#3Song Os Thon : Sang sang yun chalun by akriti154 on pg 137 Mar 29 - Page 66

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Posted: 7 years ago
Aya Dil
Outstandingly written beautiful os dear

Loved it totally

Raman was baby throughout

Ishu prank about Raman take vandu to their room dancing was hilarious dear

A great rkb fear about vandu like anything was treat to watch

Vandu is always behind Raman

Poor Raman he unable to romance his wife peacefully

Ruhi baby an angel of Raman always loved his papa like anything loved her kiss to him

ADI a possessive son like Raman how amazingly he said to Ishu to call him handsome not cute like father like son

Romi a fear about mihika was cute oh god he is completely flat after seeing mihika loved Raman tease him cutely

Ishu a amazing multi Tasker finally she wakes up all

I loved Raman so much

He doesn't leave any chance to romance his biwi

He plans for first night moreover wants to remarried again loved his love his Ishu like anything

A naughty puttar was treat to watch

He is jallu of his own son how cute he is

He is amazingly hide behind Ishu after seeing vandu

The best ending dear

Ishu recall their marriage happily cried and Raman hold her hands kiss it and said I love you was fabulous dear

Happy for ishra

You are best
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice os
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
TU MERI AASHIQUI HAI...
lovely song... start was fab one di...loved ishra cute moment's...but ending was unexpected... ishu is no more ...one more sad story...plz di no more sad stories... i only love happy happy wala stories...
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hlw frnds I'm here with my next "Os" for this osthon the song is "Muskurane Ki Wajah Tum ho" suggested by my buddy "Sweetdivya24"..


Muskurane Ki Wajah Tum Ho
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Ishita was sitting on coffee shop in very sad mood her eyes filled with tears she was wiping it but its not happening when she felt someone's hand on her shoulder she immediately turned & seeing the person she without wasting anytime hugged him & starts crying bitterly "I canttt seee.. Him... like..thisshe said with hiccups that person is mihir ishita's childhood frnd


Mihir trying to console hersshhh ishu chup stop crying baba phle bta toh what's the matter? meanwhile mihika too reached there (Mihir, mihika & ishita is childhood frnds now Mimi is engaged) seeing them she hurriedly went to them "what happen mihir ishu itna ro kyu rhti hai ? Mihir nodded helplessly telling her that he too don't know then she nodded & sat besides ishita "hey ishu why are you crying this much? Kuch hua hai kya bol naa bt ishita didn't not answering her & still crying when mihika said "if you will not tell us so how can be we help you hearing this she saw towards them "you both will help me naashe asked for conformation


Mihir - of course we do you just tell us ..


Mihika - yeah he is ryt we do everything for you now just share ur problem with us..


Ishita - please bring my raman back..she said folding her hands while Mimi saw each other in confused & amazed looks (Confused bcoz raman hasn't went anywhere leaving her & amazed bcoz its first time ishita call him "Mera Raman)


Mihir - ishu calm down please tell us clearly & raman toh ghr par hoga naa ya phr office mein..


Ishita - u r not understanding ..she said with much difficulty bcoz of hiccups mihika made her drink water


Ishita - tum dono kaha the u know I was waiting for you..


Mihika - hum sirf one week ke liye hi to yahan se gye the just bcoz shobha aunty (mihir's mom)was not in good condition & tujhe inform karne ka tym nhi mila bcoz we are totally busy to take care of her..


Ishita - ohh aunty kaise h ab?


Mihir - she is now absolutely fyn achha u tell what's the matter?


Ishita - you know mihir raman is not that old raman who always smiles in every situation who always behind me to irritate me & always

loves me he totally changed.. Saying she again starts crying when mihika consoles her


Mihir - bt why?


Ishita - bcoz of those ppl who cheats him whom he trusts blindly..


Mihika - who?


Ishita - his so called family.. She said with anger


Mihir - whattt?


Ishita - hmmm you know they r not his real family I mean she is his step mom & siblings whom he trust blindly or usi ka fayda utha ke unhone raman ki sari property apne naam kara li bt raman ko ish baat se dukh nhi h ki unki sb property chli gyi bt he is broken bcoz they cheated on him..


Mihika - mujhe suru se hi doubt tha that they r not ryt ppl..


Ishita - please kuch bhi karo & make my old raman back..


Mihika - ishu are you hearing urself that u r claiming that person urs whom u once hated so much..


Ishita - that was my big mistake of life that I didn't recognized his worth on tym & when I do its so late I can't see him like this who is always reason of my smile, my happiness now he is shattered I want to see him like before..


Mihika - ye tu hi kr skti hai ishu..


Ishita - mai?


Mihika - yes u .. just now u said it naa that he always has been ur reason of ur smile so now its ur turn to became his reason of smile & support him & heal his wounds..


Ishita - can I do it?..she asked them


MiMi - yes u can & its only you no one else..hearing this she get so much confidence & wiped her tears and decided to bring his raman's happiness she thanked them & went from their..


Mihir - mihku r u thinking the same like me?


Mihika - yeah mihir I'm so happy that finally our ishu recognise raman's true love..


Mihir - hmmm and I'm amazed to see her worried about raman whom she ready to kill


Mihika - time really flew fastly just hope that they became one very soon..which Mihir nodded happily..



Flashback

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Raman bhalla became a top businessman in just 25 yrs on his own (as his father had died when he was only 10 yrs now in his family only his step mother & siblings who hates him bt in front of him showed so much love) everyone from business world wants to work with him including Mr iyer who also a big businessman & is so impressed with raman's business skill one day Mr iyer approach raman's company for a deal which beneficial for both of them so Raman signed this deal immediately & to celebrate this big occasion Mr iyer throws a big party where all businessman has come party going on smoothly Raman & Mr iyer was talking with each other when ishita has come from behind calling Mr iyer "Appahearing her voice Mr iyer turned & saw her she reached to them Raman's eyes stuck on her simple beauty seeing her no one can say that she is daughter's of a big businessman bcoz her attire is just so simple in comparison of other's daughter she is wearing a simple white color anarkali suit with diamond earrings her sweet voice & beautiful smile adding more glow in her beauty making raman lost in her


Mr iyer - arey ishu what r u doing here? One of his business associate said "arey iyer sahab ye Kya puchh rhe h apni beti se after all this party given by her father so she have to come naa


Mr iyer- aisa nhi h arora actually she don't like parties & mostly this business parties she never comes with me that's why I'm asking her..which he nodded


Ishita - ji uncle aapa sahi bol rhe h (then turned to Mr iyer) appa did you had ur medicines?


Mr iyer- wo ishu mai..he was saying when she said "I knew it that how careless u r that's why I have to come here now open ur mouth ..saying she put medicines in his


Ishita - ok now I'm going or haa come soon ok saying she kissed on his cheeks & went from there everyone smiling seeing it & one of his associate asked him about ishita so he said "you know kehne ko toh mai iska baap hu bt she perform all duties of a mother for me after my mother & madhu she is the only my family she helps me in business, taking care of me & my home even she works for orphanage &NGO's.. Raman was hearing this was so impressed with her & decided to make her his after that day Mr iyer & Raman was coming closer in business meeting Mr iyer starts liking raman for ishu so one day he approach him for same & raman happily accept it bt when ishita comes to know this she became so angry as she don't want to marry( not bcoz she loves someone else bt she don't believe in marriage bcoz one of her frnd who always dreaming about a beautiful life with her life partner got betrayal from him he used to beat her brutally & once he killed her & after that day she starts Woking for those NGOs who helped this type of ladies where she has seen lots of cases like this ..) But after Mr iyer's emotional blackmailing she agreed for it halfheartedly & both families met & both got married in fifteen days on their first night raman comes inside his room thinking that his bride will be waiting for him bt for his surprise ishita was nowhere in room he called her name them she came out of washroom after changing her closed


Raman - arey ishita u r in Washroom & I'm going to see u out waise achha kiya ki tumne change kr liya kafi thak gyi hogi naa come & take rest ..saying he hold her hand which she shrugged he was so surprised with her behavior bt then thinks that she might be tired so he didn't said anything & soon both slept bt slowly-2 seeing her same behavior he come to know that she was not happy in this marriage then he talk with appa who told him everything then he decided to make her fall for him everyday he prepare her breakfast ,brought flowers & gifts which she didn't gave a look bt still he trying once he brought a saree for her


Raman - ishita dekho mai tmhare liye saree laya hu aaj yahi pehnke party mein chlna ok..saying he forward the packet towards her


Ishita throw it on ground "I will not wear it how many times I told you naa don't interfere in my life & I don't want anything from you get that..she said so rudely raman was so hurt with her behavior bt composed himself " arey jaan don't be hyper if u don't like my choice so u can wear whatever u want itni choti so baat ke liye aise hyper nhi hote..saying he made her drink water & went from there but ishita everyday misbehave with him bt he never angry on her even how much she try to provoke him that much he behave so sweetly after that starts liking him for his goodness she can't stops herself to love her & decided to confess her love & she planned to celebrate their six months anniversary bt before one week of this everything destroyed bcoz Raman's family cheats him & snatch everything from him & throw them (IshRa)out of house he was so shattered & broke by this bcoz he always loves them a lot he take her his frnd's apartment bt from that day he became so silent..


Flashback Ends

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Ishita reached the apartment determine to bring her old raman back she entered inside her bedroom where she saw that raman was packing her bagso she call himRaman raman saw her "aa gyi tum great now come.. Saying he takes her bags & headed outside she too followed him he put her bag inside car (his frnd's car) then asked her to sit inside & soon both settled in car both r silent no one talking ishita thinks that they r shifting from here bt soon she realized that they r going to her house(appa's) so she saidraman hum kahan jaa rhe hai?


Raman - hum nhi sirf tum jaa rhe ho apne appa ke ghr.. hearing this she immediately pressed break


Ishita - but why?


Raman without seeing heras u know ishita ish samay mere pass kuch bhi nahi hai or mai nhi jaanta ki mai phr dobara KB apne pair on pe khada ho paunga bhi ya nhi kyunki at this tym I don't have any strength I know tum aise conditions mein kbhi nhi rhi or naa mai chahta hu or waise bhi jb mere apno ne mera sath nhi diya jinse mera rishta itna purana tha so I don't have any hope from you kyunki hmare beech toh kbhi koi rishta tha hi nhi or tum please apne ko blame mt krna ki isme tumhare kami thi bt its mine sayab mere mein hi koi kami thi ki mere sare rishte mujhse door ho gye..saying his eyes teared up bt he turned his face another side ishita also having tears in her eyes she make him turn & wiped his tears "aap mein koi kami nhi hai raman kami to hum mein hai Jo apke pyar ko smjh nhi paye & I'm really sorry for my behavior.. Saying she held her ears bt he nodded in no


Ishita - & please raman don't send me away from you bcoz I can't leave without you mai apke sath kahin bhi kisi bhi haalaat mein reh lungi or mujhe poora bharosha hai "Mere Raman pr that he will be again stand on his own ..


Raman - what did you call me?


Ishita - Mere Raman yes u r mine I know mujhe ye accept krne mein der lg gyi bt ab or nhi raman I want to say something to you that me "Ishita Raman Bhalla is totally madly in love with you now please give me ur smile I'm dying to see it..hearing this he became so happy & finally he smiles bcoz of her after long tym


Muskurane ki wajah tum ho
Gungunane ki wajah tum ho
Jiya jaaye na, jaaye na, jaaye na..
O re piya re..
Jiya jaaye na, jaaye na, jaaye na..
O re piya re..


Raman - I love you too ishita u can't understand that how much happy I'm just can't describe in words ishita can i hug u once please which she nodded & both hugged each other & closed their eyes to cherish this moment & want that this moment could be stopped here for forever



O re lamhe tu kahin mat jaa
Ho sake toh umr bhar tham jaa
Jiya jaaye na, jaaye na, jaaye naa..
O re piya re..
Jiya jaaye na, jaaye na, jaaye naa..
O re piya re.. piyaa re..


Soon both returned home from that they both are coming closer day by day Raman starts working hard aapa asked him for help which ishita denied saying they will manage & if they need any help will ask him Raman was happy that she understand him so much appa smiles seeing that finally his daughter accept her husband & went there one day ishita saidraman please ap ye jewelry ko girvi rakh kr business start kr lijiye ye appa ki di hui nhi balki ap Jo laye the wo hai.. bt he denied saying he can't bt ishita requests him so much so he agreed

Dhoop aaye toh, chhaanv tum laana
Khwahishon ki baarishon mein
Bheeg sang jaana (x2)

Jiya jaaye na jaaye na jaaye na
O re piya re..
Jiya jaaye na jaaye na jaaye na
O re piya re.. piya re..


He is working hard bt didn't get what he want & it demotivating him bt she always there to motivate him he was doing something on lappy when comes with dinner "raman first have something then work


Raman - tum bhi aao ..bt she denied saying she will eat after sometime bt he said "I know ishita tumne Jo tha wo mujhe de diya naa she shocked that he knows it


Ishita - aisa nhi h raman ..bt he cut her in mid "don't lie to me Ishita or kya hua agr or nhi h we will share in it waise bhi maine suna hai sath khane se pyar badhta hai so come ..saying he starts feeding her & she too feed him..



Jo mile usme kaat lenge hum
Thodi khushiyaan thode aansu baant lenge hum
Jiya jaaye na jaaye na jaaye na
O re piya re..
Jiya jaaye na jaaye na jaaye na
O re piya re.. piya re..


Finally raman again achieved everything with her support he starts new company on her name "Ishita Raman Bhalla Industries.. She cuts the ribbon & hugs him to congratulate while he said its all bcoz you jaan if I'm smiling again & got everything again so its all bcoz of you..saying he kissed on her temple



Muskurane ki wajah tum ho
Gungunane ki wajah tum ho
Jiya jaaye na, jaaye na, jaaye na
O re piya re..
Jiya jaaye na, jaaye na, jaaye na
O re piya re.. piya re...
Piya re...
Wo o ho... oo...



That's all for now I hope u all liked it so hit like button do comments also..

Love
Harshita
Edited by harshiidiv - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome os!!
Loved it.
Raman fell for ishu in first sight n ishra got married..
But ishu isn't happy with their marriage n not accepted him..
Raman still used to love her n wants to make her fall for him..
Ishu too started seeing his goodness n started loving him but then
Poor raman..his so called family cheated him n transferred all property on their name n throw ishra out..
Bechara raman was so broken with their betrayal n ishu can't see him like that n thought to bring back simle on his face..
Finally ishu confessed her love to him n with her support raman again achieved everything back..
Very beautifully written..
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Posted: 7 years ago
superb os harshu
ishra got married
ishu wasn't happy as it was forced byt raman won her heart with his goodness
his family cheated him n ishita stood by him as his pillar of strength
loved it
keep writing more n more
😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
Beautiful os
Loved it
Ty 4 d pm too
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Posted: 7 years ago
awesome
ishra were married and ishu at first didn't accept him
and later realised her mistake and gave him strength
when his so called family cheated him
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome os dii
Ishra are married but Ishu didn't accept Raman
Slowly she started accepting him
His family cheated him
Loved the way Ishu stood with Raman
Loved ishra scenes
Thnx for the pm dii
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Posted: 7 years ago
Fabulous os harshu
Loved it
Raman fell for ishu in the first meeting itself
After seeing hia goodness appa wanted to marry ishra
But ishu didn't want to marry him still they got married
How much ever she was showing hatred to him raman used to be very patient with her
Slowly she was falling for him when ramans so called family betrayed him
She became the pillar in his tough tym nd both got succeeded
Thanks for pm

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