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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Krupy

So that is the reason. And miss.Rosella finally found it.


I knew it! I knew it that Imli is the worst human being even in this story. How could she? And she is again after Prince! Shame on her. 😡

Hmm.. Prince dont love press and tabloids from obvious reasons. Wondering what will happen when he find out that Miss. Rosella is actually a reporter with intention to write a story about him. 🤔

Last encounter between Prince and King was heartbreaking. 💔

Like always when it comes to your stories, loved the update.

Yup dear
Finally she got to know his point
Agree! That bitch is just fooling the outer world LOL
Well things will change when Prince get to know it's Chakor and not Miss. Rosella
Glad you loved the update dear
Thank you
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: meshmesh

Amazing update

Love the cottage setting.
Poor Suraj, he must be feeling guilty for fighting with his father on their final meeting.
So Suraj doesn't like living under the public eyes. Imli betrayed his trust.
Hope no MU happens between him and Chakor.

Eagerly waiting for next.

Thanks a lot Mai!
Glad you liked the cottage and the scenes that came with it!
Yup dear! He is indeed feeling guilt
Hope all goes good now with SC!
Thanks dear once again
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: amrutha131

This is for story up till now


Hahahaha
Okay dear!
I know you are reading it continuously LOL
So no pbms HEee
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Posted: 7 years ago
Agree dear!
The GVNT is becoming more and more cruel
Hope the exams went well and results will be best

And no need to say sorry dear!
Take your time

Feeling like flying in sky with all the compliments
So happy that my writing got a more point than the film!
When I saw the film, all I wanted to do is write it for Sukor and of course add my bits and pieces.
So got down and started Heee

Happy you had a superb pongal dear!
I took a day off for 15 just to stay at home and then went to watch TSK. And loved the music Heee


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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: SilverLove.

So about ur FF i read all the parts on one go . Today only i got time to read it . As i said before it is really very interesting to read ur story than watching that movie .

As always awesome part di 👍🏼
Waiting to see how Sukor love story will begin .😊

20 parts in one go! WOW
Hope it wasn't that much of tragic and the continuation was there :-|
So happy that you liked reading it
Thank you so much sis!
Well the Sukor story has started, the sharing, trust, she getting to see the true him and he getting to see her except the fact she is a reporter, everything screams attraction and closeness LOL
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sumsukor

well a good encounter I guess as he will open up...

No wonder he hates press!! but!!! this is leading to something... what if he comes to know that Ms. Rosella aka Chakor has impersonated to know about him... hmm my smile is weaning away😭

Imli not a surprise what ELSE she can do selfish parasite!!!

Liked the way she was reminded about her father and he about the king... felt sad though!!

have to face the reality...

waiting for update.



Yup Sumi
A good meeting where he could finally tell what is bugging him
Well things will change when he comes to know about Miss. LOL
No dear, all will end good okay
Oh dear! No feeling sad, need to boost your mind LOL
Thank you for reading and liking it!
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Posted: 7 years ago
Part 21 (Previous part : Part 20 )


"You are just thinking I'm a spoilt kid anyway!" He said facing her.
"I never said that!" She says as she got up. Nearing him "I think you need to stop worry about what others think about you." Moving her hands "And who your father was! And fund out who you are and who you want to be!" As she stopped near him.
"You make it look so simple by saying so!" He says as he looked at the fire.
"Why can't it be?" She starts as he lifts his and sees her "You are smart, nice, personable"
"Except when I steal your cab!" He says with a smile and she smile in return "It was actually quite funny!" He says and chuckles while she stands there, shaking her head and smiling a little smile.

After few seconds the laughter died and seriousness replaced it.
"I want to show you something!" The Prince says to the lady "Come!" And she follows him to the table in the center of the room where books or notes, mostly diary kind of things were arranged on it.

"I found something interesting in my father's journal the other day!" He says as got out a red journal out and started to turn pages.
"What's it?"
"A poem!"
"It was dated just before he left all of us!" He said without any emotions and stopped at one page "He has written this for my Mother!" And he added facing her "And I assumed he was waiting to give it to her along with the Christmas tree ornament he has prepared for her.
"Has she seen it?"
"Not yet!" With a little smile of happiness "I was going to gift her on Christmas!" And the tutor also smiled.

As both started to see the diary, the date marked on that page popped out to be December 20th and the text was written as of a mystery that he started to read
<< Frost a sparkle in the fields
Twixt the frozen minarets.
Winter's harvest, meager yields,
Heavy burdens, the year's debts.
But from a seed an acorn's gift,
Henceforth the truth will flood.
Darkness such a secret bears,
And a love far greater than blood. >>

Once he finished reading, he turned to her side and added "It's some sort of riddle!"
"Its mysterious!" she says.
"Yes he confirms as he sees her in the dim light of the room as her eyes were on that page of words.

Lifting her eyes from there and meeting his eyes, she adds "And it's beautiful!"
"Yes!" he says as he gazed at her beautiful eyes and both get lost in each other's eyes as they got pulled in some other world and started to near each other with whatever motif they got until horse whinnies outside the cottage and both moves their head away in awkwardness.
"I would better go and check on them!" the Prince said and went away from there as she hit the back of her head and shook her head to get out of the scene which was going to happen seconds back.
And curiosity took her mind once again as she started to go through the diaries until the moment one fell down.
Getting on her knees, she gets it up and lifts her head to stop in her track as she sees a handle kind of thing under the table which caught her attention.


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Thank you buddies for reading and liking it!
Well you will have a small shock tomorrow!
See you all tomorrow!
Let me know your thoughts!


Next part : Part 22


- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 7 years ago


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Posted: 7 years ago
Interesting update👏
Loved the conversation of Sukor😊
They are getting attracted to each other😳
Don't know what will happen when Chakor's truth will be out
What was the meaning of the poem, is there any hint about something😲
Chakor found a secret drawer, what is hidden in it
Waiting for next
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Posted: 7 years ago
Amazing update
Love the progress in Sukor's relationship. Suraj is opening up to Chakor, hope soon she tells him her truth.
Loved their moment before the horse's interruption.
The riddle activated Chakor's detective mode.
I wonder what the handle will lead to.

Can't wait to see what happens next.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hm... The riddle is very interesting. Wondering what is meaning behind it.
Loved Sukor moment before horses interruption.
Looks like there is still lot of things for miss Rosella to research and find out.
Interesting update. Enjoyed reading it.

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