FS : Sealed With A Kiss. ~ (Page 11.) [Completed.] - Page 10

Originally posted by: LOVE.GOLD

Loved it Shanu dear

Awesome update

I really loved how ibaad tought those filthy cheaps a lesson and won the case

Their honeymoon was so beautiful 😳

They were complete strangers and everything fall at place beautifully

Both got what they wanted from this relationship

The triplets were too cute

The way you mentioned them was beautiful 😊

Samaira and Rukhsaar were soo happy

Even Ibaad friends were there to welcome little souls

Beautiful end to a beautiful journey

Thanks for the PM

Keep writing 😊

Originally posted by: Bhatakti_atma

Unres

1(a) & 1(b)

Hey

Loved reading the first two parts..

I have decided to comment as I finish the parts..

Samaira and Abeer are great friends and I am so glad that ibaad came to help her..

Her step mother and sister are real witches..I am so happy that samaira understood the plan and intervened at the right moment...

They got married and they way they got married was amazing..and the way the relationship has already started moving forward is extremely cute..

Glad that it's nothing like the conventional ff where the characters sleep on different beds..loved how Abeer has already started taking interest in his likes and dislikes..

Loved Scarlett's reaction..it was funny and amusing..really how can a woman cry over something which was never hers..

Jessica is another witch..ibaad managed to show her,her place..

Daima is sweet and the bond she shares with all of them is sweeter..

Going to read more..😛

Originally posted by: Bhatakti_atma

2 A,B & C

Phil and his fiance were cute..they became really fond of Abeer..

Liked Sharon and abeer's conversation in the kitchen and Abeer's blushing session was too cute..

Abeer must have looked ravishing in the dress..no wonder Ibaad was so Mesmerized by the way she looked..and I am sure he looked both hot and sexy as the best man..

I wish Samaira was a little late in opening the door...but I am sure you have some amazing scenes in store for me..which will make me blush harder than ever..

liked how Abeer spoke about her views on their marriage and how Ibaad was overhearing her and also his reason for not forcing his desires on her..

Enjoyed the truth and dare game..

Ibaad helping her out was romantic and also the way she Expressed herself..

I am gonna hurry and read more..

Originally posted by: Bhatakti_atma

3 a,b & c

Another amazing part..

Abeer was nervous regarding the party but ibaad handled her well and explained how beautiful she is both on the inside and the outside..

That woman in the party did make things difficult for her but samaira managed to shut her up..

But I am really worried about Ibaad and his anxiousness..

I wish he talks to Abeer about it and realises that age is just a number and it's just a societal imposition,which should never come in the way we feel about others or what we want..

Hopefully Abeer will explain all of it to him..

Btw loved the scene in the bathroom and the kisses from Abeer..

Originally posted by: Bhatakti_atma

So I have finally completed it

I really enjoyed this journey of Abeer and ibaad..

I was really sad seeing the divorce bit and Abeer must have been so disheartened..but the things that happened after that were amazing..

I am glad Ibaad was able to come out of his fears and Insecurities..

they way they taught her step mom and kaira a lesson was bang on ...

The honeymoon was sexy with all the massages and swimming..

Epilogue was too cute..

So they had triplets..all of them must be extremely cute and good looking..

Happy for Samaira and Dean as well..

Keep writing..

Thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: pcnsb

Res 😳/ Unres
It's quite unbelievable that SWAK has come to it's end. I absolutely loved this cross over between my Aabi and your Abeer. ❤️

It's you who deserves the credit for the idea otherwise, I would've ended up writing on a run of the mill concept. :*

Though yes, Aabi and Abeer make a beautiful pair!

Now, I'll wait for Remember When. I'm sure you're gonna recreate the magic of this couple in that story as well.

SWAK started off as an OS, then turned into Three Shots and finally, Four Shots+Epilogue. Bless your creative keede for that. 😆

I'm happy that you loved all of what I sent you for RW and I'm excited about it cuz this is different from what I've written for IA. 😃

It basically was a Two Shot but yes, the length increased cuz I really felt that it wouldn't do justice to their beautiful story.😛

The Epilogue was absolute LOVE. ❤️

I loved how it followed their journey from their honeymoon which was SUPER HOT to their kids which was rather adorable.

Glad you loved it so much sweetie! 🤗

I wanted to keep it in a flow that started from the honeymoon and covers all aspect.

Maldives. *_* It's a gorgeous place. ❤️
Great choice Aabi. 👍🏼

It started off beautifully with IA's cute moments. So, they got naughty in car. Bilkul sabr nahi. 😆😆

Stranded with Ibaad Ashraf in a Beach House? ☺️🤪
We're so in for some GADAR! 😆

Yes, Maldives is a gorgeous place and again it was your idea. <3

Hah, It's like Ibaad says what is honeymoon for if not just love making and sightseeing. 😉

I know right! The mere thought makes me squeal with pleasure.

And there you go it started. That scene my Lagoon was FIREEE!!!
No doubt, room was a mess next morning.
Torn drapes.. Pillow feathers all around.. ☺️

I can trust Aabi to bring this TABAAHI. 😉

That lagoon scene was inspired by I told you what with some changes by me! 😛

Let's keep it this way, Aabi had done a 90's rock band job in thrashing their room. 🤣

The man was helpless, the arousal had been intense.

He himself is literal TABAAHI!!

Aabi is such an adorable man. ❤️
It was endearing how he prepared breakfast for his wifey and then even offered complimentary make-out with sexy CHEF!! 😆😆

Chef Ibaad Ashraf had been in my mind for long and that's why decided to keep it here. ❤️

Complimentary Make out with Chef Ibaad is a must, and won't we all love it?😉

And another swim! 😉
I can just imagine the hotmess Abeer must be looking in that crimson bikini. Her vivid description from Aabi's eyes. ☺️
But then, Aabi's gadar description from Abeer's was so on point.
Awesome!

The massage was lethally hot!

Credit yourself for that sweets, it was all your words and all of your creative juices, kudos! 👏👏👏

I loved it so much the first time, you sent me. <3

Aabi is a HOTMESS! Him shirtless, I need to hyperventilate! Again, the topless massage was all your idea, Babe! :*

Camping bit was fun and then it turned hot too. 😆
Again, that description of sweating Ibaad fixing tent for their stay was simply awesome. You nailed it here too.
Skinny Dip? Kill me already. ☺️

I'm glad you loved the camping bit and the skinny dip. <3

A sweating Ibaad Ashraf is a direct threat to bursting of you know what! 😉

Tell me about it, I would love a skinny dip with him! *Dreaming*

The love making which followed has to be perhaps one of the best written by you. 👏👏
BEAUTIFUL words! ❤️
Just awesome!

Thank you, Thank you so so much!

Your words mean a lot. :*

Abeer's cute practice in front of mirror. 😆😆
Aabi's happiness on knowing abt Abeer's pregnancy was priceless. 😳
He's baby.

Abeer's reaction probably is of every expectant mother who wants to convey the biggest happiness to the love of her life. 😳

I wanted to keep it very endearing yet relatable, and yes our man is no less than a baby himself. ❤️

Then, Aabi's cute request to wear a saree for doctor's appointment. 😆😆
How cutely he made her wear saree.

They discover that they're expecting triplets!
Beautiful scene and emotions. 😳

Aabi convinced her somehow by stating that he'll take them both to dinner. 😆 He's an adorable man.

That scene was written purely Dil se, glad you loved it so much. ❤️

The following scene of Abeer's delivery and then his meeting with Abeer post delivery is again beautiful. 👏❤️
All the emotions portrayed were awesome! Clap
Aabi is an adorable man. 😳

I'll again say, that you need to give yourself credit here for that whole scene was yours. ❤️

I'm not lying when I say, that's perhaps one of the most beautiful things that I've read in my whole life.

Mera Aabi is an adorable man, who is a loving husband, a desirable lover and a loving father. <3

That scene with Sam, Rukhsar, Phil and Sharon was again a cute one.

They're happy to welcome three new members in their family!

Post leap,
I LOVED the names Aafia, Ahad and Aaroh. ❤️
They're beautiful.

I'm glad you do, I was in love with the names ever since I saw them on internet. <3

It's endearing how all the kids in Ashraf household have one or other qualities inherited from Aabi. 😆😆😆
Aww.. Sam is expecting again.
Aafia is a cute geek.
Ahad is cute foodie.
Aaroh is cute football player.

Ever since I started planning the epilouge, I knew that one thing that I need to include and that had to be every child in the household would inherit qualities from this adorable man. ❤️

All of their three adorable cuties are different from one another. 😃

Aabi is a hotmess post leap with thick beard and stronger muscles. ☺️

He's a LETHAL BOMB post leap!

It's been an awesome journey,
Loved it. 👏 ❤️

And you didn't had to mention me. 😊

Yes, it's been a beautiful journey, but it's definitely incomplete if I don't mention you cuz you have given a lot to this story.

So, thank you. 🤗