Rikara FF - Humsafar Humdard Humraaz | Chapter 12 updated on Page 45 - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: rikara94

<font color="#ff3366">Omg..yeh sach mein hai kya..mai sapna toh nahi dekh rahi😆</font>


<font color="#ff3366">You know tasnim this is what i always wanted to read and you did it..dil khush kar ditta ji aapne toh😳</font>

<font color="#ff3366">Really amazing prologue..beautifully written</font>

<font color="#ff3366">You described every emotion perfectly..</font>

<font color="#ff3366">I love this strong gauri..for her their is nothing above her self respect..hatts of to you girl👏</font>

<font color="#ff3366">Hopefully their path will cross soon..</font>

<font color="#66ccff">''mil jate hain jo bane, ek duje ke vaste"</font>

<font color="#ff3366">You know i can't wait for the first chapter after reading this dhamkhedhar prologue..so plz plz continue soonish.. Jyada wait mat karwana apni iss chirraiya ko😆</font>

Hehehe..aap sapna nehi dekh rahi ho meri behna.. 😆
I always wanted something like this on screen for Rikara..but phooti kismat.. 😳
I never even thought of writing something like this..then Poorva pushed me and asked to give it a try..and I'm so glad you liked it..
I love the Dabang GKS..and you'll get to see her with full swag here.. 😉
Their path are meant to be crossed..kab kahan kaise yeh soch ne wali baat hain.. 😛
Are shan't ho jao didu..maine abhi first part type karna shuru bhi nehi kiya.. 😆
But I'll try to update by timorous night..hopefully I'll get enough time tomorrow to draft the chappy..college is getting on my nerves.. 😭
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Posted: 7 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

I'll not make you guys wait for too long..
And pleej give me an update soon.. *BEING OPPORTUNIST* 😆


@bold What?...you don't want to join them..the group is a bad influence 😆..That FArri turning everyone into an opportunist 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: AMIEO



@bold What?...you don't want to join them..the group is a bad influence😆..That FArri turning everyone into an opportunist😆

I didn't know Farro is the leader of opportunist group..maine toh ainvaayi bol diya.. 😆
But if the group has the power to make you give early updates then I'm more than willing to join.. 😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
#24
Such a treat it was to see gauri answering back omkara...👏👏
I'm really excited for their story to start again with your twist...😊


Update soon❤️


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome... loved the way Gauri gave it back to Omkara
Continue Soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: aayushi1

Such a treat it was to see gauri answering back omkara...👏👏

I'm really excited for their story to start again with your twist...😊


Update soon❤️


You'll get to see much more of the dabang Gauri..
I'll try to update soon..
Thank you..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: devildiva21

Awesome... loved the way Gauri gave it back to Omkara
Continue Soon

Thank you so much..
Will try to post the first part very soon..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#28
Chapter 1


Omkara wasn't able to concentrate on the sculpture he has been trying to make from the past few weeks..seems like he lost all his inspiration to create art..he cannot concentrate on his paintings and sculptures anymore..all he can think about are the changes of his life...

He had to join business much to his annoyance..he wasn't left with any other option when Svetlana continuously started asking the promised hundred crore from him ..he needs to give her the money as soon as possible..she'll not stay with him and return to his father if he fails to give her the money..

But even if he gives the money will she stop blackmailing him..?? Will his father stop running behind Svetlana..?? Will his mother get her husband's love..??

He knows very well that Svetlana will not be satisfied with just hundred crore..neither his father will forget Svetlana so soon and start love his mother..but he cannot voice the truth before anyone...

He saw his mother shedding tears..he saw her pleading before her husband and his so called father...he saw her drowning into addiction of alcohol..she never deserved the kind of treatment she has got from her husband..and he promised himself that he'll do everything to give her the happiness she truly deserves...

He has been doing every possible thing from the past three months to save his parents marriage..and announcing Svetlana his would be wife was the worst thing he has ever done in his whole life..Svetlana was the woman who ruined his mother's life, his childhood, his adolescence..and now she's hell bent on destroying his whole life..

Sometimes he just wants to run away from everything..but then he remembers his mother's tear stained face, the burn marks in her body, the crummy state of her and he stays back tolerating everything..

Last three months were the worst days of his life..he had to get engaged to Svetlana..he had to leave his passion, his art and he had to marry a girl whom he hates to the core...he cannot even think of accepting her as his wife..for him she's nothing less than Svetlana..she's the mistress of another Tej Singh Oberoi..all she care about is money..she's a woman with no principle and loyalty..she ran away from her own marriage..but why did she run..?? Wasn't she the one who danced happily around Kali Thakur..?! Wasn't she the one who was smiling and celebrating when Jhanvi Thakur burnt herself alive..?! Wasn't she the one who was ready to marry a already married Kaali Thakur and his three brothers..??

His mind screamed yes..but his heart wasn't ready to accept..he saw purity in her eyes..he saw that pain in her eyes when he accused her of being a characterless woman..her last words were still fresh in his mind..she advised him to not judge anyone before knowing everything about the situation.. Is he judging her without even knowing her state..?? Is there any other part of the story which he doesn't know..?? Is he wrong about her...??

His mind is saying she's a vile woman..but his heart cannot agree..it is not ready to accept what his mind is shrieking..he never faced a situation like this...he always thought from his heart..yes he got hurt many times by following his heart..but listening to his mind never let him rest in peace..even now he was feeling restless for what he has done to Gauri listening to his mind..since the day he came back from Bareilly there was a battle between his mind and heart..and he wasn't knowing if his mind is right or his heart..it is difficult for him to live like this..he wants to end the chapter of Gauri from his life..he'll surely find an answer and thus he decided to to get every information about Gauri Kumari Sharma...wiping the sloppy clay from his hands he searched for his phone hurriedly..

"Khanna, mujhe Gauri Kumari Sharma ke bare mein sab information chahiye...", growled a restless Omkara..

"Sure sir..just give me a few hours..."

"Okay..but make sure it's only between you and me..", he said hesitant..

"Don't worry sir..", Khanna assured him..

Omkara was sure Khanna will get him every single information of the woman named Gauri Kumari Sharma..but he was restless..he could feel his heart thumping against his chest for something he didn't know...

He was lost in his thoughts when Svetlana entered his room..

"Kya hain..?", he asked disinterested..

"Kuch nehi, baby..main toh tumse aise hi milne agayi..", she smiled making him more irritated.."Aur yeh kya..?? Tum aab tak taiyyaar nehi huye..?? Sham ko hi humara roka hain..remember..??"

He closed his eyes..taking a deep breath to calm himself, he said, "Mujhe yaad hain..aur waqt aane pe main taiyyar bhi ho jaunga..now can you please leave me alone..??"

"Chalo..jab tum itna pyaar se bol rahe ho toh main tumhe akela chhod hi deti hoon..par bohot jald humari shaadi hone wali hain..aur uske baad tum mujhse dur bhag nehi paoge..", she left smirking..

The thought of marrying Svetlana was killing him from inside..but there's nothing he can do..if he refuse to marry her she'll return to his father..and cannot let this happen..he cannot let her ruin his mother's life..he'll marry Svetlana may what comes..

It was already evening and Omkara was called downstairs by Svetlana for the roka ceremony..he reluctantly got ready and started moving his feet when Khanna knocked his door..

"Sir, here's the file with the details of Gauri Kumari Sharma.."

"Thank you so much, Khanna..you can leave now..", Omkara said taking the file..

Khanna left nodding..

Omkara was feeling scared..he somehow knew that the file contains something which is going to bring a change in his life..he was scared that if he find Gauri innocent then he'll not be able to forgive himself for accusing a pure soul..but if Gauri is proven guilty he'll not be able to take it..he always prioritised his heart over his brain..and if this time his brain wins he'll be ashamed of himself for listening to his heart..

Gathering much courage he opened the file and the information written in bold letters in the paper were enough to shake his whole existence...


Done with the first chappy..😳

Flying eggs, tomatoes and chappals are always welcomed..
😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Why you stop there?!! I want to know what the file says 😆...UPdate soon!..I wonder what Om will do next hehehe
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Posted: 7 years ago
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CLIFHANGER😒
The update was great!!! I liked how omkara listened to his heart and got information about GKS...He wants his heart to win...awww👏👏

Loving the story so far...Continue soonish❤️

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