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CHAPTER 23
Its night . a beautiful night. They reached Darjeeling. From the moment she landed here. An uncanny feeling surrounded her. Like she can feel warmth in the wind of the place.
All of them just reached the hotel near darjeling toy train station. Its cool and soothing climate.
In the reception
{from here some part of the story will be like a drama like convo where Ja- jalal , Jo- Jodha, M- Mirza, R-ruqaiyaaa, Hu- humayun & Ha- hamida}
Receptionist (re): welcome to Darjeeling sir. How may i help you?
Ja: we have 4 rooms booked for today.
Re: ok sir, let me check.
After checking,
Re: I am sorry sir but u have 3 rooms book in the name of Jalaluddin ..
Ja: but miss, how can this possible. I my self booked 4 rooms.
Re: I am sorry but you can see yourself. May be there u did any mistake.
She shows her computer.
Ja: ok I will pay but I need 4 rooms.
Re: I am extremely sorry about that sir. But our hotel is full. U can see it's tourist season. But we can give u only 3 rooms.
Jalal was frustrated. But this time Humayun came to rescue.
Hu: (to the receptionist) give the keys mam. (To Jalal & Jodha) if u don't mind beta. Kya tum dono ek kamre me reh loge?
Jodha Jalal was shocked. How can they? They look at each other. Then Jalal said,
"may be we can arrange extra bed for Jodha.
Receptionist agreed and gave the keys. And they head towards their room.
While walking towards the rooms Humayun suggest them to rest so they can hit the market in the evening.
Jalal & Jodha enters the room. It's a double bedroom with closetdrawer and TV added with attached bathroom.
Ja: (to jodha) tum Jake freashh ho jao main suitcase se SAB nikalta hu.
Jo: nahi nahi AAP jaiye fresh ho jaiye, main SAB Nikal deti hu.
Ja: ok.
Saying this he entered the bathroom. While Jodha start to unpack.
After some time Jalal comeout from the bathroom. But he saw Jodha sit freeing like a doll in front of his suitcase. Jalal wonder what's the matter?
He wall towards her but suddenly she shriek like hell and top of her voice.
Jo: I am sorry. I am very sorry. Mujhe tumhara bag kholna nahi chahiye tha. Maaf kar do.. Maine tumhare 'woh' hath Ni lagaya. Bas ghalti se...
Ja: (shock) woh? Kya woh?
Jo: arry woh jo tum pehente ho. Niche!!!
Jodha pointsher finger towards the front. Jalal saw with horror as Jodha point out his underwears.
Ja: (with superfast speed grab those and hide it from jodhas eyes) ohhh... Woohoo... Tum jaao freashh ho jaao. Main dekhta hu.
The moment Jodha rush to bathroom, Jalal run out the tear drop from the corner of his eyes.. a similar incedent came in front of his eyes. Same city same people. But situation is the only thing is changed.
Flashback
It's the time when they gone for their honeymoon. They just came back from their trip to mirik. Jalal ask Jodha to pack their things as they will be returning home day after tomorrow.
He was in the bathroom when suddenly he heard a scream. Not too loud but a but pressed.
He came out wearing a towel and saw Jodha was standing with something in her hand.
Jalal got a minor heart attack watching what she is have in her hands.
His Underwear!!!!!!
God!!!! He don't know what to do? Jodha was watching the piece of cloth with open mouth while her eyes gone wide in shock.
The moment Jodha realise that Jalal is just behind her she turn around. And with that the hands of hers having his underwear came in front of him.
Jodha suddenly shout and drop the piece of cloth from her hand which Jalal got hold on time.
While panick.
Jo: sorry Jalal I am soo sorry. Who pata nahin kaise ... Maine ye... woh ghalti se...
Jalal hold Jodha by her shoulder and said,
Ja: " don't worry, Jodha. Relax. Ye koi Ajooba nahi hai. Tum itna panick mat ho. It's normal.
Jo: nahi nahi chi chi... Maine apka woh chi kaise...
Ja: Jodha, tum biwi ho meri. Or pyar ke bandhan se hum ek hai or ab to jism or rooh ke taraf se bhi hum ek hai Jodha. Or waise bhi tum ne mujhe Bina kapde ke dekha hai to ye underwear kya hai.
Jodha gone red in shyness. Jalal then started to walk towards her. The more Jalal come near she was going more in back. After two more steps her back collide with wall. While Jalal caged her putting both his hands beside her.
Jodha's breath got hitched as jalal's face come near her. She closed her eyes when she felt her lips were touched by jalal's rough one.
Jalal captured her waist with his strong arms. While he kissed her hard and breathless.
Jodha can't stand any more. Jalal realise that, so he picked her up and went towards their bed, without breaking the kiss.
End of flashback
Jalal had tears in his eyes.She is here. With him in the same room. But the situation is so different.
Jodha came out of the bathroom but she got confused looking at Jalal as he was sitting as it is holding his own underwear.
Jo: "Jalal!!
Jalal hurriedly pack his underwear and grab his towel and went to bath room, while Jodha look away.
Evening
The mall road is full of people crowd. Some people gazing near handicrafts shops, some are waiting near momo stalls for their food to arrive. Some people sitting near the golden statue.
Jodha Jalal Mirza and others walking towards the Hilton hotel where all the handicrafts stalls are.
Mi: bhaijaan! Bas or nahi!
Ja: kya hua Mirza? Ab thoda or chalo fir to mall aa hi jayega.
Mi: I am sorry bhaijaan. But let me ek niwala jab tak nai jayega tab tak main yaha se hilunga nahi.
Ha: Mirza! Tum bhukkhad ke bhukkhad hi rahoge. Ghumne aye hai or janab Ko khane se fursat nahi!!
Suddenly Jodha said chuckling,
Jo: tum Ko pata hai Mirza pichli bar mai or Jalal jab aye the na bilkul tumhare Jaisi harkate ki thi Maine. Fir Jalal ne mujhe keveters me le Jake Pure English Breakfast karwaya that. Uske pocket Khali ho gayi thi usdin puri ki puri.
All of them were looking at Jodha . While she was looking at them confused.
Ja: tumko sab... .. suddenly Mirza stops him holding his hand.
Jo: Jalal chalo na.. Mirza Ko kitna bhukhi lagi hai. Or sach kahu to mujhe v.
With this Jodha pulled Mirza with her and ran towards the market restaurant. Hamida comes to Jalal, who was having tears in his eyes and a polite smile on his face.
Ha: "sabar karo Jalal. Hume PURA yakeen hai ke Jodha Ko SAB kuch jaldi hi yaad aa jayega. Kaise Usne aj tum dono ki apas me hui baat yaad ki h, usse Hume yakeen ho Gaya hai, ke uske filme tumhare lie pyaar aj bhi Zinda hai. Bas us pyaar Ko Zinda karne ki koshish karo Jalal. Tumhari Jodha tumhare samne hogi.
Jalal wipe his tears out while nodding in positive. They went towards the way where Mira and jodha went.
After returning
It's late evening when Jodha suddenly offers Jalal to go for a sitting coffee time in the hotel rooftop.
Jalal was sitting in the only bench placed in the roof starring at the clear blue sky.
Jo: ye lo tumhari coffee. 1 spoon auger half cup milk and it's perfect.
Jalal look at her astonished.
Ja: how do u know that?
Now this is really confusing question for jodha, she herself don't know where did she know this. Jalal observed her face reaction thoroughly. Yes she seems confused.
Ja: it's ok. Not to worry may be ammijaan ne bataya hoga.
Jodha awkwardly smiled at him. And sit beside him.
She have may things to say. But could never dared to ask.
Jo: (gulping saliva) aamm jalal... woh ek baat puche?
Ja: (while sipping coffee) ha bolo.
Jo: tumne kabhi Sapna dekha hai?
Jalal look at her all confused. But as usual his mind travelled back to the down memory lane.
Ja: (dreamily) ha dekha h.
Jo: kya dekha hai?
Ja: ek bohot khubsurat Sapna. Ek khwab Jo har ladka shadi ke bad dekhta hai.
Jo: tumhari biwi kaha hai? (Hesitatingly) main Mili nahi usse.
Jalal look at her.
Ja: main to har Roz milta hu usse har din.. har Shaam har raat. Har din jab who apne bheege Baal pochti Hui bathroom se bahar ATI hai. Uske Lamar me woh chota sa til mere Dil me utar Jata hai.
Har dopeher mehsoos karta hu, jab who mere lie Apne hath se banaya khana leke ATI hai. Ya phir itvaar me also dopeher me meri baahome uljhi baalo Ko lie meri aankhon me jhakte hue dekha hai. Uski saree ka Achal sadak Jata that or ek jhalak in jism ki dkikhata that jiska main Pyaasa hu aaj bhi.
Har Shaam Ko milta hu use jab who mre lie garam garam chai ke saath pakode banake khilati thi. Shararat Karti thi kabhi kabhi mere chaai me ya to chini detinahi thi, toh kabhi pakode me mirchi zyada. Bilkul jhalli. Uski hasi uski pagalpan se mere duniya ke andhere Ko Mita diya Karti thi.
Har raat use chuta hu uski badan ki khushboo mere nind and ki wajah Banti hai aaj bhi. Uski who mom Jaisi badan Jo mere bahon me ate hi pighal jaya Karti thi
. Uski ohh siskiya, woh ek dusre ke baahon me hone ka Sukh me uska vilaap aj bhi mere kaano me goonjhta hai. To bolo.. kaise bhul Sakta hu main use jab who mre har ek peher, har ek pal har ek SaaS har ek dhadkan har ek boondh khoon me Mili Hui hai.kaise bhul Sakta hu main use?
Jalal look at her in with thousand of emotions in his eyes.
Jo: bohot pyar karte ho usse?
Ja: (chuckling) itna bada emotional bhasaan Dia fir bhi ye Sawaal? Tumhe andaza bhi nahi. Kid had taq mohobbat Kiya hai usse. Shadi ki din se leke aajtak who mohobbat badhti hi gayi hai bas!
Some where listening to this a pang in her heart appear. No matter what she feel, at the end of the day the truth is that Jalal is someone else's. He is married. And now it's confermed that he love his wife to the end of the world.
And this love somewhere left jodha's heart to bleed. But she controlled herself.
Jo: socho ki kabhi koi or ladki se tumhe pyar ho jaye, ya koi or ladki tumhe tumhare biwi se zyada pyaar karein to? Tum use nahi apnaoge?
Ja: Jodha, Maine zindagi me ek hi Insaan Ko apnaya hai Apne patni ho ya apni premika ho. Chahe kitna bhi Toofan, kitna bhi bhuri haalat ho mere zindagi me mere biwi ke ilava kisi or ke lie koi jagha nahin hai.
Jalal told in such a strong and determined voice jodha's heart broke in a minute.
Jo: (in broken voice while closed eyes) agar who ladki main Hui to bhi nahi?
J's eyes got wide in shock, what did she just tell?
Jodha observed jalal's astonished look, she could tell it's totally shock for him.
Ja: Jodha tum...
She sprang up in the moment and took her cup and snached jalal's also.
Jo: nahi Jalal kuch nahi, main bas aise hi...
She was about to go, Jalal hold her hand from back.
Ja: sach batao Jodha.
Jodha closed her eyes in pain. She told that in a flow of emotions. She can't face him now.
Ja: sach bolo Jodha, kya kehna chahti thi tum.
She turn around. Jalal was looking at her intensly. Jodha can't stand herself now. The tears which she hold.
Ja: (watching her crying) Jodha... ye kya... kya baat hai... ( hold the cups and put those in the bench)
Jodha started crying profoundly.
Jo: I am sorry jalal, main ye karna nahi chahti thi per kya Karu...
Ja: Jodha... dekho...
Jo: nahi Jalal ( rubbing her tears) aj bat aayi hai toh aj bol Lene do mujhe...haa PYAAR HO GAYA HAI TUMSE JALAL. Kya Karu. Pata tha ke tum shadishuda ho. Per main Apne aapko samhal Ni payi. Uske lie maaf karna tum mujhe. Chahe uske lie tum mujhe Jo saza do mujhe manzoor. Per mujhe ghalat mat samjho.
Jalal couldn't said anything. It's beyond his imagination. His wife his Jodha again fall in love with him even after loosing her memory. May be it's true. True love never lost. It comes back to them.
Ja: main tumhe ghalat nai samajh raha. Per yeh...
Jo: i am sorry jalal. Maaf kar do mujhe.
She was about go suddenly her feet slipped. "aahh she was about to fall down but she felt a secure arms caged her in those.
Fear of landing in hard roof floor made her close her eyes. She open her eyes to see jalal looking at her teary eyed.
Ja: (immediately grabbing her for a hug)don't you know how much i scared for you. Its painfull. Painfull to see u slipped like that. Apna khayal kyu nahi rakhti tum. Har pal is ladki koi na koi chahiye samhalne ke lie.
For a moment Jodha gone shocked looking at jalal's terrified voice and soo much caring nature.
"jalal a whisper from Jodha get jalal back from his panick state.
Looking at her jalal could say she is holding something. A gush of action and she will blow.
Jalal think nothing that time. Just forwarded his hand and touch lightly on her cheek.
And may be thats the blow. She couldn't survive. She hug him as tightly as she could.
Both of their mind gone blank on the moment. After so many longing days they are in each other's arms.
Jalal grab her by her waist tightly. May be its wrong but he want to forget all those right and wrong in this moment.
He caresses her back which gave shiver in her body. She grab his shirt tightly to hold her passion. She cant control her body now.
Jalal broke the hug and face her. Seeing her eyes close he remember the moment the make love for the first time. How much shy Jodha got. Only his touch she reacted. He touch her tear melded cheek with his long fingers. She breaths heavily. Its too much fascinating for her. His touch his breath lingering on her lips is too much she can hold for.
"Jodha whisper with his warm breath on her supple lips make to open her eyes. Its red due to crying, dark due to passion.
Jalal cant stand her passionate eyes. Its pulling him. no..no jalal...dont his mind warn him. But his body adamant in its decision.
His fingers pressed her lips. And its a bomb of desire for Jodha. Her whole body jerked with the sensation.
"Jodha, look at me his husky voice make her look at him.
"I want to give myself a second chance. Will u be with me?
She cant think better than this. She closd her eyes and move to him. He got the signal.
Without any moment his rough lips meet her soft one. Without any problem, without any hesitance. She is in experience as for her but with his lips touch. She immediately responded. She open her mouth to invite jalal to move further. He push his tongue in her mouth while his hands caressing her back .
With a small peck and a smooching sound ended their after soo long first kiss.
Jalal move ahead towards her to grab her hand but she ran away with a shy chuckle. And no wander he follows.
Jodha run around and Jalal heard her anklets music and turned around, making Jalal go mad, and he looked around unable to control himself, "Jalal," Jodha's voice Made him turn around and his heart skipped a beat as he saw the flawless beauty standing there, shining like a temple statue in the moon light,
Jalal was looking at her mesmerized by her shinning silver gaze and Jodha too was smiling and looked straight into his black diamond's shining at her, they stood there like frozen up in time,
Maine Khud Ko De Diya Hai Tujhko
Main Tera Hoon Tera
Kaate Na Kate
Leta Hai Yeh Karvate
Din Mera Din Mera
Aa Tujh Mein Bitaaun Ratiyaan
Dil Dil Ko Sunaaye Batiyaan
Aa Tujh Mein Bitaaun Ratiyaan
Ho Tu Mujh Mein Kahin Pe Bas Jaa
Jalal and Jodha slowly came close to each other and stood opposite to each other and Jodha was blushing up like hell, and she was breathing high up, Jodha closed her eyes as she wasn't able to take Jalal's stare, Jodha suddenly felt Jalal's rough hands on her cheek and the small touch created the heat of a sun, and Jalal caressed her cheeks slowly, and Jodha caught his hands and looked at him, His eyes shining with desire and love creating an lustful look,
Jalal's longing look made Jodha feel the shiver all around her body, Jodha then bought his hand towards her lips and pressed her lips on his large fingers, Jalal was burning up in his desire for her, his each cell screaming up for her, her love, her everything, but he didn't wanted to hurry, it's her day so he let it in her control and stood there breathing hard, his heart beat was up in a race,
Tune Chuaa
To Main Dhadakne Laga
Dil Ki Duaa
Hothon Pe Rakhne Laga
Jodha looked at Jalal looking at her deep and she smiled and try to move away, blushing up, but stopped as Jalal held her shoulder, Jodha's heart stopped for a second, but she retrieved herself and turned and looked at Jalal, who was breathing heavy, his warm breathe can be felt even in a distance and his body had stiffen and his face turned hard and his eyes darker
Tune Chuaa
To Main Dhadakne Laga
Dil Ki Duaa
Hothon Pe Rakhne Laga
Jodha was too feeling an desire inside her for Jalal, she don't know how bold she would go but she decided to go with her heart and the moment and looked at Jalal, and she slowly touched his cheeks, the trimmed hair in his cheeks pricked her soft hand, she slowly caressed her hand on his cheeks and Jalal fisted his hands trying to control his wild passion screaming inside him after soo many days.
Aa Tujh Mein Bitaaun Ratiyaan
Dil Dil Ko Sunaaye Batiyaan
Aa Tujhmein Bitaaun Ratiyaan
Ho Tu Mujhmein Kahin Pe Bas Jaa
Jalal closed his eyes and leaned on onto her hand, feeling her soft hands, Jodha saw his surrender self and smiled up, she felt the control she was having now on Jalal, she took her hand away and Jalal looked at her and pulled her close by her waist, as he can't control himself anymore, Jodha trembled by his sudden move and she slowly pulled his hands from her and rushed away towards their room and Jalal too followed her,
Meri Raahe
Kadmon Pe Tere Ruke
Yeh Panaahe
Sajde Mein Tere Jhuke
Jodha went to theirroom and stopped for a second and looked at Jalal, who was just a few feet away from her and looked with her longing eyes, signing him to follow her in making him go mad and she went inside and Jalal too followed her inside the room, and closed the door behind him,
Yeh Meri Raahe
Kadmon Pe Tere Ruke
Yeh Panaahe
Sajde Mein Tere Jhuke
Jodha breathed sharpened as she felt Jalal's hot hand on her waist making her shiver, her bare skin burning up with his touch, Jodha closed her eyes but she felt Jalal's strong frame touching her fully as he closed the space between them and stood behind her, she felt his warm breathe on her neck and Jalal slowly pulled the hair covering her back and touched her creamy skin and slowly pressed his lips her back, Making Jodha tremble up, she was feeling the electric shock all over her body and she closed her eyes tight unable hold the pleasure raising inside her with his hard lips brushing her softly, Jalal slowly slide his hand from her waist and inserted his hand into her saree and touched her belly, making Jodha to lean back on Jalal,
Aa Tujh Mein Bitaaun Ratiyaan
Dil Dil Ko Sunaaye Batiyaan
Aa Tujh Mein Bitaaun Ratiyaan
Ho Tu Mujh Mein Kahin Pe Bas Jaa
Jalal pressed her on to him, making her melt into him, Jodha held his other hand for support,
Jodha then held the rose from the bedside vase and took an deep gasp letting the deep fragrance fill her nostril, she doesn't know what it was, but it made her feel an heat immediately, "how is it," Jalal asked and Jodha looked at him, "Intoxicating" Jodha asked with a blushed, "not more than you," Jalal said and went near her, and got the flowers from her hand and throw it on the table there, and he stepped back and looked at Jodha with his desire look making Jodha shiver and turned back blushing up
Maine Khud Ko De Diya Hai Tujhko
Main Tera Hoon Tera
Kaate Na Kate
Leta Hai Ye Karvate
Din Mera Din Mera
She went near him and looked into his eyes, and Jalal too looked into her shining eyes, Jodha blushed and she caught Jalal's hands and kept on her waist and Jalal held her close immediately and she leaned on to Jalal's chest, Jalal felt her hot breathe on his chest and he felt a vibe all over his body and pressed his hand on her waists, Jalal's eyes widen up as he felt Jodha's hand unbuttoning his shirt,
Jalal was breathing high, not know is she serious or not, Jodha pressed her cheeks on to his little hairy chest and pressed her lips on Jalal's chest, making Jalal to moan, and it was his answer too, Jalal held Jodha tight and dragged her on to the bed and made her lay on the bed and hovered over her, laying besides her and looked at the beauty laid besides him, just for him, Jalal slowly inserted his Hand inside her saree and caressed her stomach, Jodha moaned slightly and it added fuel to Jalal's flame,
Jalal then pressed his lips on her neck and was brushing his lips on the neck line, Jodha eyes filled up, this is it' Jodha thought and closed her eyes, but a tears escaped her eyes and fall on Jalal's cheeks and Jalal stopped kissing and looked at Jodha's face, and moved away "Jodha" Jalal whispered, and she opened her teary eyes and looked at Jalal, "Jodha, I think, we should," Jalal said getting up,
Jalal sat up, leaning on to the bed frame, "No," Jodha said getting up and leaned on his hard chest, his skin was burning hot, "Jodha, there is," Jalal started, "Please, don't," Jodha pleaded and looked at Jalal with her golden gaze, she slowly caressed Jalal's chest, and Jalal body turned tensed immediately, "I need you," Jodha said the Magical words, making Jalal mad and he took her lips immediately, and pushed her on to the bed and got on her top,
Jodha felt drugged in his masculine power, she felt his wild kissing, eating her lips and playing with her tongue, Jodha closed her eyes and she was in heaven, she felt too much excitement and suddenly she lost all her senses totally, he open u her blouse hook and lift it up from her body. The last thing Jodha remember before closing her eyes to sleep, jalal undo her inner hook and throw it somewhere and soon a warm of his mouth cover her mound and suck it politely. And in between drowning, she can feel her hand and mouth are playing all over her body.
Loving her love would be like this... she never thought
Aa Tujh Mein Bitaaun Ratiyaan
Dil Dil Ko Sunaaye Batiyaan
Aa Tujh Mein Bitaaun Ratiyaan
Ho Tu Mujh Mein Kahin Pe Bas Jaa...
The more night grow deep... their warmth of passion grow ten folds more...may be its their time...after so many days of thirst.
Next morning
It's a cool morning. May be it's regular for other people. But for Jalal it's not.
He was awake for 2 hours . But still he isn't getting bored. A slight smile and a drop of tear lingering in his face. After so many days. She is in his arms. Just like last time in This city. An unknown emotion force him to shade tears today. An emotion to have his life in his arms again.
In the bed Jalal and Jodha laying half naked with Jodha in jalal's arm snuggling on his neck and wrapping hands on his chest and waist. Her naked back was visible to jalal. He is having urge to lick that neck and the back once. But he have to control. He started caressing her milky white back while in her sleep she started to run her nose and lips to jalal's slightly hairy chest.
"ohhh it's heaven!!! thought Jalal while removing the hair from her neck and wrapping her slick waist tight. He forwarded his fingers to her neck and back. With his touch she twitch a little but grab him more tightly and go to sleep again.
Jalal free her hand from his body and draw the sheet on her body and went to bathroom.
After sometime Jodha wake up scratching her eyes. She was about to sit and yawn, she understand the she is bare from the upper.
A great pang in her head suddenly hit her. OH MY GOD!! She try to remember past night incident. Before registering anything she saw a male shirt and pant just lying carelessly like someone throw it away.
Her world come to an end understanding she was bedded with the same married man she love and the same person who loved his wife like mad!!!!
Precap: GUYS?? U STILL NEED A PRECAP?? I leave this question to u all lets see how ur imagination work in this tell me what will happen after this????
Song info: Maine khud ko song from the movie RAGINI MMS 2 featuring Sunny Leone
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