Tanhaiyan FF - Fall in Ch 1 on 6 Feb 18 (Barun Sobti & Surbhi jy

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Meera , learn a truth so devastating that breaks her completely. Her whole life, her existence everything turns out to be a big lie. One truth changes everything in her life,that she is falls apart and goes into shell. Her life take a U turn when, she has to join Ncc unwillingly. She meets the rich brat Haider who makes her angry, vengeful and finally somehow manages to mend her broken soul.

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Haider, is the spoiled rich brat and good looks makes him go all the more egoistic. He is selfish, smart, charming and Brute. But he is going through his own set of issues that might seem small to others but for his teenage self has been quite big. His life suddenly puts him in a place that he never wanted to be, Ncc. He meets the most arrogant, aloof, I don't give a Damm, girl that just pushes all this wrong buttons. But as their journey continues, he finds himself turning into a better person. Meera brings out the best out of him.


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AIR SQUAD SERIES...

VOL.1. - Fall in


Prologue

Prologue

"Truth can be the most lethal weapon to destroy someone."

See the truth, hear the truth, speak the truth, never follow these line. They can destroy you, your reality, shake your existence and leave you in hollow of shell of your body. Truth takes you to edge of death but don't let you die, it makes you die everyday, every moment only to pull you back and laugh at you saying, 'look you could not even die properly.'

"she is suffering from depression Mrs kappor, a change of environment or making her being involved in something productive can keep her mind concentrated on living instead of running after death. As, your family doctor, I suggest you try to talk openly with Meera, make her feel loved and keep her away from those people and thoughts that hurt her."
Doctor kulkarni, a man in his late 50s with bulging stomach, wriggled face yet with that sincere look in his eyes that showed how much he cared for this patient especially. Meera has been behaving out of character from past two years, a fun loving, carefree, smart girl has now turned into a rebellious, dark, skinny, silent girl. Earlier he had thought she is going through that phase of her teenage life when every teenager try to be something else, turns aloof. But seeing now her on hospital bed with bandages around her arms, head, legs and oxygen mask supplying the air to her lungs.
"she is not telling me anything. She has gone into a shell completely and now this. I can't believe this is happening to my poor child." Anita kappor said stroking her meera's hair lovingly.Meera, just a seventeen year old girl, now looking so pale, lifeless. Anita looked tired, heart broken as she sat on chair by Meera's bed side. She removed her glasses wiped her tears, her highly wrinkled face showing her old age. She never knew that even at age of 72, God will not spare her from continuing troubles of life.

"ma!" Meera whispered moving in and out of consciousness, after few hours.
"yes! Mera baccha . I am here. Your mother is here. Everything is going to be OK." Anita stroked Meera's hairs lovingly, make her look at Anita with love derived eyes. When her eyes focused on Anita's face she started crying. While Anita embraced her patting her back.
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Haider tapped his foot on the floor, looking smugly at his lawyer who was trying his best to not pee in his pants, as Haider's father Mr. Rehmat Ali khan, warned and threatened him in the same sentence.
Haider checked time on his Gucci watch for the umpteenth time, this was getting recalling boring. He covered the sleeves of his shirt over his leather jacket and kept his foot on his lawyer's table. This is going to take long, it's better he take a little rest, he thought and closed his eyes.

"Mr. Mehta don't you dare tell me that my son will have to spend even a single night in jail. I want my son free from all allegations, no matter what it takes." Mr. REHMAT Ali khan said, clutching his fingers tightly in fist, he looked like lion scaring his prey, before he finally devour him fully.

"Sir, I am trying my best but victim's family is not ready to solve it out of court. They want the culprit to get the maximum of punishment. Judge Mrs Mistri is not taking this case lightly either, she is very strict in Hit and run cases since she lost her only son in a drunk driving accident. " Mr Mehta tried to explain the tough situation he was in.

"CCtv footage clearly shows, haider's car hit the victim and he drove away even without helping. All the evidence is against him." he continued, looking nervously here and there.

"so, what! You have been able to handle most gruesome of murder cases and you can't a simple accident case." Rehmat yelled, banging the table with his hand.

"Do you know how badly it will effect my image. I am running for election in next month, if people got to know my son is a criminal, I will lose so many votes." he continued screaming.

"sir, the victim's family is from the opposition party, they ate taking advantage of the situation already. If we somehow try to save Haider from punishment, they will spread the news in media saying you let a culprit ran free just because he was your son." Mr. Mehta said looking meekly at Mr Rehmat, who now was in deep thought. He is stuck in such a difficult situation right now.

"why didn't you told me this before. I didn't knew they had any link with opposition, no doubt they are not ready to settle for any price. What's more better than destroying current mayor and next to be CM's image." Rehmat looked at his seventeen year old son who half laid on his chair with closed eyes and a small smile on his lips. He knew Haider was enjoying his plight, Rehmat would never understand why his own son keeps on creating a no trouble for him.
"fine! Haider will get his desired punishment." Rehmat said, , making Haider open his eyes in disbelief and shocked at his father statement.
"I won't stay in jail father." Haider half yelled.
"well! You should have thought that before hitting someone with your car." Rehmat scolded him, making Haider look his father in anger.
"what's the use of you being a mayor, if you can't save your son from some stupid accident case." Haider complained looking indifferently at his father.

"Mr. Mehta, make sure Haider get the minimum punishment possible, something like juvenile social service or something. My son won't be spending a day in jevenile jail. Understood." Rehmat said in final warning.
"sir, it's not some case of stealing but an accident. It won't be possible." Mr Mehta tried to reason with him but to no avail, making him bow his head in affirmation at the end.

"Don't screw up Mr Mehta!" Haider warned, raising his eyebrow in threat and left the office without looking back.
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Chapter 1

"Life is unexpected,it leaves you in the most unusual of direction."
( Two months later)

Meera nervously played with her fingers, looking down while her college consultant kept on repeating the same things she has been saying for last two months.

"Meera, your marks are really bad. Teachers are complaining about your inattentive behaviors. You already failed in your earlier exams, you need to work really hard to clear both this year and earlier exams. You really need to increase your GPA. I suggest you take part in extra curriculum activities. It will raise your GPA, plus increase your confidence and will really help you come put of your depression."


Meera looked at the clock on Mrs sharma's table, her eyes counting the last minutes of this boring lecture. She was wearing her red hodiie and black jeans with red sneakers, her hair in bob cut. The moment the time got over, she took her bag and almost rushed to get out of this confided office when Mrs. Rao's voice stopped her midway.

"your name would be struck off from the college, if your GPA kept on decreasing like this. You have one week to join some extra curriculum activities, you need to show that you are on path of recovery and normalcy, if you want to keep your scholarship. If the management don't see any improvement in your scores and extra participation, you will be out of this college and no one will be able to help you. This the final warning Meera."

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Those words of Mrs Rao kept on repeating on her mind and she kept on ignoring it for last four days. She didn't wanted to join any extra clubs or any organized activities. She wanted to just remain ideal with all the past moments, truth horrific details ruling her mind.she wanted to remain cuddled on her bed, with no intention to wake up ever. But when Mrs kappor fell ill the moment she came to know of the continous warning Meera kept on getting, Meera resolve broke that day. Mrs kappor had broke down to her, how she can't see Meera living like a dead person. The truth has broken Meera to thousand pieces but she knew Meera was a strong girl so why she is losing her life to it. She wanted to see Meera live life, to continue being the happy teenager she once was. She can't see Meera lose her future.

Albeit unwilling, Meera tried her best the next and the last day of week to get her self admitted into any club. She was disappointed when the strength of almost all the clubs were full, delamation, poetry, music, arts, every club was full. She asked one of the girls in class talking about NSS but even that full.

Tanya saw Meera sitting alone at the last Table in the canteen. She has seen the lost girl of her class so nervous the whole day. She looked desperate to get into any club, which was important to increase her GPA. Tanya sat beside Meera and tried talking to her. After few awkward words between the two, she finally came to the point.
"you know today is the last date for NCC recruitments. It's happening in the college grounds. You know it the best to increase your GPA plus free attendance in class and obviously preference in masters and jobs. Even I am in NCC. So, would you like to join."
Tanya finished excitedly looking at a nervous Meera, who was avoiding having any eye contact with her.
" I don't know anything about NCC." Meera said sadly and disappointed for being so Dumb to have no knowledge of anything.
"Don't worry about it.I will tell you everything on the way." Tanya jumped excitinly and dragged her to the college grounds, holding her hand.
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Meera looked at the crowd of girl, who gathered to join NCC. She felt so out of place and uneasy. She looked at the two man in army uniforms, looking at the candidates with their strong gaze, as if they are not recruiting some Aamture girl cadets for NCC but the actua soldiers for Frontline war. She looked far ahead on right where Tanya was lining up the prospective cadets for NCC arwing. Tanya told her that Armywing recruits around 30 cadets while arwing just takes 8 girl cadets from their college, so probability of her getting selected will be high.

Commanding officer Jay Singh of 13 girls battalion has just completed giving his speech about the importance of NCC in life and career in armed forces. Meera has hardly listened to what he was saying as her mind kept on telling her to run away from this place. It was so hard to not listen to that voice of her mind.

Since candidates were more than expected, CO decided that they will conduct a race and the first 30 girls to cross the line will be selected. Meera felt her heart leap out her chest as, the race started and she ended up coming second last. She felt her lungs burn with such extreme runilning and her heart sunk seeing that last opportunity just slipped through her hands.

She has than went towards Tanya, told her everything, disappontedly, who has suggested that she should try her luck in arwing , Meera has rejected at first but Tanya advised her she shouldn't ' gave up without trying, Tanya was the first girl with whom Meera was taking so much, for the first time after she has joined the college. Meera decided to give final try. She filed her name for the selection.
Meera looked at the Sergent P. K SINGH, who was surtinizing every candidate with his strong gaze. Tanya's had told her how height, strength, intellectual skills matter to get selected. She saw the sergeant separating the selected girls in a single line. He was asking question to all the candidates. Meera felt nervous as her turn came, Sergent looked at her checking her strength and than asked her.
"Do you know Parrot ? "
Meera looked at him confused, thinking why was he asking about the bird. He repeated it again and again for her. She looked at him dumbfounded, why was he asking for Parrot. She felt covering her head.
She nervously said, "Parrot is a bird."
The sergeant looked at her confused, and said, " what!"
Before Meera can clarify her words or understand what went wrong. A girl beside her said loudly.
"I know Parade, sir." sergeant selected her while I looked shocked. What the F, Damm it his accent that she couldn't understood what he said. Meera went off the ground disappointed. She has lost her last chance to get her marks on right track. She lost the ray of hope that day.
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Haider winked at the assistant lawyer of Mr Mehta who was in her mid twenties , but couldn't control falling for handsome Haider. She blushed profusely, as she entered side by side of Haider, behind Mr Mehta and Mr rehmat Ali khan made their way inside the court room.
"how about I'll take you to dinner tonight?" Haider asked as Megha tried to control her blush and uncontrollable heartbeat. Haider was tall and well built for his age, his smirk always makes the girls fall to his feet. He knew his effect on girls and he took full advantage of it, whenever he can.
"sure!" Megha whispered slowly, doing happy dance internally. She was so happy that such a handsome and rich guy asked her out.
Haider, went to sit with his dad as he called him, before the court processeding starts.
"Try to keep it in your pants for few months, don't want to deal with two cases within a month, do you?" Haider's father scolded him, while he just kept on chewing his gum, leaning his hand behind his head and stretching his legs. He didn't even stood up when Judge enter inside the court room, which in any way didn't left a good impression.
As the court proceedings continue. His lawyer try all his best act to make the judge rule in Haider's favour. Their plan was to make Haider confess and plead for mercy. Since he was teenager that was going to see his ailing mother in the hospital the night of accident that lead to him speeding in worry and hit the poor victim. It was an utter lie. But when Haider was brought for questioning he gave the best performance of his life, he should definitely become an actor his father thought.
Finally after hearing both sides lawyers, it was time for the judgment.
"I fully sympathise with the victim and no compensation will be enough to the family to take everything back. But as lawyer Mehta said, Haider is child himself who was worried for his ailing mother and also probably got scared during the accident." judge said making Haider smile turn broder and broder by each second.

The judge continued," But we don't want any such mistakes to happen in future and I personally want to make people understand the importance of traffic rule, awareness for road range etc. So we can leave Haider without him fully understand the gravity of his mistakes."
" but sir, Haider.. " Mr Mehta tried to interven , but judge made him shut up.
Haider looked dumbfolded at the judge, didn't his dad paid this judge enough.

"Mr Haider Ali khan would have to pay capital compensation of 50 lakh to the victims family and also compulsory join the NCC to make him understand the importance of human life and make him see the right path." judge made her final words clear and left the court room.

Haider the punched the table hard and angrily stride out of there. He is not going to do any social service or stupid stuff like poor people.
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