as she was indeed shattered... thought she had failed, failed in her goal, her arrow has missed the target... because of her talking, Rs.10 lakhs gone... It is indeed a big amount for Gauri but Chakor had a big picture.. loved Chakor, Gauri convo... So understanding...

I just also got confused like Saanvi... he was scolding her... Suraj scolding and making his chakor cry???

Chakor you prove me right again and again yes she cried for spoiling the broth but when she went into her Suraj's world all she was concerned was that he was angry, cannot be pacified... How will she live peacefully, he will not speak to her for 4 / 5 days, how can she even live... that brought out her true self, her vulnerability, she is not what she is in front of others, the epitome of strength, courage blah blah but without her Suraj everything is null for her.

Loved Suraj for Suraj any form of punishment for him is to love him more and more. For he never get satiated being loved by his Chakor...

He was bang on when he went on to say, he was never angry can he see her cry even for fun... No he always knows that she lives for the betterment of Azaadgunj and loved the way he gathered her and said it is not necessary that every arrow should hit the target some may miss but still...

Loved their knok-jok after long time...


Saanvi poor child, she sees maami coming happy awwhh dada is so cute, he is also happy but what he is gesturing maami something and maami is going away fast, but dada looks so cute I like dada like that... he is smirking... love my dada like this... And what now dada is coaxing mumma ha ha they are kids... Oopsss what am I ...

Just loved this scene.. so cutely Suraj told Gauri to come in the morning... Dude wants to make use of the situation at its best...

Chakor was cute as usual ranting thu bhura bhura...ok I am bad but you are lovey na so be lovey ... His eyes emits that love that love for her

You keep on chirping, doesn't your jaw pain and finding the joint wow Suraj Babu got the exact cheek point and place those subtle kisses... Saanvi is blushing... I like this dada...

So cute when chakor gave a blow(madam is forceful on her left) oh my god that modulation of VJ, its paining... much of pain (Dramaking) and those kisses of Chakor😳

Saanvi is happy... but wait a minute mumma and dada said they will close their mouth but they are closing in their foreheads!!! Confusing again!!

Saanvi beta that is your mumma and dada for I am too confused with you but ... That is the bliss we get when they are in their world...😳

Saanvi please let me sing the lullaby for you today as I see the love turning into lust by my adories... Please soja Saanvi for I want my adories to stay awake and fully lust for they need that strength to face the rest of the days and don't know whats in store for them

My adories please stay awake as I have put your Saanvi to sleep!

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awww......dat was so beautiful dear...different but interesting ...ur's and lil"saanvi's povs blended and u said it right dear ...its passed two years and we r still trying to grasp our SUKOR...d more we get to know the more we r pulled into their whirlpool of emotions ...dey never leaves a chance to surprise us. ..dat scene was pure bliss. ..God...wat a hubby he is ...d perfect man who perfectly understands his wife like d back of his hand..and she becomes dat loving submissive wife who just worships her husband...for her even a min silence between them is he'll.. she was so vulnerable. .and it was so clear as tears rolled down her cheeks cos of d pain of her hubby' s scolding and d absence of his support... As u said gal; chakor may b a fighter for d outerworld but deep down she is a very naive and soft girl who just wants to spend her entire life in her husband's shadow living a Very peaceful and calm life...lucky R these two who got to love and cherish a life together ...and sumi like u said we don't know wat is in store for d coming days but one thing is sure our SUKOR.. .our adories.....their love will surpass all hurdles and emerge victorious with their lil"one...bcos their love is one of a kind....in ur words "d highest form of devotion "...and see der goes my ranting... after all we r d bunch of crazy sukorians ...and dis is for u darling...🤗🤗missed u dear...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I felt like reading a story from the cutie pie's POV here! ;-)
As always a superb writing!
"Imperfectly perfect" well said it dear! Two words to design two souls which became one as a meaning!
I felt like this is the part 2 of Papa, I'm on the way LOL
Sorry for bringing my story here but the way you paved the words of Saanvi, it made me feel like!

My smile was there the whole time I was reading this!
Yes! Sukor need time!
And with the little bundle by their side, time is less to be enjoyed!

Sumi!
Hope you put Saanvi to sleep well!
I don't want her to get up in the middle of the night and disturb the fire ;-)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Viji1104

Awww......dat was so beautiful dear...different but interesting ...ur's and lil"saanvi's povs blended and u said it right dear ...its passed two years and we r still trying to grasp our SUKOR...d more we get to know the more we r pulled into their whirlpool of emotions ...dey never leaves a chance to surprise us. ..dat scene was pure bliss. ..God...wat a hubby he is ...d perfect man who perfectly understands his wife like d back of his hand..and she becomes dat loving submissive wife who just worships her husband...for her even a min silence between them is he'll.. she was so vulnerable. .and it was so clear as tears rolled down her cheeks cos of d pain of her hubby' s scolding and d absence of his support... As u said gal; chakor may b a fighter for d outerworld but deep down she is a very naive and soft girl who just wants to spend her entire life in her husband's shadow living a Very peaceful and calm life...lucky R these two who got to love and cherish a life together ...and sumi like u said we don't know wat is in store for d coming days but one thing is sure our SUKOR.. .our adories.....their love will surpass all hurdles and emerge victorious with their lil"one...bcos their love is one of a kind....in ur words "d highest form of devotion "...and see der goes my ranting... after all we r d bunch of crazy sukorians ...and dis is for u darling...🤗🤗missed u dear...


wowowo after a long time Viji... thanks missed those 🤗

yes bold red very very true

@ bold blue yes viji i hope so as i am now too soft to see my adories separation in any form or my dude to suffer. I am just longing for his roar at that ***** and that Karan Vararn when they even think to harm his world for we are waiting as we were disappointed of the closure of the preleap track...

thanks again crazy sukorians yes yes the most craziest of the list ... yep you guessed it right!!!😆


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: maithu_

I felt like reading a story from the cutie pie's POV here! ;-)
As always a superb writing!
"Imperfectly perfect" well said it dear! Two words to design two souls which became one as a meaning!
I felt like this is the part 2 of Papa, I'm on the way LOL
Sorry for bringing my story here but the way you paved the words of Saanvi, it made me feel like!

My smile was there the whole time I was reading this!
Yes! Sukor need time!
And with the little bundle by their side, time is less to be enjoyed!

Sumi!
Hope you put Saanvi to sleep well!
I don't want her to get up in the middle of the night and disturb the fire ;-)


Maithu

@ Bold red that's a big big feather in my cap... a word from my favorite author (just thought a bit different though, was not sure if it was reading fine) but feel happy now
happy you were smiling!

@ Bold purple... Nooo, gave her good dose of milk so she will be taken care by the angels of the sky as they are also enjoying the bliss

thanks Maithu... a big smile on my face too



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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: sumsukor


Maithu

@ Bold red that's a big big feather in my cap... a word from my favorite author (just thought a bit different though, was not sure if it was reading fine) but feel happy now
happy you were smiling!

@ Bold purple... Nooo, gave her good dose of milk so she will be taken care by the angels of the sky as they are also enjoying the bliss

thanks Maithu... a big smile on my face too




@red Oh that's cool! Good job dear 😉

By the way, Being happy is what we all look for
So tight big hug 🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awww Sumii this is so soo incredibly beautiful!

I really felt like reading Saanvi's pov. n you know what this remind me on Maithu's "Papa! I'm on the way!" For couple of moments I felt like I'm reading continuation of that story. It's because I have never read child's pov so beautifully described like you two have done.

Thanks for this extremely beautiful piece of work.

And thanks to Meejay, Adhya and team Udaan who edits Saanvi scenes so perfectly which made you write this.

Edited: the way you talked to Saanvi is so adorable. Loved! Loved! Loved!
Edited by Krupy - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: maithu_

I felt like reading a story from the cutie pie's POV here! ;-)
As always a superb writing!
"Imperfectly perfect" well said it dear! Two words to design two souls which became one as a meaning!
I felt like this is the part 2 of Papa, I'm on the way LOL
Sorry for bringing my story here but the way you paved the words of Saanvi, it made me feel like!

My smile was there the whole time I was reading this!
Yes! Sukor need time!
And with the little bundle by their side, time is less to be enjoyed!

Sumi!
Hope you put Saanvi to sleep well!
I don't want her to get up in the middle of the night and disturb the fire ;-)

Maithu I posted my comment before reading yours and I said the very same thing. It really felt like this is continuation of your story. If Sumi didn't added a little of her personal writing style I think I would have checked if the post is not yours.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Krupy

Awww Sumii this is so soo incredibly beautiful!

I really felt like reading Saanvi's pov. n you know what this remind me on Maithu's "Papa! I'm on the way!" For couple of moments I felt like I'm reading continuation of that story. It's because I have never read child's pov so beautifully described like you two have done.

Thanks for this extremely beautiful piece of work.

And thanks to Meejay, Adhya and team Udaan who edits Saanvi scenes so perfectly which made you write this.

Edited: the way you talked to Saanvi is so adorable. Loved! Loved! Loved!


Krupy thanks so so much i can feel your excitement and I am sooo happy that you are comparing me with Maithu (oh my god no way I can match her) but happy honestly.

True the little one seems to have settled fine (thanks to MeeJay for their out of way offscreen bonding) and also the editors in perfectly syncing the scenes.

thanks so much for your love...😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Amazing writing Sumi. You always bring a smile to my face. Loved each and every sentence.. keep writing more and more
Enjoyed reading everyone's comments

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