We will be together forever... Ishqbaaaz FF Ch9 - 20/02/18 - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
#21
So lovely dear
Obros and sharma sisters are rocking
Pls cont soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: sana1819786

So lovely dear
Obros and sharma sisters are rocking
Pls cont soon
Thanks for pm
Bye take care



thanks for reading...Will update the next part soon!!😊
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Chapter 4




So after talking to each other, they all head back home where elders are waiting for them.


As soon as they reached the elders asked their opinions.


Anika's POV


One thing I realized that the real Shivay is same like me. He loves his brothers the same way I love my sisters. I think I am crushing on him


I think I should say yes .


Shivay's POV


I am confused. I am crushing over the girl who I was talking to in the cafe but I am supposed to be married off to a different girl. I liked the girl I talked to and I so wished it was she who I was supposed to marry. Suddenly his eyes fall on Omkara and om tells him to say yes.


Anika(happily) and shivay (reluctantly) at the same time say yes to their families individually.


Both the families are very happy and are feeding sweets to each other. They decide to do roka ceremony today itself. So the girls go upstairs to get ready a little.


After sometime, the girls descend down and again the boys are clean bowled



So daadi being the eldest tells Anika to come and sit near shivay and she does that seeing which all our boys are shocked ...


and our SSO is somewhat happy in his heart!



But Rudra being the naughty one and curious boy he is speaks up that SHE IS GAURI AND THE OTHER ONE IS ANIKA listening to which elders are surprised and confused but the 3 girls especially our gauri and bhavya are enjoying!! Then the boys and the girls explained what happened at the restaurant and how they decided to switch roles to know each other better.. Listening to this our Omkie Shomkie was relieved but was also surprised at his own feeling.


Omkara's POV


I am happy knowing that the girl who i spoke to in the restaurant isn't Anika.. Nhn yeh muje kya ho raha hai? Main uske bare main kyun soch raha hun..Gauri naam toh acha hai par main nahi sochna chahta kissi bhi ladki ke baare main.. But uski smile, uski innocence muje itna attract kyun kar rahi hai?

nhi Om tum mat socho uske baare main itna. Saari ladkiyan pehle pehle bholi hi lagti hain par baad main apna asli rang dikha deti hain...Haa...haan main nhi sochunga bilkul bhi uske baare main.(I am happy knowing that the girl who i spoke to in the restaurant isn't Anika.. oh no...whats happening with me...??why am i thinking of her...haan she is a good girl...but i donn wanna think of any girls...but her smile and innocence is dragging me towards her...

No om ...u shouldnt do this...all girls are like this first...then they will show their real behaviour...nd yes i wont think about her anymore...)


suddenly rudra calls him out and that is when he comes out of his dream and says Kya hua itna zor se kyun chillaya?(what happened...yAr why ere shouting?)


Pinky goes ahead and put the chunri over anika's head; gives her some gifts and says aajse anika humari beti hai to which anika smiles and takes blessings from all. (Anika will be our daughter from today)


Garima and ashok give gifts to Shivay and bless him to which he smiles happily..


The youngsters start their photo session when suddenly anika sees that gauri and bhavya are missing.


Anika: arre! yeh dono bhi na..pta nhn kahan chali gyi.


(these to na...uff donno where they went)


she calls out gauri, bhavya kahan ho tum dono? Getting no response she goes towards gauri's room and sees that an emotional Bhavya is trying to console a crying gauri!! Her heart bleeds to see her chutki crying so much


She hurridely runs towards them and at the same time downstairs shivay looks for Anika and asks Garima but she says she will be somewhere here only and goes to look. Just as she was about to go omkara stops her and says


Omkara: Aunty aap rukiye main dekhta hun (aunty i'll go nd check u stay here..)

Garima: nhn beta aap kyun takleef karenge. Aap araam se enjoy kijiye main dekhti Hun na.(no beta u stay here I don't want to trouble you...u go and enjoy the party)

Omkara: ( fake angry) Aunty beta kaha hai toh kaise takleef. Aap rukiye main dekhta Hun na. (Aunty u called me son so why can't i...i'll go nd check..u stay here)


Garima sighs and agrees ; then omkara informs shivru to start while he gets the girls to which shivay offers to come


Rudy : Kya bhaiya itni besabri kyun hai aapko.. thoda ruko na(what's the matter...please stay na...)

Shivay : (sternly) Rudy behave

Rudy: Kya bhaiya aap bhi. Tease karna mera hak hai aakhir main sabse chota hun and Aise bhi bhabhi ghar main he hongi to O unko dhoondh ke le aayega aap yahan ruko nhn toh pta nhn hume kitna wait karna pade photo kichne ke liye ( What bro?? it's my right to tease you after all i am the youngest and anyways SIL will be at home so O can find her and bring her back so you stay back otherwise god knows how long will we have to wait for the photo session)


Shivom: shut up Rudy



Rudy makes a crybaby face and pouts



Om goes to look for the girls that's when he comes across the sight and he stands there and listens to eveithing.


In the room


Anika:(worried) kya hua Bhavya; chutki itna kyun ro rahi hai?(what happend bhavya why chutki is crying?)

Bhavya : di jab se hum restaurant se aaye hain na tab se he gauri bhut udaas hai(di she has been sad ever since we have returned from the restaurant)

Anika: par hua kya hai Bhavya ((but what has happened bhavya...)

Bhavya: di aapko toh pta hai na ki gauri aapko lekar kitni possessive hai shayad aapki shaadi ke kaaran (didi u know na that she is so possessive about u..maybe coz of ur wedding ...)


Phoolon ka taron ka sabka kehna hai

Ek hazaron mein meri behna hai

Saari umar hamein sang rehna hai


Anika: a bit emotional at all this goes towards gauri and says chutki dekho idhar meri taraf.

Gauri looks towards Anika . Her eyes and the tip of her nose are red by continuous crying. Her eyes are swollen.


Gauri: crying says di and hugs her tight

Anika hugging her back says: Kya hua Meri chutki ko? Kyun itna ro rahi hai(what happened to my chutki...?why r u crying?)


Gauri: ( sobbing) di aap sha... shaadi mat karo na fer hum hamesha aise he rahenge saath main(didi...please don't get married..we will stay like this forever)

Anika smiles a little and understanding her insecurity says: bas itni si baat hai; iss baat ke peeche meri chutki ne apna kya haal bna liya ro ro ke. She starts to wipe out her tears.


Jab se meri aankhon se ho gayi tu door

Tab se saare jeevan ke sapne hain choor

Aye jab se meri aankhon se ho gayi tu door

Tab se saare jeevan ke sapne hain choor


Bhavya speaks up: di agar aap shaadi nhn karenge toh sab ki kitni insult hogi na Aur fer aap bhi toh shivay jiju ko pasand bhi karne lagi ho.. (didi if u don't get married to shivaay bhaiyya; it will be like insulting him...nd u started to like him na?)


Listening to this gauri is surprised and says di aap shivay singh oberoi ko pasand karne lagi hain and aapne muje btaya bhi nhn and fakes crying and pouts


( drama queen right)


Anika smiles at this and says Kuch bhi meri behn se bhadke nhn hai mere liye aur yeh baat toh tum log jaante ho na?(anything...nothing is important for me than my sisters' and u guys are aware of it na?)


Aankhon mein neend na man mein chaina hai

Ek hazaron mein meri behna hai

Saari umar hamein sang rehna hai

Phoolon ka taron ka sabka kehna hai


Rivya nod and are emotional again.

Gauri hugs and Anika invites Bhavya towards them to which Bhavya happily agrees.


Gauri crying says : shaadi ke baad aap muje bhool toh nhn jaaoge na di

Anika surprisingly says ki tum toh nhn chahti na ki yeh shaadi ho toh fer shaadi ke baad ka kaise socha ?(u won't forget me after wedding na...annika reply: u don't want this wedding to happen na then why r u thinking about what will happen after marriage?)


Yeh na jana duniya ne tu hai kyon udaas

Teri pyaasi aankhon mein pyaar ki hai pyaas


Gauri says : agar aap mere liye apni shaadi se peeche hat sakte ho toh main aapke liye aapko shaadi karne de sakti Hun di!! (Di if u can stay unmarried for me ...then i can agree to let you get married )


Gauri: Haan but aapke liye kabhi bhi mujse zaada imp koi aur nhn hoga, aap mujse roz baat karoge, har weekend milne aaoge, hum humesha aise he rahenge and aapki shaadi ke kapde main pasand karungi! ( But nobody will be as important to you as i am; we will talk everyday; you must come to meet me every weekend and we will always stay like this and lastly i will be the one choosing your clothes for the wedding)


Aa mere paas aa keh jo kehna hai

Ek hazaron mein meri behna hai

Saari umar hamein sang rehna hai

Phoolon ka taron ka sabka kehna hai


Bhavya: (thinking) arre!! Agar jiju ne socha ho kapde pasand karne ka toh and agar unko teri inn conditions se aitraaz ho toh?? ( what if Brother in law has decided to chose her clothes and what if he doesn't agree to any of your conditions)


Gauri and Anika: (together) aise kaise aitraaz ho sakta hai unhe khoon ka rishta hai humara. Hum humesha saath rahenge and Aise he rahenge to which they smile and hug.. ( How can oppose to it; we are related by blood and we will always be together no matter what)


Ek hazaron mein meri behna hai

Saari umar hamein sang rehna hai


Omkara is emotional listening to this and is crying looking at the sisters but then he realizes something!!




That's all for this chapter...Kindly leave your feedback..

Thank you so much for reading


love

Lubna and aayushi!

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Posted: 7 years ago
#24
so emotional and lovely update dear
loved it
om is also now flat on ri
cont soon
thanks for pm
bye take care
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Posted: 7 years ago
#25
Lovely written dear
You beautifully portrayed Gauri and Anikas Love for each other
and the happiness everyone had on realizing they felt attracted to the right person
Lovely twist though
Update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: sana1819786

so emotional and lovely update dear

loved it
om is also now flat on ri
cont soon
thanks for pm
bye take care



Thank you so much for reading it!!! I'M GLAD you liked it...You will see how om fights with his feelings...😊😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm

Lovely written dear

You beautifully portrayed Gauri and Anikas Love for each other
and the happiness everyone had on realizing they felt attracted to the right person
Lovely twist though
Update soon



Thank you very much for reading😊
i so wanted to interchange their roles and i had fun doing it...glad you liked it too!!!
will update soon😊😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Chapter 5

Omkara is looking at the sisters' trio who are talking and consoling each other for the upcoming change in their lives.. Suddenly somebody pats his shoulder and he turns around to see that the person is none other than Shivay..

Omkara tells shivay what has taken him so long and they decide to lighten the sisters' mood and with that hope they knock on the door..

anika from inside: kon hai? ( who is it)
shivay: anika main hun..Shivay ( anika it's me Shivay)
anika ( faces towards the door): arre!! aap dono yahaan ? yahaan pe kya kar rahe hain..party toh neeche chal rahi hai na?( oh you two here?? What are you doing here...The party is downstairs right??)
omkara: ji bhabhi party toh niche he hai par hum aap teeno ko lene aaye hain ( yes the party is certainly downstairs but we have come to take you 3)
Omkara's eyes fall on gauri and he is emotional seeing her red and swollen eyes and asks with concern bhabhi aap log theek to hain na? ( SIL you guys are okay right)
anika: ( overwhelmed) haan om! hum theek hain..aap log chaliye hum abhi aate hain to which shivom nod and leave so that the situation doesn't get awkward for the sisters'. ( Yes om we are absolutely fine...You guys go; we will be there in a bit)
Bhavya: di hume neeche chalna chaheye ab! ( sister we should head downstairs)
anika: bhavya tum chalo main chutki ko leke aati hun ( bhavya you go i will bring gauri)
bhavya: theek hai di!! jaldi aaye aap log bhi and with this she goes towards the hall ( okay di..you guys come fast )

In the hall, while coming down the stairs, Bhavya is thinking something so she doesn't notice rudra coming from the opposite side and BHOOM...they collide AND bhavya was about to fall when a pair of strong arms catch her from her waist and pull her towards the source of the arm.. Bhavya nd rudra are looking intently in each other's eyes that they didnt realize when they have been cornered by ANIRI AND SHIVOM from the sides..
These four are smirking looking at RUVYA so lost and to tease them they start coughing ahemmm aaheememm aheemm!!
Wooo they finally are out of their trance and look around to find smirking faces of their bros and sis.. Both rudra and bhavya are embarrassed and are blushing; so Bhavya just runs off while rudra is thinking what to tell his glaring and smirking brothers and to divert the topic he says chalo bhaiya bhabi,, O and gauri photos keechte hain.. SHIVOM understanding their baby bro's intention let the topic die for some time with the resolve of talking to him after reaching back home.. soon everyone is taking pictures with everyone posing and sticking their tongues out,,pouting and teasing each other..There Rudra and bhavya are stealing glances at each other, Shivay is trying to find some time alone to speak to anika while aniri are busy clicking their sisterly pictures..

Omkara is admiring and smiling at gauri's child like antics.. Jhanvi from far notices her son's expressions and finds the source to be gauri..

JHANVI POV
I am happy seeing om smiling .. and muje kkhushi hai ki wo Kisi ladki ke karaan khush hai.. gauri ko dekh ke muje apne din yaad aa jate hain..kitni hasmukh bachi hai,, kaash yeh bachi mere om ki zindagi main aake uski saari khushiyan waapis lauta de..Kaash yeh ladki mere om ko ferse pyaar karna sikha de ; kaash yeh ladki om ka vishwaas pyaar pe fer se le aaye...kaash bhagwaan meri yeh baat sunle..with this she hopes to speak to omkara .. on the other hand om has been admiring gauri and is mesmerized by her (I am happy seeing om smiling and i am more happy to know that it's because of a girl...Looking at gauri reminds me of my days when i was younger...She is such a lively child...I r=wish this girl is destined to be in my om's life and returns all his happiness; i wish she teaches him to love again to believe in love)

omkara's POV
Muje iss ladki ko dekh ke kya ho jaata hai? kyun main chah ke bhi ise ignore nhn kar paata hun?? iss ladki ne toh kuch kiya bhi nhn hai fer bai main iski taraf khicha jaa raha hun..iski yeh maasomiyat,, yeh bachkani harkateyin muje dheere dheere pasand aa rahi hain...iss ek ladki main wo sab kuch hai jo meri zindagi ne mujse cheena hai.. ( What happens to me every time i see gauri?? Why am i not able to ignore her even though i want to? She hasn't tried anything to get my attention still i am attracted towards her...Her innocence , her childish behaviour are getting me attracted towards her... This girl has everything that life has ever snatched from me)

omkara gets frustrated with his thoughts that are continuously revolving around gauri

But suddenly all the elders come there and announce that panditji has taken out mahurat for engagement and wedding..
Engagement will be after 1 week followed by wedding in the next 4 days..

Shivay and Anika look towards each other and anika is blushing hard seeing this shivay smiles and gestures her to meet him to which she replies in action saying okay..

SO all of them decide together that the ceremonies would be in Oberoi Mansion..

Shivay is waiting for anika in a corner...anika comes there and to get SSO's attention she fake coughs

shivay: arre anika tum aa gyi? humari shaadi teh hogyi hai but ab tak maine tumse yeh nhn poocha hai ki kya tum iss shaadi se khush ho? ( look our wedding date has been set but still i haven't asked you your opinion on this wedding yet; are you happy with everything)
anika: Kya aap iss shaadi se khush hain shivay? ( are you happy with this wedding shivay)
shivay: sawaal pehle maine poocha tha anika ( It was my question first)
anika: haan toh ab maine bhi pooch liya hai toh ab aap pehle jawaab dejiye! ( so what; even i have asked you the same question so you must answer it first)
shivay: (sighing) says anika main khush hun iss shaadi se ( I'm happy with this wedding)
ab tumhari bari hai btao muje tum khush toh ho na? ( now your turn; so tell me you are happy right)
anika: shivay aapko aisa kyun lag raha hai ki main khush nhn hun ( Shivay why do you feel like i'm not happy with this)
shivay: nhn actually wo jab om aur main tumahre room main aaye the toh aap sab ro rahe the na.. toh bas issiliye thoda tension hai sochke ki shayad yeh sab tumhe pasand nhn hai ( No actually you guys were crying in the room when om and i had come to call you; so i felt like you aren't happy with it)

anika: cutting him says nhn shivay muje aap passand hain.. and realizing what she said..she is blushing so turns around not able to face him anymore.. ( no shivay i actually like you)

Shivay: acha toh ab tumhe main pasand hun??? haan ( oh so now you like me haan)

OMRU come in calling shivay to leave for OM shivay tells them to go ahead while he follows to which they agree!!

quickly shivay and anika exchange their numbers and say bye...
with that anika sees off shivay!!




So this is the end of this chapter...Please guys let me know if you want me to change something in this story or you are liking it as it is or let me know even if you don't like it...


Thank you for reading..please leave feedback!!
love
lubna and aayushi!
Edited by aayushi1 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#29
so nice dear
wow shivika engmnt and mrg dates are fixed
om is attracted to gauri
and ruvya encouter happened
cont soon
thaks for pm
bye take care
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Posted: 7 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: sana1819786

so nice dear

wow shivika engmnt and mrg dates are fixed
om is attracted to gauri
and ruvya encouter happened
cont soon
thaks for pm
bye take care


Thank you for reading!!! Yes everything is happening as of now...We will have the wedding in a few chapters...Keep supporting😊

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