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Posted: 7 years ago
NICE UPDATE
BUT MAAN IS UPSET BECOZ HE DIDN'T TALK TO GEET
WILL WAIT FOR NEXT CHAPTER



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Posted: 7 years ago
superb update ...
maan's continues stares makes geet uncomfortable ..aww ...maan thoda control :p
dev thought geet bhootni but called nt bhootni ...hahaha ...
geet missed maan's direct confession for her rasmalai :p
can't wait for next ...
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Posted: 7 years ago
will be waiting
thnx for lovely update
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ch 7

Maan watched from shadows as Geet who had white bed sheet wrapped around her finish the ras malai. She happily got up and checked her bed sheet. She gave a little laugh,'' bhootni! Jijju is so gullible.''

Maan was hesitant, did geet pretended to be a ghost to scare dev and naintara?

He heard footsteps and noise of bangles behind him, he looked left, right and then climbed up onto the nearest wall. No one could see him due to dark as he hid in a shadowy part. Geet heard the movement too. She quickly grabbed the bed sheet and threw it off the wall. The sheet sailed pass right beside Maan. He let out a deep breath.

Naintara came into view, she looked at geet who was standing there, she went over to her,'' Geet where did you go, I was waiting for you in our room.''

Geet gave her an angry look,'' di, you threw me out without dupatta. I will tell amma ji in the morning.''

Naintara looked at her with innocent eyes,'' sorry, I made a mistake. Don't tell amma ji.''

Geet started walking toward their room,'' You know me di, I really love you and I can't see anyone in distress, so I will forgive you this last time.''

Naintara,'' Okay, I won't do anything like this again. It was useless anyway, I didn't know Dev was such a coward. He imagined he saw a ghost outside our window. Ghost and here? Can you imagine what would have happened if we had gone out to meet in field? I won't meet him at night again.''

Geet innocently replied,'' ghost did you say? Here? How can that be?''

She went inside and he could no longer hear them. It was a wonder no one else was awake, these two were talking so loudly. And geet, he jumped down from the wall, she was not as innocent as he thought. What ghost? He smirked. He remembered their first meeting and the way she had turned the tables on him first time. It had been a shock for him. Today she gave him another one. She was straight like a jalebi but man, he couldn't wait to eat this jalebi.

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Next day, geet and naintara were going to town for wedding shopping. They needed to buy clothes and other gifts for relatives. Maan tagged along as well in lieu of giving opinion regarding his relatives.

He was talking to Amma ji, his gaze lowered but from time to time, he would look at Geet. Geet noticed this and was almost okay with it. But did he want to time pass with her or more? Until he asked for her hand from her family she didn't want to encourage him.

Everyone went into the shop and females sat down on chairs provided by the shopkeepers while Maan and brij were standing behind them.

One salesman saw geet and his face lit up like a bulb. He almost pushed the other salesperson away in his hurry to reach her. He grinned and started showing geet different dresses. Maan watched this quietly.

Salesperson showed her one pink unstitched suit with embroidery on borders and sides,'' This design has just come in, it would suit you.'' Don't know why suddenly his gaze wandered to man standing behind her, who was looking straight at her, one look into his eyes and salesperson felt his legs weaken with fear, he looked at suit, no longer looking at geet and said,'' it would really suit you behan ji (sister).''

Geet who was checking the embroidery looked up at him in shock. Behan ji?, she looked like behan ji to him? she glared at him,'' This is so least season, show something else.''

Maan smiled in satisfaction.

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Edited by .Ashleydevlin. - 7 years ago
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That evening after coming back, maan opened his laptop and started to check the updates sent by his secretary, technically he was free because he had cleared his schedule for his break but dev was getting married next month, then dev would be going on honeymoon, so Maan needed to prepare in advance in case he became unavailable for few weeks too, for example, if he got married to Geet.

There was a knock on door, he said come in but there was another knock. He jumped off bed and raced to the door, thinking maybe it was Geet again. And it was her. she was standing there holding a glass of milk.

Geet smiled and handed him milk glass,'' Amma ji sent it for you.''

Maan took the glass but he was confused, Amma ji had already sent a glass of milk with servant, was this an excuse to talk to him? He decided to not question her about milk. He instead asked about something else,'' Geet I gave you my bed sheet yesterday, could you please return it, the servant was asking about it. He needs to wash it.''

Geet looked at him and then replied,'' I have already washed it. I will tell the servant too.''

He narrowed his eyes as he drank milk, she had definitely thrown the sheet yesterday and he had picked it up in the morning. It was in his laundry bag.

Maan,'' oh that's good. By the way, is this haveli haunted? Dev was saying about seeing a ghost last night.'' Maan tried to look worriedly at geet.

Geet said slowly,'' ahh Are you scared of ghosts?''

Maan opened his eyes wide,'' No, no I am not scared.'' But the way he said it, made it sound like he was scared.

Geet smiled innocently,'' Don't worry, we don't have a ghost which wanders at night and scares the outsiders. If there is one, it's a very friendly ghost.''

Maan,'' oh so there is a ghost.'' He thanked to gods, she didn't said it was social like her dhano.

Geet looked down at her feet to control her laughter, six foot plus guy scared of ghost. Oh he was almost begging for it.

Maan watched her bowed head but this time he knew what was going on in that head. He hid his own smile. He drank the milk and gave the glass back to her.

Geet smiled at him angelically,'' Good night, have sweet dreams, don't worry if light goes off in the middle of night or you hear any strange voices. Just ignore it.''

Maan gave her a tentative smile,'' Can one of the servants sleep in my room?''

Geet,'' No, not possible I am afraid.'' How will she scare him if he had company? And what if servant realise it was her?

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Edited by .Ashleydevlin. - 7 years ago
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Maan changed into night suit and started waiting for his friendly ghost to make an appearance. He waited, waited and waited and finally dosed off. Nothing happened. Next few days passed but nothing happened. Was he overthinking? May be there was a misunderstanding. But he had seen geet that night.

That night he was sleeping when suddenly light went off. The heat made him wake up and open the window. He went back to bed when his door suddenly opened and closed. He got up and said in scared voice,'' Who is there?''

Silence, complete silence and then, his bed shook, Maan almost rolled his eyes, such juvenile tricks. He asked again,'' who is there?'' meanwhile he grabbed the mask he had prepared for the occasion from under his bed and put it on.

There was suddenly light in room, and in centre his friendly ghost was standing holding a candle. The ghost was about to do something, perhaps laugh evilly but the moment it glanced at his face, a loud female shriek sounded in the room. Geet ran outside, there were loud voices,''what is that noise.'' What happened?'' suddenly light came on. Geet who had taken off her sheet was standing there now looking normal. Maan came out of room too, he had taken off his mask,'' what happened?'' he asked innocently.

Geet looked at him suspiciously and then, at brij and his wife,'' I saw a ghost.'' She said finally. Brij let out a deep breath,''geet stop playing pranks at mid of night, I don't know who has spread this ghost rumor, I have heard even servants talking about it. If there is a ghost, I will break its legs if I found it.''

Geet nodded as she rubbed her left leg in worry,'' hmm.''

Maan tried to control his laughter.

Geet went downstairs grumbling like a child who had been asked for time out.

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Next day, Maan could see geet was grumbling here and grumbling there. He expected that today he wouldn't get any 'special'' milk but she again came upstairs and this time Maan was suspicious. This was something else but what?

He sipped the milk as he saw her cute mouth curled in a pout. He wouldn't mind kissing that pout off her face but there was no chance of it in near future.


A/N


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Edited by .Ashleydevlin. - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
So so cute geet is and the updates was..
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Posted: 7 years ago
omg.. loved the update..
both are perfect for each other.. playing pranks on each other..
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Posted: 7 years ago
awesome update
Maan understand what is Geet
ghost drama so funny
Loved it
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thanks for the update and also update was amazing it was so damm funny i was laughing so hard...
Waiting for next update and also update soon...

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