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Posted: 7 years ago
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~my love for you~

Part 1


Are you insane or what , khurana just tell me what were you thinking before standing here in this thunderous rain. See you are all wet. You are practically drenching. She held her umbrella towards him and held his hand.

I was just waiting for my date handa and you showed up two hours late. He said with his eyes focused on her. He was the mean , bad boy of their school and they were just class fellows least she know that her class fellow had started developing feelings for her. For what seems to be a teenage crush at the age of 16 maan was very much sure about his feelings for her. She was the best he could get but he didn't knew that she was not the one who will fall for his charms.

I didn't came late maan khurana , that have been possible if I would have said yes for your proposal. You practically forced this date on me and left without even hearing my reply. She could look him turning pale and she was sure he would be in bed for the coming days. What was he thinking of waiting for her in the rain that was unexpected.

She looked at his eyes , the black shiny orbs were just dull this time and she could see the intensity missing. He held her hand very softly and what he said next was not something she couldn't even have thought.

You know I don't have so much courage like you to propose you so I did what gentleman does , I forced you to come on a date with me. and if I would have waited for your answer I know what I would have getting.

She was confused for a second and asked.

What would you get ? Asked geet who was also getting drenched by now.

Your rejection handa. I know I was not very good to you. In fact I teased you mercilessly since you joined , called you by names but I couldn't even help to feel something for you. Even if I could consider that you have the dumbest of the friends I couldn't even help.

You lie through your teeth really well khurana , now come on get inside. We are here for some fun and don't spoil it. See you will fall ill this way. She said and started dragging him but it only resulted in her falling and he was on top of her. She was in the mud and the mud was splattered on him too as she turned. The poor umbrella was lying on one side and he just rolled off her and gave her his hand to get up.

Handa come on I am not going anywhere so you should stop doing this. He said and smirked making her angry.

Fine suit yourself m leaving.

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Edited by suhaaana - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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~MY LOVE FOR YOU~

Part 2

Handa , you and me we should go on a date.

Geet couldn't help bit feel a bit of warmness spreading across her cheeks. She could still picture the maan khurana asking her , or better telling her to go on a date with him. She couldn't help but felt a smile forming on her beautiful face.

The words that hit her the day before were still as fresh as they were uttered right now. He was such a menace sometimes. She couldn't help but look at the sleeping form of his. After much persuasion , he had came with her. She had finally promised a lunch with him.
She chuckled at his words.

Gentleman force for date. Yeah only this gentleman can do that.

Geet thought while caressing his head that was burning like hot lava sometime back. She saw how handsome he looked while sleeping , they were on a trip to manali with some of the school mates and the trip was of a month long. She didn't knew why but she could feel the truth in his words. The hotness was reduced a bit but he was still under the effect of fever and sedatives. She had changed herself and sat beside his bed sipping the hot chocolate that she was glad the hotel staff managed to get for her. There were no one of the school mates as it was weekend , most of them have left to see the local market and she had thought to relax for sometime completely forgetting that he would be waiting for her.

She could still feel Her back against
the stone wall of the empty corridor just outside her room his arms outstretched on either side of her, trapping her between his body and the wall; his breath
warm against her neck and the side of her head as he whispered those words in her ear. She was caught off guard as he had done this too stunned to move and grab something to hit him. By the time she came back to her senses he had left without even waiting for the reply.

She was having a book in her arms , stretched her legs across the bed and was reading the book , when her friends came. They had gone for some local cuisine but she had denied.

Pari looked quite tired as she came and lied on the bed.

It's been a very bad day , we couldn't enjoy anything. It had started raining by the time we reached , you were saved that you denied. She said keeping her head on the pillow and looked at her own bf Vicky who was lazing around with yash.

Yeah geet , it's raining cats and dogs but don't worry I brought you this, Vicky handed geet the packet that had the warm local food , she smiled and thanked him.

You know that was very good restaurant , we all can visit sometime. Even arjun and his group was there with an exception of maan. He said and geet looked up immediately in his direction.

He is outside the hotel , drenching himself in the rain , I think he is waiting for someone. Said yash making a face. Geet felt some guilt forming within her knowing who he was waiting for.

Is the rain very bad yash ? Asked geet.

Yeah he would have caught pneumonia by now if he will be standing still , you know he was there when we left and still he was there when we returned its been almost two hours now. Must say he has some dedication. Said yash

Without much thinking , she changed her clothes and was about to go when pari asked.

Where r you going ?

Have some work will be back in sometime. Saying so she went to see where he have probably waiting for her.

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Edited by suhaaana - 7 years ago
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~MY LOVE FOR YOU~

PART 3


She looked at his sleeping form and thought how difficult he was being to her to bring him to have some medical aid.

Sometime back

Geet was relieved that none of her friends had asked why she was leaving , probably they were all tired with all day's outing. She had came and saw him standing in the rain. He was being his usual self he could see , stubborn beyond limits and difficult to handle. Even after her pestering he didn't come with her and had asked her to go out with him.

I am doing no such thing khurana and you are coming with me this moment and beside we are drenched and I am all muddy so don't be a spoilt brat and come with me. She asked him and he denied.

Not unless you are coming with me now handa. We have a date if you remember. He tried to pursue her but she this time gave him a glare and she couldn't even leave him as the next moment he sneezed.

You are being difficult now khurana and you are probably coming down with fever so its better that you come with me and with that she tried to drag him but he didn't let her and pulled her to him. Already they were drenched from head to toe and now she could feel his rasping breathe and he was shivering. And damn still he wanted a date.

Look khurana , how about I promise you a lunch tomorrow or sometime , but not today , now you need to get out of these clothes and get something hot. She said with a voice dripped in sugar.

You promise , he asked her and in response she nodded and after coming out of his embrace that was a surprisingly warm she held his hand and dragged him with her.

When then reached his room, she was glad for once that his room was on a floor below than hers and he was looking pale than he usually was , she opened his room and helped him with the clothes.

I am getting you some clothes and bringing you some hot to drink till then go and have a hot shower maan , she said forcing him towards the bathroom and maan khurana was having no other option , he was liking being bossed. Meanwhile geet used a spare towel and tried to dry herself but it was not as useful. Taking out a black shirt and some sweat pants with some underpants and a light jumper for him she left the room.

It was after some half an hour she came to see maan dressed in his clothes that she had taken out and had changed herself. She came towards him and touched his forehead.

You must lie down , you are little warn and I am sure you will be getting fever soon. She forced him and he was silently gaping at him. Maan had always felt a pull towards her, she was bossy , all rounder and he didn't knew when and how his teasing and did - not- like -her feelings had changed into Like-her.

She was about to leave when she felt him holding her hand. She glared at him and he smirked and didn't let her go.

You know I never like being fussed over. He said while she glared at him.

Now I know why you are so difficult to handle. You are complete spoilt maan. And tell me why do you want me to go out with you. All I know that you don't like me let alone you have some sort of animosity with me. You practically made my life hell in last six years. So pray tell why this sudden obsession to angry me more than usual that you does.

By now maan was having the soup that geet had ordered and he was having silently listening to her words, her justified accusations.

Well, we khurana's usually ask out when we fancy someone .

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Edited by suhaaana - 7 years ago
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~MY LOVE FOR YOU~

Part 4

Well, we khurana's usually ask out when we fancy someone. His words made her look at him with an awestruck expression.

He was definitely not feeling well was her first thought.

You don't fancy me Khurana , it is some type of joke and believe me Maan Khurana I am not the person who will believe you. So Maan it was a nice attempt. She smiled and the fake smile that made him look at her. His heart lurched at the sudden perception of hers about him. She turned to leave and there was a sudden discomfort in the room. The moment was changed and he immediately held her hand to stop her from leaving.

You are not leaving until we are clarified of my feelings for you. His raspy voice made her turn and look at him. He was all serious now.

Bossy , know-it-all , ugly , frizzy haired mess anything more do you want me to add. She said all the names he has been bestowing on her from the moment they know each other. Off of a sudden his eyes were downcast with shame and he just said.

I was being childish and immature Handa and that made me extremely nefarious towards you. He was now being honest and the words were so clear that the reflection of his words can be seen on her face. A change in emotions appeared on her perfectly sculptured face.

That doesn't mean I don't like you Handa. Infact you are one of few girls I respect. Start from the time you bleed me. That power packed punch of yours broke my nose but you changed my views for you Handa.

He said and looked directly in her brown eyes. Those were so clear that for a moment he could see himself in her shiny brown orbs.

You are still same Khurana. Now be good and have your soup. I need to leave now. My friends are waiting for me. She said and turned. Her steps were again halted as his voice raspy enough to know that he was running high temperature.

They are enjoying without you and are not even worried about you. They can stay away from you for some more time. I really want you to be here Handa. Think it as of a compensation for ruining my beautiful date with you. His words were full of arrogance and before she could retort, he asked her in a firm voice that was much like a command.


Let me help you grab some late lunch handa , I can't let you starving, knowing you I know you must be fully engrossed in a book and didn't even thought that food is necessary for a living being to survive. Least I could do is feed you,
His voice was not so clear but the emotion of her silent care was there. Before she could reply he ordered for her without even asking her what she would have.

I didn't said yes Khurana , she said glaring at him but he was well versed with her now.

You didn't denied either. So why I am not wrong in assuming that geet Handa can give me a chance to have lunch with her. Also I can't let you go for what you did for me. Handa I may not be the gentleman you want in your life but I am not completely despicable. At least give me a chance to prove you that i am a better person then what you think of me.

His words were answer by an approval that he never would have thought of.

fine let's have lunch together but that doesn't mean that i agree with your terms and conditions about us going together on a date.

I will court you Handa don't worry. His casual reply made her look at him with acute anger that made him laugh.

You are so easy to rile up Geet Handa. But don't worry I will change my ways according to you now. His sincerity was making her ask him some questions while he waited for her food to appear.

Have your soup. It will turn cold. She said sternly but he denied.

I should wait for yours Handa. It is the least I can do now. You helping me is itself a big thing knowing our history. With his each word she was having encounter with a new Maan Khurana , who was really nice to her.

The food arrived and Maan gestured her to eat while he had his soup. He was so meticulous in everything he does and she could see how perfect he was even he was slurping his bland soup with so much poise.

After their lunch Geet tucked him in the duvet and sat for some time in order for him to sleep. She couldn't help but to think how he was making her know that he has changed and that change was just visible for her. She looked around and saw two books on the side table. One was even having a bookmark. She didn't knew that even he liked to read. It was almost half an hour , that Maan was in a sleeping position. She didn't knew why she touched his cheek and felt it was still radiating heat. She turned to leave but didn't knew what come over her and she leaned slightly and kissed his cheek.

Get well soon Maan.

The moment she turned to leave , she was stunned with his voice.
Well I didn't knew that you wanted me this much handa , I am kind of pleased. You are satisfying my ego. He said as a smirk formed on his already perfect M shaped lips. They were still in his room and he was lying on his bed still under the effect of the sedatives but he had still so much energy to argue with her that she thought that he was already charged up whenever he is with her.

Shock would be an understatement , he was not sleeping , jerk ,was the first word that came in her mind and she retorted to see his over inflated ego going over to the edge to be burst.

You over inflated ego doesn't need more boosting khurana , I was just trying to check if you were well. All the time we have spend today , I very well come to know that you are pretty childish . I didn't think I had seen anyone who is much more childish than you. You were really looking like a five year old who is denied of his favorite thing. He smirked and pulled her making her loose her balance but she was quick to regain her posture and sit beside him as he scooted a little to make some space for her.

That blame goes to my perfect upbringing handa. I am the only child and that is bound to make me a little spoiled. I never thought that you didn't know about that. Maan chided.

You couldn't leave me Handa. Finally my magic is working on you. He teased her. She knew she has set her own misery by kissing his cheek.

What on the earth were you thinking Geet , he is the same pain of your life , how could you forget that he made your life hell , how can you come in his words. He is the same Maan Khurana.

Stop cursing yourself Handa. Maan said caressing her knuckle , he was still holding her hand and she was busy cursing.

Yes, She came back and kissed his cheek that was now making him smirk . She found herself in his close proximity and stood to leave but she found him holding her hand and in a sudden moment he pulled her to him giving her no chance. He smiled at her the first genuine smile she had seen in her life and his lips softy kissed her lips , the sweetness of the peppermint was still there , the sandal fragrance was coming from him making her loose herself when his words made her get out of the sweet shock she had. She had kissed him. The sweet kiss that was not even of few seconds had left her flustered. The redness was so much visible that he felt amused before kissing her cheeks , making his intentions very clear.

If you are going to kiss me handa than it should be proper kiss , saying so his lips were on hers , he was kissing her senseless.

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That's all
How was it

all-right, now important thing
this was already posted once and i deleted it
now i will complete it at once
readers response awaited
many of you must have read it already
will post the new part in a day or two for old readers


Edited by suhaaana - 7 years ago
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ohhh new story for me ...congrats
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Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

ohhh new story for me ...congrats


you read it already 😛
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Originally posted by: suhaaana



you read it already😛


only first part 😊
and realised it's total new atleast for me
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hmm title said all
but I'm happy it's his love for her
so teenage love interesting
seriously you used to bully her now fallen so don't expect...at least she came
his answer honest
Edited by Keepdreaming - 7 years ago
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thanks for re-posting this story
very interesting story
maan is in love with geet which he realised now after pretty much time teasing her in many ways

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