(FF) Kyun Aisa Hua? Pt. 40 Pg. 145

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey everyone.this is my idea for the new storyline coming up in BMTD....Right now here is the character sketch...

Vikram

A boy born in Delhi, brought up by his single mother, has one sibling, a brother, Arav, who is younger than him. He studied at a boarding school in Shimla, and has now gone to Mumbai University for Commerce. He is a compassionate person, with a rough exterior, his first impression is always different for each person, as he tries to judge people on their looks and behaviour, without getting to know them.

Sanvi

A girl who is born in Mumbai, and lives with both her parents. She is currently in Mumbai University for studying Arts. Her major passion in life is music, and dancing, every form of art basically. She is never afraid of giving her opinion and is always opposed to people ridculing those lesser than them. She always tries to find time to spend with her younger sister Shina, who is too busy trying new fashions and make-up techniques. She is the apple of her father's eye, but her mom never acknowledges her.

FF Index

Pt. 1 Pg.2

Pt. 2 Pg. 4

Pt. 3 Pg. 7

Pt. 4 Pg. 9

Pt. 5 Pg. 11

Pt. 6 Pg. 16

Pt. 7 Pg. 29

Pt. 8 Pg. 37

Pt. 9 Pg. 40

Pt. 10 Pg. 42

Pt. 11 Pg. 48

Pt.12 Pg. 52

Pt. 13 Pg. 59

Pt. 14 Pg. 63

Pt. 15 Pg. 66

Pt. 16 Pg. 68

Pt. 17 Pg. 71

Pt. 18 Pg. 76

Pt. 19 Pg. 80

Pt. 20 Pg. 82

Pt. 21 Pg. 87

Pt. 22 Pg. 91

Pt. 23 Pg. 95

Pt. 24 Pg. 97

Pt. 25 Pg. 102

Pt. 26 Pg. 105

Pt. 27 Pg. 108

Pt. 28 Pg. 111

Pt. 29 Pg. 114

Pt. 30 Pg. 118

Pt. 31 Pg. 121

Pt. 32 Pg. 123

Pt. 33 Pg. 125

Pt. 34 Pg. 128

Pt. 35 Pg. 130

Pt. 36 Pg. 133

Pt. 37 Pg. 135

Pt. 38 Pg. 137

Pt. 39 Pg. 141

Pt. 40 Pg. 145

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Did you change sagar's name? Aisa kyun kiya?

Jaldi continue kar ab..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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sounds very interesting 😛 ....
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Ohh!! I know I'll just love your FF, especially because I love your other one very much, and your style of writing is amazing!!!

Please post Part 1 soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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very nice start! I too feel that the new twist will inspire many cool story lines! Keep it up! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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continue soon=)) .... 👏 ...interesting=))
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks guys....had a change of heart....am changing Vidya's name as well! 😛 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Meera liked the character sketch. Like I said, the name Vikram will send me to dreamland twice and Sanvi is an unique name, have never heard it before. Looking forward to reading the first part and I'm sure it'll be just as amazing a read as your previous fan fiction was!!😳😳

Keep smiling..

Love

Soni

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Posted: 17 years ago
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^^^Thanks di...having your...."approval" is such a good feeling!!

You're one of the most amazing writers in this forum, and so the fact that you'll read my ff...makes me very very happy!!!

The name Sanvi was suggested to me by Reemz di! 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 1


Vikram checks his reflection in the mirror for the second time in a minute.

"Perfect hair, perfect specs...I'm ready for today!" He says as he runs to the door, hoping he can find his motorcycle keys on the holder next to the door.

"Phirse late....tu kab shudrega Vicky?" Tushar calls to him as he sees Vikram rush past.

"Kabhi nahin....main kyun sudhru? Kya kharabhi hain mujhme?" Vikram asks as he stops to get the keys.

"Kuch nahin mere baap! Tu ja....warna aaj phirse Mrs. Philena tujhe pitegi!" Tushar laughs, waving bye to Vikram.

"This is so unfair; Tushar gets evening classes while I have to wake up early every morning for stupid college!" Vikram fumes, as he inserts his key in the ignition and kick-starts the bike.

Vikram arrives at college with about 2 minutes to spare as he hurries to his first class on the second floor.

Right as he starts rushing up the stairs, his cell phone beeps, and so he stops to check it,

"Hi Bhaiyya, I just wanted u to kno, I'm coming to bom on 16th of feb. Will send flt details via. Email! Bye,"

"Arav's coming on the 16th? Ugh...I haven't even check with Tushar about him staying with us...better do that soon!" Vikram thinks as he starts rushing up the stairs again.

Vikram arrives in class with exactly 2 seconds before the bell rings, pointing out that class has begun.

As Vikram takes his seat, he scoots closer to Maya, his best girl friend.

"Kya hain Vikram?" Maya asks, slightly annoyed.

"What's up with calling me Vikram every time Maya? Kabhi to mujhe Vicky bulao. It sounds cooool...." He makes a pushing motion with his hands when says that.

"Cool? Yeah right...anyways, aaj phirse late kyun?" She whispers to him, just in case Mrs. Philena came in at that moment.

"You know me....meri sab girlfriends se peecha churane ka waqt hi nahin milta..." Vikram says with a glint in his eye.

"Oh yeah, you stud you..." Maya says, putting her chin in her right palm.

"Yeah...me stud me!" Vikram says laughing, "Okay no more stupid hindi movie dialogues...otherwise we'll be like the typical couple..."

"Would that be so bad?" Maya mumbles under her breath.

"Kya kaha tumne?" Vikram asks, right as Mrs. Philena walks in.

"Kuch nahin Vikram, aab shush!" Maya laughs, turning her attention to Mrs. Philena.


That part was some of Vikram's introduction, I'll start with Sanvi's for the next part! Please do leave comments, so I know if I should continue or not! Thanks everyone for reading!

Luv ya all loads,

Meera

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