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Sorry don't knmw wht happn with my post button its got posted 4 times
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you always gives us quick update so no need to say sorry. There's no hurry do update when u get time

Thanks for your patience and understanding sis.
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Chapter 9 will be updated now
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Rented Love

Chapter 9

Daljeet Juneja was feeling very much satisfied with the progress of her brilliant plan. She was proud of herself for successfully recruiting Heer and Maher for the rented love thing. She was glad that, she had a great friend like Tarun in Juneja brother's office.

Daljeet found Tarun very trust worthy. Actually Tarun was only two three years older than her daughter, but despite of that Tarun had become her best friend in the form of junior friend. Tarun was like a trusted younger brother to Daljeet.

Tarun was secretly monitoring the interactions between Juneja brothers and Maan sisters in the office. Daljeet had become very happy to know that, Heer, and Meher started to develop actually romantic feelings for Juneja brothers.

Daljeet knew that both of her nephews had personality, looks, and kindness that would attract these girls.

For Daljeet's ultimate plan, it was necessary that, both sisters started to feel romantically about her both nephews. It would make easier for her to control these sisters if they would develop deep romantic feelings for Juneja brothers.

She was also feeling great after knowing that, both Prem and Preet has shown the signs of falling for Maan sisters. She was very much excited to learn that, Prem and Preet would took Maan sisters to a "business meeting" in a coffee shop. It seemed like her nephews were becoming restless to win the heart of their ladyloves.

"Daljeete kaha kho gaye, mein itne der se tumhe pukar raha hu, tum sunte hein nahi ho." Balwant complained to his wife.

" Thick hein na aab sun rahi ho na tumhare baate. Battao batt kiya hein." DJ told her husband.

"Jald se traditional dress pehen lo, papa aarahe hum se milne." Balwant told her.

" Uss khados buddhe ko abhi aana tha, kitna jaroori kamtha meri." DJ complained.

" Daljeete ye maat bhulo wo mera papa hein." Balwant warned Daljeet.

" To meine kab inkar kiya, lekin ye baat se to tum bhi inkar nahi kar sakte ki tumhare papa, yaane meri sasur ji ek number ki khados, aab meri raste choro mujhe room mein jake change karni hein." Daljeet told him

Soon, she changed her dress and started to wait for her father in law Aparajit Juneja.

Soon they had been notified by their house cleaner about the arrival of Aparajit Juneja.

"Bauji mein aapko bata nahi sakti ki mein aap ko yaha dekke kitni kush hu."Daljeet told Aparajit.

" Wo sab to thick hein, lekin tum dono ko to pata heina agar agle chay mahine ke bitch mein tum dono mera kam nahi kya to tum dono apne har ek kushi, ash aur aram se hat dhona pasega." Aparajit warned them.

" Bauji aisa nawat kabhi nahi ayegi, kynki mujhe puri confidence hein ki Prem aur Preet shadi agle chay mahine ke bitch ho jayegi." Daljeet told her father in law in a confident voice.

"Tum aise dawa kyun kar rahi ho?" Aparajit asked Daljeet.

"Prem aur Preet ki zindegi mein payyar aageyga bauji, kutch hi mahine mein aap ko dono pote ko liye bahu mil jayegi." Balwant told Aparajit.

" Ye to bahut acche baat hein, kya tum dono wo do ladki ko jante ho?" Aparajit asked them.

" Ha bauji hum dono ko jante hein, dono Prem aur Preet ke office mein kam karti hein, lekin bauji wo dono middle class family se hein." Daljeet told Aparajit.

" Mujhe koi farak nahi parta unki class status. Ek bar mein aapne Lalit ke mamle galti kiya tha, mein wohi galti dobara kabhi nahi do raha ungi.

Agar tum dono un dono ladki ko jante ho. To mera meeting fix karao wo do ladki se. Mein undono se mil na chahati hu." Aparajit demanded.

Both Balwant and Daljeet had become shocked after hearing that demand.

"Kya." Both Daljeet and Balwant uttered in a shocked voice.

In another part of Hyderabad

Prem and Preet were anxious as they were approaching near to the coffee shop. Both brothers were desperately hoping that Maan sisters would not able to suspect them.

Heer and Meher were curious on the other hand. It was their first business meeting with their bosses. They were also having a feeling that, that meeting would not be just a business meeting alone.

Prem and Preet both opened doors of cars for Heer and Meher respectively. Heer and Meher were surprised by that gesture of Juneja brothers, as they were their bosses.

However, both sisters knew that, Juneja brothers had a strong value system, which was reflected in their chivalry.

Both sisters like that gesture as they were already started to develop feelings for the Juneja brothers.

Soon four of them reached to the coffee shop. Heer and Meher were hesitating in sitting in same table with their bosses but both Prem and Preet indicated that, there was no need to sit in another table.

Juneja brothers told them their client wouldn't mind if their PS sit with them in the same table.

"Heer aap kya lena pasand karenge chaiye ya coffee?" Prem asked her in a sweet voice.

Heer once again felt butterflies in her stomach after hearing her man's voice. Heer realized that she was thinking Prem as her man and she blushed more because of that.

" Jee mujhe coffe pasand hein aap ki tarah." Heer told Prem in slightly shy voice.

Prem felt very much happy when he realized that, Heer had noticed his coffee drinking habit. He was also glad that, when he recognized Heer was trying to highlight their similarity in coffee drinking habit.

Prem was greatly encouraged by that. He felt there was now a definite chance of relationship forming between them.

Preet also observed the whole situation and he was feeling happy for his elder brother. According to him, his brother Prem deserve happiness in his life and Heer Maan would be an ideal girl for his brother.

" Chalo bhaiya, bhabi ka kaam to ho gaya, aab mein bhi mera mamla aage bara lu." Preet told himself.

"Meher aap ko kya chahiye chaiye ya coffee?" Preet asked softly while looking very lovingly at Meher.

Meher had noticed the tone of Preet, it seemed like a boyfriend was lovingly ask his girlfriend about her food choice in a date. Meher also observed his intese-loving look at her. Meher felt like she would lose herself in these beautiful eyes. She could also see a desire for her in these beautiful eyes.

"Sir mujhe bhi coffe jyda pasand hein." Meher replied in a loving tone while looking lovingly at him.

Soon Prem and Preet ordered coffee for all of them

"Sir, meine aaj ki meeting ke liye kutch documents print kar ke le ayi hu. Aap zara dek lijye."Heer told Prem

Prem on the other hand was busy in thinking how beautiful Heer was looking without any make up. She had natural beauty.

Prem forwarded his hand to take the files from Heer, their hands touched with each other for few seconds. Both felt jolt in their bodies. An unknown desire rushed throughout their body.

After that, Prem looked at the file. The hard works of Heer impressed him. As a businessperson, he praised Heer for her good business sense in his mind. He was also glad to see Heer's dedication towards her job. Prem felt his respect for Heer increased more.

"Aapne bahut aache kaam kiya hein Heer. Ye sab document hamara bahut kam ayega." Prem praised Heer.

Heer smiled after hearing such kind of genuine praise. Prem Juneja had a great business sense and therefore getting praise from him for her professional skill was satisfactory for Heer as a professional.

"Preet Sir, hamara client ka share char baje yaha par ane kibaat thi, aab to poune panch bajj gaye, lekin wo nahi aye." Meher remarked.

Preet knew Meher would ask that type of question when his clients would not come in 4:30.

"Mein bhi hayran hu Meher, shayed traffic mein atak gaye ho." Preet told Meher

"Sir, mein ek naya employee hu, isliye mein nahi janti ki mujhe ye kahene chahiye ya nahi, lekin hamare client ko ur bhi cautios hone ki jarurat tha. Unko koi haq nahi aap kI kimti waqt barbad karne ka." Meher told in an annoyed voice.

Preet liked how Meher care about him and how she was feeling angry on behalf of him. He liked the fighting spirit in Meher. "A beautiful lioness for this handsome lion." Preet thought.

" Meher jo baat sahi ho, usko baatne mein aapko sankoch karne ki jarurat nahi hein. Mein khud bhi thoda annoyed hu unki late aane se. Par hamesha samajta hu you should always try to make lemonade from lemon." Preet told her.

" Mein kutch samjhi nahi sir." Meher told Preet in a confused voice.

" Mujhe lagta hein Preet kehana cahahte ki kyun na hum hamare client ki anne tak kuch aur chease karte." Prem suggested.

" Jaise." Heer asked Prem.

"Jaise ki aap dono aap ki life ke kutch experience share ki jiye, hum aur Preet bhi karenge. Iss tarah se waqt kaat jayega." Prem replied to Heer.

Heer and Meher realized that, Prem and Preet definitely wanted to start a romantic relationship with them as they were taking great interest in their personal lives. That realization made both sisters immensely happy. They were also feeling strongly for Juneja brothers. Their hearts wanted to make a bond with the hearts of Juneja brothers.

They were thinking what to tell them.

" Kyun na hum sab hamare university life ke kucth experience bataye." Preet suggested.

" Lekin pahele kaun start karega?" Meher asked.

" Prem bhaiya start karenge, bhaiya kyun na aap Meher aur Heer ko aap ki university ki washroom se kudne ki kahani bataye." Preet suggested.

"Prem sir washroom se kyun kude the?" Heer innocently asked.

" Ek ladki ki waja se." Prem told Heer.

"Kya." Meher and Heer uttered.

Chapter End.

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Originally posted by: preciousrose26


you always gives us quick update so no need to say sorry. There's no hurry do update when u get time

Thank you Shuridh you're always on time but we slack off. Ty for your patience. 🤗
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Rented Love have crossed 2000 views. Thanks to everyone.

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Yay party 🥳time all

Thank Athi, you are great sis. What do you think about this chapter.
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CH 9 PAGE 21

Awesome update. Read it two days ago but couldn't type comment due to lack of time on hand.

The double date was nicely handled by you Shuridh.

I think you didn't over do anything as this is between bosses and employees - there is certain hesitancy between the couple. That was well done based on culture they were from I think.

Heer Prem as always cute.

Meher in her element haha pointed out the tardiness of the client - which I think was a "made up client' isn't it for the sake of having double date. Preet's idea to test the water - where the girls stand - if they like the boys or not. And he got the answer. So did Prem.

DJ vs her FIL was very interesting. That scene was superb I thought. Aparajit is a strong character I see. He's an injured lion - angry yet hurt and making a careful move towards grandsons.

Ya I'm as surprised as DJ that he wanted to meet the girls the grandsons are dating. He really wants to hurry up the marriage huh.

Well lets see if his wish would be granted or not. I think you're gona give his wish hai na Shuridh hehe.

Lets see.

Thank you for all the fantastic updates - very happy to see you're motivated and are consistent with updates to please the fans who do follow your creative work.

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