NEW ff A&R next part(7) updated pg 7

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Posted: 18 years ago
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guyz my name is sadia and i m writting a cute ff on our beloved jodi armaan and ridhmaaa(MY FIRST EXPERINCE)

so need ur supportttttttttt and views tooooo here it goesss

CHARACTERS:

ARMAAN MALIK(AR):very rude ,flirtyyy ,intrested in flirt , no respect for womensssssssssssss, 21 years old , doing mbbs in 3rd yearrr ,have mom and dad but not living in india out of the countryyy. nothing now abt love . dude of the college along with his gang,late nights and bunking periods lots of attitude

RIDHIMA GUPTA(R):very cute , kool and sweet gurl of 2nd year ,reapect her elders and daughter of shashank guptaa, and sweet sis angi and best frnd sapnaaa,got education frm lodon n shifted to mumbai

ANGALI(AN):sweet lovable some time rude and almost same as dmg drama and love her sis

SAPNA(s):SAME AS DMG SHOWW

HERE MY FF GOES some other characters will be inroduced afterwords need ur views and replies

1ST PART :

(SANJEEVANI COLLEGE )first day in colege

R;WE R GETTING LATE FOR CLASS SAPNA HURRY UP

S;COMING

R;KAHAN THI ?PEECHE REH GAY

S;HAN WOH NOTES LENE THEY MEIN NAI ,SO HOW IS THE COLLEGE?

R;NICE PER ABHI PURA NAHI DEKHA?LETS GO ,OUR CLASS HAS BEEN STARTED

S;OK LETS GO

(IN THE CLASS,EVERY ONE WAS MAKING NOISE....

R; WHATS ALL THIS

S;WELL COME TO MUMBAI...ITS ALL LIKE THIS HERE...

R;WHY R THEY MAKING NOISE ITS MORE THAN A JUNGLE....HUMARI DOOSRE CLASSES KAHAN HAIN

S;HAHAHAHAH...SOME R ON OTHER FLOORS BUT WE R HAVING COMBINE CLASS WITH 3RD YEAR STUDENTS OF CHEM

R;OH I GET IT(TEC IN CLASS ROOM)

T;GOOD LUCK FOR UR THIS YEAR STUDENTS

PART 2

(CLASS WAS OVER AND RIDZ AND SAPNA WENT TO CAFETERIA)

R:MUJHE TO BOHAT BHOOK LAG RAHE HAI

S:MUJHE BHI ,LETS GO AND ODER SOME THING

R;OKEYZZZZ, U STAY HERE AND I WILL GET SOME FOOD

(RIDDHMA GOES TO ODER,AND SEE BUNCH OF BOYS STANDING THERE)

R;EXCUSE ME !!!!!!!!

(ARMAAN AND OTHER BOYZ STARTED STARIING AT HER LIKE THEY WERE GONNA RAG HER)

A;HEY U NEW IN THE COLL

R;YA ,RIDDHMA GUPTA(SHE TAKES HER HAND OUT FOR HANDSHAKE )

A;TU MEIN KIA KAROON ,BHENJIIII,BY THE WAY U ARE NEW SO U WILL GET PUNISHMENT(ragging)

R;OKEY BUT WHT I HV TO DO

A:U C THISE DISHES GO AND CLEAN THEM NOW, THIS IS UR PUNISHMENT FOR 1 MONTH

R;WHTTTT!!!!!!BUT WHEN I WILL ATEEND MY CLASS.I M HERE TO GET EDUCATION NOT TO SERVE U

A;(REALLY IN ANGER CZ NO ONE EVEN DARE TO SPEAK HIM LIKE THAT )DO U KNOW WHO I M (in proud voice)I M ARMAAN MALIK THE HOTTEST DUDE OF THIS COLL AND NO ONE DARE TO DIS OBEY MY ODERS

R:WHT'S HOT IN U APNE SHAKAL DEKHI HAI KISI HOTEL KEH SERVENT SE BHI COMPARE NAHI KAR SAKTE AND I WILL NOT DO ANY THING U WILL SAY TO MEEE UNDERSTOOD MR ARMAAN MALIK

(BELL RINGS AND RIDZ WENT FRM THER LEFT ARMAAN BOILING WITH ANGER )

A;CHORON GA NAHI US BHENJI KOOO AB TO WOH YEH SAREE DISHES WASH KIYE BAGEIR AG COLLEGE SE NAHI JA SAKTI (WITH THIS HE GAVE HIGH FIVE TO HIS FRNDZ AND GAVE THEM A PLAN)

LATER IN EVENING EVERY ONE WAS GOING FOR THEIR HOMES

RIDDHMA WAS STILL IN THE LIBRARY TAKING SOME BOOKS

WHEN SHE COME OUT TO PARKING LOT SHE SAW ARMAANS GANG (armaan was not there)

R;(IGNORING THEM AND WENT TO HER CAR )

ARMAANS FRND :HEY WHTS UP BHENJI !!!DISHES KON WASH KAREE GA

R;MEIN TUM HAREE NOKAR NAHI HON JO YEH SAB KUCH KAROON .RAGGING KARWAE KA SHOCK HAI TU TAMEEZ WALE KAM DO

AR fRND HOLD HER HAND AND CALL ARMAAN

R;LEAVE MY HAND OR I WILL TELL ABT THIS TO PRINCIPLEEE

(ARMAAN FRM SOME DISTNACE ,WALKING TOWARDS HER )

R;PLZ LET ME GOOO

ARMAAN :ITNI JALDI KIA HAI

(TEARS ROLL OUT FRM RIDZ EYEZ)

A;KIA HOWA MISS BHENJI ,KIA KEH RAHI THI TUM KEH MEIN SERVENT SE COMPARE NAHI HO SAKTAAA

R;PLZ LET ME GOOO

A;ON ONE COST U HV TO WASH THE DISHES FOR ONE MONTH AND FRM RIGHT NOW,WHT SAY BHENJI (HE CAME CLOSE TO HER AND STARTED LAUGHING ,TOOK HER HAND AND TAKE HER TOO CAFETERIA )

R;(HAVING TEARS IN HER EYES SAID SCRAEDLY)BUT WHT ABT MY STUDIES

A;BHARH MEIN GAI TUM HAREE STUDIES U HAVE TO WASH DISHES RIGHT NOW OR I WILL .......U NOWWW

R;(STARTED WASHING DISHES INFRONT OF GANG,SHE WAS FELLING DAZY)PLZ AUR NAHI I HAVNT DONE TOO MUCH WORK IN MY LIFE PLZZZ

A;TO BHENJI ITNI JALDI THAK GAIN

(RIDHMA BOILED INSIDE AND HAD TO MUCH ANGER NOW SHE BURST OUT)

R;TUM SAMJHTE KIA HO APNE APP KO ,SENSELESSS,KISI LARKI KI IZAT NAHI KARTE TUM HE TU IS COLL MEIN HONA HE NAHI CHAHIYE NA HE TUMHARE IN STUPID IDIOT FRNDZ KO ,SHAKAL DEKHI HAI APNI ,TUM HE KIA LAGA MEIN TUMHARE IN CHOTI CHOTI BATON SE DARH JAON G ,NO NEVER ,FORGET IT

MERA DILL CHA RAHA HAI KEH TUM HE EIK TIGHT SLAP DON PER MEIN APNEY HATH GANDE NAHI KARNA CHAHTI (WITH THIS RIDHMA LEFTT)

A;(FULL OF ANGER ,SAID TO HIS GANG )SUBHA DEKHTE HAIN KON KIS KEH SATH KIA KARTA HAI MISS BHENJIII PREPARE FOR THE REVENGE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

FINISH ............NOW PLZZ PEOPLEEEE GIVE ME REPLIES AND I PROMISE I WILL MAKE THIS FF ON TOP PLZZZZZZZZZZZ😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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HAWWWWWWWWWWWWW.....ARMAAN I HOE U DNT ANTHIN STUUPIDD....POOR RIDZ C HAD 2 WAS DISHED....BY DA DOES RIDHMA WEAR WETERN OR INDIAN CLOTHES?

N PLZZZ CONTINU SOONNN AS IT WAS FABBB....N PM ME WEN U UPDATE
THNX

.x.Ridz.x.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg it was really good!!!👏
is this your first ff???

bechari ridzi being bullied by armaan 😆


i think you should definitely continue...although i have one suggestion...maybe don't use capitals too much...it makes it a bit harder to read....lol
but yh i think you should definitely continue soon!!!

lots of love ❤️

Priyanka

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Excellant 👏 👏 👏 !! But don't type in caps, it sounds like you're shouting... and after Ridz and Armaan it should be a semi colon like this: not ; 😉 Do continue, Sadia!! I love your name by the way, it's one of my favs.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Continue soon. The concept is too good. Plz Pm me
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hiiiiii guyzzzzzzzz thankz for ur viewzzzz
i will not wirte in big letters and thankzzz for ur support
thankzzzzzzzzzzzzz hey u guyz armaan said ridz bhengi to obvious she is wearing indian clothess
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Posted: 18 years ago
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really nce start! i loved it! i loved d concept 2! cnt w8 till 2 cntd! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey sadia your FF is too good reminds me of the early episodes of DMG ,yaar you are such a great writer even the starting really blowns me away,it was just too goood..make me glued to my seat...really continue soon...and pm me if you can as i do not want to miss the next part really 😊
Zafirah
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey sadia (i hope i cn call u dat!)

v.well written partS!! gud ff...v.interesting

plz cont soooon!!!

Marisha
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey nce ff
poor ridz
cotninue soon x

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