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awsome update

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want to know mistory behind mr.shah..

jalal get jelious hearing Jo talking Ajay..lol..

Jo going to participate in race..but jalal is worried for her..

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awsome update

love it..

want to know mistory behind mr.shah..

jalal get jelious hearing Jo talking Ajay..lol..

Jo going to participate in race..but jalal is worried for her..

plz continue soon

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glad you like it dear. And thanks
for sweet comment as well dear
soon you will know what is Mystery
behind Mr Shah Dear and yes Jalal
get jealous from Ajay as he is More close to Jodha
and because he love her he get worried for her
Nothing else and don't worry I will update soon
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Chapter 27

(Soon Jodha Jalal reach Jodha house And Jodha than both of them come out of the car and started going inside).

Jodha said : you will come inside to.

Jalal Said : yes I need to come as I want to let your elder angry brother know that I didn't hurt you in my Presence and he can trust me to let you be with me alone.

Jodha said : are you by chance trying to impress Bhai.

Jalal said : kind of as if he will be by my side than I can easily get you.

(Listening this Jodha started laughing and seeing her happy around himself Jalal Felt more happy he always wanted to make her smile and happy and now these wishes of him coming true).

Jodha said : okay let's go than.

(Listening this Jalal Nodded and than both of them ring the door bell. And Sid open the door).

Sid said : you come early cutie pie is everything fine.

Jodha said : No bhai everything is fine just the work get over soon so thought come early And he drop me home..

Sid said : okay so than come inside. And Jalal are you become Personal driver of My Sister that you started dropping her everywhere.

Jalal said : well yes I am her Personal driver as when I am here for her than what's the need of her go alone anywhere.

Sid said : cool Now come inside.

(Then Jodha goes inside while Jalal started entering inside with Sid).

Sid said : so any Progress In your Love story Jalal.

(Listening this Jalal Look at Sid. And saw him seriously Looking at him So he shook his head a Little).

Jalal said : well it's going slow but it's Progressing well. She started thinking about me still she is Not sure about her feelings.

(Listening this Sid Look at Jalal Than at Jodha who busy in talking with Sonal).

Sid Said : Hmm Not bad Maybe soon she understand her feeling as well. But you gone with her Mr Shah Office right tell me what happen there.

Jalal said : nothing Much we just discuss about New Project and that's All we did.

Sid Said : you are Not that idiot like you are showing isn't it.

Jalal said : what you mean.

Sid Said : Nothing just tell Me what was the reaction of Mr Shah when he saw My Sister and did you find anything doubtful about him. which make you feel wired.

(Listening this Jalal Look At Sid than in calm voice).

Jalal said : I can't say much but yes I find him Looking at Jodha Guiltily and sometime Fearfully which I find somewhat suspicious but I can't be sure about this.

Sid Said : alright than. Come and meet My MIL as she is here today. She is like a Mother to Me And Jodha.

(Listening this Jalal Just Nodded and soon both of them goes to Hall room where Sonal Mother Sumitra was Sitting talking with Jodha Sonal so they goes to them and sit Besides her).

Sid Said : Mom Meet Jalal Mohammed friend of My Sister.

Jalal said :Namastey.

(Said Jalal respectfully with little smile to which Sumitra Just smiled at him).

Sumitra said : Jodha you never told me about having friend Name Jalal.

Jodha said : well he is My New friend Mom.

Sumitra said : well alright than. So what you do son.

Jalal said : I handle My father Business.

Sumitra said : hmm nice. Jodha what are your Plans regarding future I mean you are done with your studies and doing good Financially as well so over all you are settle in your life now do you have any plan to get married Dear.

(Listening this Jodha just shifted near Sid uncomfortably while Sensing her uneasiness Sid grab her Hands And Patted a little).

Sid Said : well she don't have any plan to get married now Mom as I think she is to young for that.

Sumitra said : well I don't think so she is 21 one now and it's fine age to get married .

Sid Said ; well she is in a age to get Married but mentally she is Not Prepared for Life time commitment Mom marriage is very big responsibility and I don't want to burden her by this Mom hope you understand.

(Listening this Sumitra Nodded while Jodha smiled Looking at Sid other Side Jalal Admire the Bond of Jodha and Sid. as how Much Sid respect Jodha decision and how much he understand her).

Jalal Pov : god he Love her so Much without even looking at Her he Understand her Words. And told everyone about her decision. God how Much he respect her decision will I ever love her like he do. will I ever understand her like he do will I ever respect her decision like he do will she ever felt protected with me like she feel with her brother.

(His Chain of thoughts get broken by Sumitra Voice).

Sumitra said : well in Delhi I am getting Many Proposal for you Jodha But i deny everyone still I want to know what type of life partner you want. It's Not like I am getting you married tomorrow still I want to know your Choice Dear.

(Listening this Everyone started looking at Jodha eagerly, And seeing everyone looking at Her Jodha get Nervous so she clutch Sid hand tightly and again sensing her uneasiness).

Sid Said : leave it Mom will ask later.

Sonal said : come on Sid we need to know and little one you don't need to be nervous we all are your family you can say whatever you want.

(listening this Jodha look at Sonal than closed her eyes and open them than in calm voice).

Jodha said : I want my Partner like Bhai who respect my decision understand me trust me and with whom I felt secure always.

(Listening this Sid Sonal smiled while Sumitra give her teasing look other side Jalal get lost in his own thought).

Sumitra said : and what about looks how he should be look like.

(Listening this Jodha get shy while Sonal Sumitra seeing her Shy look started laughing. And Sid Jalal smiled seeing her expression).

Sid Said : yes Cutie Pie I to want to know how he should be look like.

(Listening this Jodha get up and run inside her room while others Laugh at her after sometime).

Sumitra said : so Mr Jalal how come you here as far as I remember you are son of Mr Humayu Mohammed who is owner of Mohammed industry isn't it and you are the one who stalk my Daughter force her scare her kidnapped her to isn't it.

(Listening this Jalal Sonal Sid Become Serious).

Sid said : Mom he is change now and Jodha forgive him as well.

Sumitra said : that's what I wanted to know how come she forgive the person who kidnapped her scare her force her blackmail her. She is not the girl to forget all these things you didn't raise her like that Isn't it.

Sid Said : yes Mom I know she is not the girl to forget or forgive the person who act like jerk with her or with anyone still she forgive him and she is trying to forget all that as he is really feeling guilty and he is change now in fact she started feeling something for him as well.

Sumitra said : what what the hell are saying.

Sid said : I am saying truth only Mom she love him now actually I called her two hours back and that time she receive the call but didn't talk with me maybe by mistake she received my call and I heard her talks in which she was confessing about her feelings or should I say asking him about that.

(than calmly he told whatever he heard which Make Sonal Smiled while Sumitra confuse and after he done he look at everyone. After few minutes).

Sumitra said : and you don't have any problem or issue if she love him.

Sid said ; why I will have problem Mom I love her and if she is happy with him than I will be more than happy to let her be with him.

Sumitra said : well than it's nice anyway Jalal what about you don't you and your family have problem with our Difference Like you are Rich while we are Middle class People. You are Muslim while we are Hindu. I am sure you understand that the society in which we live don't approve Marriage like this isn't it. As Son More than love People Need respect as well to live peacefully I don't want My Daughter to suffer later After marriage. I don't want anyone talk bad about her.

Jalal said : I love her Without seeing our Difference Aunty My Love is Above all this Difference and About my Parents for them My happiness Matter Just like for you all her happiness Matter just like you don't have problem with our Difference I and My Family to don't have problem. And let me Assure you all no one None will talk anything bad about her or you all.

Sumitra said : you really love her but can you promise her to take care of her Love her trust her Understand her Like we all do.

Jalal said : I love her More than myself already and I promise in future to I will love her More than Myself after my Parents she will be my first Priority I promise i will try to understand her And I will trust her always. you all can trust me on this.

Sumitra said : it's easy to say Son But hard to do.

Jalal said : I know But let me tell you it's More than hard to make her fell in love With a Person like me but she did and if I can do this Hard work than fulfilling these Promise are nothing Aunty.

Sumitra said : well than I think You both should get married fast.

Jalal said : but I don't as she feel for me but she don't love me still and we had a deal I can't break that deal I want to marry her when she love me back like I do.

Sumitra said : deal what deal.

(Listening this Jalal Take a deep breath close his eyes for minute than look at Sumitra and In Calm voice. He told everything about there deal and his act Making Sumitra angry. She get up and than in angry voice).

Sumitra Said : how dare you... how dare you force her again like that... what the hell do you think of yourself... For one month what... if whatever she is feeling it's not love... for you after month you will leave her... after making her depended on you ... you are making her happy... you take her to meet your parents ...you are making her having a habit to see you. ...Mr Jalal Mohammed thinking about someone... which is Becoming a Part of your Life... caring about a Person who love you... or care for you it's not always Love... it can be some other Feeling as well...did you ever thought what will happen... if she didn't love you and you left her after month... what will happen when she will Come to reality that... she lost the right to call your Parents Mom dad after you left her...

(listening this Sid Sonal Get shocked as They to didn't think about these possibilities. but after listening Sumitra Words Both of them get up and Get scared of this Possible Truth which maybe can come true).

Sumitra said : what was the reason... she always rejected your Proposal tell me... what had happen the day ...when first time you met her... tell me what was her reaction... when you first time Blackmail her force her and kidnapped her... tell me what was her answer... when you apologize for your act tell me... how every time she react when you are around her...I guess she always rejected you because of us ...and our so called society Morals isn't ...I am sure she always get scared of you when... you force ,scare and Blackmail her why only she any girl will get scared of all this things isn't it... I am sure just from few days she started feeling comfortable around you... or else she always uncomfortable around am I right ...than tell me Just She started Feeling something Different ...you thought she fell in love with you...Come on she is young girl ...You are handsome Boy who loves her...Care for her maybe whatever she is feeling it's only Attraction...what will happen when she will realize she don't love you at all...Did you ever thought about all these consequence...I don't think you did.

(Listening her Words Jalal get shocked he get up from Sofa he thought about all these consequence when he talked with his Parents Last time but never thought about these all things this keenly but now listening all this things from an elder lady who is like a mother figure to Jodha he get it he is again doing wrong with Jodha so he in calm voice).

Jalal said : Maybe you are right ...I din't think about these... Consequence this Keenly ...but Now I did still I can't come to conclusion...so you tell me what I should do as you are like Mother Figure to her...and And elder to so tell me what I should do now.

(Listening this Sumitra look at Jalal Than smiled a little sit on sofa again. and Spoke in calm Voice).

Sumitra said : I am Impressed With you son... as far I heard you were not the Boy... to get lectured by other ...and I can see how much you love her... not for once you get irritate by my words... or snapped at me like today's young generation Do ...you listen to me very carefully and tried to understand my Point of view... it mean you always listen to her as well but... didn't accept her Decision...But first time you are trying to... respect her decision and understand her you take wrong way...But never mind you are Not that mature I think...still I am not going to advice you... as you take this decision without taking others advise so...think about this by yourself...

(Listening this Jalal Nodded his head in yes than After taking permission started going out when he saw Jodha Who was standing near Stairs listening there talks he Just smiled at her and goes out and soon enter inside his car than left from there. And in car started thinking about her. And started recalling all the words of Jodha).

" Jodha "

no no no leave him please leave him do don don't do this please leave him.

his father is really very hardworking he will return your money soon but if he loose his life will you ever be able to return his only son to him.

' I do '

tha...thank ...you...but I ...am...fi...fine.

listen...we ...didn't ...taken ...any ...money ...from ...you ...or ...your company ...there... must... be... some ...misunderstanding.

You...you... should...apologize... to one... whom.. you... hurt ...why... me.

it's so kind for... you to help but... I can't ...take it as I ...don't talk... to... strangers ...and taking... a lift is to ...much...I am comfortable... going by myself please let me go... now .

please... I know... you want to... help me but ...I am really ...fine please... let me go.

if you... ..wanna ...talk ...just talk ...here.

I need ...to get home... before dark... so I can't ...come anywhere... with you and that to after college...

but... .b.ut... ..I

I can' trust strangers.

listen...I ... can't... come... with...you ...anywhere my... brother ...will ...not ...like ...to.. .know.. .that... I...am... .with...you...and...I ... don't...want... myself.. to...be..with...you...as...you...had... very ...bad reputation...in... this... city...try...to.. understand...my... problem ...one... will...say... anything...to... you... but...they...will... definitely... point... there... finger... on...my... character... so...please... let... me... go ... now... that...to...by... myself...Please...

I ...will ...agree... if... you ...promise ...me... that ...you.. will ...never ...cross... my ...path ... again... I ...mean ...we...will...not... see...each... other... again...

le. leave...me...what... are...you...doing... it's ...wrong... leave me... or ...else... I ...will ...shout ...for help ... leave...me...

I ...am ...Jodha... not... some... kitten...and... yes ...you... are not... vampire ...or ...animal ...that's... why... you... are ...more... dangerous. as ...they...will...just...kill...me...but... with...you...I... don't...have...idea... what...will... happen...with...me...

I... I... I...am...not... Little... and...you... don't...have... Any...right... to...call...me...that...so...stop...

wh... at ...what... y...ou you... me...an ... mean.

but ...I... have... very... important... lecture ...today...I ... can't... Miss... that...

lea... leave...m...me...I..n.. need...to... go...

ho...home...

ple... please... don't...do... that...and...let...me...go...please...

but... why... leaving ...all... the ...girls ...in ...college... you... wanted ...to ...be... friend... with... me...as... you ...are... very...popular and ...handsome ...girls ...are ...after you ...than...why...you...want...to...waste... your...time...behind...a...girl like..me...who... didn't... match...your standard... neither...wanted...to...be... with...you...

that's...not...the...answer of... my... question.

well... there... is... no... doubt ...that ...you ...are... good... looking ...but... I... want ...to ...stay away ...from ...you... because... I know ...we... can't... be... friend ...with each... other ...as ...you... belong.. to rich... family... and... I ...belong ..to.. middle ...class ...family... it's... didn't.. Matter... to... you ...what ...people... will ...say ...about ...you... and ...if... does...than... you ...and ...your... family ...have... your ...own... way... to ...stop... them... but ...with... me.. it's different ...it's... does... matter ...to... me ...and... my... family... and ...we... are ...not... powerful... like... you... who ...can... stop ...everyone...

I... just...want...to... focus.. on...my... studies...and... wanted...to... stay... away... from... which ...make... me... distract...from...my...goal...I... want...to...be... independent...so... please... let...me...go...and...stay... away... from ...me... please...

how... did... you... get... my... number I...never... give... you...and... how... do ...you ...know... what... am... I ...doing...

y..yo..you...he..re...here...h..o..w...how...and...why...

please... stay... away...from... me...or...else ...I ...will...call...my...Bhai... and...he ...will... punish... you...

what... you ...want...why... don't... you... leave... me... alone...

I... will ...not ...make...anything... for... you... and... just ...get... out... from... here... or... else... I ... will... call ...police...

just... get... out... of... my... house...

you...can't...do...that...

you... are... bad... very... bad...

no...no... don't... break... the... .door... I... am... coming... out...

leave me

don't... call... my... brother... as ...your... Bhai... only ...I call... him ...that...

he... is... gone... to ...office...

actually...he... gone... to... Delhi...to ...take... care ...of...My..Bhabhi ..Mother...as her... health... is... not... good ...that's ...why...

don't know.

my... friend... will... live... with... me...I ...will...call..her...

what ...you...will..stay...here..but..why...and...I ...am...not...coming...with..you... anywhere.

well ...it's .. doesn't ... matter... if ..I ...will.. say ..or ...not ...as ...you ..will ...always...do ..what ...you ..like ...or ...want... to ..do ...from ...the...time ...we ...meet ..you ..always ...scare ...me ...and ...force ...me ..and ...now ...to ...you ...are ...doing ...the ...same ...why ...don't ...you ..let ...me.. .live ..in ...Peace ...what ...the ...hell ...you ...want ...from ...me ... I ...already ...told ...you ...why...I...don't ...want ...to ...be ...with ...you ...than ...why ...don't ...you ... understand ...why ...you ...are ...behind ...it's... not ...like ...I ...am ...very ...beautiful ...or ...popular ...girl ...I ...am ...just ...a ...normal ...middle ...class ...girl ...with ...simple ...dreams than ...why ...are ...you ...behind ...me...why.

I... understand ...that ...what ...are ...you ...going ...through ...but ...but...I don't feel... the ...same... for ...you ...like... you... feel ...for ...me ...are ...to ...different ...and ...you... know ...about.. those ...difference ...it's ...not ...only ...about ...rich ...and ...middle ...it's ...about ...thought ...and ...religious ...it's ...about ...our... life ...style ...I ...mean ...we ...can ...be ...as.. a ..friend ...but ...I ...don't... think ...there... is... any ...chance ...by ...which ...we ...can ...have.. future ..together...and.. more ...ever ...I am ...so ...young ...to ...get ...in ...any... type ...of ...relation ...as... I ...don't ...feel ...comfortable ..around ...strangers... or ...boys ...except ...my ...brother ...and ...my ...close ...friends..I ...need ...time...so ..it ..will ...be ...better ...if ...we ...stay ...away ...from ...each ...other...

you ..know.. I ...didn't ...mean ..to.. hurt ..you.. it ..was... just... these ..are ..the ...thing ..which ...make ..me.. uncomfortable... you ..know ...I.. come ...from... that ...society ...where always ..women ...are ...blame... for ...every ...mistake ...whether.. they ..are ...at ...fault ...or ...not...if we...will ...get.. together ...than ...you ...know ...what ...will ...people ...say ...they ...will ...say...I ...am ...gold ...digger ...who... just... trap... rich... guy... for ...money... they ...will ...say... my ...parents... and ...brother ...didn't ...raise... me... well... they ...will... never ...want... to ...know ...who... and ...how... ...we ...are ...they ...will... just... talk... about ...my ...character ...and... will ...say... ill ...about... my... family ...I ...know ..now.. you... will ...say ...why ...should... we ...care ...about ...those... people... who... just ...don't ...care ...about ...us ...and... I.. agree ...with ...that ...to ...but... I ...care ...about.. my ...brother... you ...just... said... that ...you ...can ...kill... anyone.. if.. anyone... try... to... hurt ...your... family... than ...it's ...same ...with... me ...to... yes... I ...can't... kill... anyone... but... I.. to... can't... see ...anyone... hurt ...my ...family... or... talk... ill ...about.. them... they ...are.. my ...everything ... I ...just ...have... my ...Bhai ...and... Bhabhi.. with ...me ...only... we ...don't ...have... any... relative ...accept.. ... Bhabhi... Family ...they... are ...the... only ...people ...whom... I ...loved... whom ...I ...never... want.. to..hurt ...Please... try... to ...understand... my ...problem... an... issue... to ...I... know ...I... hurt.. you ...but... that's ...what ...will... lead ...my... family... in ...future... if... we ..will.. get ...together... and ..for ...you... I.. can't ..betray ...them... and... break ...there ...trust ...and ...disappoint ...them ...try... to... ...understand...

Jalal Pov : Scared uncomfortable Embarrassed disgusted these are the feelings whenever she was with me and I force her. her first concern always be her family or Friend I always knew she is simple innocent girl still I always scared her force her . And the situation become more worst when I Kidnapped her.

ple...plea...please...le...let...m...me...g...o..go...pl...please...

just leave me you jerk how dare you kidnapped me like this and brought me here ...you selfish jerk only know how to hurt others...who who the hell give you the right to talk to me like this...who the hell are you to me ...my brother my boyfriend my husband or my Father... just listen to me very carefully it's my life ...and I have my own choice and I will do as I am please and like to do...you are no one to interfere in my matter get that... and I don't need to answer your any question...

please don't do that please I beg don't do that.

what what you want.

I can't do that please try to understand.

why are you doing this what I did wrong with you.

you are mad it's not love it's just your obsession towards me what do you think by doing all this I will fell in love with you no you can force fully kissed me and make me yours but you will never have my heart I will not like you why don't you understand love can't be happen by force it's just happen by own.

I am agree with everything I will not say anything to anyone... and I will stay away from him

I agree for that to...now please let me go...

but why...

thanks

no Please don't I can't do that...

can I ask something.

Ajay Ankit Nisha Siya are my best friend... from whom I never hid anything never avoided them... but you want me to avoid them because you don't want to see me close with others... but if in future I will ask you to leave your friends because I don't like them will you able to do that.

yes I will never ask for that as I am so innocent to be selfish jerk like you ... you know me well enough isn't it.

I don't like you but you want me to be your girlfriend... why it's just your feelings and thoughts matter to you... not mine and you claim to love me... wow you can't even let me live my life on my own ...and you want me to understand you love you ...

I want freedom from your obsession... I don't want you to control me like puppet... by blackmailing me for your wish... I want to live my life like I want I don't want you to keep eye on me...

you ask me what he has which you don't ...why I let him hug me and never let you touch me ...Because he is totally opposite to you ...where you use your father mony and power to trouble others ...he always used that to help others where... you have bad reputation he has clear and good reputation... where you had many girlfriend he have only one ...with you people take time to trust but with him his words are enough to make everyone believe in him... where you are rich spoil brat there he is rich yet kind heart good boy ...there are many differences between you both but you will never understand that as for that you need a heart and I think you don't have that...

there is nothing wrong with them which make me dislike them I like them they are really good person.

that's the problem you know you are doing wrong still you are not stop doing that ...you want me to understand you ...but you yourself never try to understand me why don't you understand I can't live like this it's making me feel frustrated suffocated I can't do that...please I just wanted to live my life please let me live in peace.

Jalal Pov : if only I had understand her and give her freedom and space to live peacfully maybe she didn't left me for three years maybe the situation will different but no I was such Crazy Men who didn't understand her valid point. god she was always clear her choice and feelings but I messed everything always. And I did again wrong when I kidnapped her again and force her god How Much i hate myself for that.

what you want why don't you let me go and live my life.

but where are you taking me and why.

what are you going to do.

why are you doing this with me ...why don't you understand it's not the way to make anyone fell in love please... it's wrong just let me go please ...you are now very successful businessman ...you will get anyone and I am sure you will have better future to but with me it's not... so please I beg you to let me go please...

but it's wrong you can't force me like this do you have any idea you are kidnapping me second time and it's enough for you to get punished by law.

help help please help someone help me please.

what the hell please no leave it it's hurting please.

don't don't you dare to come close to me or else I will kill you right now.

I am warning you stay away.

Don't come near me and give me that key which can open these handcuff or else I will kill myself right now than you can have my dead body not me and I mean it.

move aside now give me the way now move.

nooo ... no p..l..e..a..s..e. please... don't ... don't ...do... th... that wi... with... me pl...ea...se... please...

please ...no... please... I will ...do. as ... as ...you... say ...but please... let ...me... go ...please... please... I can't ...take... this ...please I really... can't ...please ...

no please don't do anything to them please I will do as you say.

I will not Do that again please let me go.

no no we can't please don't destroy me please.

you are jerk I will never love you.

Jalal Pov :scared fear was the only thing I can saw in her eyes that time she was helpless crying her heart out still I didn't calm her or comfort her I just let my mind take over everything why didn't I listen to her how much anyone can take god Wish someone kill me that time only that's why when I get my sense back I was not angry at her for hitting me but I was angry because she get away from me again. I never knew that I hurt her and scare her that much so when I will really apologize for my act her answer will be this.

you... will ...force ...me... again ...as ...you... say... you... never ...plan ...that ...but ...you... always ...do ...that... how ...will... I able... to... give... you... chance ...and why ...should ...I just... because... you ...are... saying ...I should... give you ...chance... why... why...

I forgive you and now I don't want to talk about that anymore please.

well that's what you wanted right so I did that.

I ...I ... don't know I just think that you are really guilty so I forgive you as I think everyone deserve second chance and you are no different that's it and now you will stay away from me.

well both are the reason as I found you are really guilty and another you say as I don't want you to near me.

if I didn't saw you beating my friend... or meet you normally like other student maybe I accepted your proposal ...or maybe I didn't have any problems to go with you but in first meeting itself you show me what you are ...and in next meeting you were just just rich spoil brat for me from... whom i should stay away and that's what I did by rejecting your proposal but ...you taken me forcefully in fact you force me again and again... kidnapped me two Times scared me beyond limit blackmail me to... and after all this if i am scared of you than its not my problem it's... you who make me scared of you like hell and now if you are saying you will not hurt me or I don't need to scared of you than how could I trust you on this... I was simple normal middle class girl but after you enter my life it's get messed up... I run from here left my home with my family do you have any idea how much struggle we gone through ...in this world getting home or job is so difficult still Bhai Bhabhi never let me feel guilty for everything happening with us ...they never blame me for those things and did everything to make me happy that called love ...you can't see the person sad or in pain but you did you make me suffer ...do you have any idea how much it's effect me I was having nightmares I can't sleep peacefully Because I was scared of you... that what will you do with my loved ones for running away from you it's take so much time to recover for me... and look again we are front of each other do you have any idea how much it's difficult for me to stay with you right now... no no no no a big no you don't have any idea because you don't know what love means you don't know how actually I feel you don't even care about my emotions ...I am tired of you I am tired of my life now I can't live like this for ...heaven sake I just want to stay away from you that's it just fulfill my this wishes only... please...

you here.

hmm why .

what you want to talk.

what what are you doing stop and leave me.

please why you are doing this.

I I you I ...

are you mad or what you are hurt and you are asking questions leave me and let me treat your hand.

I don't know I just never think about all this now please your hands are bleeding let me treat it.

hmm they are gone to some friend wedding function will be back Tomorrow.

what.

I am not I will not go anywhere.

what why no you can't stay here go now.

neither you are going to stay here and nor I am going to make anything.

how dare you order me like this i will not make it didn't you heard.

no you will not.

you are monster you devil jerk.

I hate you.

you are crazy.

stop calling me that will you.

okay leave I am going to make it.

what the hell you are .

will you stop talking in double meaning words.

what the hell you want.

just just go to hell.

you can't force me like this again and again.

I hate you.

what is wrong with you.

Now you are done with Dinner so just Leave from here.

I am not Reminding you I am telling you to leave from here.

what the hell you Mean and for heaven sake stop calling me Kitten.

you... you...are...

Leave me Now I had enough of your tantrums just get out of here Now.

what you want now.

and I don't want to.

I can walk on my own why the hell you carry me always.

Jalal Pov : The fear was to much that my simple act of concern to make her scared of me her Way of Making her letting others know about her opinion are so simple than why the hell I never understand her.

hmm Okay But But you will not disturb me after this Right.

but you didn't told me before about any condition.

wh...y ...why ...you ...love...me ...this ...much ...why ...wh...en...when... you... know ...I...just...gi.v..e..give...you...pain...why...you...love... me ...this...mu...ch...much...

I Lost My Parents when I was little... you know I was there Princess ...yes we are Middle class People... but they fulfill My Every wish like other Parents...and when I lost them... I thought there is nothing left in my life...I didn't spoke to anyone didn't go out...I started ignoring everyone... but than Sid Bhai Make Me come out of my Pain ...I was not the only one to loss them he to loss his Ideal his hero his Peace...But he compose himself for me ...and I like a fool was crying for those who left me... I wasted my Three Months for those who left the world... to enjoy in heaven Leaving there two little children... behind with nothing except ...one house and some Money...No one to care for us no one to help us...but Bhai did everything to make me happy ...he started doing Part Time Job in Cafe with his studies ...he did so much hard work to protect me or fulfill my wish... and I to tried to calm him or lessen his Pain ...avoided celebrating Birthday or Festival ...that time we Met Shiv Uncle he help us... and because of him we started becoming normal...Bhai get one More Ideal and I get one Best friend... and in school I get Siya Ajay Nisha as best friend... to and My world start with them doing studies ...and Spending time with them was... the only thing I ever did...soon one more Member come in our Life And that was Sonal bhabhi our family become complete...I can never think to live without them ...you Know when you Kidnapped me and told me... I should stay away from My friends ...you will not let me see them or meet them... I thought you I will die as I never think about a life ...where my friends and My Bhai Bhabhi are not there...and now listening your words are making me feel guilty ...that I unknowingly Making your Family and Friends suffer ...and More than that I am making you suffer ...tell me is there any mother live who will be stay happy... after disowning her son or making him arrest by police ...tell me is there any friend born ...who can see there friend sad or in pain... tell me is there any parents live in this world ...who can see there only son alone and in pain...you are ready to let me move on... if I don't love you or find someone else ...Right but you are not ready to move on yourself why...you said you can't live without me ...tell me before seeing me were not you living your life peacefully... were not you had aim in your life...you yourself told me you were going to help your dad in business... the day you saw me than what was the next plan of yours... after helping him and taking his burden on your shoulders ...were not you than find someone in your life... or maybe you get married to a girl who choose by your Parents ...than what change now why can't you forget me ...do you have any idea how much pain you are giving to your Parents and friends By all this...you told me your Condition Right than I have one condition to...if I didn't love you back in one Month... than you will forget me and move on in your Life...if you agree with this than I agree with this Deal... or else I am going Back to my Home...

Jalal Pov : I never knew she think this much about everyone she is so selfless for her others happiness matter very much And I always hurt her why god why why I never let her have any choice why.

No I don't have any Plan for today you say.

hmm okay.

Not Much as I never Plan to do anything... it's always My friend who Plan to do something ...and I just Participate with them but I I Love to dance... or Play guitar sometime...Painting and I have special interest in Football Match ...because of Ajay he Love to Play and I love to watch ...and I I I love to Do Bike Racing that's all you say...

cooking not bad I always Help Bhabhi or Bhai... they love my hand made food so my Friend...

well there are nothing much to Dislike but yes I hate... To smoke and Drink Alcohol and... those who drink and Smoke I hate them... I hate rude arrogant Rich People who always show off to others.

are you okay.

no need to apologize it's fine.

you are so funny...

don't look at me like this you are looking no less than any kid right now.

I told you I don't like to drink and smoke and I hate those People who drink and smoke right.

and just listening my dislike you started coughing it means you drink and smoke to isn't it.

oh god... you are really something... uff come on in this whole world... half of the people like to drink and smoke... I don't like doesn't mean... you or everyone need to dislike that to... anyway leave it ...tell me what you dislike the most...

hmm Like I love him just see his Acting... uff he is Mind Blowing you Know... Ajay to like Salman ...so we often fight with each other to Prov ...that who is best and big Fan of him ...Just look at his Dance move... My My girls can die for his Look... and More than his Acting I love his Movie... as they are very clean anyone can watch...children to youth or elders to...not only Salman... I like Amir Khan Ajay Devgan to ...they are an awesome Actor I love them...

from Past Five Minutes I am calling you and you are not listening so I pinch you what happen where were you lost.

actually I want to eat Ice cream now.

Graeter's Black Cherry Chocolate Chip.

you will not eat Ice cream.

are you from another Planet or what hmm you don't like Ice Cream can't believe it in this world no one can dislike Ice cream.

oh okay still just a little try once only.

no no I will not it's my Favrouite Iwill not share with you.

I will show this Pic to My friends now Look how funny you looking now.

get up get off from me.

stop it Jalal get off from me.

I want to go home now Please.

well you look so funny that's why, I can't stop laughing at you.

well what to do ,when innocent people like us. Get trouble by people like you. Than we need some angry type of people to protect us isn't it.

we will see anyway where we are going.

hmm okay when we will reach.

how do you always, get it what I want to do.

I... you... I ...mean... hmm I you know, I think about you Yesterday. And I am ready to give you chance, not for that deal ,but Because I want to because I think you deserve chance. It's true you force or scare me many times. But never for once you cross your limit. You know when you, kidnapped me two Times. I had one more fear that ...you will ...you will...umm force yourself on me . But you didn't and , I am grateful to you for not snatching , my dignity my self respect. And I can see the honesty and sincerity in your eyes and I can see that you are really change. And thinking so much I come to concussion, that you really deserve chance so I am ready to give you chance , and I hope I will not regret for that.

it's so beautiful you live here Really.

no I mean it's I don't know what to say.

hmm you don't but, your parents will think about our differences isn't it.

your parents.

I I don't know.

umm Namstey Uncle Aunty.

just forget everything guys. I I forgive you all. Because whatever you all it was for your friends. and helping your friend is not wrong. And there was nothing which you did and hurt me. It was all done by him, it was his plan not yours . So no need to be apologize, but yes if you all just tried to make him understand like a true friend , than maybe there was nothing to apologize for right. Anyway let it go it was past, and we should let our past in past only.

thank you uncle aunty, I live my life with my Bhai Bhabhi and they love me so much , I never thought I need anyone else . But now I get it that we people always crave for parents love. no one can fulfill there place in children life. thanks for giving me this much love Aunty Uncle.

thank you thank you thank you thank you so much for all this today for the first time I get love from elders I had my Bhai Bhabhi but I needed, someone to call mom dad thank you for this thank you so much. today you made my day thank you I will never forget this thank you so much.

you have very nice parents they are very kind I like them or should I say I love them.

Jalal Pov : how simple and innocent girl she is in simple things she get happiness. How easily she forgive my friends and me forgetting all the bad act of Mine. wish I can go back to past and remove all the deed of mine but I can't

stop it now.

well I didn't Find My Driver Near My Home so I need To Trouble My Leg.

Can I ask Something Sir.

why did you offer Me Partnership ...in your New Project as assistant ...I mean I don't have Much Experience Regarding Business ...Than why Me I mean you can find... Best Person who have enough experience... About this Than why me...

hey Ajay, How Are you .When you Will ,be back .I miss you.

yes I will Participate in that For Sure as You Know How Much I love that.

we will see.

hmm You to take care Bye.

: bike Race.

but why I mean I already told you I like to do That in fact it's my Passion than why you are stopping me.

Look I am not going to listen you I will Do as I wish to do you are no one To Stop me get that and Dare to order Me Next time.

you should move on ... After such a long time I get Parents Love Because of you and ...I I Always Misunderstand you... I don't deserve you in My Life. You are the Person who change... From Bad to good... You are Not very Wise But you are doing your Best To be and... I I never ever try to know the Reason of your Action... neither I understand your Emotion 3 years Back... Neither now look How Much you are Change now... still I misunderstand you ... I don't deserve you ...you Should Move on I don't think I will Ever Be A good Partner for you...You Deserve Best and I am Not Best enough For you.

what are you Doing With me ... I can't understand this... You are making me Crazy now... I don't know Why... I am feeling Nice Hearing ...how Much you care About me ... And Love Me... I don't know Why... I can't take My Eyes of From... you I don't know Why... I often started thinking about you... What is All this Happening With Me... I don't understanding it...How come it's getting difficult for me to understand My Own feelings.

answer me...Answer me... What and Why this is happening With... Me do I started Liking you...Is that how People felt when they fell in love with anyone ...Is That what you felt when you fell in love with me...tell me I want to know I never Love anyone... in my life either than ... My Bhabhi Bhai and friends...but I never felt confuse this Much about my Feelings... I always understand What I am feeling and why ...But With you I don't ... tell me Answer me Now..

But I did and Now I want Answer.

it's not the Answer my Question Still No I am not going to participate as I don't want to get kidnapped By you.

you better remember that Anyway where we are going.

Jalal Pov : I want her to listen to me but I never let her do as she wish to do today to I force her why I always lost my control over her I don't deserve her More than me her brother and friends love her still I stop her god I don't deserve her she can't be happy with me I need to Move on I need to move on from her I will go away from her now.
Edited by Rashmisingh9151 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Me First thanks for the pm dear
Emotional one
Confused feeling of ja

Continue soon dear waiting ASAP 😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
Jalal becme santy man now so sad.. Thnks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: konica.arora.92

Me First thanks for the pm dear

Emotional one
Confused feeling of ja

Continue soon dear waiting ASAP😛


well it was really a
emotional update and
the motive was simple
there is twist on the way dear
don't worry I will update soon
and thanks for your first comment
sweet comment dear.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: simranjitkaur

Jalal becme santy man now so sad.. Thnks for pm


well yes he become emotional
now anyway thanks for
your comments dear.
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awsome
yet emotional update..

plz continue soon

thanks for pm

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