#3 Song Osthon #2 Jeene laga hu by divan19 on pg 133 April 17 - Page 4

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Hlw frnds here I'm with my next Os & the songs is "Enna Sona" suggested by "Cutieruhi aka raksha dii & DikshsN" & other song is "I Love You" By Sunshine_DivAn aka harshu..

Thanks amu for the title..😛

Unsaid Love
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Raman was doing something on laptop that's when his room mates Ashok & Suraj comes there seeing them he immediately closed it & standup from his place


Ashok - oye what are you doing on my lappy?


Raman- wo mai apka assignment complete kr rha tha..


Ashok - ohk so ho gya wo complete.. Which he nodded so ashok ask him bring juice for them he went & bring juice & handled then when suraj opened the laptop & Raman closed his eyes in fear when suraj said "ashok see what's assignment he has completed?... Saying he shows him the lappy


Ashok - wah yaar toh tu trustee ki beti ki profile check kr rha tha kuch jyada hi bade dream nhi h tere bt listen carefully this type of girl will not gave u a look smjha chl ja yahan se...raman face fell hearing this & he went from there


(Raman is an orphan who brought up in an orphanage after that he works hard & get admission in Delhi's big Fashion designing college with scholarship bt for his personal need he works for ashok he complete his assignments even do his lil work also like cleaning his room ,washing clothes etc)


After sometimes he headed towards his college he about to cross the road when one car hit him & he fell on ground driver comes out of that car & he checks him if he is fyn or not & a beautiful girl comes out to see the person bt when seeing the person she said "Youuu oh god not again she said annoyingly bcoz He does it daily. It's his routine to just come in front of her car out of nowhere and everytime she would be left applying the brakes with a jerk to save him she had almost ran over him thrice & bcoz of him her dad appointed driver for her thinking that her driving skill not good but this man is nowhere changing his habits.


Ishita is a queen bee of college every boy of college crazy for her bt none have any courage to even talk to her not bcoz that she is trustee's daughter but bcoz she can't tolerate anything wrong & if any boy has try to flirt with her he get a tight slap on his face & she is famous in college for beating the boys..


Ishita - yaar tujhe or kisi ki car nhi milti kya Jo hmesha mere car ke samne aa jata hai I swear ek din naa mai tujh pr gaadi chadha hi dungi smjha..she is scolding him while he just lost in her



Enna sona kyun Rabb ne banaya
Enna sona kyun Rabb ne banaya (x2)

Aavan jaavan te main yaara nu manawa
Aavan jaavan te main yaara nu manawa
Enna sona, enna sona
Enna sona oh..

Enna sona kyun Rabb ne banaya
Enna sona oh..
Enna sona oh..
Enna sona, enna sona


Seeing him totally lost she became more angrier so her driver shake him & he comes out of his dreamland


Raman - sorry wo...bt ishita without hearing him she went from their asking Nadeem bhai(her driver's ) to parked the car when she went raman turned to saleem bhai "thank you Nadeem bhai for which he smiles (actually raman loves ishita secretly that Nadeem bhai know & even he helping him & everyday he did fake accident to make him saw ishita)


Nadeem bhai- koi nhi re itna to mai kr hi skta hu tere liye bt be careful ..which he nodded & went from there


In classroom raman continuously starring on her like an idiot she felt someone's gaze on her so she turned bt he immediately hide his face in books while ashok did hiii to her which she royally ignored after the classed she headed towards library where she again bang with raman


Ishita - oh god u again ..saying she slapped her head


Raman - sorry wo ..


Ishita - when you will go far from this "sorry wo she mimics in his tone when suraj & ashok too comes there and ashok try to befriend with her "hey ishita what happened is he bothering you? He asked pointed towards raman & he became scared that if ishita said yes then ashok definitely will bother him bt to his surprise ishita said "nope he is not bothering me & if he does so I can enough for myself so don't poke ur nose in my matter get that she said in warning which didn't go well with ashok


Ashok - hey I'm just try to help you & waise bhi I know he can't do it bcoz he is such a Coward ..saying he & suraj starts laughing & raman face fell hearing this which didn't unnoticed by ishita


Ashok - one more thing ishita would you like to go with me on prom night tomorrow eve..


Ishita - nope I'm not interested or waise bhi I had choosed my partner..


Ashok - who?


Ishita - he ..she said pointed towards raman making him & suraj ,ashok shocked


Ashok - oh god ishita kya tumhe koi or nhi mila..


Ishita - its none of ur business ok & you(she turned to raman) tomorrow at sharp 7pm come at my place to pick me ok...she said bt he didn't responded her so she said loudly "okkk which he nodded & then she went from there & raman to escape from there to save him from suraj & ashok bt in classroom they caught him "abey tu yahan Kya kar rha hai? Saying they snatched the sheet on which he drawing something


Raman - plz give it to me its mine assignment..


Ashok - what about mine assignment?


Raman - apka maine phle hi complete kr diya...


Ashok - great le apna bekaar assignment.. Saying he give it to him then said "what do you think haa? That if she make u her partner in prom so that means u got her so its nothing like that bcoz I know this type of girl who only attracted towards rich he was saying when ishita to reached there bt no one noticed her


Raman - don't say bad about her she is a nyc girl ...


Ashok hold his collars "don't you think u r using ur motor mouth so much when ishita called him "raman hearing her voice they turned while she reached to them & holds ashok's hand & make him stand far away from raman


Ishita - ashok I think u r new in college that's why u don't know me & I'm telling you for ur benefit that don't do anything that make me angry warna u never when u got this from me ..saying she slapped him hard making him embarrassed & he without saying anything went from there then she turned to suraj "tujhe bhi chahiye kya? hearing this he too runs from there making Raman laughs ishita saw him with amazed look "wah so u know how to laughs haa hearing thus he became silent so she said "arey yrr tu phr silent mode mein gya


Raman - nhi wo..


Ishita - oye now plz don't start it & yes keep laughing bcoz you look good & remember one thing never scared to anyone warna wo or darayenge & from now if anyone like those losers ashok & suraj bother you so inform me okk ...


Raman - ok..


Ishita - thank god you said something new from sorry & wo... Saying starts laughing & went from there


Kol hovein te sekh lagda ae
Door jaave te dil jalda ae
Kehdi agg naal rabb ne banaya
Rabb ne banaya rabb ne banaya

Enna sona kyun Rabb ne banaya
Enna sona kyun Rabb ne banaya



Next day

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Raman was sitting alone in garden when nadeem bhai comes their & ask him "oye raman what r you doing here? Had u done all preparation for tonight party after all aaj tu ishu baby ke sath jayega


Raman - nhi nadeem bhai mai nhi jaunga..Nadeem bhai was shocked to hear this bcoz he always wants this & when he getting it that easily so he denied for it so he asked the reason & got to know that he don't have any party wear clothes



Nadeem bhai- bas itni so baat arey pagal don't you remember that u r leaving this fashion designing college or yahan to achche se achche kapde milenge tujhe so don't worry I will arranged it..


Raman - bt how?


Nadeem bhai - arey when everyone go for party tonight so my boss I mean this college's trustee will give me keys of this college so...saying he winked him & he understand everything and in happiness he hugged him "thank you so much Nadeem bhai mujh anath ko apne itna pyar or sath diya hai Jo koi sage ko nhi deta


Nadeem bhai -chl ab jyada senty mt kr ..saying he wiped his tears & went from there while raman starts designing shoes for him bcoz he has only one pair of shoes & which is not in good condition after working two hours continuously he got successful to making shoes for him soon nadeem bhai too came with two piece suit & even asked raman to get ready so he will drop him on the venue raman got ready & was going when ashok & suraj block his way "oye kaha ja rha hai itna ready hoke


Raman - party mein..


Ashok - bt usse phle ye bta had u completed my assignment? Tbhi tu jayega..


Raman - yeah kr diya now please leave my way..saying he tried to go when suraj's eyes fell on his shoe


Suraj - hey stop ..he stopped raman then turned to ashok "ashok yrr just have a look on his shoes


Ashok - ha yr its very interesting kaha se chori kiye..


Raman - its designed by me ..


Ashok - achha ji so now give it me I want to wear it..bt Raman denied to give him so they cropped it from corner & went from there making him sad that now what he will do ..meanwhile nadeem bhai has comes & ask him to come bt denied showing that his shoes got damaged but nadeem bhai encourage him & he anyhow fixed that & headed towards party in mask so no one recognize him as he was wearing someone's clothes..


In party ishita was waiting for him & he was taking so much tym making her angry & seeing it ashok comes to her "kya hua ishita r u upset ? Ki tumhara partner nhi aaya see I told you ki wo bhi aayega bt you don't worry if u want i can be ur partner..


Ishita - you know ashok I hadn't seen shameless person like you ki itni bezzati ke baad bhi muh uthake chle aaye..saying she went from there


Ishita (st) - raman bcoz of you everyone making fun of me as I'm only left alone everyone has their partner & if u will come tb bhi main tumhare sath nhi dance krungi..


Soon all couple reached on dance floor & starts dancing on "Enna sona when raman comes to her in mask & take her for dance..


Ishita - sorry bt mera mood nhi h dance karne kaa..


Raman- why ? Its ur fav song naa so u have to dance..he said making surprise that how can he know it


Ishita - how do you know?..saying she starts dancing with him


Raman - mujhe to ye bhi pta h that ur fav drink is orange juice & u love continental food , strawberry ice cream & ur age...he was saying when she put finger on his lips


Ishita - sshhh age ka mt bolo don't you know girls ki age aise reveal nhi krte..he smiles & both starts dancing


Enna sona kyun Rabb ne banaya
Enna sona kyun Rabb ne banaya (x2)

Aavan jaavan te main yaara nu manawa
Aavan jaavan te main yaara nu manawa
Enna sona, enna sona
Enna sona oh..

Taap lage na tatti chaandni da
Sari raati main os chhidkavaan
Kinne dardaan naal rab ne banaya
Rabb ne banaya rab ne banaya kyun Rabb ne banaya


Enna sona kyun Rabb ne banaya
Aavan javan te main yaara nu manavan
Aavan javan te main yaara nu manavan

Enna sona, enna sona
Enna sona oh..


They r dancing when raman phn starts ringing it nadeem bhai's call to ask him to come bcoz its getting late & they have to put these clothes before anyone reached there so raman immediately turned to go from here while ishita to followed him as she didn't ask his name & even didn't see his face she is calling him "hey listen bt he running from there & on this process his one shoes left there which ishita take it with herself..



Next day

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Ishita reached college with that shoes in her bag to search that boy bt she banged with raman & seeing him she became angry bt didn't talked to him as he hadn't came in party and went from there while raman surprised with her behavior soon class started & their teacher comes in the classroom to announce the winner of this month's assignment for making a design related to clothes,shows & jewelry & he showed the design who got selected as winner & it designer got chance to internship in Paris it's a shoes design the shame one which ishita had with her seeing it she became happy that now she got to know the person behind this bt when winner name's announced her happiness get ruined bcoz its "Ashok Khanna..


But if someone got shock of his life so its raman bcoz its his design he felt like everything snatched from him bcoz he had worked day & night to see this day bt in one second his credit goes to someone else he immediately went to principal office


Raman - sir it's mine design I had worked hard for it & u gave it to that Ashok sir maine apna naam bhi likha tha design ke sath phr bhi..


Principal - I know raman bt try to understand I can't do it anything his dad is director of this college & I can't deny him tum ye rakho..saying he forward a 20 lakhs cheque bt he didn't take it & went from there & saw that ashok & ishita talking


Ishita - ashok congratulations for ur achievement..


Ashok - oh thanks ishita..


Ishita - BTW ashok tumhare pass is design ka demo to hoga naa..hearing this he became silent when she again asked so he said yes


Ishita - okk so I'll come to ur room in the evening so see it..


Ashok - ya of course..


In the evening ishita reached there & ashok welcomed her


Ishita - show me demo..


Ashok - will show you bt before that u have something.. Saying he called raman


Ashok - jaa ishita ke liye strawberry shake le aa ..


Raman - she only likes orange juice..ishita shocked hearing this


Ashok - tu mujhe mt bta..


Ishita - he is ryt..


Ashok - ok main bhi wahin bolne wala tha jaa lekr aa..he said & raman went from there


Ishita - now show me ...


Ashok - wo wo ...ishita actually I don't remember maine kaha rakha hai..


Ishita - mere pass h I think you forget last night in party..


Ashok - oh yaa..


Ishita take out that shoe from her bag & ask him to wear it he became nervous bt tried it to wear bt its not happening bcoz its not of his size ishita snatched it from him " you liar what do you think ? That I'm a fool so I can't understand that idiot like you couldn't make this amazing design saying he beat him that shoe and said "remember one think don't try to fool ishita kapoor warna ussi jutey(shoe) se maar maar ke muh sooja dungi smjha...saying again beat him & went from there


She was driving fastly when her car banged a person she comes out of her car "oh sorry sorry I didn't she was saying bt seeing the person she stopped


Ishita - oh god tum phr yaar ish poore Delhi mein meri hi gaadi milti h tujhe..when she noticed that this tym he actually got injury so she helped him to stand


Ishita - sorry jyada lg gyi..


Raman - no I'm fyn..


Ishita - come I'll take u hospital..


Raman - no its all fyn just lil sprain & mai hostel jaunga...


Ishita glared him " so what I can drop u your hostel too now come without arguing which nodded & she helped him to sit inside car then she noticed his shoes left on road & so she take it & kept it on back sit where that shoes(designed shoe) already there soon the reached hostel & he comes out of car thanking him she about to leave when she saw his shoes so she take it & immediately comes out of her car & call him "raman your shoes


Raman turned " I had wear it saying both of them saw toward his feet & noticed that he actually wear it that designed shoe..


Both saw each other Raman with scared look while ishita with angry look


Ishita - raman u got injuries naa come i'll take u to ur room...she said over sweetly which telling him that "now he gone


Raman tried to deny her bt she forcefully take him not his room bt store room


Raman - mera room idhar nhi hai..


Ishita (smiles) - you don't tell me just shut ur mouth & where I'm taking you just come ...which he nodded & pray to god that save him from his"Jhansi Ki Rani


Soon they reached there & ishita closed the door making him more scared then she step forward to him & he stepped back


Raman - ishita what r you doing? Tum mujhe yahan kyu laayi ho?


Ishita - don't you know.. She said in anger


Raman - ishita I can explain..he was saying when his back touch the wall while ishita to stands in front of him closely


Ishita - kya explain krogi ? Ki tumne mujhe kaise bewkoof bnaya meri feeling ka mazaak udhaya..saying her eyes filled


Raman - plz don't cry ishita I can't see you like this..


Ishita - bt it's bcoz of you only you know maine us din tumhara kitna wait kiya bt tum nhi aaye or jb aaye to apni identity hide krke u know when u had told me about my like,dislike etc I thought that its should be you bt nope u again cheated me giving ur design to that idiot ashok ..



Raman - ishita I'm really sorry bt maine isliye nhi btaya bcoz I thought you'll not accept my love knowing my status & about that design so wo maine nhi bt principal sir ne diya diya bcoz he is son of director of this college..


Ishita - tum aisa sochte ho mere baare mein ki mai status or class dekh kr pyar krungi so for ur kind information I want to tell you ki agr aisa hota naa so today I'm with that ashok..saying she starts crying


Raman tried to wiped her tears bt she pushed him bt he hold her hand & wiped her tears

when ishita said "idiot ab toh I love you bol making him smile " finally he confessed & both hugged each other only bcoz of ishita after that ishita take him to her father & told him everything about their love & also principal's deed her dad agreed for there relationship while he punished principal & ashok then announced raman's name as winner & also give him the voucher for Paris trip to internship in their top most college bt ishita too want to go with him so they get married in one week & fly for Paris..


After one year

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Finally raman became a top most designer & today he throws a party for celebrating their first wedding anniversary where a reporter ask "sir today u had completed one year of ur marriage so what you want to say to mam?


Raman smiles "I just want to confess my love bcoz my wife in short my " Jhanshi Ki Rani always complaint me that I didn't confessed it by myself so I think its ryt tym & also want to thank her bcoz if I got this success so its all credit goes to her bcoz I always thought that I'm not suitable for her he was saying when ishita put her hand on his mouth nodded in no while kissed on her temple & starts singing..


Dil Ka Yeh Kya Raaz Hai
Jaane Kya Kar Gaye
Jaise Andhero Mein Tum
Chandni Bhar Gaye
Kare Chand Taaron Ko Mashoor Itna Kyun
Kambakht Inse Bhi Khoobsoorat Hai Tu
I Love You Tu Ru Ru Yeah
I Love You Tu Ru Ru Yeah
I Love You Tu Ru Ru Yeah



Din Bhar Kare Baatein Hum
Phir Bhi Lage Baatein Adhoori Aajkal
Mann Ki Dehleezon Pe Koi Aaye Na
Bas Tum Zaroori Aajkal



Abar Main Hoon, Tu Aasmaan Hai
Paas Hai Tu, Par Kahaan Hai
Zidd Meri Tu Nahi, Meri Aadat Hai Tu
I Love You I Love You I Love You I Love You


Kabhi Kabhi Main Khud Se Hoon Yeh Puchhta
Main Tere Kaabil Bhi Hoon Kya
Itna Toh Mujhe Hai Maaloom
Milke Tujhe Behtar Main Insaan Ban Gaya


Thoda Thoda Tujh Se Seekha
Pyaar Karne Ka Tareeka
Dil Ke Khuda Ki Mujh Pe Inaayat Hai Tu
I Love You I Love You I Love You I Love You...


That's all for this Os I hope you all liked it so hit like button do comments also..

PS - -- Rashmi--- I had fulfil my promise now its ur turn..😉

Love
Harshita
Edited by harshiidiv - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#33
beautiful os
raman was a silent lover
luv ishita's bold jkr avtaar
she taight suraj n ashok a nice lesson
she got to know about his feelings
raman got s scholarship
both confessed n got married as well
thnxx 4 pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Superb fabulous awesome lovely OS dear
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanks for pm
Kavya_P thumbnail
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Sorry for the late reply
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice update ..
Ishita is a queen bee of college..
Raman is an orphan who loves Ishita secretly..
Ashok and Suraj were taking advantage of his poverty..
Ishita is JKR who fights for the right things..
Finally both confessed and got married..
They went to finish their higher studies..
Raman got successful in his carrier with the help of Ishita..
Thank you.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Superb os
Harshita di
Thanks for pm














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Posted: 7 years ago
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Beautiful os di
Loved it
Ty 4 d pm too
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awww such a sweet os.
thoda sa updated male version of Cinderella. :D
very nicely written.
loved it

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