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Posted: 6 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

The starting is interesting.. 👍🏼
Waiting for more..

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: AMIEO

Very nice start. Continue soon. 


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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm

Wow amazing start!

Please continue soon :O


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Posted: 6 years ago
#14

Thank you For All the Lovely Comments .

Here Goes the Chappy 2

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Gauri opened her eyes with a pounding headache to find herself in a small dark room she tried to move but in vain her hands were tied with golden chains to the bed head post the more she struggled to get out of the grip the more it hurt her ,The pain was unbearable she could not take it anymore she closed her eyes, a lone tear escapes from her eyes .That's when flashes came across her mind . she shot opens her eyes in fear. Realization dawned upon her that she was in Kali's clutches .her face went pale the flashes of her past came front of her.


Flashback:

"Maa Papa open your eyes look at your little laadli "maa "papa the little ten year Gauri wailed looking at her parent's corpse .she had been back from school happily carrying her award which she won to show her parent's ,she had been checking each and every corner of the house that's when Khanaji ,the servant ,gotten a call from hospital stating that her parents met with a car accident. Within no time she had reached hospital with Khannaji to find her parents had already left her alone in this cruel world.


Khannaji had always been loyal to Sharmaji's family he could not leave the little Gauri alone in this state so he had decided to bring her up as his own .From that day onward's he had showered all the love and care towards this little one.


After around Ten years, One day Khanaji had come to Gauri telling they have to visit his ancestral home in Bareiily .They started their journey happily without knowing the danger which awaits them.


Soon as they reached Bareilly.Gauri insisted Khannaji to take  her to the nearby temple that was where she had her first encounter with the Womanizer,Kali. Kali wanted Gauri to be his wife by hook or crook he was so memorized by her beauty . He had sent a marriage proposal to Khannaji to have him politely turned down , This had angered Kali and with that rage he had crashed into her house in an attempt to kidnap her .Khannaji had tried hard to save his daughter but Kali shot him dead front of her eyes . Her body went numbed She was too shocked to react , She pushed Kali with all her might and ran to her paa to have him see him take his last breath .Gauri could not think straight losing her father who had given a her so much love The Pain which felt now and the anger made her shoot Kali's leg from the gun she had got from him with all her might before escaping from that place all the way mourning her father's death. Kali's men had followed her luckily she was able to misguide them and come to Mumbai. Since then she had rented a small apartment in a chawl. She was not the fun loving chirpy girl anymore She was Someone New She is changed .


End of flashback


"No this cannot happen I will not marry that scoundrel at any costs "I need to get out of this place. Gauri cried, she was trying hard to remove the chains. She heard the the sound of door opening to see four women coming in she was about to ask them who are they , she heard them say "Thakur sahib has send us to make you ready as a bride if u agree with us we would be gentle if not we would have to force you . Gauri did not budge she will die but not be his wife .So the women had to forcefully make her ready .Gauri looked at herself in the mirror she was adorned with a red lehenga which matching jewels and a veil , She had always dreamt of being a bride she never knew that would turned out to be like this. a lone tear escaped her eyes .


She was bought to the Mandap with Kali sitting in the place of Groom .He had a Smirk on his Wife which made Gauri feel disgust . She was determined that She will Kill herself not be his wife " She was made to sit near him .Kali whispered "uff Chirrayai you made me run for so long Now You'll be Mine I would Cut all your Feathers and cage You,Let's see who saves you this time? Gauri so wanted to kill him then and there but She couldn't she was weak and fragile. When panditji instructed to stand for the seven phereas .Kali gotta up and extended his hand .Gauri closed her eyes and was about to cut her wrist with a piece of glass which she had got in the dressing table when she heard a gunshot and within seconds she saw Kali stumbling down with blooding dripping from his chest .

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Edited by sh_aarohi - 5 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#15
Wow
Interesting

Is it cue for our hero entry ? 
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ms.Lizzie

Wow

Interesting

Is it cue for our hero entry ? 

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Posted: 6 years ago
#17
I am eagerly waitin for next part
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: snehaltalware

I am eagerly waitin for next part

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Loved it. Can't wait for the next update. Looking forward to it.
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Originally posted by: nathalie_rs_

Loved it. Can't wait for the next update. Looking forward to it.


Thank you dear