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Posted: 7 years ago
Sujz plz write pg nos too
So many comments
Its hard to find the OS
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Posted: 7 years ago
Guys! The link for the OS is on the first page. A link thread has been made on first page.Please Check.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Lovely os... Waiting for more👍🏼
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Propose Day

On The Wings Of Love...

by Sujz



"Love is a Promise, Love is souvenir, Once never forgotten,Never let it disappear!"

Naina, I will help you! Said Sameer, seeing his lady love in a miserable situation, where her new dress is torn. Sameer was all ready to help his lady love, and do some romance in between. Because from the day Naina has known the truth of the bet, she has been angry like no one to him. Seeing her as his innocent friend, Sameer knew this anger treatment was needed for him to realize his love for her.

"What the hell are you saying? Are you out of your mind? Asked Naina taking out the thread and needle box from the Shelf. She was greatly embarrassed to face such a problem in front of him. No matter if it was in their love days, or hate days.

Naina, I just want to help you... If you go out like this, everyone will see that torn and... He stopped there as he did not have the might to say what he wanted to say.

So what if they see me like this? Asked Naina in agony.

I will feel jealous, you are only mine! Said Sameer making Naina flabbergasted. She never expected such a reply from Sameer, at least not when she is angry to him. But he became much more straight forward than she guessed. She felt blood running through her cheeks, rose petals crushed in her face.

"Naina... I will keep my eyes closed, You will not be able to do it. Preeti Chachi... everyone is outside below the society. I will keep my eyes closed! Sameer promised.

Eyes closed? For what? To kill me with the needle or what? Asked Naina widening her eyes. And do you even know to stitch? Speaking about help!

Yes, I know! Let me show you? And yeah... I myself do not want to keep my eyes closed but... I thought you would not like it and now you are saying, then I can... Naina... make your decision now... No one is there to help you here... Except me. Sameer stated.

Naina was in deep thought. She anyway cannot go outside like this, and her room is locked by Chachi because guests are there and anyone can enter and Pooja's jewellery were kept there. Now she had no ways left other than taking her Bholu Ram's help.

O..Okay... Naina stammered.

Sameer turned to see Naina, with dark red adoring her cheeks, with a tensed face. He took baby steps towards her, with his chocolate brown eyes fixed on her intoxicating eyes. They were in an inch distance now. Naina offered the needle and thread to him while he took it without breaking the eye lock.

He took it and kept his hands on the torn part of her dress giving a chill through her spines. Blood rushed rapidly through her cheeks. Oh My God, this was a different feeling. That was her thought. He took the needle and passed it through the cloths while his fingers touched her waist making her slightly jump from the place. Sameer took his hands t the minute, and lifted his head to see Naina standing like an Ice Statue in front of him, with her eyes fixed on his. Sameer continued stitching while his eyes were fixed on hers and vice versa. In between Sameer poked the needle on to Naina's body and she clutched on to Sameer's hands, not breaking the gaze.

Soon he was done with her work. But Sameer and Naina, the conflicting love birds were busy in some other works with their eyes. They were standing in an inch difference, with Sameer's hands on Naina's waist and Naina's hands clutched on his hands and their eyes fixed on each others.

"Naina... Beta did you take out the gifts?

Hearing Chachi's call, both came back to earth from their own world, their love world. Naina pushed off Sameer. While Chachi made her entry.

Naina, take out the gifts soon... I am there down, take it and come okay? Sameer, help Naina. Saying this Chachi left.

While Naina and Sameer were totally unknown of those unknown feelings they experienced just a while ago. Naina broke the silence,

"Thank You for the help! saying this, Naina took the gifts and went outside.

The next two days went in ignorance by Naina. She was greatly embarrassed by the whole situation which happened. But this time Sameer was not ready to give up. He was in full force now. He could not wait anymore.

Everyone got ready and went down while Naina was late to get ready. She was alone there. She at last got ready and was about to go down while the power gone down. The generator was connected only to the wedding place, so the home was dark. Naina panicked.

Sameer entered the home with a candle in his hands. His face was glowing in the light. Feeling Naina , he got inside the house and saw Naina standing there. Seeing her beautiful in Pink Lehenga and open hair, Sameer was now in his Majnu form.

That was the first time they are coming face to face after the stitching incident. He went near Naina and whispered;

"Naina...

Her stomach flipped back hearing his intense voice. But she lifted her heads to see his face. Her eyes glowed in light.

What? What are you doing here? Asked Naina. She turned to go.

Naina... Don't go! Called Sameer.

Naina did not hear his words and tried to go but Sameer hold her wrist.

"Today I am not going to leave you without saying what I wanna say Naina! said Sameer.

Say! Naina turned and crossed her arms through her body.

"Naina, I know that whatever I have done, in the name of a bet is wrong. I should not have broken your heart. But, but I regret it now Naina, I really regret it now. Sorry, Sorry Naina... Really... Sorry... And now... Now... I love you Naina! I love you... truly... I love you with all my heart... Seeing you cry makes me cry... seeing you happy makes me happy, and... Don't know what all... But the conclusion is , I love you and I wish I have you on my side forever...

But... I will not force you, Naina... please forgive me... Please Naina... and , I will go away... Forever, I will not come infront of you forever, But I cannot see you being sad all your life because of me Naina... I can't bear that! I will go away, I swear.

Sameer kept his hands on his ears.

Naina: You will go away?

Sameer: Yes Naina...

Naina: If I forgive you, you will go away?

Sameer: Yes Naina...

Naina: That is exactly why I am not forgiving you!

Sameer: What?

Naina: I do not want you to go away from me...

Sameer: Naina...

Naina: Shh... Sameer, It is true, I was broken knowing the truth of the bet, I believed everything you are doing is a cheat, but... whatever you have been doing, all these days , was melting my heart... But my fear of getting cheated again stopped me... But... My conclusion is also... same...

Sameer, Will you be my boy?

Sameer's eyes had been filled with tears hearing it. Naina saw Sameer's eyes filled with tears, She kept her soft hands along with chest and rested her head on his chest with Sameer's hands engulfing Naina.

Sameer : Yes... I am yours... Yours forever!

And that was another beautiful beginning of the love story of these conflicting love birds Sameer & Naina, with both professing each other's love open, with their arms perfectly fitting into each other, like two broken puzzles...

"The End"


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Edited by Sujz - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
WOW!Nanhi Pari !That was so beautiful.👏 Loved every scene.😃 Splendidly and coherently put lines with emotions on point.👏👏
Yeh hui na Diwali ...Dhoom machadi..😃
Keep Writing,Keep shining 😃
Edited by TereLiyeMINU - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hi Sujz...thanks for this beautiful piece...I really liked it!! As it is I'm eagerly waiting for the needle n thread wala scene...only thing I'm thinking is Naina can change into a spare dress n stitch it herself...though by no means I want her to do that 😆 Sameer n Naina ka ye stitchinh episode sent butterflies in my stomach...how lovely...intimate yet platonic...n uska proposal...main to floored hi ho gayi...candle light waah...finally our lovebirds united...👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
That was sooo lovely. I wish something like this should be shown in actual episode too ... Really love your work
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wow Sujz...
Not so Masoom, not so Nirdosh but very lovely OS...The stitching part was subtle and simple yet passionate...
The confession was beautiful...

Great job...

Edited by KashafZaroon30 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
It's beautiful Suji
Candle light confession.. perfect
Nanhi pari is a romantic person it seems☺️
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Posted: 7 years ago
It's beautiful nd obviously not massom
Well done suz.

Just loved it to the core...😳

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