OS - I WANT YOU, BUT CAN'T HAVE YOU

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Posted: 7 years ago
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TEASER:

I WANT YOU, BUT CAN'T HAVE YOU...

It was another day at the, 'Sahil, Vedika aur Parivaar' house, and Vedika had run out of ways of trying to get Sahil off her back. The man just won't give up. As each day passed of Sahil being around her, getting close to her, flirting with her, and teasing her, Vedika's frustration grew day by day, and she had no idea on how to stop him making her feel all weak in her knees. Even she knew, that deep inside, every time he came close to her, her senses went wild, her breathing heavy, her heartbeats faster, as well as a very tingling feeling shooting through her nerves all over her body leaving a light throbbing sensation at her lower body. He turned her on, every time, and she knew it. And that was one of the main reasons for her fear. She wanted him so bad. To hold him, to feel him, to kiss him, to run her fingers through his hair, to rub her bare body against his, and to have him explore her whole body with his hands. She wanted him to touch her in places that no one had touched in years, in ways in which only a lover could touch. But her fear. Society. She wants to scream her feelings out loud for him and the world to hear, but she can't. Each day, Sahil gives her more confidence... will he manage to crack that tough shell called Vedika, and convince her to let him love her how she deserves to be loved? Will he be able to get Vedika to give him the love that he deserves and is rightful to?

Well this is an OS which I will be posting in a few days, only if you guys want me to, lol. It's merely fictional as to how I would like to imagine it. It will be a little bold and mature, so if you would like me to post the next and final part, please comment and let me know. Also let me know what you think about this little intro piece. Many thanks guys. Xx

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Welcome to AAJS forum davina. I think its ur first post here

Omg davina its so beautiful. Your writing skills are awesome that's why u have expressed vedikas feelings immensely šŸ‘ yaa a tough shell how her inner turmoil win over the fear she gripped in the form of society that's the main part she has to fight 😳
I like it a lot n ready to read for the next romantic update of yours. 😳
Waiting waiting
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Superb plz post full os I wait for that
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey davina !
Gosh what an introduction ! So well written ... of course I would like to know what is coming next ... don't let us waiting for long dear šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Parud7

Welcome to AAJS forum davina. I think its ur first post here

Omg davina its so beautiful. Your writing skills are awesome that's why u have expressed vedikas feelings immensely šŸ‘ yaa a tough shell how her inner turmoil win over the fear she gripped in the form of society that's the main part she has to fight 😳
I like it a lot n ready to read for the next romantic update of yours. 😳
Waiting waiting


Haha thank you so much. I will post it as soon as the editing is complete. Lol. I'm glad you liked the intro though.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: prishna_fan

Hey davina !

Gosh what an introduction ! So well written ... of course I would like to know what is coming next ... don't let us waiting for long dear šŸ˜‰


Glad you like it. And no I will not keep you waiting too long. I'm just editing it now. May be a few days.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey Davina
Waiting for the next part. Pls update soon 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Lovely OS dear. Write more plz
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We are waiting for ur update n u r missing from the forum
Please update soon Davina 😊
I read daily but can't figure out what will be the next ??
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Parud7

We are waiting for ur update n u r missing from the forum

Please update soon Davina 😊
I read daily but can't figure out what will be the next ??


Lol how sweet... do you actually read this daily? thats so cute. I'm not missing in the forum, I try to pop up every now and then. I am sorry for the delay, my cat is really poorly with cancer and we are having to put him to sleep in a few days. So just coming to terms with the fact that he is not going to be with us soon. I also gave the OS to my boyfriend for proof reading, so once he has proof read it then I will post it. But Im glad that my teaser left you all wanting more. Thats the whole point of a teaser. Lol. To tease you all...

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