MG SS The Last Song/Parts 6 &7+Epilogue / Page 21 on 12th May 2018 - Page 4

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Posted: 7 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: SANJANA9167

abh song to music mathlab geethi hogi na buddy

why your maan is acting dump🤣




Hehe buddy what to he is not that smart 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: richa_kapoor

Interesting prologue... Waiting for updates



buddy update udhar hi post ki hai 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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PART 2



Decision



"How come I am here ", he thought . "Oh so you are awake Sir ", said his butler .You are working too hard for the concert , you slept here due to tiredness ". "What do u mean I slept , I was taking a stroll and then that ...oh my head hurts ...that girl where is she ", he asked . "You must have had a dream Sir , you were here and never left anywhere ", his butler said looking weirdly at his employer . Judging by his weird looks , he thought ,I guess he is right , I am taking too much stress these days ".Although no matter how hard he tried he could not forget that girl and her song . Where could he find her ? . Is she real in the first place or just a figment of his imagination .









He looked outside his huge window admiring the nature and noticed there is still sometime for fall to be there so the butler was right , it might have been another dream , but he was getting more curious day by day to know about that girl in his dreams . "Master , should I serve the diner ", his butler asked him . "Yeah sure , I am hungry, I will join you in a while ", he replied politely . He turned to look through his window , the moonlight and the tranquility it always attracted him . He liked the calmness of the nature . He was gazing at the moon , when he thought he saw here there , but then let go of the thought and headed for diner . Unknown to him , this time she was actually there , gazing at the moon like him and also looking at his calm face ,We will meet soon .I promise ", she smiled and walked away in the silence of the night .








"Master , pardon my slackness , I forgot to hand over this letter to you ", his butler said apologetically handing him a letter .Its alright , I will read it later ". After the diner , he went to his study , opening the letter in hand , he was surprised to read the contents . He was asked by the principal of a prestigious music academy to teach their students . "Students ...huh ...I will think about it later , I have better things to concentrate upon , and I am doubtful these young people will show any interest in the music I play or take it seriously ", thinking he left the letter on the table and went to sleep .



He found himself gazing at the moon and in the balcony he saw her standing . Her long hair covered her face as the gentle wind blew .







"You think young people won't understand your art, do you , confident are we ", She smiled . He moved closer ,And what makes you think , they will beside that who are you ". "I am the song to your melody , your unsaid feelings, I can put them into words for you .







Why wont you answer me without any riddles ", he demanded . "Be a little patient , you will find me , why don't you accept their offer , meeting with people will help you recover from your loneliness ", she replied . "Who are you , why are you in my dreams , will we meet ever ? Are you a reality "."That is for you to decide ", saying this she vanished and again he was awake . He thought for sometime then called the academy and told them he will join after his concert .




Here is another part, please do give your honest reviews 😃
Edited by pixelflower620 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Note

I will try putting a few changes from the next part ...so please give your honest reviews here



I will be clearing my buddy list soon ...so if you are active and get deleted by mistake plz do inform me









Edited by pixelflower620 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#35
nice part
maan saw her in his dreams
maan gets offer to teach music
maan dont want to take it but she said to agree
maan anxious to meet her in real
thanks for pm dear
cont soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#36
Amazing update dear, eagerly waiting for their meeting
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Posted: 7 years ago
#37
Nice part. So Maan has been dreaming about a girl who is attracting Maan but she always gets disappear after showing him his path. Where is she leading Maan. Does the girl have some magical powers. Waiting for next dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
#38
Interesting story and good start...mysterious girl calling herself words to his melody or song to his melody...maan is still seeing her in his dreams,...maybe he will see her fo real in the academy???he has accepted to go there because of her...lets see what reveals...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#39
Nice update..
Thank you for pm..
Continue soon..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#40
She is a mystery to him still hr only thinking about her
lovely update

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