UDAAN DESTINY -FF

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jaanulovejaanam

@jaanulovejaanam

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Posted: 7 years ago

DESTINY FF..

ye udaan hai sachche pyaar ki,sachchi dosti ki

apni ek alag manzil chunne ki ,

jab koi apna hokar bhi anjaan ho jaata hai

aur koi anjaan hokar bhi apna... kya hai ye?

Is it destiny ?

YE KAHANI HAI DOSTI AUR PYAAR KI KHOJ KI ...!

TO KNOW MORE...KEEP READING AND ENJOYING

(frds im rewriting my ff for my frds who requested it many times and all those who missed it...)

#creationschhavi

Edited by jaanulovejaanam - 7 years ago

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jaanulovejaanam

@jaanulovejaanam

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

Concept-chakor has studied really well ...against every path of bhaiyaji ...loves vivaan alot and know bhaiyaji manohar how clever they are ranjana also...she knows they all want her to leave vivaan life forever...
But somewhere she thinks vivaan will support her in tought times...

Vivaan is the character as he is now

Adi is the intelligent one ...scored very well in exams...even chakor is not so much studious as he is ...

suraj is kn son.

other characters will explore when the story moves.

part 1

Story starts with chakor saying good bye to her parents in train..

Maai ...babaa...bye...
Imli:di...di...bye...
Chakor:Bye imli...
Imli:apna khyaal rakhna ...
chakor:tu bhi apna aur maai baaba ka khyal rakhna

Adi is sitting on the upper of the train
And chakor inside the train

Vivaan running behind the train calling chakor name but chakor in her own world missing her maai baba and sister imli...train does not stop for vivaan and in anger he told kulli...dekha tumhari vaja se humari train miss ho gayi ... humari chakor humse door ho gayi...ab jaao yahaan se hogaya tumhaara kaam aur ab tumhe ek rupya bhi nahin milega iska...

Kulli-kaisa jamana aa gaya hai ...ek to kaam karo aur ...
Vivaan lost in his and chakor thoughts...
Kuch kaha tumne...tum abhi tak yahin khade hue ho...jao door ho jaao humari nazron se ...
He hits him
Then scene shifts to adi ...missing his dada dadi maa...and ishwar ...papa...
Papa aap kahaan ho ...hume apke saath ki zaroorat hai...

Precap-train stops at a station btw jaipur
Chakor steps out of the train humara bag kahaan gaya she stands on the platform searching for it and suddenly a man jumps on the platform from the roof of the train ...and chakor gets scared ...

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

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+ 11

Posted: 7 years ago

nice introduction.all the heroes r there in the pics.curious to know who is chakor's guy in this ff.waiting 4 the part1

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jaanulovejaanam

@jaanulovejaanam

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

Part 2

Chakor on platform searching her bag ...suddenly

a man jumps on the platform from the roof of the train

Chakor gets shocked and turns... That man turns to be aditya...his one hand on the platform and other on his bag... She goes straightly towards him and says Tum pagal ho...koi bhala aise darata hai kisi ko...

Aditya:dikhne mein to badi strong ho isse dar gayi tum...

Chakor:tum bhi dikhne mein theek thaak lagte ho par ho to tum bhi bewakoof hi na...

aditya points finger at chakor and says kya kaha tumne ...humse aaj tak kisi ne aise baat nahin ki aur tum...(in angry mode)

chakor:maiya re ek to dara te ho aur upar se safaai bhi dete ho

Chakor:akad to dekho iski...abhi bhi yahin khada hai...

Aditya:kuchh kaha tumne...?

Chakor:nahin.. nahin to...

aditya:aaj subha subha kisse paala pad gaya ab lagta hai pura din kharab jaayega...

Chakor was busy searching for her bag ...and turns when she listens adi voice as if he said something.. .

Chakor turns and says...:kuchh kaha tumne ...

Aditya:humne...humne to kuchh nahin kaha jaroor tumhaare hi kaan baj rahe honge..

Chakor and adi crosses each other paths

and goes in diff direction... Adi stops suddenly and and turns and calls back chakor but she was nowhere there ...

He remembers when chakor was mummering to herself kahaan gaya mera bag abhi to yahin tha...

he sees a label on the bag chakor name was written on it

are iss ladki ko hum kab se awaaz de rahe the par isne to jaise apne kaanon mein rui daal rakhi hai ...

he lifts her bag and then stops suddenly...and says ek minute chakor...wo yahaan ...kaise. ..are hum bhi kitne paagal hain ye ladaaki kabhi chakor ho hi nahin sakti...wo to humari best friend

...he remember his and chakor masti together during childhood

And thinks to walk away...he moves in opposite direction but again stops ...

Par kaise ...?

He thinks for sometime keeping finger on his chin

idea...!

He goes to the platform no 2 and tells to an announcement for this bag... of chakor whover that girl is ...

Chakor on her way thinks maiya re sab jaga dhoon liya... par pata nahin yeh bag gaya to gaya kahan ...usme meri maai baba ki yaadein thi.. .

she sits sadly on a bench

She hears some announcement going on of a bag who has a label chakor on it..

she says thank u daag baba...humara baag akhir mil hi gaya.. .

She runs towards the platform 2 to take her bag and suddenly she slips of the platform and next train going to come towards her but someone holds her hand and catches her and saves her life ..

... the train goes and thats adi who has saved chakor ...

precap-chakor asks the announcer ...who has given u mine bag...i want to thank him ...where is he... And the announcer says...:par wo to chala gaya

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jaanulovejaanam

@jaanulovejaanam

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: jasminerahul
nice introduction.all the heroes r there in the pics.curious to know who is chakor's guy in this ff.waiting 4 the part1

dear posted part 1

hope u will enjoy it ...

as the story continues ...its starting is from frdship ... love u can guess in the story that who will be her destiny in this ff...

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

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+ 11

Posted: 7 years ago

is chakor going 4 higher studies?Vivan is so angry as chakor left.will he follow her?

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

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+ 11

Posted: 7 years ago

Aditya's intro n chatya nok jhok were funny.Aditya got Chatya's bag.cool.he saw her name on it n is confused if she is his childhood friend.interesting.Aditya saving Chakor was amazing.now chatya will get her bag n waiting to see her reaction when she comes to know that its Aditya who found her bag.will their friendship be revived?