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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Krupy

Suraj is adopted? 😲

This was something completely unexpected.
Eagerly waiting to see what Chakor will do next.

Thank you for reading buddy
Happy that you felt it to be unexpected
Will soon update dear

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: meshmesh

Shocking twist.

Was this what the poem was about?
Suraj will be devastated.
Chakor needs to decide the right course of action.

Thanks Mai
Heee I told it will be a bit shocking LOL
Well I can't answer to your question!
If you want you can read the poem again! ;-)
Yes! Indeed she needs to choose it
Thank you once again dear!
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Posted: 7 years ago
Part 23 (Previous part : Part 22)


Thinking about what to do, she slept in a disturbed state.

Morning sun raised and everyone started to do their work, except one person.

"Suraj! I saw you come back last night with that peasant." Imli states with a hate look as she stands just few feet away from the Prince in his piano room.
"Peasant?" he said with a mocking laugh which died immediately "Why don't you join us in the 21st century, Imli?" he asked facing her.
"Always the rebel!" shaking her head.
"Always will be!" he stated as a matter of fact.
"I know you better than anyone else Suraj!" she says as she took a step closer to him "And I care more than anyone for you!" another step and came closer to him.

At the same time, outside Princess study room, Miss. Rosella came out pushing the wheelchair with Pakhi in it.
"We really do need to finish your English lesson!" she said.
"Blah Blah Blah" Pakhi said mocking her.
"I will meet you in the library in ten minutes! Wait for me!" her tutor said smiling at her childish behavior.
And leaving her student there, she turned on her left while the little girl went on right.
And from there, she went directly to the music room of Prince to check if he was somewhere there.

"I do care! Suraj!" Imli said as she neared closer to him while he looked at her with no expression on his face.
"I seriously doubt that!" he said.
"Then let me show you!" she said in a husky way as she put her hand on his shoulder and lifted herself on her feet as she inched her face to him.
And right at the moment, Chakor who came there, witnessed the scene folding in front of her, left from there with hurt screaming out of her system.
"No!" he said and pushed the lady in front of him as his eyes travelled to the open door of the room.
"What's the matter?" she asked.
"You have to stop it!" he said seeing her face with disgust as he moved away from her and stood with folded arms "It's not gonna work!"

She with a hurt and uncertain face "But you need me!" as she took a step forward but stopped as he showed his hand to stop her there "You don't know how to be king!" she added innocently.
"You would love for me to believe that!" he said looking at her eyes "Wouldn't you?" he questioned. With a laugh, he continued "I did for a while believe that you changed for good. And I even believed that you loved me!" with seriousness "But you love the spotlight! You love the attention! You love the royalty! And you are never going to change!" he finished.
"No!" shaking her head "You are the one who will never change!" in a challenging tone "You will fall without me by your side!" walking around him "You will fall apart under the slightest bit of pressure!" standing in front of the door "You will regret this decision of yours!"
"I will take my chances!" he said with confidence and no care for her as he left from the room, passing her.

***

As time passed, evening came and Chakor was in her room, reading her notes and seeing the adoption papers and birth certificates as hesitation was evident in her eyes.
Closing her laptop, she played with her finger until an idea stuck her head and she pulled out her phone from her side table and composed a number.

"Hello! My baby girl!" her father replied on the other side alongside working and cleaning his restaurant.
"Hello!"
"How is my little girl?" sensing something in her voice.
"Sorry Papa! I haven't had much time to check on you and call!" she said sincerely.
Smiling "No problem dear!" he said "How it's going with my hotspot reporter?" he questioned.
She came direct to the point "Remember you told me I have to take chances to win!"
"Yes Dear! Those are the words to live by!"
"What if those chances ended up hurting somebody who didn't deserve it?" she asked hoping to get an useful answer.
"I think I'm gonna need more info that that dear."
"What if my story ends up hurting somebody who is already been through a lot?"
Thinking for few seconds, her father replied "Look my little girl! I don't know anything about your job! But this I do!" he smiled "You gotta listen to your heart! It will always tell you the truth!" he said seeing his wife's pic near the counter.
"Classic fatherly advice!" she finally smiled as if getting a piece of mind.
"Better than a fortune cookie, huh?" he said relieved that he could do something for his daughter.
"Yes Pa" and she got interrupted by a knock on the door as her eyes fell on the papers exposed in front of her.

*******

Thank you buddies for reading and liking it!
Hope you all enjoyed this part too!
Let me know it!
See you all soon!
(75% of Zarir next part finished! Will post it as soon as I end writing it!)


Next part : Part 24



- Maithili

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Posted: 7 years ago
Interesting update👏
Hate Imli
Suraj knows her so well, he didn't fall in her trap😊
Chakor's father's advice was nice😊
I think Chakor is not gonna use the information about Suraj
Waiting for next
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: katheriene

Interesting update👏

Hate Imli
Suraj knows her so well, he didn't fall in her trap😊
Chakor's father's advice was nice😊
I think Chakor is not gonna use the information about Suraj
Waiting for next

Thank you so much dear!
Glad you find it interesting!
Me too dear! Hate her! (You know in real story that bitch however put her lips on the Prince but I didn't want to do that with Sukor!)
Happy you liked her father's advice!
Let's see what she does dear!
See you!
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Posted: 7 years ago
Interesting update👏
Hate Imli
Suraj knows her so well, he didn't fall in her trap😊
Chakor's father's advice was nice😊
I think Chakor is not gonna use the information about Suraj
Waiting for next
Thank you so much dear!
Glad you find it interesting!
Me too dear! Hate her! (You know in real story that bitch however put her lips on the Prince but I didn't want to do that with Sukor!)
Happy you liked her father's advice!
Let's see what she does dear!

See you!
Thank God you didn't go by the story
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hey! Can you please tell me the name of the film you took the concept from!!!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
Interesting update.
Imli is horrible trying to use Suraj's doubts to get back into his life, happy that he pushed her away.
Too bad that Chakor misunderstood the scene but she should ask herself why it hurt her.
Did Suraj suspet that Chakor was there?
Chakor's dad is very supportive, his advice was spot on.

Eagerly waiting for next.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Kg823748

Hey! Can you please tell me the name of the film you took the concept from!!!!

Hey dear!
I can' tell it here as few of the readers will be trilled to read it until end and may be watch the film later.
So will send u a PM!
:-)
Edited by maithu_ - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: meshmesh

Interesting update.

Imli is horrible trying to use Suraj's doubts to get back into his life, happy that he pushed her away.
Too bad that Chakor misunderstood the scene but she should ask herself why it hurt her.
Did Suraj suspet that Chakor was there?
Chakor's dad is very supportive, his advice was spot on.

Eagerly waiting for next.

Thanks dear.
Happy you find it interesting and liking it
Agree dear. She us indeed disgusting
Well hope the next part will make u happy as there is something something coming on the way ;-)
Well he felt someone' presence there so turned to check there
Happy you liked Chakor's father here
See u soon

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