#3Song Os Thon : Sang sang yun chalun by akriti154 on pg 137 Mar 29 - Page 41

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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome Os di
Ishra are frnds & loved each other too
Bt didn't confessed
Amma fixed her marriage
Glad Raman confessed
Thx for pm..
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Posted: 7 years ago
OMG... Ishita poison bhi pasti thi...Too much...
Glad Raman spoke and stood firmly for his love...
Nice happy ending..
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Posted: 7 years ago
Lovely os didu..
Ishra loved each other but didnt confessed..
Ishita informed raman shes going to get married..
Both cried for their helplessness..
Raman went to ishitas engagement n gave her gift..
Ishu recalled n ishra cried hugging each other..
Vishal asked amma to get them married as they love each other.
Finally ishra confessed their love..yaayyy happy ishra happy me..
Well writtenn didu..
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome very nice update
Lovely it
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wow its so amazing update
Ishra love each other
Raman finally told he love ishita
Amma is angry
Ishita buy poison too
She thinks she will die
Thanks for updating
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Posted: 7 years ago
Lovely os di...
Song was beautiful
Ishra love each other but didn't confessed their feelings...
Ishra work together...they spent their most of time together
Amma fixed ishita's alliance with her childhood friend...Ishita was shocked knowing this...she straightly denied..but Amma was adamant...
Ishita was heartbroken...she was crying...Raman called her Ishita told him about her marriage...Raman was shocked he confessed his feelings he loves her a lot..but it was too late.. ishra were heartbroken...they love each other a lot..
Ishita got engaged...her marriage was set...she was not happy missing Raman...
Raman came on her engagement day to gift...ishra were sad...Amma was angry...
Vishal saw how much ishra love each other ...he requested Amma to let ishra marry...finally ishra got United...

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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice os
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 7 years ago

It was really awesome..
Such twists & turns.. omg..
They are friends.. and they have fellen for each other too..
But her mom acts as obstacle here..
But then Raman came & they confessed...
Wow...
Superb..
Loved it..
Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 7 years ago
hi friends

enjoy reading

Ishra One Shot: Soch na Sake

True love begin when nothing is looked for in return, she said looking at the large public gathering... ishita iyer, a motivational speaker whose main aim is to spread positivity and liveliness in people. She always have a beautiful smile lingering on her lips because she thinks her one smile can give many people the much needed happiness a smile is a perfect emotion to convey happiness...

As she ended her speech, her assistant comes towards her ishita hands over him bundle of papers and marches out the hall while her assistant raman kumar bhalla follows her.. both settles in the car and journey begin to their home..

Yes raman kumar bhalla, the shadow of ishita iyer... raman doesn't have anyone in his life he uses to live in mandir.it was ishita who brought raman home when raman was just 6 year old. The story started when a 5 year old Ishita with her parents visited the mandir and sees raman sitting on stairs with a sad face. She walks towards him and sit beside him..

Ishita: kiya hua tumhain tum itne sad kiyon ho?

Raman looks at ishita and shook his head in negative and says: tum jao yahan say...

Ishita: dekho ishi ne tumhain smilie di tum bhi smile karo... she smiles at raman while raman looks at her innocent smile and seeing genuine care he smile back... ishita gets happy that she becomes the reason his smile...

Ishita: what is your name... mera naam to ishita hai sab muje pyaar say ishu kethe hian...

Raman: raman bhalla...

Ishita: where is your mummy papa... kahan rehte ho tum
Raman: mere mummy papa to god jee kay pass hain isiley mein yahin mandir mein rehta ho...he looks down sadly...

Mr and mrs iyer comes and asks ishita to come with them but ishita stops them and says: appa... see he is my best friend...raman...

Mr iyer: so nice name... beta tumhare mummy papa kahan hain...

Ishita: appa he doenst have anyone ...

Mr iyer: oh... he really felt bad for the poor boy...

Ishita: appa hum raman ko saath ghar lay jain..

Mrs iyer: no ishu.. she sternly replied...

Ishita pleads and tells them that raman lives in this mandir alone... mr iyer who couldn't deny ishita agrees and brought raman with themselves...

Raman a very shy and not much expressive boy. He doesn't express his emotions or feeling while ishita a very different from raman... raman was very grateful to iyers that they were too good with him they started his education.. raman becomes too fond of ishita but never expressed his feeling too grew more with the passage of time while ishita busy in her life but she didn't forget raman her best friend...

Ishita looks at raman who was busy looking outside the car she started her chatterbox: raman... whats this... I told you not to come with me today is your interview na...

Raman: ap akele kaise aati..

Ishita: driver kay saath...

Raman: uncle ne apki responsibility muje di hai..

Ishita: but you have your own goals... you are a qualified MBA professional you can get very good job and you are wasting your time by becoming my assistant...

Raman: I cant say no to uncle...

Ishita: why

Raman: because he is like my god...

Ishita: raman... we both are friends na... dekho

Raman: if you again send cv on my behalf things will not change...

Ishita: I will again send cv... and that's final.. and you will go to interview...

Raman looks away..

Both reaches home mrs iyer welcomes both and tells them to get freshen up and have food... all were settled to have food. Mr iyer start the conversation... : ishita... you remember mr reddy son rakesh...

Ishita: haan...

Mr iyer: tumhain kaisa lagta hai rakesh...

Ishita: good..

Mr iyer: he has asked your hand for his son...

Raman shockingly looks at ishita and mr iyer... ishita looks at her father and replies: I want some time appa...

Mr iyer gets happy and says: haan haan kanna take your time.. no worries..

Raman feels heartbroken he gets up and turns to leave... ishita holds his hand and says: raman where are you going??

Raman: wo bhook nahe hai...

Ishita: raman listen...

Raman leaves silently to his room and cries that he can never get his love. Neither he can express his love and feeling to ishita nor he can see ishita getting married to some body else... he knows he has no right to claim his love for ishita... he thinks to move away from ishita life once and for all...

Next day

Mr and mrs Iyer were having breakfast while ishita was waiting for raman to come... mrs iyer calmly told ishita to have breakfast while ishita denies that she will have breakfast with raman...

soon raman shows up all ready and holding his bag...

Ishita: good morning raman.. come have breakfast I was waiting for you only...

Raman looks at ishita and says: wo... uncle... aunty... ishita I wanted to talk something important...

Ishita: raman... baatain baad mein pehly khana kha lo... you didn't had food last night also... she looks at bag then says: raman.. ye bag... tum kahain ja rahy ho...

Raman: wo... actually...

Mrs iyer: bolo kanna...

Raman: I am really very grateful to you all you changed my life... Muje kiya say kiya bana diya ap sabne.. itni pyaar care di aur kabhi family ki kami bhi nahe mehsoos hone di... you all never let me feel that I am an orphan..

Mrs iyer: kanna ye kiya bol rahy ho...

Raman: please aunty don't stop me... I didn't express my emotions for you all ever.. but for last time I want to tell you all how much I love you uncle aunty...

Ishita: last time???

Raman: haan... sorry uncle I cant be with ishita now... I had applied for a job and now I am selected therefore I have to leave to dehli... apne jo bhi mere liye kiya i am very grateful lekin ab aur mein ap pay bojh nahe ban sakta... thank you so much for everything... he folds his hands..

Ishita: raman you are not going anywhere... you want to work you can have your job in this city.. but you are not leaving ...
Mr iyer: ishita... jane do usy he has his own life...his goals.. his ambitions..

Ishita goes towards raman and looks into his eyes and says: I am not important raman...

Raman looks down...

Ishita: raman.. koi meri baat buri lagi kya jo ja rahy ho... I am sorry...

Raman: no ... bus I have to go... I will come to your wedding.. rakesh is really good uncle has always chosen best for you...

Mrs iyer looks at raman and says: beta... hosaky to jadli wapis ajana...

Raman nods...

Mr and mrs iyer blesses raman while ishita was stading with teary eyes... raman bids bye and start leaving with slow steps.. it was so difficult for raman to leave his whole world behind... but he makes his heart understand that he is doing this for ishita only...

Raman leaves iyer house while ishita cryingly runs to her room and locks herself... mr and mrs iyer first thought that as she was very much attached to raman that's why ishita is behaving like this...

Ishita was crying and start feeling suffocated with the thought that now raman will not be with her she will be alone... he doesn't talk much with her but his silence everything for her... he standing behind her gives her much needed strength she doesn't get scared in her life because she knows raman is with her... but today when he left she is understanding the real importance of raman in his life... he is not only a mere friend to her he is much more...

One week passed they didn't get any single call from raman all were getting worried for his safety they tried to contact to him but gets no response... ishita become very dull she stops attending the seminars and limits herself to her room. Mr and mrs iyer thought that its because ishita is missing raman...

Soon ishita marriage was fixed with rakesh... mr iyer sent an email to raman to inform him that ishita is getting married... and invited him to come home...

Dehli

Raman opens his mail and finds an inbox from mr iyer... he gets more disturbed knowing that ishtia is getting married in one week... he couldn't denied mr iyer as he has called him... raman cries at his fate and prays to god to keep ishita always happy..

Marriage rituals started... First mehndi and it was the day of sangeet when raman returns to home... Iyers gets happy to see raman back... they complains to him why he didn't contacted them... raman reasons that he was very busy with the new job...

Girls bring ishita decked up in purple orange combo lehnga... she was looking gorgeous but that happiness was not on her face...

mrs iyer holds raman and walks towards ishita and says: see ishu kon aya hai... ishita looks on and sees raman standing trying to fake smile... couldn't control herself ishita throws her arms around him and hugs him tightly and cries...

Raman: shush... Ishita... Stop crying...

Raman was trying to console her but she was not stopping...
rakesh was surprised with ishita behavior...

Raman: ishita... I said stop crying...

Ishita looks at raman with big eyes... raman wipes her tears while she closes her eyes feeling his touch on her cheeks...

Mrs iyer: lets start the sangeet...

Listening to her amma, she looks at raman and says: wait... I want to talk to raman...

Raman: baad mein baat kar lena..

Ishita: no I want to talk to you now... she adamantly says...

Rakesh comes and holds ishita hands and says: whats the hurry ishita and he takes ishita away both raman and ishita were looking at each other with pain...

As the sangeet started... mrs iyer ask raman to sing a song for ishita... All were dancing on sweet melody... raman start singing the song while rakesh takes ishita to dance floor although ishita was denying...

Tenu itna main pyaar karaan
Ek pal vich sau baar karaan
Tu jaave je mainu chhad ke
Maut da intezaar karaan

Raman looks at ishita who was also looking at raman while rakesh was twirling her... her eyes doesn't leave raman for one second...

Ke tere liye duniya chhod di hai
Tujhpe hi sans aake ruke
Main tujhko kitna chahta hoon
Ye tu kabhi soch na sake

Rakesh while dancing pulls ishita making her loose her balance raman hold ishita from failing both share an eyelock while raman continues to sing...

Kuch bhi nahi hai ye jahan
Tu hai to hai ismein zindagi
Kuch bhi nahi hai ye jahan
Tu hai toh hai isme zindagi
Ab mujhko jaana hai kahan Ke
tu hi safar hai aakhiri

As the lone tear escape from her eyes raman wipes it and smiles at her...

Ke tere bina jeena mumkin nahi
Na dena kabhi mujhko tu faasle
Main tujhko kitna chahata hoon
Ye tu kabhi soch na sake

Rakesh notices that ishita and raman does have some thing above friendship... their relationship is much more deeper... he shooks his head...

Tere liye duniya chhod di hai
Tujhpe hi saans aake ruke
Main tujhko kitna chahta hoon
Ye tu kabhi soch na sake

Raman stops to sing the song... he was about to leave but felt a tug at his hand... he turns and sees ishita holding his hand... ishita sings...

Aankhon ki hai yeh khwahishein Ki
chehre se teri na hatein
Neendon mein meri bas tere
khwabon ne li hai karwatein

She touches his cheeks and sings

Ki teri ore mujhko leke chale
Ye duniya bhar ke sab rastein
Main tujhko kitna chahti hoon
Ye tu kabhi soch na sake

She put her head on his chest and sings...

Ke tere liye duniya chhod di hai
Tujhpe hi sans aake ruke
Main tujhko kitna chahta hoon
Ye tu kabhi soch na sake

After finishing, taking much needed strength ishita says: kab hoa pehly kiyon samajh nahe payi pata nahe... lekin aik baat mein janti hoon I am nothing without you... I want you I want you only.. muje tum har waqt chahiye... tumhari khamoshi mein mien khud ko dhoondh leti hoon.. pata nahe tum kaise react karo... but I don't want to lose you ... jab tum chale gaye tab iss baat ka ehsaas hua tum mere kya ho... tab jana jaise dil dhadkan bina adhoori hai wesy hi mein tum bin...

Mrs iyer: ishu...

Ishita: I love you raman... I really love you... she openly declares...

Raman was shocked with ishita open confession he was very happy listening to ishita that she also feels same for him... but other side he was worried how mr iyer will react...

Mr iyer folds hands and asks everybody to leave and apologize to mr reddy and breaks the proposal... all leaves... raman was standing looking down...

Mrs iyer: raman... you will not say anything...

Mr iyer: madhu let me talk... raman... look at me...

Raman looks at mr iyer... mr iyer asks: tu ishita say pyaar karta hai... raman shook his head in no

Mr iyer: sach bol...

Raman looks at ishita and says: I really love ishita...
mr iyer holds his hand and says: I never differentiate between you and ishita... kabhi kiya hai kiya??

Raman: no..

Mr iyer: phr tune muje kiyon nahe bataya... pagal hai kiya...mein janta hoon tu kabhi apne emotions khul kar batata nahe hai per mein to tera appa hoon muje bhi nahe bataya...

Raman looks at mr iyer...

Mr iyer: infact its my mistake mere demag mein ye khayal kiyon nahe aya raman aur ishita to aik dosre kay liye hi hain...muje mere bachoon ki khushi kay ilawa kuch nahe chahiye... tum dono aik dosre say pyaar karty ho to muje kiya problem... infact I will be happy that my both children will live with me always..

Raman: mein dar gaya tha... I don't want to lose you uncle... I thought you will become angry..

Mr iyer hit him lightly and says: pagal hai tu... tumse acha meri ishu kay liye aur koi ho nahe sakta...

Raman smiles...

Mr iyer hugs ishita and raman..ishita looks at raman and glares at him... mrs iyer blesses both and signs mr iyer to give ishra privacy... both leaves...

Raman looks at ishita... ishita comes close to raman and hits him and says: why you didn't told me... raman was silent...

Ishita: ab to kuch bolo...

Raman: kya...

Ishita: mein kya karo mere budhu kumar meine to keh diya now its your turn apne maan ki baat nahe bologay... she looks at him...

Raman chuckles and finally says: I love you ishita... Ishita smiles and hugs him tightly ...

Ishita: phr bolo...

Raman: I love you

Ishita: phr se..

Raman: I love you..

Ishita again tries to say both raman captures her lips in his and start kissing her senselessly...ishita also response with equal passion...both break their kiss and hugs each other...

Ishita: bus ab jaldi say shadi kar lete hain... Kiya kehte ho

Raman nods..

Ishita: i am telling you before i love kids chaar bachoon say kam pe to mein nahe manongi... She winks at him..

Raman shockingly looks at her while ishita closes his mouth and says: you are getting shock as if you have to give birth to them you just have to co operate with me..

Raman smiles listening to her and says: besharam...

Ishita: haan to jab mera buddhu itna budhhu hai to muje hi kuch karna hoga na...

Boh laughs and hugs each other

That's it I hope you all will like it waiting for your lovely comment and response don't forget to hit like also

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Edited by ishrasoul - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Lovely os dear
Very well written

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